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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY7N4MAHP38N6K0QQZYZXJ
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 Plus (2026-02-15)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
31.0s
Cost:
$0.008135
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
94.89%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
51.43%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
49.35%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
62.70%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
51.68%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
86.67%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
25.89%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
38.76%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
88.95%
Technical jargon density
(details)
78.13%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
64.29%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
86.4244%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The third deadbolt clicked open, and Aurora yanked the door wide, ready to scream at whatever delivery driver had ignored the *
No Soliciting
* sign taped to the peephole.
The words died in her
throat.
Lucien Moreau stood on the
cramped landing, rain dripping from the brim of an invisible hat onto his charcoal suit shoulders.
He looked immaculate despite the
London drizzle, a
stark
contrast to the peeling paint and smell of fried onions that clung to Brick Lane.
His heterochromatic eyes, one amber
and one void-black, locked onto hers with terrifying stillness.
He leaned on his ivory-handled
cane, the tip tapping a soft rhythm against the linoleum. "You changed the locks," Lucien said. His voice carried that smooth, French
lilt
that used to make her knees weak and now made her
stomach
churn
. "Security upgrade."
Aurora gripped the doorframe, her
knuckles white. "Get out, Lucien." "Not until we speak." "We spoke. Two years ago. I said everything I needed to say." "You said nothing of consequence."
Lucien stepped forward
.
The scent of expensive cologne
and something metallic, like old blood, flooded the narrow hallway, overpowering the curry smell from downstairs. "You ran. It was dramatic, inefficient, and entirely unlike you."
Aurora shoved past him, storming
into the flat.
Ptolemy, her tabby cat, shot
out from under a stack of research notes and hissed at the intruder before vanishing behind the sofa.
She spun around, blocking the
path to the kitchen where she kept her knives. "Inefficient? You call what you did inefficient?"
She gestured at the scattered
papers covering every surface of her one-bedroom prison. Scrolls on demonology, books on Avaros lore, maps of London's ley lines. "You lied to my face. You used me as bait for your little information broker games." "I used you to keep you alive."
Lucien closed the door behind
him with a precise click. The three deadbolts engaged again, sealing them in. "Your ex-boyfriend, Evan, was not merely abusive. He was a vessel. Did you think his temper was natural?" "I thought he was a drunk arsehole. There's a difference." "There is when the drink is hellfire."
Lucien moved further into the
room,
navigating
the clutter with practiced grace.
He didn't look at the
mess; he looked at her.
His gaze traced the line
of her jaw, the frantic rise and fall of her chest. "I removed the entity. You removed yourself. The math does not balance." "You didn't remove anything. You made a deal."
Aurora backed up until her
hips hit the edge of the small dining table. "I saw the contract, Lucien. I found it in your study before I left. You traded my freedom for access to the Cardiff gate." Lucien stopped. For the first time, the polished mask slipped. A
flicker
of something raw crossed his features, gone as
quickly
as it appeared.
He adjusted his cufflinks, silver
and engraved with wards. "My father rules Avaros. Deals are the currency of our existence." "And I was the coin." "You were the prize." Lucien's voice dropped, rougher now. "Do not insult my intelligence by pretending you did not feel it. The pull between us was not a side effect of the ritual. It was the point." Aurora laughed, a sharp, brittle sound. "That's your pitch? You ruined my life because you fancied me?" "I saved your soul because I could not bear to watch it burn." Lucien took another step. The distance between them shrank to inches. The air grew heavy,
charged
with the static of unsaid things and old magic. "You think I wanted to use you? I spent six months tracking every move Evan made. I bled for you, Aurora. More than once." He extended his left hand, palm up. A thin, white scar ran across his palm, glowing faintly purple before fading. Demon fire.
It left marks that never
fully healed. Aurora stared at the scar.
She remembered the night he
disappeared, the night she found the contract.
She had packed her bags
in a rage, convinced he viewed her as nothing more than a transaction. Seeing the mark now, the physical evidence of his pain, cracked the armour she had built around her heart. "Why come back?" she whispered. "Why now?" "Because the gate in Cardiff is opening again." Lucien's black eye
seemed to
swallow the light in the room. "And Evan is back. He is not alone this time." The name hit her like a physical blow. Evan. The man who had broken her wrist, the man whose anger felt too hot to be human.
She touched the small crescent
scar on her own left wrist, a souvenir from a childhood fall that felt trivial compared to the bruises Evan had left. "I'm not going back there." "You do not have a choice."
Lucien reached out, his fingers hovering near her arm but not touching
. "They know where you are. They know you live above the bar. They know about the delivery job." Panic, cold and sharp, spiked in her chest. "How?" "Information is my business, Aurora. If I found you, they certainly have." Lucien's expression hardened. "I came to get you before they did. We need to leave. Now." "No." Aurora stepped back, putting the table between them again. "I'm not running with you. Not again. Last time you 'saved' me, I lost my family, my degree, my home. I ended up in a rat hole in East London delivering wontons." "You are alive." "Barely." "Better alive and angry than dead and forgotten." Lucien's cane tapped against the floor, a staccato beat that matched the
pounding
of her heart. "Listen to me. The entities coming for you are not like Evan. They do not want to possess you. They want to consume you entirely. Body, soul, memory." A crash
echoed
from the street below. Glass
shattered
. Screams erupted, muffled by the floorboards but distinct enough to freeze the blood in Aurora's veins. Ptolemy yowled from behind the sofa. Lucien's head snapped toward the window. The amber eye narrowed; the black one widened. "They are early," he muttered. "Who?" Aurora's voice
trembled
. "Reapers. From the lower circles." Lucien moved with sudden, violent speed.
He grabbed her arm, his
grip firm but not painful. "We do not have time for arguments." "Let go of me!" "Look."
He dragged her to the
window and pulled back the curtain. Three figures stood in the alley below, cloaked in
shadows that seemed to move independently of the streetlights
.
They wore the tattered robes
of Avaros cultists, but their faces
were obscured
by masks of bone. One looked up, directly at the window. Even from three stories up, Aurora felt the
weight
of its gaze, a cold pressure against her mind. The figure raised a hand. A ball of green fire formed in its palm, casting an eerie glow on the wet cobblestones. "Down," Lucien commanded.
He shoved her to the
floor just as the green fireball smashed through the window. The explosion blew the glass inward in a shower of deadly shards. Heat washed over them, smelling of sulfur and burnt hair. Aurora hit the deck, covering her head as plaster rained down. Lucien was already moving.
He drew the thin blade
from his cane, the steel singing as it caught the light. "Stay behind me,"
he ordered, his voice devoid
of its earlier
warmth
. All business now. All killer. "You think I'm hiding while you fight demons in my living room?" Aurora scrambled up, grabbing a heavy brass lamp from the side table. "I lived with Evan for two years. I know how to swing something heavy." "This is not a domestic dispute, Aurora." Lucien stepped over the broken glass, positioning himself between her and the gaping hole in the wall. "These things do not negotiate." The first reaper climbed through the window, moving with unnatural fluidity. Its bone mask clicked as it opened a mouth full of needle-teeth. It lunged. Lucien met it mid-air. His blade flashed, slicing through the creature's cloak. Black ichor sprayed across the wall, sizzling where it touched the wallpaper. The reaper shrieked, a sound that grated against the nerves, and swung a clawed hand at Lucien's throat. Lucien ducked, pivoted on his cane, and drove the blade upward into the creature's chest. It dissolved into smoke instantly. Two more poured through the window. "Rory, move!" Lucien shouted, parrying a strike that would have taken his head off. "To the back door!" "I'm not leaving you!" "I am a half-demon. I can take a hit. You are flesh and bone. Go!" Aurora hesitated, watching him fight. He moved like water, elegant and deadly, his suit somehow remaining
pristine
despite the chaos. He
was protecting
her again. Just like before. The second reaper broke past Lucien's guard, heading straight for her. Its eyes glowed with the same green fire as the ball it had thrown. Aurora tightened her grip on the brass lamp. She remembered the self-defence classes her father made her take, the lessons on leverage and surprise. She waited until the creature was within range. "Come on, you ugly bastard," she muttered. The reaper lunged. Aurora sidestepped, swinging the lamp with all her strength. The heavy base connected with the creature's temple. Bone cracked. The reaper staggered, confused by the resistance of a human. Lucien was there in an instant. He grabbed the creature by the throat and slammed it against the wall. With a twist of his wrist, he snapped its neck. It crumpled to the floor, dissolving into ash. Silence fell over the flat, broken only by the sound of rain pouring in through the broken window and Ptolemy's terrified whimpering. Lucien turned to her, chest heaving
slightly
. A smear of black blood marked his cheekbone. He looked at the lamp in her hand, then at her face. A ghost of a smile touched his lips. "Good form," he said. "Don't get used to it." Aurora dropped the lamp. Her hands shook. "They're gone?" "For now." Lucien sheathed his blade and wiped the ichor from his cheek. "More will come. They smell the blood." He walked over to the window and peered out into the rainy night. The street below was empty, but the
sense of
lingering malice remained thick in the air. "We need to go," he said, turning back to her. "My car is around the corner. We can't stay here." Aurora looked around her flat. Her books, her notes, her life. Everything she had built since fleeing Cardiff. It was already ruined. Glass everywhere, burn marks on the wall, the smell of demon death clinging to the curtains. She looked at Lucien. The man who had broken her trust, the man who had saved her life, the man she had tried so hard to forget. He stood
amidst
the wreckage, offering her a way out. Again. "Where do we go?" she asked. Lucien extended his hand. This time, she took it. His skin was warm, real. "Away," he said. "Somewhere they cannot follow." A loud thud
echoed
from the front door. The three deadbolts groaned under pressure.
Then came a voice, distorted
and layered, speaking through the wood. "Aurora Carter. We know you are in there. Open up, or we burn the whole building down." Aurora froze. She
knew that voice
. It was Evan. But deeper, darker, twisted by something ancient. Lucien's grip on her hand tightened. His eyes flashed, both amber and black glowing with dangerous light. "Change of plan," he whispered. "We do not leave through the front." He kicked open the back door to the fire escape, the metal railing cold and wet in the London night. "Run," he commanded. And they ran.
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cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Alibaba"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
32
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Lucien moved further [further]"
1
"Aurora stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences
70
tagDensity
0.457
leniency
0.914
rawRatio
0.063
effectiveRatio
0.057
94.89%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1956
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"quickly"
1
"slightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
51.43%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1956
totalAiIsms
19
found
0
word
"stark"
count
1
1
word
"lilt"
count
1
2
word
"stomach"
count
1
3
word
"churn"
count
1
4
word
"navigating"
count
1
5
word
"traced"
count
1
6
word
"flicker"
count
1
7
word
"charged"
count
1
8
word
"pounding"
count
1
9
word
"echoed"
count
2
10
word
"shattered"
count
1
11
word
"trembled"
count
1
12
word
"weight"
count
1
13
word
"warmth"
count
1
14
word
"pristine"
count
1
15
word
"silence"
count
1
16
word
"sense of"
count
1
17
word
"amidst"
count
1
highlights
0
"stark"
1
"lilt"
2
"stomach"
3
"churn"
4
"navigating"
5
"traced"
6
"flicker"
7
"charged"
8
"pounding"
9
"echoed"
10
"shattered"
11
"trembled"
12
"weight"
13
"warmth"
14
"pristine"
15
"silence"
16
"sense of"
17
"amidst"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
148
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
148
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
185
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
32
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
1
markdownWords
2
totalWords
1949
ratio
0.001
matches
0
"No Soliciting"
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
21
unquotedAttributions
1
matches
0
"With a twist of his wrist, he snapped its neck."
49.35%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
65
wordCount
1391
uniqueNames
14
maxNameDensity
2.01
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora
18
Moreau
1
London
3
Brick
1
Lane
1
French
1
Lucien
28
Scrolls
1
Avaros
2
Evan
3
Panic
1
Three
1
Ptolemy
3
Cardiff
1
persons
0
"Aurora"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Lucien"
3
"Evan"
4
"Ptolemy"
places
0
"London"
1
"Brick"
2
"Lane"
3
"Cardiff"
globalScore
0.494
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
103
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"shadows that seemed to move independently of the streetlights"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1949
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
185
matches
0
"knew that voice"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
80
mean
24.36
std
16.7
cv
0.685
sampleLengths
0
34
1
74
2
26
3
12
4
4
5
12
6
39
7
45
8
48
9
43
10
10
11
57
12
46
13
33
14
11
15
5
16
37
17
17
18
62
19
29
20
54
21
7
22
29
23
53
24
5
25
36
26
9
27
28
28
42
29
3
30
1
31
52
32
31
33
14
34
5
35
4
36
28
37
4
38
12
39
60
40
22
41
3
42
37
43
31
44
17
45
38
46
29
47
25
48
42
49
20
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
148
matches
0
"were obscured"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
247
matches
0
"was protecting"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
2
flaggedSentences
2
totalSentences
185
ratio
0.011
matches
0
"He didn't look at the mess; he looked at her."
1
"The amber eye narrowed; the black one widened."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1397
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
33
adverbRatio
0.023622047244094488
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.0071581961345740875
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
185
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
185
mean
10.54
std
6.67
cv
0.633
sampleLengths
0
28
1
6
2
21
3
24
4
14
5
15
6
6
7
20
8
9
9
3
10
4
11
12
12
8
13
21
14
10
15
8
16
23
17
14
18
20
19
12
20
16
21
17
22
8
23
18
24
10
25
19
26
10
27
16
28
12
29
22
30
24
31
2
32
8
33
14
34
9
35
11
36
5
37
9
38
28
39
6
40
11
41
17
42
7
43
14
44
24
45
7
46
13
47
2
48
7
49
5
62.70%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.40540540540540543
totalSentences
185
uniqueOpeners
75
51.68%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
129
matches
0
"Just like before."
1
"Then came a voice, distorted"
ratio
0.016
86.67%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
43
totalSentences
129
matches
0
"He looked immaculate despite the"
1
"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
2
"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
3
"His voice carried that smooth,"
4
"She spun around, blocking the"
5
"She gestured at the scattered"
6
"He didn't look at the"
7
"His gaze traced the line"
8
"He adjusted his cufflinks, silver"
9
"He extended his left hand,"
10
"It left marks that never"
11
"She remembered the night he"
12
"She had packed her bags"
13
"She touched the small crescent"
14
"He grabbed her arm, his"
15
"He dragged her to the"
16
"They wore the tattered robes"
17
"He shoved her to the"
18
"He drew the thin blade"
19
"he ordered, his voice devoid"
ratio
0.333
25.89%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
112
totalSentences
129
matches
0
"The third deadbolt clicked open,"
1
"The words died in her"
2
"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3
"He looked immaculate despite the"
4
"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
5
"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
6
"His voice carried that smooth,"
7
"Aurora gripped the doorframe, her"
8
"Lucien stepped forward"
9
"The scent of expensive cologne"
10
"Aurora shoved past him, storming"
11
"Ptolemy, her tabby cat, shot"
12
"She spun around, blocking the"
13
"She gestured at the scattered"
14
"Lucien closed the door behind"
15
"The three deadbolts engaged again,"
16
"Lucien moved further into the"
17
"He didn't look at the"
18
"His gaze traced the line"
19
"Aurora backed up until her"
ratio
0.868
38.76%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
129
matches
0
"Even from three stories up,"
ratio
0.008
88.95%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
53
technicalSentenceCount
4
matches
0
"He looked immaculate despite the London drizzle, a stark contrast to the peeling paint and smell of fried onions that clung to Brick Lane."
1
"His voice carried that smooth, French lilt that used to make her knees weak and now made her stomach churn."
2
"A thin, white scar ran across his palm, glowing faintly purple before fading."
3
"She touched the small crescent scar on her own left wrist, a souvenir from a childhood fall that felt trivial compared to the bruises Evan had left."
78.13%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
32
uselessAdditionCount
3
matches
0
"Aurora gripped, her knuckles white"
1
"Lucien reached out, his fingers hovering near her arm but not touching"
2
"he ordered, his voice devoid of its earlier warmth"
64.29%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"she whispered (whisper)"
1
"he muttered (mutter)"
2
"he ordered (order)"
3
"Lucien shouted (shout)"
4
"she muttered (mutter)"
5
"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
70
tagDensity
0.157
leniency
0.314
rawRatio
0.545
effectiveRatio
0.171
86.4244%