| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.367 | | leniency | 0.735 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.39% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1512 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1512 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "fractured" | | 10 | "dance" | | 11 | "intensity" | | 12 | "velvet" | | 13 | "footsteps" | | 14 | "depths" | | 15 | "echoes" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1517 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 998 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.9 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Shade | 2 | | Aurora | 19 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Half-Fae | 2 | | Three | 2 | | London | 2 | | Isolde | 12 | | Nyx | 5 | | Seer | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Half-Fae" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.548 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "warmth that seemed to seep into her bones" | | 1 | "quite decide what to make of them" | | 2 | "drops that seemed to plunge into nothing but shadow" | | 3 | "something like singing, though the words sli" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1517 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "discovering that the" | | 1 | "see that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 31.6 | | std | 24.69 | | cv | 0.781 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 78 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 85 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 80 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 89 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 60 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 63 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 54 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 44 | | 41 | 48 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 49 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 81 | | 47 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "Where there had been evening shadow and the distant sounds of London traffic, now there was light — soft, golden, filtering through a canopy so dense it might have been woven rather than grown." | | 1 | "But Isolde's hand closed around her wrist — cool, impossibly smooth, like touching polished stone — and pulled her forward." | | 2 | "The path — if it could be called a path — wound between root and stone and sudden drops that seemed to plunge into nothing but shadow." | | 3 | "Moonlight filtered down through a gap in the canopy — impossible moonlight, since it had been late afternoon when they'd entered — painting everything in shades of silver and shadow." | | 4 | "The visions that came without warning — streets that flickered between London and somewhere else, faces that wore two expressions at once, voices whispering in languages she shouldn't understand but somehow did." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 996 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.028112449799196786 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0050200803212851405 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 15.17 | | std | 9.49 | | cv | 0.626 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 32 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 71.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.46 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, warmth pulsed beneath her" | | 1 | "Twice, Aurora thought she heard" | | 2 | "Once, she caught the flash" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "She wanted to argue." | | 1 | "They walked deeper." | | 2 | "Its bark was pale as" | | 3 | "She pulled the pendant free," | | 4 | "She thought of whales in" | | 5 | "She thought of Nyx, who" | | 6 | "She thought of the Heartstone," | | 7 | "She knelt beside Isolde and" |
| | ratio | 0.118 | |
| 33.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Aurora pressed her palm against" | | 2 | "Nyx's voice drifted from somewhere" | | 3 | "Aurora withdrew her hand, rubbing" | | 4 | "The sensation lingered, a phantom" | | 5 | "Nyx reformed at the edge" | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant against her" | | 7 | "Isolde's voice carried no more" | | 8 | "The Half-Fae stood at the" | | 9 | "Those pale lavender eyes had" | | 10 | "The words came out harder" | | 11 | "Isolde's lips curved into something" | | 12 | "The air between the stones" | | 13 | "Aurora blinked, and the world" | | 14 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 15 | "The air tasted of honey" | | 16 | "Isolde moved past her, leaving" | | 17 | "Nyx hung back at the" | | 18 | "The Shade's form flickered between" | | 19 | "The whisper fractured" |
| | ratio | 0.853 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The sensation lingered, a phantom warmth that seemed to seep into her bones." | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant against her chest had begun its familiar pulse the moment they'd crossed into Richmond Park, but now it thrummed with an urgency that mad…" | | 2 | "Three weeks of cryptic messages, of shadows that whispered her name, of dreams soaked in amber light and the taste of wine she'd never drunk." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors: blues that belonged to tropical seas, reds that pulsed like embers, whites so pure they seemed to glow fro…" | | 4 | "She thought of whales in deep water, of things that lived their entire lives in darkness." | | 5 | "The visions that came without warning — streets that flickered between London and somewhere else, faces that wore two expressions at once, voices whispering in …" |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, not breaking stride" | | 1 | "Isolde moved, her reflection failing to appear in its black surface" | | 2 | "Isolde knelt, her silver hair spilling forward to brush the surface" |
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| 88.78% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "the Seer murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "against lies pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.082 | | leniency | 0.163 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.122 | |