| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 33 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.647 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 97.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2436 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2436 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "resolved" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "chilled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 191 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 210 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2418 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 29 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 70 | | wordCount | 2047 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.27 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 7 | | Aurora | 26 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Nyx | 19 | | Evan | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Isolde | 6 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Dymas" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.865 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 143 | | glossingSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "as if gossiping" | | 1 | "felt like a small heartbeat pressed aga" | | 2 | "not quite obeying the light" | | 3 | "tasted like memory" | | 4 | "felt like an anchor then, and now it th" | | 5 | "felt like rubbing the belly of a sleepi" | | 6 | "something like laughter and something like a" | | 7 | "something like a sigh" | | 8 | "as if recovering from a long sleep" | | 9 | "looked like a photograph inside another p" |
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| 34.57% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 1.654 | | wordCount | 2418 | | matches | | 0 | "not clouds but a scat of lights, like stars standing wrong in the wrong pla" | | 1 | "not in syllables but in small recollections" | | 2 | "not a shape but a pattern shading into someone" | | 3 | "not movement but intention" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 210 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.14% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 69 | | mean | 35.04 | | std | 16.8 | | cv | 0.479 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 57 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 65 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 54 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 68 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 42 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 51 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 44 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 56 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 99.75% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 191 | | matches | | 0 | "been poured" | | 1 | "were gone" | | 2 | "being claimed" | | 3 | "been exiled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 376 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 11 | | flaggedSentences | 20 | | totalSentences | 210 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened without choking; it settled over shoulders and into lungs with a sweetness that made the back of her teeth ache." | | 1 | "She had learned the island of her breath in other people's chaos; she kept it now." | | 2 | "Light inside the grove broke into impossible colour—pale lavender drifting where green should have been, threads of silver falling like mist." | | 3 | "She had read about fae places; none of the words had prepared her for being under one." | | 4 | "The air hummed; it did not settle on the eardrum so much as vibrate the bone." | | 5 | "Tiny sparks—silver, impossible—skittered like minnows along the glyph's edges and sank into the soil." | | 6 | "Outside, the park's skyline rested where it had always been—the distant silhouettes of roofs, the slouched prestige of an everyday world." | | 7 | "A path opened between the stones; it didn't look carved so much as invited." | | 8 | "Moss lifted like pillows against shoe leather; it was springy, alive." | | 9 | "When Aurora passed her hand across it, she found the texture of old paper beneath—veins, fibres, an imprint of stories." | | 10 | "She told herself stories—practical things—about ancient roots and microclimates, and they steadied her enough to reach the center of the clearing." | | 11 | "The Heartstone's warmth grew insistent; it nudged against her pulse." | | 12 | "Instead the pool whispered her name, not in syllables but in small recollections—a laugh she'd held, the tang of a cheap wine she loved before it made promises, the smell of Evan's aftershave and the way it had stuck to her coat collar." | | 13 | "The moonsilver caught nothing from the grove; it drank light and kept it." | | 14 | "Where the stone faces met the grass, tiny footprints blossomed and then were gone again—impressions that resisted being claimed by foot or shoe." | | 15 | "The grove was Isolde's grove; the seer had been exiled here." | | 16 | "The sound came from the periphery—wind and leaf and a paramour's confidence." | | 17 | "Aurora tasted the words and found they were riddles themselves; meaning shifted like light through glass." | | 18 | "A shape detached from the dappled light—no, not a shape but a pattern shading into someone." | | 19 | "The image did not insist it was true; it simply was." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 821 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small animal alarmed under leaves." |
| | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.023142509135200974 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0036540803897685747 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 210 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 210 | | mean | 11.51 | | std | 6.59 | | cv | 0.572 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 41.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.2714285714285714 | | totalSentences | 210 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 59.88% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "Light inside the grove broke" | | 1 | "Instead the pool whispered her" | | 2 | "Somewhere, the map of Richmond" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 76.29% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "They found the boundary behind" | | 1 | "It slid along the bark" | | 2 | "It warmed, faint and curious." | | 3 | "She stepped forward." | | 4 | "Her voice took a steady" | | 5 | "She had learned the island" | | 6 | "They crossed the last threshold" | | 7 | "She set her jaw and" | | 8 | "She had read about fae" | | 9 | "They walked into the ring" | | 10 | "Her skin prickled." | | 11 | "It felt like holding midnight." | | 12 | "Her voice was lower now." | | 13 | "She glanced back the way" | | 14 | "They said nothing for a" | | 15 | "She told herself stories—practical things—about" | | 16 | "Its surface did not mirror" | | 17 | "They had learned to guess." | | 18 | "They had lived in edges" | | 19 | "She expected sound." |
| | ratio | 0.359 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 154 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "They found the boundary behind" | | 1 | "The trees leaned inward as" | | 2 | "Light pooled between trunks in" | | 3 | "Nyx breathed, their voice a" | | 4 | "It slid along the bark" | | 5 | "Aurora's fingers tightened on the" | | 6 | "The Heartstone felt like a" | | 7 | "It warmed, faint and curious." | | 8 | "She stepped forward." | | 9 | "Soil changed underfoot from compressed" | | 10 | "The air thickened without choking;" | | 11 | "Her voice took a steady" | | 12 | "She had learned the island" | | 13 | "Nyx folded into a shadow" | | 14 | "Darkness tracked their movement with" | | 15 | "Aurora nudged the pendant with" | | 16 | "The Heartstone pulsed a shade" | | 17 | "They crossed the last threshold" | | 18 | "Wildflowers thrust from the ground" | | 19 | "The scent that came off" |
| | ratio | 0.922 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Light pooled between trunks in a way that made the world outside look thin and paper-soft." | | 1 | "The air thickened without choking; it settled over shoulders and into lungs with a sweetness that made the back of her teeth ache." | | 2 | "The scent that came off them mixed with moss and citrus and a note that tasted like memory." | | 3 | "She jerked back as if something had scratched her ear and placed a hand against her wrist where the crescent scar made a pale map." | | 4 | "Where the stone faces met the grass, tiny footprints blossomed and then were gone again—impressions that resisted being claimed by foot or shoe." | | 5 | "The lights under the water rearranged, making a pattern that had the honest sharpness of a map." | | 6 | "It took her and held it and showed her a reflection that was not a reflection: a crowd at a table with goblets like open suns, a hand closing around a pendant t…" |
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| 94.70% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 33 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx breathed, their voice a thread pulled taut" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured, almost to themselves," |
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| 16.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 30 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "Aurora observed (observe)" | | 4 | "Nyx guessed (guess)" | | 5 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 6 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 7 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.588 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.267 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |