Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
202
glossingSentenceCount
20
matches
0
"as if cupping a memory I didn’t have"
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"tasted like cold copper and rain that had"
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"appeared ahead of us, her silver hair catching the pale glow of the sap"
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"something like frostlight"
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"as if listening"
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"something like honey that stung, too sweet t"
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"chamber that seemed to be carved from the night itself—an amphitheatre of black glass and pale sap, where every surface reflected a version of us more than once and in more ways than one"
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"as if listening to our breath"
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"as if acknowledging a treaty being broken"
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"felt like a wall collapsing inward, and"
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"corridors that seemed to close behind me when I chased something I couldn’t name, of a fling at a life that didn’t belong to me"
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"as if inviting the three of us to step through"
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"sigils that seemed to breathe"
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"sounded like old timber giving way to the"
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"sounded like glass breaking softly, a hiss"
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"beacon that seemed to pull at the shadow creature like a child pulls a kite toward storm clouds"
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"something like relief—but relief that would"
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"sounded like a library after midnight and"
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"glow that seemed to anchor us in time rather than pull us through it"
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"teeth that seemed to grin even as it threatened to devour us all"
"Vines hung from the ceiling, luminescent sap trickling in slow, deliberate threads, and every so often a veinlit bulb twitched as if the chamber itself—alive—was blinking at us."
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"Each door reflected a scene—snatches of a life I might lead if I turned this way or that."
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"The chamber behind us—a shadow-stitched corridor—twitched in sympathy, as if the place itself could smell fear and hunger."
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"The Veil, yes—the place existed because it desired to be found only by the brave and the reckless, and we had come uninvited, with purpose and a mettle that wouldn’t let go."
4
"Time pressed into itself, as if we had stepped into the pocket Isolde had warned about—the hour inside stretching to fill what seemed like days outside."
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"And fear needed the truth to become something else—a power, a plan, a flame that could burn away what bound us to this place."
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"A sound rose from the depths of the place—a metallic sigh, then a chorus of soft clacks that resembled footsteps not of men but of something that had learned to mimic them."
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"She did not point to a door; she spoke to a moment."
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"The first reflected our faces with a curious insistence; the second showed us aged, withered and wiser; the third altered us into silhouettes we’d never become."
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"We chose a door—an approach that felt more like a dare than a decision—and stepped through."
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"The space inside stretched, not with distance but with memory; it remembered our footsteps, our breath, the sound of Isolde’s whisper on the edge of hearing."
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"We found ourselves in a chamber that seemed to be carved from the night itself—an amphitheatre of black glass and pale sap, where every surface reflected a version of us more than once and in more ways than one."
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"The Shadow did not merely exist here; it adapted."
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"In the glassy surfaces we saw ourselves: Rory as a prosecutor, as a warrior, as a wanderer in a city of light and violence; Isolde as a figure standing calmly, a thread of prophecies trailing behind her; Nyx as a silhouette that flashed between forms, a chorus of whispers that never settled."
14
"A figure formed at the far end of the chamber—a thing not human, with a mouth full of jagged, glass-like teeth and eyes that burned with the amber of heated metal."
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"The creature’s presence felt like a wall collapsing inward, and in that moment the chamber itself responded—each mirror surface rippled as if a fish gliding through water, the room tilting a fraction, gravity bending in a way that didn’t make sense but felt true."
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"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed violently now, warm heat pricking through the fabric of my coat, flooding my senses with a memory of something I couldn’t name—perhaps the Hel portals or a hunger that wasn’t mine but claimed me anyway."
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"I looked down at the pendant again, and for a moment I saw—not a stone, but a memory."
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"The door—this one not a door but a hinge of air—swung inward as if inviting the three of us to step through."
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"The ground bore patterns—constellations drawn in raised, pale glass that felt warm beneath my gloves."
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"It wasn’t wind; it was the place itself singing, a lullaby that held you still enough to listen and brave enough to walk."
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"What followed was a torrent of senses—too swift to name, too vivid to forget."
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"The glow of the blade flickered; Nyx’s shadow thickened and then split into a hundred frayed threads, each thread hanging temptingly in the light as if they might obscure or reveal what lay ahead."
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"Nyx moved, a dart of living shadow, slipping around the creature’s flank and striking where the light was weakest—where the room’s own fear fed the thing."
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"Then the air around us thickened, and a voice—thin as glass and old as a cathedral’s floor—spoke from the arch itself, not from the void beyond but from the vessel of the place’s memory."
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"The creature—already wounded by the truth we spoke—took one final step toward us and dissolved into the air with a sigh like a sleeping beast exhaling."
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"The arch breathing out, we stepped through into the next moment, which held less of fear and more of something like relief—but relief that would be short-lived."
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"The cube atop the dais—the one that had helped dissolve the wards—sat sealed in its glow, inactive for the moment, as if it too waited to learn whether we were worthy to carry its memory forward or whether we would leave it to rot in a corner of the Veil’s mind."
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"We were not simply trespassers here; we were seekers, and seekers in a place that rewarded boldness as much as it punished bravado."
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"The exit door—if it was to be found—would come only when we chose to call it by its true name, only when we understood what this memory asked of us in return."
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"A chorus of whispers swelled from every surface—floor, walls, even the glassy ceiling—like a congregation of eyes turning toward us and finally deciding to listen."
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"Then the weight lifted as if someone had released a clamp, and the chamber’s eye—its singular, amber gaze—found us again, the memory settling into our bones."
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"We moved as one—and the moment Matted itself with possibility—toward the arch that glowed with a pale, patient light."
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"The doorway across the room—no longer a mere threshold but a living thing—shivered, and a silhouette rose from the ground behind it: a figure of horn and shadow, eyes aflame with hunger, a long mouth filled with serrated teeth that seemed to grin even as it threatened to devour us all."
34
"We stepped forward as one, and the next moment—the moment that would either bind us to the Veil or send us screaming back into the ordinary world—was a breath away."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
166
technicalSentenceCount
46
matches
0
"Rory, keep close, the pendant pulsed against my chest, a warm, stubborn heartbeat that didn’t belong to this place."
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"Vines hung from the ceiling, luminescent sap trickling in slow, deliberate threads, and every so often a veinlit bulb twitched as if the chamber itself—alive—wa…"
2
"The Fae-Forged Blade hummed against my palm, the moonsilver edge barely warm to the touch, a chill that promised it could sever more than metal."
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"She moved as if the grove itself had learned her footsteps and bowed to her presence."
4
"They pressed a finger of fog to the cold surface and the shadow peeled back, revealing a corridor lined with doors that did not exist in any other map I’d studi…"
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"The cube pulsed with a heartbeat of its own, a pale glow that throbbed in sync with the pendant’s warmth."
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"The chamber behind us—a shadow-stitched corridor—twitched in sympathy, as if the place itself could smell fear and hunger."
7
"The Fae-Forged Blade moved easily, tracing along a wall’s sigils with a light touch, as if it were born to listen to what the runes tried not to tell."
8
"The corridors branching off the main hall bent and stretched, shifting as if the place itself reconfigured its joints when we weren’t looking."
9
"A sound rose from the depths of the place—a metallic sigh, then a chorus of soft clacks that resembled footsteps not of men but of something that had learned to…"
10
"The fourth door, the one nearest the dragon’s mouth arch, appeared to be barely a door at all, just a sliver of air that looked ready to swallow us whole if we …"
11
"Rory spoke first, quick and practical, the sort of thing I’d expect from a person who’d run through deliveries and danger with the same stubborn pace."
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"The cube’s glow seemed to respond to the blade’s edge, smoothing the runes as if the weapon had coaxed a stubborn animal into following us."
13
"The ceiling above us opened into a lattice of dark, star-work that wasn’t stars so much as living questions."
14
"We found ourselves in a chamber that seemed to be carved from the night itself—an amphitheatre of black glass and pale sap, where every surface reflected a vers…"
15
"In the glassy surfaces we saw ourselves: Rory as a prosecutor, as a warrior, as a wanderer in a city of light and violence; Isolde as a figure standing calmly, …"
16
"The Heartstone Pendant’s glow intensified each time a reflection moved, and for a heartbeat I thought I could hear the pendant counting time in a language that …"
17
"The wall behind us sighed and the runes there glowed softly, as if acknowledging a treaty being broken."
18
"The creature’s presence felt like a wall collapsing inward, and in that moment the chamber itself responded—each mirror surface rippled as if a fish gliding thr…"
19
"The blade in my hand grew colder, the glow around its edge turning tangibly blue, as if the moon itself had blown a frosty exhalation into the room."
20
"The amber-eyed thing began to advance, a crawling hunger that brushed the outer edges of our perception."
21
"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed violently now, warm heat pricking through the fabric of my coat, flooding my senses with a memory of something I couldn’t name—per…"
22
"The monster staggered back as if struck by a blade of ice, its teeth clattering with a sound that resembled iron filings spilling across stone."
23
"The spectres in the mirrors hissed and retreated at the edge, leaving a clearer path to the far wall, where a single door hung in mid-air, framed by the same ru…"
24
"The ground bore patterns—constellations drawn in raised, pale glass that felt warm beneath my gloves."
25
"The Heartstone Pendant continued its patient warmth, not nagging but guiding us toward the centre where an immense arch stood, carved with a spiderweb of sigils…"
26
"It pulsed with a steady radiance, as if the place itself was listening to the three of us and preparing to decide whether we were worthy of entry."
27
"And then, as if the place could not bear three living hearts without asking for something in return, a coiled thing of shadow rose from the floor in front of us…"
28
"Its body was a wisp of smoke with edges that glittered like frost."
29
"The glow of the blade flickered; Nyx’s shadow thickened and then split into a hundred frayed threads, each thread hanging temptingly in the light as if they mig…"
30
"We met it head-on, the blade singing against something invisible that fought to hold us, the pendant’s warmth escalating into a fierce blaze that felt almost li…"
31
"The Fae blade cut a path through the creature’s wisp-thin body, leaving behind a trail of smoke that smelled faintly of honey and iron."
32
"The arch beside us shuddered, and the space grew hotter, as if the place itself were turning a corner toward something more dangerous."
33
"The corridor contracted and opened, contracted and opened, as if we were running through a living bellows."
34
"I ignored the fear that prickled at the back of my neck, ignored the way Nyx’s shade quivered at the edges of perception, ignored Isolde’s quiet, almost playful…"
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"The arch breathing out, we stepped through into the next moment, which held less of fear and more of something like relief—but relief that would be short-lived."
36
"The dais reappeared in a pale, frost-white light, the Heartstone Pendant now a steady glow that seemed to anchor us in time rather than pull us through it."
37
"The arch behind us pulsed again, a slow, patient rhythm, as if the place was listening to our chests, counting the cycles of our breath, deciding whether we wou…"
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"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed with a booming, almost audible heartbeat that caught in my throat and made the words I wanted to shout snag, stuck in my mouth lik…"
39
"The arch, still open to whatever lay beyond, hummed a question we hadn’t expected to hear in a place that didn’t believe in questions anymore."
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"Then the weight lifted as if someone had released a clamp, and the chamber’s eye—its singular, amber gaze—found us again, the memory settling into our bones."
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"The doorway across the room—no longer a mere threshold but a living thing—shivered, and a silhouette rose from the ground behind it: a figure of horn and shadow…"
42
"The thing moved with a patient, predatory grace, as if it had waited for us to reach this door and now, at last, could take its due."
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"We stepped forward as one, and the next moment—the moment that would either bind us to the Veil or send us screaming back into the ordinary world—was a breath a…"
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"The arch's light flared, a flare that caught the room in a blaze of pale gold and red, and a terrible, hungry calm settled over us as the gate began to move, sl…"
45
"The chapter ends where the moment demands the next leap: with the world tilting, the ground cracking, and the shadowy guardian of the Veil closing in, its amber…"