| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 96.39% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1384 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1384 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "depths" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "structure" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "traced" | | 13 | "desire" | | 14 | "vibrated" | | 15 | "crystalline" | | 16 | "simmering" | | 17 | "stomach" | | 18 | "hulking" | | 19 | "perfect" | | 20 | "porcelain" | | 21 | "gloom" | | 22 | "echoed" | | 23 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1374 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.80% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1107 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.08 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Dymas | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Shade | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Aurora | 12 | | Dymasian | 2 | | Great | 2 | | Larder | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Warden | 2 | | Moonsilver | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Isolde | 4 | | Thump | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Dymas" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "Nyx" | | 7 | "Warden" | | 8 | "Moonsilver" | | 9 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.958 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like liquid chocolate" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1374 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 32.71 | | std | 22.69 | | cv | 0.694 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 74 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 77 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 64 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 57 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 54 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 59 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 50 | | 41 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "Where they stepped, the vibrant grass didn't bend; it simply ceased to exist, flickering back into reality once the Shade passed." | | 1 | "It wasn't the sound of a party; it was the sound of a hive." | | 2 | "Vines didn't just climb; they strangled." | | 3 | "The trees didn't just bear fruit; they groaned under the weight of clusters so large they burst, spilling thick, golden nectar that pooled into fermented ponds." | | 4 | "They broke through a thicket of weeping willow trees—whose leaves were actually thin strips of edible gold leaf—and found themselves overlooking the Great Larder." | | 5 | "Some stirred simmering pots large enough to drown a horse; others butchered beasts that defied nomenclature, their hides shimmering with iridescent oil." | | 6 | "Immediately, a Warden—a hulking shadow of muscle and brass armor—cracked a whip made of coiled smoke." | | 7 | "The man didn't flinch from the pain; he only wept because he couldn't take a second taste." | | 8 | "A wave of heat rolled out—a dry, suffocating furnace blast that carried the sound of a thousand silver forks clattering against empty plates." | | 9 | "Rows of tables stretched into the darkness, laden with food that moved of its own accord—bread that breathed, wine that pulsed like blood." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1117 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.025067144136078783 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007162041181736795 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 13.88 | | std | 6.97 | | cv | 0.502 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 53.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.37373737373737376 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 43.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Immediately, a Warden—a hulking shadow" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She rubbed her left wrist," | | 1 | "She left no indentations on" | | 2 | "It wasn't the sound of" | | 3 | "They descended a slope where" | | 4 | "She crouched, squinting at the" | | 5 | "She traced the grooves, her" | | 6 | "It wasn't a beast, but" | | 7 | "They broke through a thicket" | | 8 | "It was a factory of" | | 9 | "Their eyes were wide, sunken," | | 10 | "They moved along the ridge," | | 11 | "They reached a bridge carved" | | 12 | "It was the sound of" | | 13 | "She pulled the Fae blade" | | 14 | "They stepped off the bridge" |
| | ratio | 0.195 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber sky of Dymas" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped through the" | | 2 | "She rubbed her left wrist," | | 3 | "The crimson gem throbbed against" | | 4 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" | | 5 | "Violet eyes flickered within the" | | 6 | "Isolde Varga moved ahead of" | | 7 | "She left no indentations on" | | 8 | "Aurora reached for the moonsilver" | | 9 | "The metal emanated a biting" | | 10 | "A breeze swept through the" | | 11 | "It wasn't the sound of" | | 12 | "Nyx pointed a smoky finger" | | 13 | "They descended a slope where" | | 14 | "Flowers the size of dinner" | | 15 | "The further they walked, the" | | 16 | "Vines didn't just climb; they" | | 17 | "The trees didn't just bear" | | 18 | "Aurora stepped over a stream" | | 19 | "She crouched, squinting at the" |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 44.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped through the shimmering tear in the Veil, her boots sinking into soil that felt less like dirt and more like crushed velvet." | | 1 | "She left no indentations on the soft earth, her feet skimming the surface of sapphire-colored moss that carpeted the forest floor." | | 2 | "The trees didn't just bear fruit; they groaned under the weight of clusters so large they burst, spilling thick, golden nectar that pooled into fermented ponds." | | 3 | "Helbound souls, dressed in silks that looked woven from spiderwebs, moved between rows of crystalline vats." | | 4 | "Some stirred simmering pots large enough to drown a horse; others butchered beasts that defied nomenclature, their hides shimmering with iridescent oil." | | 5 | "Far below, bioluminescent fungi lit the depths, revealing piles of discarded silver platters and cracked porcelain that glinted like a graveyard of wealth." | | 6 | "Isolde stood at the far end of the bridge, her ethereal form glowing with a soft, pale light that pushed back the Dymasian gloom." | | 7 | "Rows of tables stretched into the darkness, laden with food that moved of its own accord—bread that breathed, wine that pulsed like blood." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |