Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY8AXQZXCHQAX17ZCNV52Z

Run Details

Duration:
1m 33s
Cost:
$0.001575
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of old wood, spilled ale, and the faint, sweet ghost of cigar smoke. Aurora Carter wiped a damp cloth over the polished mahogany, her movements economical, her mind a thousand miles from the quiet hum of the late afternoon bar. The green neon sign outside cast a sickly, aquatic glow through the front window, painting shifting patterns on the floorboards. Silas was in the back, the soft clink of glassware and his slight limp a familiar rhythm against the silence. The door swung open, slicing through the dimness with a wedge of grey London light. A man stepped in, shaking rain from a dark overcoat. He hesitated, letting his eyes adjust, and then he saw her. Aurora looked up, the cloth stilling in her hand. The air left the room. “Laila?” The name was a ghost, a whisper from a life she’d bricked up and buried. She hadn’t been called that in years. Not since Cardiff. Not since before Evan. He stepped further into the light, and the years fell away, only to rush back with a crushing weight. It was Rhys. Rhys with the easy laugh who’d shared her textbooks in the library, who’d teased her about her pre-law ambitions, who’d been her friend before everything got complicated. But it wasn’t him, not really. The boy was gone, replaced by a man with lines around his eyes and a stillness where there had once been constant, kinetic energy. “Rhys.” Her voice was flat, a statement of fact. She didn’t move from behind the bar, a solid, familiar barrier between them. He approached slowly, as if she were a skittish animal. “My God. I heard you’d moved to London, but I never…” He trailed off, his gaze taking in the bar, the shelves of bottles, her, in her simple black t-shirt with a damp cloth in her hand. “You work here?” “I do.” She finally moved, tossing the cloth into a sink beneath the counter. “What can I get you?” He gave a short, disbelieving laugh. “A pint, I suppose. Whatever’s on tap.” He slid onto a stool, his movements careful. He was still staring. “You look… different.” “It’s been five years,” she said, pulling the tap. The amber liquid foamed into the glass. “People change.” “You cut your hair.” His voice was soft, almost mournful. Her hand went instinctively to the ends of her black hair, now sharp and straight at her shoulders. It used to tumble down her back, a wild, dark curtain Evan had always insisted she keep long. She pushed the pint across the bar to him. “Easier to manage.” He took a long drink, then set the glass down with a firm click. “I looked for you. After. Your mum wouldn’t say anything. Your dad just said you’d gone. No one knew where.” “I know.” She busied herself rearranging clean glasses, their clinking the only sound for a long moment. “I needed to go.” “We were worried, Laila. Me, Tomo, Cerys. We were your friends. We could have helped.” The name was a small, sharp knife. “It’s Rory. Aurora. No one calls me Laila anymore.” He flinched, just slightly. “Right. Sorry. Rory.” He tested the name, unfamiliar on his tongue. “So this is it? This is the life? Pulling pints in a Soho pub?” “It pays the rent. The flat’s upstairs.” She leaned against the back counter, arms crossed. “What about you? Still in Cardiff?” “Solicitor’s office. Family law, mostly. It’s… fine.” He swirled the beer in his glass. “It’s not arguing constitutional theory in the library, but it’s fine.” The memory was a physical ache. The two of them, surrounded by heavy legal tomes, debating late into the night, the future a bright, certain thing stretched out before them. She’d been destined for the bar. He’d been destined to be by her side, her sharpest rival and her closest friend. “You were the smartest of all of us,” he said, echoing her thoughts. “You were going to change the world, not hide from it.” “The world changed me first.” The words came out harder than she intended. He looked down at his hands, at the wedding band she’d been trying not to notice. “I heard about Evan. What he did. I’m… God, Rory, I’m so sorry. If I’d known how bad it was—” “You didn’t.” She cut him off, her voice leaving no room for his guilt. It was hers to carry, not his. “No one did. I made sure of that.” “That’s not how friendship works! You don’t just disappear. You don’t just become a different person and expect everyone to understand.” The frustration broke through his careful composure. “We were there. We were right there.” “And what would you have done, Rhys?” She uncrossed her arms, planting her palms on the bar. The small crescent scar on her wrist seemed to pulse under the neon light. “Given him a strongly worded letter from your solicitor’s office? He wasn’t a case file. He was my life. He was in my head, in my phone, in every corner of that city. The only way out was to burn it all down and leave.” He was silent, absorbing the heat of her words. The rain picked up again, drumming a steady rhythm against the window. “You could have called,” he said, his voice quieter now. “One phone call.” “To say what? That I was broken? That the person you all knew was gone? It was easier to let that Laila just… vanish. Clean break.” “It wasn’t clean for us.” He finished his beer. “We mourned you.” The confession hung in the air between them, heavy and suffocating. She saw it then, the weight he carried too. It wasn’t just her regret. It was his. The friend who felt he’d failed. The one left behind. From the back room, the sound of Silas’s limp grew louder as he approached. He emerged, a crate of limes in his arms, his sharp hazel eyes missing nothing. He gave a brief, neutral nod to Rhys, a silent question to Rory. She shook her head, a tiny, almost imperceptible motion. *I’m fine.* He retreated, leaving the silence to settle back over them. “He seems… protective,” Rhys observed. “He’s my boss.” The lie was automatic, a defence mechanism worn smooth from use. Rhys looked at her, really looked at her, past the short hair and the bartender’s clothes. He saw the new sharpness in her bright blue eyes, the wariness in her posture, the cool, impenetrable calm that had replaced her fiery passion. “You’re happy here?” he asked, and it sounded like a real question, not an accusation. She considered it. The peace of the empty bar. The solid presence of Silas in the next room. The simple, uncomplicated act of wiping a counter clean. “I’m safe here. That’s better than happy.” He nodded slowly, accepting the distinction. He pulled out his wallet, left a ten-pound note on the bar. “I should go. I’m meeting my wife for dinner.” He stood up, pulling his coat back on. “Rhys.” The word stopped him as he turned. She didn’t know what to say. *I’m sorry I left you to mourn. I’m sorry I’m not the person you remember. I’m sorry the world isn’t what we thought it would be.* He seemed to understand. He offered a small, sad smile that didn’t reach his eyes. “It was good to see you, Rory. Truly.” He walked out into the rain, the door swinging shut behind him, sealing the bar back into its dim, quiet world. Aurora picked up the ten-pound note, its edges crisp and cold. She folded it neatly, once, then twice, and slipped it into the till. She picked up her damp cloth and went back to wiping the already-clean bar, erasing the faint circle his glass had left on the wood, working until there was no trace he had ever been there at all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.422
leniency0.844
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1329
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1329
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"whisper"
3"weight"
4"echoing"
5"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords28
totalWords1326
ratio0.021
matches
0"I’m fine."
1"I’m sorry I left you to mourn. I’m sorry I’m not the person you remember. I’m sorry the world isn’t what we thought it would be."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount973
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Rhys"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rhys"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
London1
Cardiff1
Evan2
Rhys5
Silas3
Rory1
Aurora3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Evan"
4"Rhys"
5"Silas"
6"Rory"
7"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a real question, not an accus"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.754
wordCount1326
matches
0"not arguing constitutional theory in the library, but it’s fine"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean31.57
std20.39
cv0.646
sampleLengths
084
136
214
31
429
579
622
750
819
928
1018
1110
1248
1334
1421
1515
1616
1729
1821
1925
2051
2124
2213
2336
2429
2535
2676
2721
2813
2926
3012
3138
3263
335
3414
3541
3615
3734
3835
3940
4023
4183
89.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences89
matches
0"been called"
1"was gone"
2"been destined"
3"been destined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs161
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences112
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount976
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03483606557377049
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011270491803278689
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean11.84
std7.71
cv0.651
sampleLengths
017
127
220
320
415
510
611
79
85
91
1015
117
123
134
1419
153
1627
176
1824
199
2013
2110
2237
233
2414
255
266
2715
284
293
309
317
322
3310
3418
3518
369
373
3814
3920
4017
414
4215
437
449
454
4611
4714
4815
496
35.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.25892857142857145
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences88
matches
0"He hesitated, letting his eyes"
1"She hadn’t been called that"
2"He stepped further into the"
3"It was Rhys."
4"Her voice was flat, a"
5"She didn’t move from behind"
6"He approached slowly, as if"
7"He trailed off, his gaze"
8"She finally moved, tossing the"
9"He gave a short, disbelieving"
10"He slid onto a stool,"
11"He was still staring."
12"she said, pulling the tap"
13"His voice was soft, almost"
14"Her hand went instinctively to"
15"It used to tumble down"
16"She pushed the pint across"
17"He took a long drink,"
18"She busied herself rearranging clean"
19"He flinched, just slightly."
ratio0.625
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences88
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"Aurora Carter wiped a damp"
2"The green neon sign outside"
3"Silas was in the back,"
4"The door swung open, slicing"
5"A man stepped in, shaking"
6"He hesitated, letting his eyes"
7"Aurora looked up, the cloth"
8"The air left the room."
9"The name was a ghost,"
10"She hadn’t been called that"
11"He stepped further into the"
12"It was Rhys."
13"Rhys with the easy laugh"
14"The boy was gone, replaced"
15"Her voice was flat, a"
16"She didn’t move from behind"
17"He approached slowly, as if"
18"He trailed off, his gaze"
19"She finally moved, tossing the"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rhys with the easy laugh who’d shared her textbooks in the library, who’d teased her about her pre-law ambitions, who’d been her friend before everything got co…"
1"He saw the new sharpness in her bright blue eyes, the wariness in her posture, the cool, impenetrable calm that had replaced her fiery passion."
19.74% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He slid, his movements careful"
1"She busied, their clinking the only sound for a long moment"
2"She cut, her voice leaving no room for his guilt"
3"he said, his voice quieter now"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rhys observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.044
79.6170%