Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY7HRSXQ72HT04A8TF53YN

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
# Chapter Four The pendant thrummed against Aurora's chest like a second heartbeat. She stood at the boundary of the Grove, her trainers sinking slightly into moss that felt wrong beneath her feet. Not damp. Not quite soft. The ancient oak stones rose before her in a rough circle, their bark gnarled and black as if charred from the inside. Wildflowers bloomed in defiance of November's claim on the calendar, their petals shimmering with colours that hadn't existed last spring. Richmond Park sprawled behind her, familiar and mundane. Ahead lay something else entirely. Rory adjusted the strap of her messenger bag and stepped through. The temperature didn't change. That was the first thing that unsettled her. She'd expected cold, that sharp intake of breath when moving between worlds. Instead, the air remained exactly as it had been, neutral and waiting. The shift happened somewhere else, in the spaces between her perception and the Grove itself. One moment the park's sodium-lit paths existed in her peripheral vision. The next, they were simply gone, replaced by a density of shadow that suggested they'd never been there at all. She pulled out her phone. No signal, naturally. The torch function still worked, but the beam seemed to dissolve into the darkness rather than cut through it. She could see perhaps three metres ahead before the light simply stopped, as if it had hit glass. The pendant pulsed. Warm. Growing warmer. Eva had been vague about why Rory needed to come here. Her childhood friend rarely dealt in vagueness. Usually Eva was all clipped sentences and practical instructions, the sort of person who said "the situation's dire" and expected you to grasp everything from those three words. But the phone call last night had been different. Eva's voice had carried that particular pitch it took when she was frightened of something beyond the usual scope of London's supernatural underworld. "Go to the Grove," Eva had said. "Alone. Night's better. The boundary's thin when the sun's down." "Alone? Eva, that's—" "Rory. Trust me. Just go." Rory trusted Eva with her life. She'd done so since they were eight years old and Eva had pushed her out of the path of a speeding bicycle. That trust had only deepened over the past year, when Eva had explained that the monsters hiding in London's shadows were real, that Rory's entire understanding of reality needed recalibration, and that no, that creeping sensation she'd felt for months wasn't stress from her job at the Golden Empress. It was something watching her. The pendant had appeared three weeks after Eva's revelations. A small crimson stone on a silver chain, left in Rory's flat with no note, no explanation. It had been warm then too, though she hadn't understood why. Now, walking through a pocket of Fae-touched earth while the invisible watched, she was beginning to form theories. A sound reached her ears. Not the sound of wind through trees or nocturnal animals. Something closer to breathing, though that was impossible. The Grove was still. That was another wrong thing she hadn't articulated until this moment. No rustling. No small creatures scurrying through undergrowth. The wildflowers stood absolutely motionless, their impossible colours muted now in the torchlight, washed to sepias and greys. Rory turned slowly, sweeping the torch beam across the clearing. Nothing. Flowers, ancient grass, the looming shapes of oaks that had seen centuries and would see centuries more. Yet the sensation of being observed pressed against her like weight underwater. The kind of pressure that built in your ears and made your vision narrow at the edges. She'd experienced fear before. Evan had taught her fear in its most practical form, the kind that lived in your chest and made you check your locks three times before bed. This was different. This was the ancestral fear, the deep-brain warning that something was watching from the long grass, and your soft skin offered no protection. The pendant burned. Not painfully. It was almost pleasant, really, like holding warm hands against your collarbone on a cold day. But the warmth was spreading now, radiating outward until her whole chest felt flush. She touched the stone, half-expecting it to bite her. The moment her fingers brushed the crimson surface, the clearing changed. Not physically. The rocks remained where they'd been, the flowers in their same positions. But her perception shifted, as though someone had adjusted the contrast on her vision. Suddenly she could see further into the dark. Shapes resolved themselves from the murk. Twisted trees that hadn't been there before, or perhaps had always been there and she'd simply lacked the ability to perceive them. And there, at the far edge of the clearing, something moved. Just a flicker of motion at the boundary between seeing and not-seeing. A suggestion of a shape. Shoulders, perhaps. A human silhouette wearing the night like an overcoat. Rory's hand fell from the pendant. The enhanced vision faded immediately, plunging her back into the torch-and-shadow world. "Hello?" Her voice scraped against the stillness. No echo. Sound didn't behave normally here, apparently. Whatever properties made time move strangely in the Grove likely made other physical laws optional. No response came. But the breathing sound returned, closer now, and she realised with a crawl of ice-water up her spine that it wasn't breathing at all. It was the sound of something large moving through the grass with deliberate care. Rory turned to run. The torch beam caught a form beside her before she'd made it two steps. Human-shaped but the proportions were wrong, the limbs too long, the head tilted at an angle that would dislocate a mortal neck. She didn't look at it directly. Her peripheral vision was already screaming warnings. Instead, she ran toward where she remembered the boundary stones being, her trainers pounding against ground that felt increasingly unstable beneath her feet. Behind her, something laughed. Not a human sound. Something that used the approximation of laughter the way a mimic bird copies speech, capturing the shape of emotion without understanding it. The Grove's flowers parted before whatever was chasing her, and she heard it clearly now: the soft patter of feet that weren't quite feet on ground that wasn't quite ground. There. The standing stones resolved from the darkness, their oak bark seeming to glow faintly. Rory sprinted toward them, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The boundary between the Grove and Richmond Park existed as a visible line now, a shimmer in the air like heat-haze despite the cold. She was going to make it. The thing caught her sleeve. Its grip was ice and bone and something else, something ancient that didn't have a modern name. Rory twisted violently, feeling the fabric tear, feeling the edge of claws against her wrist. Not quite drawing blood. Not quite letting go. "Aurora." The voice was layers of sound, harmonics that vibrated through the Grove itself. It used her full name the way people used it when they were about to break your heart or your trust or your everything. "The Heartstone calls. But Dymas's debts collect interest, girl. Interest is all I have these days." Rory felt the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—the one from a childhood accident that hadn't actually been an accident—begin to burn in resonance with the pendant. Something was being unlocked. Something that had been locked for a very long time. She pulled free with a desperate wrench that left her stumbling toward the boundary, no longer caring about the creature behind her. Just caring about crossing that line, about finding Richmond Park's prosaic paths and normal darkness and blessed absence of things that wore human shapes like borrowed clothes. The shimmer rushed toward her. She crossed the threshold as claws raked against the back of her coat, and then she was through, gasping on familiar grass as Richmond Park's genuine darkness wrapped around her. The oak standing stones vanished from sight. The Grove's wrongness released her like a breath she hadn't known she was holding. Behind the veil between worlds, something was screaming. Not in rage. In hunger. Rory ran toward the nearest path, her phone's torch cutting a weak beam through the familiar cold, her heart hammering so hard she thought it might break her ribs. The pendant continued its rhythmic burn against her chest, warm and insistent as a warning she finally understood she should have heeded much earlier. Eva had sent her into the Grove for a reason. Eva had sent her to be seen. And now the Grove's creature knew exactly what she was.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1443
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"really"
3"suddenly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1443
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"unsettled"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"absolutely"
count1
4
word"looming"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"resolved"
count2
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"pounding"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"resonance"
count1
13
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"unsettled"
2"pulsed"
3"absolutely"
4"looming"
5"weight"
6"warmth"
7"resolved"
8"flicker"
9"echo"
10"pounding"
11"vibrated"
12"resonance"
13"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences119
matches
0"t in rage"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences119
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1430
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1387
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Chapter1
Four1
Aurora1
Grove10
November1
Park4
Rory12
Eva10
London2
Golden1
Empress1
Fae-touched1
Richmond4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"November"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
places
0"Grove"
1"London"
2"Golden"
3"Richmond"
globalScore1
windowScore0.333
90.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"normally here, apparently"
1"quite feet on ground that wasn't quite ground"
2"quite ground"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1430
matches(empty)
86.67% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences125
matches
0"explained that the"
1"warning that something"
2"crossing that line"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean29.79
std24.68
cv0.828
sampleLengths
03
110
267
313
411
582
645
76
878
917
103
115
1282
1337
1418
1564
1610
1747
1857
193
2041
2111
2264
2311
2428
2518
261
2729
2841
294
3072
314
3256
3349
346
355
3640
371
3837
3916
4040
4149
425
4351
4413
4553
4617
4710
96.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences119
matches
0"was frightened"
1"being unlocked"
2"been locked"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs219
matches
0"was beginning"
1"was watching"
2"was spreading"
3"wasn't breathing"
4"was chasing"
5"was holding"
6"was screaming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences125
ratio0.008
matches
0"Rory felt the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—the one from a childhood accident that hadn't actually been an accident—begin to burn in resonance with the pendant."
89.03% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1400
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"observed pressed against her"
adverbCount63
adverbRatio0.045
lyAdverbCount29
lyAdverbRatio0.020714285714285713
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean11.44
std8.4
cv0.735
sampleLengths
013
120
22
33
422
520
68
75
811
94
108
1112
1212
1315
1411
1520
165
173
1819
1918
203
211
222
2311
247
2528
269
2723
287
2910
303
315
326
3322
3449
355
369
3717
3811
3918
405
4110
428
434
4411
452
466
4718
4810
491
51.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.352
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences108
matches
0"Instead, the air remained exactly"
1"Usually Eva was all clipped"
2"Suddenly she could see further"
3"Just a flicker of motion"
4"Instead, she ran toward where"
5"Just caring about crossing that"
ratio0.056
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences108
matches
0"She stood at the boundary"
1"She'd expected cold, that sharp"
2"She pulled out her phone."
3"She could see perhaps three"
4"Her childhood friend rarely dealt"
5"She'd done so since they"
6"It was something watching her."
7"It had been warm then"
8"She'd experienced fear before."
9"It was almost pleasant, really,"
10"She touched the stone, half-expecting"
11"Her voice scraped against the"
12"It was the sound of"
13"She didn't look at it"
14"Her peripheral vision was already"
15"She was going to make"
16"Its grip was ice and"
17"It used her full name"
18"She pulled free with a"
19"She crossed the threshold as"
ratio0.185
98.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences108
matches
0"# Chapter Four The pendant"
1"She stood at the boundary"
2"The ancient oak stones rose"
3"Wildflowers bloomed in defiance of"
4"Richmond Park sprawled behind her,"
5"Rory adjusted the strap of"
6"The temperature didn't change."
7"That was the first thing"
8"She'd expected cold, that sharp"
9"The shift happened somewhere else,"
10"The next, they were simply"
11"She pulled out her phone."
12"The torch function still worked,"
13"She could see perhaps three"
14"The pendant pulsed."
15"Eva had been vague about"
16"Her childhood friend rarely dealt"
17"Eva's voice had carried that"
18"Eva had said"
19"Rory trusted Eva with her"
ratio0.722
46.30% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"Now, walking through a pocket"
ratio0.009
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed in defiance of November's claim on the calendar, their petals shimmering with colours that hadn't existed last spring."
1"Flowers, ancient grass, the looming shapes of oaks that had seen centuries and would see centuries more."
2"Evan had taught her fear in its most practical form, the kind that lived in your chest and made you check your locks three times before bed."
3"But her perception shifted, as though someone had adjusted the contrast on her vision."
4"Human-shaped but the proportions were wrong, the limbs too long, the head tilted at an angle that would dislocate a mortal neck."
5"Instead, she ran toward where she remembered the boundary stones being, her trainers pounding against ground that felt increasingly unstable beneath her feet."
6"Something that used the approximation of laughter the way a mimic bird copies speech, capturing the shape of emotion without understanding it."
7"The voice was layers of sound, harmonics that vibrated through the Grove itself."
8"Rory felt the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—the one from a childhood accident that hadn't actually been an accident—begin to burn in resonance with the pend…"
9"She pulled free with a desperate wrench that left her stumbling toward the boundary, no longer caring about the creature behind her."
10"Just caring about crossing that line, about finding Richmond Park's prosaic paths and normal darkness and blessed absence of things that wore human shapes like …"
11"Rory ran toward the nearest path, her phone's torch cutting a weak beam through the familiar cold, her heart hammering so hard she thought it might break her ri…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.1049%