Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY7TM720FJY4ET6FV1KEZH

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Duration:
47.9s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at midnight. Three sharp raps against the door of Eva's flat, each one a staccato beat that echoed through the quiet room. I froze, my hand still hovering over the ancient tome I'd been studying. The cat, Ptolemy, lifted his head from his nap on the windowsill, ears swiveling toward the sound. "Coming!" Eva called from the kitchen, her voice muffled by the sound of running water. "Probably another delivery mix-up." The lock clicked, and the door swung open. I watched from my perch on the couch as Eva's face transformed from mild annoyance to utter shock. Her jaw dropped, the dish towel slipping from her fingers to the floor. "Lucien?" she whispered. I leaned forward, craning my neck to see past Eva's shoulder. The man standing in the doorway was unmistakable - Lucien Moreau, his platinum blond hair slicked back as always, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate despite the late hour. But it was his eyes that caught my attention - one amber, one black, a striking heterochromatic gaze that seemed to pierce straight through me. "Ms. Carter," he said, his voice smooth as silk. "I apologize for the intrusion, but I'm afraid this matter cannot wait." I stood, setting my book aside. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" His gaze flicked to me, a brief acknowledgment before returning to Eva. "I require your assistance, Ms. Carter. And I believe Ms. Carter may be of some use as well." Eva's eyes narrowed. "My assistance? With what exactly?" Lucien stepped into the flat, his cane clicking against the hardwood floor. He moved with a grace that spoke of old money and older secrets. "I've come across information that may be of interest to both of you. Information regarding a certain... situation that has recently come to light." I crossed my arms, leaning against the doorframe. "You're being deliberately vague, Lucien. What's this really about?" He sighed, a sound of exasperation that seemed out of place on his polished features. "Very well. I've received word that a certain artifact has resurfaced in London. An artifact that may be connected to the recent... disturbances in the supernatural community." Eva's eyes widened. "You mean the thing that's been causing all those power fluctuations? The one that's been driving the local covens into a frenzy?" Lucien inclined his head. "Precisely. And I believe that with your combined knowledge and resources, we may be able to track it down before it falls into the wrong hands." I pushed off from the doorframe, my curiosity piqued despite my reservations. "What kind of artifact are we talking about?" Lucien's gaze sharpened, his heterochromatic eyes seeming to glow in the dim light of the flat. "A relic of immense power. One that could tip the balance of power in London's supernatural underworld if it were to be misused." Eva stepped forward, her hands on her hips. "And why should we trust you, Lucien? You're not exactly known for your altruism." A ghost of a smile touched Lucien's lips. "A fair point, Ms. Carter. But I assure you, my interests align with yours in this matter. We all have much to lose if this artifact falls into the wrong hands." I glanced at Eva, seeing my own hesitation reflected in her eyes. Lucien was an information broker, a fixer in London's supernatural underworld. His loyalties were to the highest bidder, and his methods were often... questionable. But the prospect of uncovering the truth behind the recent disturbances was too tempting to ignore. And if Lucien was right, if this artifact truly posed a threat to the delicate balance of power in London's supernatural community... "Very well," I said, stepping forward. "We'll help you. But on one condition." Lucien raised an eyebrow. "And that would be?" I met his gaze, holding it steady. "Full disclosure. No more cryptic hints or vague allusions. We want to know everything you know about this artifact and its connection to the disturbances." For a moment, Lucien was silent. Then, slowly, he nodded. "Agreed. I'll tell you everything I know. But we must move quickly. Time is of the essence." Eva let out a breath, her shoulders slumping slightly. "Fine. But I'm driving. And I'm not letting you out of my sight until this is over." Lucien's smile widened, a flash of white teeth in the dim light. "As you wish, Ms. Carter. Shall we be off then?" I grabbed my coat from the hook by the door, shrugging it on as I followed Eva and Lucien out into the night. The air was cool, carrying the faint scent of rain and exhaust fumes. The streets of London stretched out before us, a labyrinth of secrets and shadows. And somewhere in that labyrinth, an artifact of immense power waited to be found. An artifact that could change everything. I just hoped we were ready for what we might uncover.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
44.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount816
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
6
adverb"quickly"
count1
7
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"really"
2"very"
3"precisely"
4"truly"
5"slowly"
6"quickly"
7"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount816
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"silk"
2"flicked"
3"eyebrow"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences45
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords817
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount502
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.19
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva11
Ptolemy1
Lucien11
Moreau1
London3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.404
windowScore0.167
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"gaze that seemed to pierce straight through me"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount817
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean26.35
std13.73
cv0.521
sampleLengths
025
130
219
38
431
53
664
721
812
930
108
1149
1217
1342
1425
1530
1620
1739
1822
1939
2036
2138
2213
238
2432
2527
2626
2722
2850
2920
3011
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs84
matches(empty)
54.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences65
ratio0.031
matches
0"The man standing in the doorway was unmistakable - Lucien Moreau, his platinum blond hair slicked back as always, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate despite the late hour."
1"But it was his eyes that caught my attention - one amber, one black, a striking heterochromatic gaze that seemed to pierce straight through me."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount500
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.024
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.006
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean12.57
std7.17
cv0.571
sampleLengths
05
120
213
317
415
54
68
718
813
93
1011
1128
1225
139
1412
156
166
1712
1818
193
205
2112
2213
2324
248
259
2615
2727
283
2922
304
3126
3212
338
3416
3523
368
3714
388
3931
4012
4111
4212
431
4416
4522
466
477
484
494
65.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4307692307692308
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners28
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences43
matches
0"Then, slowly, he nodded."
ratio0.023
61.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences43
matches
0"I froze, my hand still"
1"I watched from my perch"
2"Her jaw dropped, the dish"
3"I leaned forward, craning my"
4"he said, his voice smooth"
5"I stood, setting my book"
6"His gaze flicked to me,"
7"He moved with a grace"
8"I crossed my arms, leaning"
9"He sighed, a sound of"
10"I pushed off from the"
11"I glanced at Eva, seeing"
12"His loyalties were to the"
13"I said, stepping forward"
14"I met his gaze, holding"
15"I grabbed my coat from"
16"I just hoped we were"
ratio0.395
41.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences43
matches
0"The knock came at midnight."
1"I froze, my hand still"
2"The cat, Ptolemy, lifted his"
3"Eva called from the kitchen,"
4"The lock clicked, and the"
5"I watched from my perch"
6"Her jaw dropped, the dish"
7"I leaned forward, craning my"
8"The man standing in the"
9"he said, his voice smooth"
10"I stood, setting my book"
11"His gaze flicked to me,"
12"Eva's eyes narrowed."
13"Lucien stepped into the flat,"
14"He moved with a grace"
15"I crossed my arms, leaning"
16"He sighed, a sound of"
17"Eva's eyes widened."
18"Lucien inclined his head."
19"I pushed off from the"
ratio0.837
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Three sharp raps against the door of Eva's flat, each one a staccato beat that echoed through the quiet room."
1"But it was his eyes that caught my attention - one amber, one black, a striking heterochromatic gaze that seemed to pierce straight through me."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, his voice smooth as silk"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.083
77.9325%