| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1443 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1443 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "unsettled" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "absolutely" | | 4 | "looming" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "resolved" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "pounding" | | 11 | "vibrated" | | 12 | "resonance" | | 13 | "rhythmic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 125 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1430 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1387 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.87 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Chapter | 1 | | Four | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Grove | 10 | | November | 1 | | Park | 4 | | Rory | 12 | | Eva | 10 | | London | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Richmond | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "November" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 90.48% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "normally here, apparently" | | 1 | "quite feet on ground that wasn't quite ground" | | 2 | "quite ground" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1430 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.67% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "explained that the" | | 1 | "warning that something" | | 2 | "crossing that line" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 29.79 | | std | 24.68 | | cv | 0.828 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 3 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 82 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 78 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 82 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 64 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 57 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 64 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 72 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 56 | | 33 | 49 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 37 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 40 | | 41 | 49 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 51 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 53 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 10 |
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| 96.42% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "was frightened" | | 1 | "being unlocked" | | 2 | "been locked" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 219 | | matches | | 0 | "was beginning" | | 1 | "was watching" | | 2 | "was spreading" | | 3 | "wasn't breathing" | | 4 | "was chasing" | | 5 | "was holding" | | 6 | "was screaming" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—the one from a childhood accident that hadn't actually been an accident—begin to burn in resonance with the pendant." |
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| 89.03% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1400 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "observed pressed against her" |
| | adverbCount | 63 | | adverbRatio | 0.045 | | lyAdverbCount | 29 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020714285714285713 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 125 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 125 | | mean | 11.44 | | std | 8.4 | | cv | 0.735 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 51.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.352 | | totalSentences | 125 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the air remained exactly" | | 1 | "Usually Eva was all clipped" | | 2 | "Suddenly she could see further" | | 3 | "Just a flicker of motion" | | 4 | "Instead, she ran toward where" | | 5 | "Just caring about crossing that" |
| | ratio | 0.056 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the boundary" | | 1 | "She'd expected cold, that sharp" | | 2 | "She pulled out her phone." | | 3 | "She could see perhaps three" | | 4 | "Her childhood friend rarely dealt" | | 5 | "She'd done so since they" | | 6 | "It was something watching her." | | 7 | "It had been warm then" | | 8 | "She'd experienced fear before." | | 9 | "It was almost pleasant, really," | | 10 | "She touched the stone, half-expecting" | | 11 | "Her voice scraped against the" | | 12 | "It was the sound of" | | 13 | "She didn't look at it" | | 14 | "Her peripheral vision was already" | | 15 | "She was going to make" | | 16 | "Its grip was ice and" | | 17 | "It used her full name" | | 18 | "She pulled free with a" | | 19 | "She crossed the threshold as" |
| | ratio | 0.185 | |
| 98.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "# Chapter Four The pendant" | | 1 | "She stood at the boundary" | | 2 | "The ancient oak stones rose" | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in defiance of" | | 4 | "Richmond Park sprawled behind her," | | 5 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 6 | "The temperature didn't change." | | 7 | "That was the first thing" | | 8 | "She'd expected cold, that sharp" | | 9 | "The shift happened somewhere else," | | 10 | "The next, they were simply" | | 11 | "She pulled out her phone." | | 12 | "The torch function still worked," | | 13 | "She could see perhaps three" | | 14 | "The pendant pulsed." | | 15 | "Eva had been vague about" | | 16 | "Her childhood friend rarely dealt" | | 17 | "Eva's voice had carried that" | | 18 | "Eva had said" | | 19 | "Rory trusted Eva with her" |
| | ratio | 0.722 | |
| 46.30% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, walking through a pocket" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 6.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in defiance of November's claim on the calendar, their petals shimmering with colours that hadn't existed last spring." | | 1 | "Flowers, ancient grass, the looming shapes of oaks that had seen centuries and would see centuries more." | | 2 | "Evan had taught her fear in its most practical form, the kind that lived in your chest and made you check your locks three times before bed." | | 3 | "But her perception shifted, as though someone had adjusted the contrast on her vision." | | 4 | "Human-shaped but the proportions were wrong, the limbs too long, the head tilted at an angle that would dislocate a mortal neck." | | 5 | "Instead, she ran toward where she remembered the boundary stones being, her trainers pounding against ground that felt increasingly unstable beneath her feet." | | 6 | "Something that used the approximation of laughter the way a mimic bird copies speech, capturing the shape of emotion without understanding it." | | 7 | "The voice was layers of sound, harmonics that vibrated through the Grove itself." | | 8 | "Rory felt the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—the one from a childhood accident that hadn't actually been an accident—begin to burn in resonance with the pend…" | | 9 | "She pulled free with a desperate wrench that left her stumbling toward the boundary, no longer caring about the creature behind her." | | 10 | "Just caring about crossing that line, about finding Richmond Park's prosaic paths and normal darkness and blessed absence of things that wore human shapes like …" | | 11 | "Rory ran toward the nearest path, her phone's torch cutting a weak beam through the familiar cold, her heart hammering so hard she thought it might break her ri…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |