Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY7WVS1W9S1EVRW0M2GCSY

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt turned with a familiar click. Eva always did favour excessive security. "You look terrible." Rory stood in the doorway, takeaway bags balanced in one arm, keys dangling from her fingers. "Also, how did you get past three locks?" Lucien shifted his weight against the doorframe, ivory-handled cane catching the hallway light. Six months. Had it really been that long? The cramped flat behind her overflowed with the same chaotic collection of books and scrolls, though new research notes covered every visible surface. Progress, then. Always progress with Eva. "Your friend mentioned you might need feeding." He lifted the bottle of wine he'd brought. Bordeaux. The good stuff. "Apparently you've been living on biscuits and spite." "Eva's not here." "I know." The admission hung between them. Of course he knew. Information was his currency, after all. Knowing Eva's research schedule. Knowing Rory would be alone. Knowing exactly which buttons to push to get past those three deadbolts without breaking a sweat. Rory's blue eyes narrowed. Sharp as ever. Time hadn't dulled that particular blade. "What do you want, Luc?" The shortened name hit him square in the chest. Nobody else called him that. Nobody else earned the right. She'd whispered it against his neck in Monaco. Gasped it during that disastrous job in Prague. Spat it like poison the last time they'd spoken. "Dinner conversation." He held up the wine again. "Unless you prefer eating alone in a curry-scented stairwell." She stepped aside. Progress. The flat's warmth enveloped him immediately. Books created natural barriers, turning the small space into a maze of knowledge and obsession. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, lifted his head from a particularly ancient-looking grimoire before settling back down with feline indifference. "Still travelling with that thing, I see." Rory nodded toward his cane. "Still deflecting with observations about my accessories." She set the takeaway bags on the only clear section of table, moving scrolls aside with practised efficiency. The familiar dance of someone who'd learned to navigate Eva's organised chaos. Her shoulder-length black hair caught the overhead light as she bent forward, revealing that small crescent scar on her left wrist. The childhood accident she'd told him about during their second job together. Back when sharing personal details felt safe instead of weaponised. "Golden Empress again?" He recognised the packaging. "Yu-Fei gives me the family discount." She pulled containers from bags with methodical precision. Sweet and sour pork. Fried rice. Spring rolls. Comfort food. "Employee benefits." "Still playing delivery girl?" "Still playing information broker?" Touché. He settled into the only available chair, hanging his cane on the armrest. The movement sent a familiar twinge through his left leg. Prague had left more than emotional scars. "You cut your hair." The observation slipped out before he could stop it. Her hand moved instinctively to her shoulder. "Easier to manage." Liar. Rory had loved her long hair. Complained about it constantly but never actually cut it. Not until now. Not until after everything had gone sideways between them. "Wine glasses?" "Mugs will do." She retrieved two chipped ceramic vessels from the sink. "Eva's standards aren't exactly refined." He poured with steady hands despite the way she moved around him. Careful not to brush against his shoulder. Not to get too close. As if proximity might reignite whatever they'd burned to ash six months ago. "Cheers." She raised her mug without meeting his eyes. "To old friends." "Is that what we are?" The question carried weight. History. The echo of Monaco sunshine and Prague rain and a dozen cities between. Jobs completed. Lines crossed. Trust broken in a Birmingham alleyway when choosing sides became unavoidable. "I tried calling." "I changed my number." "I noticed." She sat across from him, the table's width feeling both too much and not enough distance. Her fingers drummed against the ceramic. Nervous habit. He'd catalogued her tells during their partnership. Filed them away like intelligence assets. "Eva said you were in Marseille." "Family business." "Your father?" "My father." The wine tasted bitter suddenly. "Among other complications." Her expression softened fractionally. She knew about his parentage. Human mother. Demon father. The impossible balancing act between worlds that never quite accepted him in either. "How is he?" "Disappointed. As usual." Lucien set down his mug. "Seems I've been neglecting certain... obligations." "The kind that involve three-piece suits and threatening people?" "The kind that involve choosing sides." The words settled between them like unexploded ordinance. Because that's what it always came down to, wasn't it? Sides. Loyalties. The supernatural community's endless game of chess where pawns got sacrificed and information brokers walked tightropes between opposing forces. "And which side are you choosing?" "That depends." "On what?" "On whether you still trust me." Rory's laugh held no humour. "Trust? After Birmingham?" "Birmingham was complicated." "Birmingham was you picking the winning side over the right one." "The right one would have gotten you killed." "So you made that decision for me." "I made the decision that kept you breathing." Her mug hit the table harder than necessary. Wine sloshed over the rim, staining Eva's research notes. She didn't notice. Or didn't care. "By selling out Marcus and his people." "Marcus was going to lose anyway. With or without my information." "You don't know that." "I did know that. It's why they pay me." He leaned forward. "The Covenant had three times his resources and twice his magical firepower. Marcus was leading lambs to slaughter." "So you helped sharpen the knives." "I tried to minimize casualties." "By betraying him to save your own reputation." The accusation stung because it held truth. Not the whole truth, but enough to cut deep. He had protected his standing in the community. Had preserved his usefulness to multiple factions. Had played all sides against the middle while she'd wanted him to pick heroes and villains like some fairy tale. "I saved who I could save." "Including yourself." "Including you." Silence stretched between them. Outside, London's evening traffic hummed through thin walls. Ptolemy yawned and relocated to a stack of demonology texts. Normal sounds for an abnormal conversation about choices made and trust broken. "Why are you here, Luc?" Her voice had gone quiet. Dangerous. Like that moment in Prague when she'd realised the job wasn't what it seemed. When she'd looked at him with dawning suspicion and he'd known their partnership was ending before either of them said the words. "Someone's hunting information brokers." "And?" "Three dead in the last month. All independents. All found with their files scattered and their safe houses burned." Understanding dawned in her bright blue eyes. "You think you're next." "I think someone's consolidating the market. Violently." She stood and moved to the window, peering through Eva's heavy curtains at the street below. Still cautious. Still thinking three moves ahead. Still the woman who'd kept them both alive through a dozen impossible situations. "What do you need?" "Safe harbour. Temporarily." "Eva won't like it." "Eva's in Prague until next week." Rory turned from the window. "You knew that too." "I know lots of things. It's my job." "Your job nearly got me killed." "My job keeps people like you safe from the things they don't understand." "People like me?" The phrase hung between them loaded with implication. Human. Normal. Fragile. All the things that made her valuable as an asset and impossible as anything more. Because that's what they'd been dancing around for months, wasn't it? The thing neither of them had been brave enough to name. "You know what I meant." "Do I?" She moved closer. Close enough that he could smell her shampoo. Something simple and clean that didn't match the complexity of everything else about her. Close enough to see the flecks of grey in her blue eyes. Battle scars from dealing with creatures that shouldn't exist in a world that pretended they didn't. "Say it, Luc. Say what you really mean." "You're human." "And you're half-demon." "Exactly." "So?" "So we don't work." "We worked fine for eighteen months." "As partners." "Just partners?" The question carried them back to Monaco. To rain-soaked Prague streets. To a dozen hotel rooms where they'd shared more than mission briefings and strategic planning. To the moment everything had shifted from professional to personal and made Birmingham inevitable. "Yes." Another lie. They both knew it. Her hand found his cheek. Warm. Familiar. Dangerous. "Liar." Then she kissed him.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.14
leniency0.279
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1404
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"suddenly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1404
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count4
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"dance"
count1
5
word"navigate"
count1
6
word"methodical"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"implication"
count1
10
word"dancing"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"chaotic"
3"warmth"
4"dance"
5"navigate"
6"methodical"
7"echo"
8"silence"
9"implication"
10"dancing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences133
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences207
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1396
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount976
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Lucien2
Eva7
Bordeaux1
Rory7
Monaco3
Prague5
Sweet1
Birmingham2
London1
Had3
Knowing3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Had"
places
0"Monaco"
1"Prague"
2"Birmingham"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.716
wordCount1396
matches
0"Not the whole truth, but enough to cut deep"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences207
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs104
mean13.42
std14.95
cv1.114
sampleLengths
013
127
250
327
43
52
640
713
85
944
1017
114
1239
1312
147
1573
167
1726
184
194
2031
2113
2210
2328
242
2517
2637
279
283
295
3033
313
324
332
3437
356
362
372
3810
3926
403
4114
429
436
4439
456
462
472
486
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences133
matches
0"got sacrificed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs168
matches
0"was ending"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences207
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount980
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.03979591836734694
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011224489795918367
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences207
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences207
mean6.74
std4.89
cv0.726
sampleLengths
07
16
219
38
413
52
66
723
82
94
1015
111
123
138
143
152
165
174
186
194
205
2116
224
233
246
255
269
275
285
298
308
319
328
339
343
351
366
3715
3818
3912
407
4118
4212
4321
4412
4510
467
4714
484
492
75.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.5120772946859904
totalSentences207
uniqueOpeners106
93.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"Always progress with Eva."
1"Of course he knew."
2"Then she kissed him."
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences107
matches
0"He lifted the bottle of"
1"She'd whispered it against his"
2"He held up the wine"
3"She stepped aside."
4"She set the takeaway bags"
5"Her shoulder-length black hair caught"
6"He recognised the packaging"
7"She pulled containers from bags"
8"He settled into the only"
9"Her hand moved instinctively to"
10"She retrieved two chipped ceramic"
11"He poured with steady hands"
12"She raised her mug without"
13"She sat across from him,"
14"Her fingers drummed against the"
15"He'd catalogued her tells during"
16"Her expression softened fractionally."
17"She knew about his parentage."
18"Her mug hit the table"
19"She didn't notice."
ratio0.252
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences107
matches
0"The deadbolt turned with a"
1"Eva always did favour excessive"
2"Rory stood in the doorway,"
3"Lucien shifted his weight against"
4"The cramped flat behind her"
5"He lifted the bottle of"
6"The good stuff."
7"The admission hung between them."
8"Information was his currency, after"
9"Rory's blue eyes narrowed."
10"Time hadn't dulled that particular"
11"The shortened name hit him"
12"Nobody else called him that."
13"Nobody else earned the right."
14"She'd whispered it against his"
15"He held up the wine"
16"She stepped aside."
17"The flat's warmth enveloped him"
18"Books created natural barriers, turning"
19"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, lifted his"
ratio0.654
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences107
matches
0"As if proximity might reignite"
1"Because that's what it always"
2"Because that's what they'd been"
3"To rain-soaked Prague streets."
4"To a dozen hotel rooms"
5"To the moment everything had"
ratio0.056
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Still the woman who'd kept them both alive through a dozen impossible situations."
1"Battle scars from dealing with creatures that shouldn't exist in a world that pretended they didn't."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
96.1680%