Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
213
glossingSentenceCount
16
matches
0
"something like a heartbeat under the concret"
1
"as if unwilling to be noticed"
2
"not quite identify"
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"as if daring us to test it"
4
"something like relief crossing her features"
5
"as if expecting something to appear there, a second doorway perhaps, a second audience"
6
"as if answering a call of a half-remembered language that only the device could translate"
7
"as if dancing to a music only the chosen could hear"
8
"as if offering something, perhaps a token, perhaps power"
9
"sounded like a challenge more than a reque"
10
"sounded like a decision being made"
11
"as if listening for something we could not hear, and the floor beneath us offered up a single, brutal truth: the game had moved beyond humans, beyond their laws, beyond the police’s jurisdiction"
12
"as if waiting for someone to decide what to do with the moment when the world tilted, again, toward something unspoken"
13
"as if considering us with the patience of an ancient judge, and the glint of the sigil on the talisman flashed once, twice, and then held firm"
14
"quite read"
15
"as if listening as if a crowd of witnesses had finally understood that their stories were not finished but only begun"
"Stalls stood like scarecrows—colour dulled, trinkets dulling to dust, a scent of wax and damp velvet hanging in the air."
1
"The place moved, not physically, but spiritually; a shifting map that only the fools refused to read."
2
"“I brought questions. Not patterns. We should not confuse the two.” She crouched, studied the ground near the stall’s base where something—perhaps a drip of blood that never appeared—had left a faint, irregular stain, a line that didn’t feel natural."
3
"I pulled the crate aside with a snap of my elbow joints and found the same thing we’d expected and hadn’t—markets did not keep their secrets in clean squares."
4
"The circle wasn’t decorative; it wasn’t ritual; it was a map, a street plan drawn in a language the dead could understand."
5
"“Look at the ledger under the counter,” she suggested, nodding toward a stall where a vendor kept a ledger—pages yellowed to the point of flaking."
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"“The discourse of the room is ritualistic, not procedural. The symbols drawn in ash near the stall’s back wall aren’t vandalism; they’re a script.”"
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"I flipped the pages with a practiced efficiency and found a page marked with a small, neat doodle—the shape of a circle with a dot in the middle, a sigil repeated in a pattern."
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"The door wasn’t locked; it wasn’t sealed; it simply existed, a barrier between this floor and what lay beyond it."
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"In her line of work, a place like this wasn’t simply a crime scene; it was a doorstop to every dangerous idea she’d hunted for years."
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"“Because,” Eva said, and paused to adjust her glasses, the round ones that made her look more scholarly than she really was, “the money kept here is a lure, not a motive. The victims here aren’t killed for cash; they’re used as a living sigil, a means to seed a doorway.”"
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"The Veil Market’s existence was not simply a market; it was a mechanism for something else to move through, something older than the city, older than the police force and the cliques we both suspected, older than the stories of the supernatural that thrummed beneath London’s skin."
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"“To the other side of the Moon Gate illusion that some cultures fear and some crave. It’s a myth, and yet myths have a way of becoming practice in places like this. The tokens are not merely keys; they are markers, invitations, and warnings.”"
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"She wasn’t the hero here; she was the hunter, the one who would trap you by turning your own instincts against you."
14
"The man’s eyes flicked toward the door—the doorway to the unknown—and he inclined his head, acknowledging the truth in Eva’s statement without conceding any of his own guilt."
15
"“You mistake the situation. We simply prepared a demonstration for a select audience, to show what the Market can do for the willing.” He turned his body so a portion of the cloak fell away, revealing a talisman tucked inside his coat, a little circle with a dot in the middle—the sigil Eva’s notes had highlighted."
16
"From the darkness stepped a figure I had believed to be a mere legend—someone you would never mistake for anything but danger, the sort of person who wore intent like a second skin."
17
"The body—if it could be called that—glowed softly, the glow tracing the edges of a voice that did not belong to a human throat."
18
"But my instincts, the part of me that had learned to read the world in signs and whispers, proposed a different hypothesis: this was not a man committing a crime; this was a doorway opening and a ritual not yet finished."
19
"The crowd—if we could call the others in the Market a crowd—held its breath as the figure moved closer to the circle drawn on the floor, the ash lines that Eva had identified as a script, the script that could bend a door, bend a night into daylight, bend a city’s reality just enough for something to slip through."
20
"The other man—if he truly belonged to a legal world at all—smirked."
21
"The cultist’s cloak fell away for a moment as the figure behind him moved, and a strangled choked breath escaped from me as I saw the tattoo on the back of the figure’s neck—the same sigil that had been etched on the Veil Compass’s face, the sigil that meant a Shade artisan had touched this place, possibly in search of a new apprentice, or perhaps a new doorway to step through."
22
"A low, whispering wind rose from the corridor, a wind that carried the faint scents Eva had described—old parchment, rain-soaked stone, a sting of something metallic and bitter."
23
"The crowd’s breathing sharpened into a chorus of fear, awe, and a fearsome possibility—perhaps the Market truly was a living thing, the lung of London, the thing that breathed in the old stories and exhaled new ones at a rate even a detective could not predict."
24
"“Detective Quinn,” it spoke, and the name felt heavy on the air, loaded with all the power and threat that had ever existed in this city—an entity that wore a face, but that face belonged to no single human you could pin down."
25
"The creature across the room—no, the entity—tilted its head as if listening for something we could not hear, and the floor beneath us offered up a single, brutal truth: the game had moved beyond humans, beyond their laws, beyond the police’s jurisdiction."
26
"The partner I had lost, the partner I had tried not to remember, pressed at the edge of my thoughts with a sting—supernatural origins, indeed."
27
"The crime might have been staged, but the doorway—and the danger it represented—was unambiguous."
28
"The creature—that doorway made flesh—raised a hand, and a cold wind swept through the tunnel, snatching at the token in my pocket."
29
"The cultist raised his arms and cried out something I couldn’t translate, something the crowd could not understand, and the air answered in a chorus of small sounds—the sound of a lock turning, the creak of a door, a whisper of a name we all recognised but none dared call aloud."
30
"Then the door beyond the circle—our doorway—began to tear into itself, the light from within blooming into a white fire that stung the eyes with its brightness."
31
"The creature—if creature it was—lifted its chin as if considering us with the patience of an ancient judge, and the glint of the sigil on the talisman flashed once, twice, and then held firm."
32
"The two of us—one trained to hunt criminals, the other trained to study signs—made a choice in unison, a choice born of fear and stubborn hope."
33
"The market’s furniture—tattered velvet, jars, and trinkets—stood as if still in a pose of witness, the kind of witness that did not speak but remembered."
34
"The body was still missing, the evidence still odd, but the doorway—our doorway—had closed, and with it a piece of the mystery most people would have preferred to pretend wasn’t real."
35
"The city would not forget this; the Market would not return to the same stillness again."
36
"The city would demand either a new kind of justice or a new kind of nightmare; perhaps both at once."
37
"Someone—no, something— stepped from behind a display, a figure that wore a mask of ordinary face while hiding something ancient and dangerous behind it."
38
"The figure—human, perhaps, or something far older—charged forward, lashed toward us with a crazy, wrong wind, and in that charged moment, I realised the case would not end with a neat confession or a neat arrest."
39
"And then, as if in answer to a dare we had not yet learned to refuse, the unseen thing beyond the doorway—whatever it was—sighed, and the chamber trembled again, faster this time, a warning, a threat, a promise."
"I caught Eva’s face in a flash of movement, saw the determination there—the careful, stubborn, brilliant resolve of a woman who would not surrender the dead to the living, nor the living to the dead."
42
"And at the very edge of that moment, when the decision would shape what London would become, something moved at the threshold of the door again, something which would force us to choose not by law, but by the more terrible, more precarious thing—truth, and the cost of keeping it quiet."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
170
technicalSentenceCount
44
matches
0
"The Veil Compass leapt from my grip and skittered under a crate, its brass face catching the stray green glow that crawled along the wall."
1
"The needle lay still for a heartbeat, then shifted, a hair’s breadth, toward a closed door that blended into the wall, as if unwilling to be noticed."
2
"The floor here was uneven, patched with a patchwork of tiles that didn’t match, as if someone had laid a new floor over an old one, leaving a seam that ran in a…"
3
"The Veil Compass’s needle flicked once, then steadied toward a narrow doorway that had been sealed with a heavy drawstring curtain, like a throat refusing to sp…"
4
"The door had been opened recently, perhaps minutes before we arrived, though the dust remained undisturbed, save for the muddled prints of someone who had moved…"
5
"The Veil Compass quivered, the needle jittering toward that same seam, as if the energy of whatever lay beyond wanted to reveal itself to us."
6
"The Veil Market’s existence was not simply a market; it was a mechanism for something else to move through, something older than the city, older than the police…"
7
"Someone was approaching, footsteps gently in the dust, then a small burst of laughter, a sound not cruel but too knowing, as if the speaker understood something…"
8
"The air grew cooler, damper, as if we’d stepped into a different climate, the space between worlds."
9
"Through the opening stepped a man in a long coat, the kind of coat that had survived too many nights spent in smoky rooms of power and influence."
10
"The man’s eyes flicked toward the door—the doorway to the unknown—and he inclined his head, acknowledging the truth in Eva’s statement without conceding any of …"
11
"The Veil Compass in my hand vibrated, a delicate tremor that ran up my arm as if answering a call of a half-remembered language that only the device could trans…"
12
"A rational part of me told me to reach for the pistol tucked into the small of my back, to form a plan, to call for back-up, to do all the things that kept a de…"
13
"But my instincts, the part of me that had learned to read the world in signs and whispers, proposed a different hypothesis: this was not a man committing a crim…"
14
"The new arrival extended a hand, the palm facing downward as if offering something, perhaps a token, perhaps power."
15
"The crowd—if we could call the others in the Market a crowd—held its breath as the figure moved closer to the circle drawn on the floor, the ash lines that Eva …"
16
"The door behind us, the one Eva had pointed to earlier, pulsed with an almost organic rhythm, as if the entire tunnel were a living creature whose nerves had le…"
17
"The cultist’s cloak fell away for a moment as the figure behind him moved, and a strangled choked breath escaped from me as I saw the tattoo on the back of the …"
18
"A low, whispering wind rose from the corridor, a wind that carried the faint scents Eva had described—old parchment, rain-soaked stone, a sting of something met…"
19
"The crowd’s breathing sharpened into a chorus of fear, awe, and a fearsome possibility—perhaps the Market truly was a living thing, the lung of London, the thin…"
20
"The room seemed to exhale as the shape settled into the space, a silhouette with edges that blurred and sharpened alternately, as if the thing was trying to tak…"
21
"The creature across the room—no, the entity—tilted its head as if listening for something we could not hear, and the floor beneath us offered up a single, bruta…"
22
"The shadowed figure stepped closer, and the crowd drew back instinctively as if they could sense the boundaries of their own world slipping."
23
"Eva whispered a prayer her grandmother might have spoken in another life and then steadied her notebook against her chest, as if she needed to hold on to someth…"
24
"The ash sigils brightened, and the edges of the doorway’s glow sharpened into a blade of light that arced across the room toward the cultist, toward us, toward …"
25
"The bone-token glowed faintly under the light, as if it had become a true key, a talisman that even the city’s oldest fears could not ignore."
26
"Then the door beyond the circle—our doorway—began to tear into itself, the light from within blooming into a white fire that stung the eyes with its brightness."
27
"The shadowy figure stepped forward, the crowd fell still, a single breath ticked to silence, and the city held its breath as if waiting for someone to decide wh…"
28
"The creature—if creature it was—lifted its chin as if considering us with the patience of an ancient judge, and the glint of the sigil on the talisman flashed o…"
29
"The scene narrowed to a single moment: the compass in my hand, the sigils burning, Eva’s careful handwriting in the light, the Market listening as if the walls …"
30
"Eva opened her notebook, reciting phrases in a language that wasn’t a language, but a set of symbols you translate with your breath and your hands."
31
"We moved in a tight formation, Eva guiding the process with her ink-stained fingers and the notebook’s pages turning as if the wind itself urged us to act."
32
"I held the token in my other hand, the bone surface smooth against my skin, a reminder of old cases that refused to stay buried and of partners who had died for…"
33
"The circle dimmed, the air grew heavier and closer, and the entity’s edges softened, as if the doorway were winning a slow, stubborn battle against the world’s …"
34
"Silence followed, dense and heavy, as if the city itself had grown a new ear and was listening for what we’d decide next."
35
"The Veil Compass lay quiet in my hand, the verdigris patina darkening as if it had just consumed a new piece of truth."
36
"The market’s furniture—tattered velvet, jars, and trinkets—stood as if still in a pose of witness, the kind of witness that did not speak but remembered."
37
"A sound, small and awful, then broke the silence: a cracking sound from a hidden corner, a scream muffled by cloth that didn’t belong in a market that sold alch…"
38
"Someone—no, something— stepped from behind a display, a figure that wore a mask of ordinary face while hiding something ancient and dangerous behind it."
39
"The new figure moved with startling speed, and the veils between worlds trembled once more as if an unspoken dare had reached its end."
40
"I caught Eva’s face in a flash of movement, saw the determination there—the careful, stubborn, brilliant resolve of a woman who would not surrender the dead to …"
41
"The Veil Market seemed to lean toward us as if listening, as if a crowd of witnesses had finally understood that their stories were not finished but only begun."
42
"And at the very edge of that moment, when the decision would shape what London would become, something moved at the threshold of the door again, something which…"
43
"The scene hung in a taut, ready breath, the kind that makes your blood thicken and your nerves hum."
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
41
uselessAdditionCount
11
matches
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"The ink had, but the words remained legible:"
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"I pressed, not trusting the ground to stay honest with us"
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"I asked, though the question felt clumsy, as if I were asking a riddle without the answer written on the rim of the last page"
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"I muttered, trying to keep my voice level"
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"she demanded, though the question wasn’t aimed at a name so much as an intent, a direction in which the conversation would proceed"
5
"he whispered, and the word seemed to pull the air from the walls"
6
"she said, though the words sounded like a challenge more than a request, like a soldier demanding a map when the enemy refuses to reveal the terrain"
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"the cultist said, his voice lowering to caress the air"
8
"Eva said, voice low but urgent,"
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"it spoke, and the name felt heavy on the air, loaded with all the power and threat that had ever existed in this city—an entity that wore a face, but that face belonged to no single human you could pin down"