| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "they said conversationally [conversationally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 950 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 950 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "gleaming" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "loomed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.52% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 946 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.92% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 738 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.76 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Isolde | 6 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | London | 1 | | October | 1 | | September | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "October" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.619 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 13.64% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite catch" | | 1 | "robes that seemed to shift colour in the strange light" | | 2 | "seemed closer their branches reaching like gnarled fingers" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 946 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 20.57 | | std | 15.87 | | cv | 0.772 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 40 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 51 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.15% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "were weakening" | | 1 | "was coming" | | 2 | "was pulsing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 742 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.03234501347708895 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01752021563342318 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 9.75 | | std | 6.22 | | cv | 0.638 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 70.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4639175257731959 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 46.95% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the air here felt" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd found the entrance to" | | 1 | "She'd worn layers tonight, expecting" | | 2 | "Her voice died in the" | | 3 | "She'd come because the note" | | 4 | "She'd been running deliveries for" | | 5 | "She touched the pendant through" | | 6 | "Her mobile showed 9:47 PM" | | 7 | "they said conversationally" |
| | ratio | 0.113 | |
| 58.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak branches above Rory's" | | 1 | "She'd found the entrance to" | | 2 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against" | | 4 | "She'd worn layers tonight, expecting" | | 5 | "Her voice died in the" | | 6 | "The sound simply stopped, as" | | 7 | "Rory pulled out her mobile." | | 8 | "The screen showed 9:47 PM," | | 9 | "An hour inside could be" | | 10 | "She'd come because the note" | | 11 | "The Hel portals were weakening," | | 12 | "Something was coming through, and" | | 13 | "Rory stepped deeper into the" | | 14 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 15 | "She'd been running deliveries for" | | 16 | "Isolde's handwriting, distinctive and flowing." | | 17 | "The paper itself had felt" | | 18 | "A branch creaked overhead." | | 19 | "Rory looked up." |
| | ratio | 0.803 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "If it was pulsing here," | | 1 | "As if the speaker were" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the air here felt thick as summer honey, perfumed with wildflowers that shouldn't bloom past September." | | 1 | "Rory stepped deeper into the clearing, her trainers silent on grass that seemed too green, too perfect." | | 2 | "Forget-me-nots and foxgloves, night-blooming jasmine and roses that glowed faintly in the darkness." | | 3 | "A figure emerged from behind one of the massive oaks, tall and elegant, wearing flowing robes that seemed to shift colour in the strange light." | | 4 | "The paths twisted as she fled, oak roots rising to trip her, branches whipping at her face." | | 5 | "The pendant's glow intensified, casting crimson shadows that danced and writhed." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "The stranger's smile revealed (reveal)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.083 | | leniency | 0.167 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |