Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY8D6CYMZWP3RTXW4G8SGN

Run Details

Duration:
15.9s
Cost:
$0.006331
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The amber sky of Dymas hung over the horizon like a bruised peach, thick with the scent of overripe plums and roasting game. Aurora Carter stepped through the shimmering tear in the Veil, her boots sinking into soil that felt less like dirt and more like crushed velvet. She rubbed her left wrist, the crescent-shaped scar itching against the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant. The crimson gem throbbed against her sternum, a rhythmic heat that mimicked a second heartbeat. "The air tastes of sugar and rot." Nyx drifted beside her, their form a jagged tear in the golden light. Violet eyes flickered within the depths of a hood made of nothing, casting ethereal glimmers over the sprawling valley below. Where they stepped, the vibrant grass didn't bend; it simply ceased to exist, flickering back into reality once the Shade passed. Isolde Varga moved ahead of them, her silver hair trailing behind like a frozen waterfall. She left no indentations on the soft earth, her feet skimming the surface of sapphire-colored moss that carpeted the forest floor. Giant, translucent fruits hung from the boughs of trees with bark like polished obsidian. Within the skins of the hanging gourds, liquid light swirled in slow, hypnotic eddies. "Hunger is the law here, daughter of Cardiff. Do not let the scent of the orchards settle in your marrow." Aurora reached for the moonsilver hilt of the Fae-forged blade tucked into her belt. The metal emanated a biting chill that steadied her nerves against the cloying warmth of the realm. A breeze swept through the valley, carrying the distant sound of clinking crystal and the low, melodic hum of a thousand voices raised in a banquet song. It wasn't the sound of a party; it was the sound of a hive. "I didn't come for the buffet. Which way to Belphegor’s spire?" Nyx pointed a smoky finger toward the horizon. Deep within the amber haze, a structure rose like a twisted fork of ivory. Great balconies spiraled around its girth, dripping with flowering vines that pulsed in time with the Heartstone’s glow. "The Prince of Gluttony keeps his kitchens at the root and his guests at the crown. Every stone of that tower was quarried from the memories of those who couldn't stop wanting." They descended a slope where the vegetation grew dense and aggressive. Flowers the size of dinner plates snapped their petals shut as Aurora brushed past, emitting puffs of cinnamon-scented pollen. The further they walked, the more the natural beauty curdled into excess. Vines didn't just climb; they strangled. The trees didn't just bear fruit; they groaned under the weight of clusters so large they burst, spilling thick, golden nectar that pooled into fermented ponds. Aurora stepped over a stream of what looked like liquid chocolate. She crouched, squinting at the dark ripples. Tiny, silver fish with wings like dragonflies darted through the sludge, their scales sparking. "The physics are wrong here. Everything feels... heavy." Isolde paused by a standing stone etched with scrolling Dymasian script. She traced the grooves, her pale lavender eyes clouding. "The gravity of desire pulls harder than the earth. You feel the weight of what you lack, Rory. This realm feeds the void in the belly and the hole in the soul." A low roar vibrated through the ground. It wasn't a beast, but the sound of a massive furnace. They broke through a thicket of weeping willow trees—whose leaves were actually thin strips of edible gold leaf—and found themselves overlooking the Great Larder. Below them stretched miles of structured chaos. Helbound souls, dressed in silks that looked woven from spiderwebs, moved between rows of crystalline vats. Some stirred simmering pots large enough to drown a horse; others butchered beasts that defied nomenclature, their hides shimmering with iridescent oil. The scale was dizzying. It was a factory of indulgence, a cathedral built to the stomach. "Look at their eyes." Aurora followed Nyx’s gaze. The workers moved with a frantic, twitchy grace. Their eyes were wide, sunken, and fixed entirely on their tasks. One man, his skin the color of parched parchment, dipped a finger into a vat of violet cream and licked it. Immediately, a Warden—a hulking shadow of muscle and brass armor—cracked a whip made of coiled smoke. The man didn't flinch from the pain; he only wept because he couldn't take a second taste. "They’re contracted. Souls traded for a single perfect meal that never ends." Aurora’s grip tightened on the cold Moonsilver. The pendant grew uncomfortably hot, burning through her thin shirt. "The portal is close. The Heartstone is screaming." They moved along the ridge, skirting the edge of the industrial kitchens. The air grew humid, thick with steam that smelled of rosemary and burnt sugar. They reached a bridge carved from a single translucent rib bone that spanned a chasm. Far below, bioluminescent fungi lit the depths, revealing piles of discarded silver platters and cracked porcelain that glinted like a graveyard of wealth. "Stay to the center. The edges of this path are greased with the fat of the fallen." Nyx glided across the bone bridge, their shadow stretching long and thin against the amber sky. Aurora followed, her heart hammering. Halfway across, she looked up. High above, the sky began to swirl. The amber deepened into a bruised purple, and the shimmering distortion of a rift point flickered like a dying lightbulb near the spire’s summit. "The solstice is passing. The Veil is thickening." Isolde stood at the far end of the bridge, her ethereal form glowing with a soft, pale light that pushed back the Dymasian gloom. "The Prince knows we are here. The air changes when he breathes. Can you feel it, child of the Veil? The scent of the air is no longer sweet." Aurora sniffed. The jasmine and honey were gone. In their place was the sharp, metallic tang of blood and the sour stench of a gutter. The illusion was peeling back. The lush leaves of the gold-leaf trees shriveled, revealing jagged branches beneath. The sapphire moss turned to grey sludge. "It’s a glamour. The whole place is a rot covered in frosting." A rhythmic thud echoed from the direction of the ivory spire. Thump. Thump. Thump. It was the sound of a giant's footsteps, or perhaps a heart the size of a house. Nyx dissipated into a cloud of violet smoke, swirling around Aurora’s shoulders. "The Master of the House comes to greet his uninvited guests. Do you have the stomach for this, Aurora?" She pulled the Fae blade from its sheath. The moonsilver caught the dying amber light, glowing with a fierce, protective radiance. The coldness of the metal surged up her arm, numbing the frantic heat of the Heartstone. "I’m not here to eat. I’m here to break the table." They stepped off the bridge and onto the obsidian path leading to the spire’s base. The massive doors, forged from bronze and depicting scenes of starving kings, began to groan open. A wave of heat rolled out—a dry, suffocating furnace blast that carried the sound of a thousand silver forks clattering against empty plates. Isolde took a sharp breath, her feet finally touching the ground, leaving a single, faint mark in the grey dust. "Remember, Rory: in the land of the hungry, the one who is full is king. Do not taste. Do not touch. Do not linger." Aurora stepped into the shadow of the spire. The golden sky vanished, replaced by the vaulted ceilings of a hall so vast it had its own weather. Clouds of steam hung like ghosts among the rafters. Rows of tables stretched into the darkness, laden with food that moved of its own accord—bread that breathed, wine that pulsed like blood. At the far end of the hall, seated upon a throne of gilded bones, a figure shifted. "Welcome to Dymas. I hope you brought an appetite." The voice didn't come from the throne, but from the very walls. The Heartstone on Aurora’s neck flared bright crimson, blindingly hot, as the first Warden stepped out from behind a pillar of salt. Aurora raised the Fae blade, the moonsilver cutting a line of frost through the stifling heat. "The kitchen is closed."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1384
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1384
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"depths"
count2
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"structure"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count2
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"desire"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count1
15
word"crystalline"
count1
16
word"simmering"
count1
17
word"stomach"
count2
18
word"hulking"
count1
19
word"perfect"
count1
20
word"porcelain"
count1
21
word"gloom"
count1
22
word"echoed"
count1
23
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"throbbed"
2"rhythmic"
3"flickered"
4"depths"
5"chill"
6"warmth"
7"crystal"
8"structure"
9"pulsed"
10"weight"
11"etched"
12"traced"
13"desire"
14"vibrated"
15"crystalline"
16"simmering"
17"stomach"
18"hulking"
19"perfect"
20"porcelain"
21"gloom"
22"echoed"
23"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1374
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.80% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1107
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Dymas1
Carter1
Veil1
Heartstone4
Shade1
Varga1
Fae-forged1
Aurora12
Dymasian2
Great2
Larder1
Nyx5
Warden2
Moonsilver1
Fae3
Isolde4
Thump3
persons
0"Dymas"
1"Carter"
2"Heartstone"
3"Shade"
4"Varga"
5"Aurora"
6"Nyx"
7"Warden"
8"Moonsilver"
9"Isolde"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.958
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like liquid chocolate"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1374
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean32.71
std22.69
cv0.694
sampleLengths
080
17
254
364
420
572
611
740
832
974
1032
118
1220
1332
1442
1561
164
1777
1812
1917
208
2164
2217
2357
248
2524
2629
2749
2812
2931
3012
3119
3237
3311
3454
3520
3624
3759
3817
399
4050
414
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs173
matches
0"was peeling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences99
ratio0.101
matches
0"Where they stepped, the vibrant grass didn't bend; it simply ceased to exist, flickering back into reality once the Shade passed."
1"It wasn't the sound of a party; it was the sound of a hive."
2"Vines didn't just climb; they strangled."
3"The trees didn't just bear fruit; they groaned under the weight of clusters so large they burst, spilling thick, golden nectar that pooled into fermented ponds."
4"They broke through a thicket of weeping willow trees—whose leaves were actually thin strips of edible gold leaf—and found themselves overlooking the Great Larder."
5"Some stirred simmering pots large enough to drown a horse; others butchered beasts that defied nomenclature, their hides shimmering with iridescent oil."
6"Immediately, a Warden—a hulking shadow of muscle and brass armor—cracked a whip made of coiled smoke."
7"The man didn't flinch from the pain; he only wept because he couldn't take a second taste."
8"A wave of heat rolled out—a dry, suffocating furnace blast that carried the sound of a thousand silver forks clattering against empty plates."
9"Rows of tables stretched into the darkness, laden with food that moved of its own accord—bread that breathed, wine that pulsed like blood."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1117
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.025067144136078783
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007162041181736795
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean13.88
std6.97
cv0.502
sampleLengths
023
125
217
315
47
513
620
721
815
921
1014
1114
1220
1314
1417
1527
1614
1711
188
1914
2018
2132
2211
2319
2412
256
2626
2711
287
2914
308
3111
329
3332
347
3511
3624
377
3816
3922
404
4112
424
434
448
4511
4621
4716
4817
4912
53.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.37373737373737376
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners37
43.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Immediately, a Warden—a hulking shadow"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences77
matches
0"She rubbed her left wrist,"
1"She left no indentations on"
2"It wasn't the sound of"
3"They descended a slope where"
4"She crouched, squinting at the"
5"She traced the grooves, her"
6"It wasn't a beast, but"
7"They broke through a thicket"
8"It was a factory of"
9"Their eyes were wide, sunken,"
10"They moved along the ridge,"
11"They reached a bridge carved"
12"It was the sound of"
13"She pulled the Fae blade"
14"They stepped off the bridge"
ratio0.195
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences77
matches
0"The amber sky of Dymas"
1"Aurora Carter stepped through the"
2"She rubbed her left wrist,"
3"The crimson gem throbbed against"
4"Nyx drifted beside her, their"
5"Violet eyes flickered within the"
6"Isolde Varga moved ahead of"
7"She left no indentations on"
8"Aurora reached for the moonsilver"
9"The metal emanated a biting"
10"A breeze swept through the"
11"It wasn't the sound of"
12"Nyx pointed a smoky finger"
13"They descended a slope where"
14"Flowers the size of dinner"
15"The further they walked, the"
16"Vines didn't just climb; they"
17"The trees didn't just bear"
18"Aurora stepped over a stream"
19"She crouched, squinting at the"
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped through the shimmering tear in the Veil, her boots sinking into soil that felt less like dirt and more like crushed velvet."
1"She left no indentations on the soft earth, her feet skimming the surface of sapphire-colored moss that carpeted the forest floor."
2"The trees didn't just bear fruit; they groaned under the weight of clusters so large they burst, spilling thick, golden nectar that pooled into fermented ponds."
3"Helbound souls, dressed in silks that looked woven from spiderwebs, moved between rows of crystalline vats."
4"Some stirred simmering pots large enough to drown a horse; others butchered beasts that defied nomenclature, their hides shimmering with iridescent oil."
5"Far below, bioluminescent fungi lit the depths, revealing piles of discarded silver platters and cracked porcelain that glinted like a graveyard of wealth."
6"Isolde stood at the far end of the bridge, her ethereal form glowing with a soft, pale light that pushed back the Dymasian gloom."
7"Rows of tables stretched into the darkness, laden with food that moved of its own accord—bread that breathed, wine that pulsed like blood."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.7973%