| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She exhaled slowly [slowly]" | | 1 | "She turned back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 88.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1358 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.04% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1358 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "sentinel" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 145 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 145 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 151 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 1363 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Come to the grove. Midnight. Come alone. You'll want answers about your pendant." | | 1 | "LEAVE" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 1330 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.75 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Aurora | 10 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 62.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like teeth before" | | 1 | "seemed significant twelve months, twelve hours on a clock, twelve of this or that" | | 2 | "felt like she'd been standing here long" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1363 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "Spots that, she'd" | | 1 | "imagining that part" | | 2 | "sent that text" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 29.63 | | std | 19.21 | | cv | 0.648 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 72 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 61 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 51 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 52 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 39 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 42 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 51 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 36 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 41 |
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| 98.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "been crushed" | | 1 | "been pressed" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 209 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 151 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers dotted the grass in colours that seemed too vibrant for moonlight — deep purples, vivid oranges, a blue so bright it almost glowed." | | 1 | "That was wrong — the ground should have been damp from yesterday's rain, should have squelched beneath her weight." | | 2 | "Twelve ancient oaks, a familiar number, one she'd noted on previous visits because it had seemed significant — twelve months, twelve hours on a clock, twelve of this or that." | | 3 | "Her voice died the same way — swallowed, flat, as if the air itself was thick enough to trap sound before it could travel." | | 4 | "The lines formed a pattern — no, a word." | | 5 | "Not running — running meant panic, meant tripping, meant giving whatever was here an advantage." | | 6 | "Not sway — turn." | | 7 | "The bark — smooth, pale, wrong — was warm against her jacket." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 205 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.024390243902439025 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004878048780487805 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 151 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 151 | | mean | 9.03 | | std | 7.21 | | cv | 0.799 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 58.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.39072847682119205 | | totalSentences | 151 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a silver chain and" | | 1 | "Instead, the grove sat empty" | | 2 | "More crushed flowers." | | 3 | "Then she heard it." |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 91.19% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd walked past these ancient" | | 1 | "She checked her phone." | | 2 | "You'll want answers about your" | | 3 | "She'd received it three weeks" | | 4 | "It beat in time with" | | 5 | "She exhaled slowly" | | 6 | "She'd expected someone to be" | | 7 | "Her boots made no sound" | | 8 | "She looked down." | | 9 | "It just didn't act wet." | | 10 | "Her voice came out flat," | | 11 | "She turned in a slow" | | 12 | "She counted them." | | 13 | "She turned further." | | 14 | "She was certain of it." | | 15 | "She turned again." | | 16 | "She pulled her phone from" | | 17 | "She hadn't stepped there." | | 18 | "Her voice died the same" | | 19 | "She moved toward the crushed" |
| | ratio | 0.322 | |
| 65.93% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones of Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She'd walked past these ancient" | | 3 | "Tonight, though, a half-moon cast" | | 4 | "She checked her phone." | | 5 | "The text from the unknown" | | 6 | "You'll want answers about your" | | 7 | "The Heartstone hung cold against" | | 8 | "She'd received it three weeks" | | 9 | "The pendant had been ice-cold" | | 10 | "The heat intensified, then faded" | | 11 | "Aurora pressed her palm flat" | | 12 | "It beat in time with" | | 13 | "She exhaled slowly" | | 14 | "The grove opened before her," | | 15 | "Wildflowers dotted the grass in" | | 16 | "The air tasted different here." | | 17 | "She'd expected someone to be" | | 18 | "A figure in dark clothing," | | 19 | "The silhouette of whoever had" |
| | ratio | 0.788 | |
| 84.75% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, as she stepped between" | | 1 | "As if something had been" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 76.72% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Tonight, though, a half-moon cast shadows that pooled between the trees like spilled ink, and the twisted branches reaching toward the sky seemed to form shapes…" | | 1 | "Her voice died the same way — swallowed, flat, as if the air itself was thick enough to trap sound before it could travel." | | 2 | "As if something had been crawling behind her, staying low, pressing itself against the ground." | | 3 | "This was wetter, heavier, each exhale carrying a low whistle that spoke of damaged lungs or a throat built differently from hers." | | 4 | "Aurora stood perfectly still, her eyes scanning the stones, the flowers, the impossible geometry of a grove that had grown larger and darker in the span of minu…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |