Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY8ZN8SSNG18B5901DXANM

Run Details

Duration:
25.7s
Cost:
$0.004802
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the cracked tiles of the abandoned CamdenTube station, turning the platform into a mirror for the flickering work lights. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over the yellow tape, her boots crunching on shattered glass and something that looked like dried moss. The air tasted of ozone and wet dog, a sharp contrast to the usual stale beer and urine of a London underground closure. "Keep your mask on, Harlow," called PC Evans from the edge of the cordon. He fiddled with the strap of his respirator, eyes wide behind the plastic shield. "Metro Hazmat says the readings are off the charts. Some kind of gas leak, they reckon." Quinn ignored him. She pushed past the tape, her gaze sweeping the platform. Three uniformed officers stood near a bench, talking in hushed tones, their breath visible despite the mild October evening. In the center of the platform lay the body. Or what remained of it. A man in a tattered suit sprawled on his back, arms outstretched. His skin held a grey, waxy sheen, and frost feathered across his clothes, melting into puddles that steamed in the damp air. No blood. Not a drop. Just that unnatural cold radiating from the corpse. "Gas leak doesn't freeze a man solid in twenty degrees," Quinn muttered. She crouched beside the body, the worn leather of her watch brushing against her trousers. She checked the time. 02:14. Three hours since the call came in. Evans shuffled closer, keeping a safe distance. "Look at the position, Guv. Arms out. Could be a seizure. Maybe he inhaled whatever this is, convulsed, and the chemical reaction caused the frost. Happened down in the tunnels near King's Cross last year. Industrial coolant leak." Quinn ran a gloved finger along the man's jawline. Sharp, rigid. Rigor mortis had set in fast, too fast. She tilted his head. The pupils were dilated, black pools swallowing the iris. "Seizure victims don't arrange themselves like starfish, Evans. And they don't lose every drop of blood while freezing." She stood, brushing dust from her knees. "Where's the wallet? Phone? Anything?" "Pocket's empty," Evans said, pointing a gloved hand. "Robbery gone wrong? Maybe he wandered down here, junkie looking for a spot, got jumped." "Junkies don't wear bespoke suits tailored in Savile Row." Quinn walked a slow circle around the body. Her eyes caught the floor again. The frost didn't spread evenly. It formed a pattern, a rough circle around the corpse, but broken in one spot. A gap, pointing toward the dark tunnel mouth leading deeper into the earth. "See that?" She pointed to the gap in the frost. "Something dragged him. Or he crawled." "Dragged?" Evans squinted. "No drag marks in the grime, Guv. Just the frost." "Exactly." Quinn moved toward the tunnel entrance. The darkness swallowed the beam of her torch, but the air grew heavier, thicker. The smell of ozone intensified, making the hair on her arms stand up. She remembered Morris. Three years ago. Another body, another impossible set of circumstances she couldn't explain then. The file still sat on her desk, gathering dust and frustration. "Stay here," she ordered. "But protocol—" "Protocol says secure the scene. I'm going to see where that gap leads." She stepped onto the tracks. Gravel shifted under her boots. Ten paces in, the light from the platform faded. The silence pressed against her eardrums, absolute and suffocating. No dripping water, no distant rumble of trains. Just the hum of the air, low and vibrating. Her torch beam cut through the gloom, illuminating graffiti that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at it. Tags twisted into symbols she didn't recognize, glowing faintly before dimming again. She stopped. On the wall, someone had drawn a circle with a line through it, using what looked like charcoal, but the lines shimmered with a faint blue residue. Quinn reached out, hovering her hand near the mark. The air rippled, like heat haze off asphalt. "Detective?" Evans's voice echoed from the platform, thin and distorted. "You're walking into a dead end. There's a collapsed section fifty yards down. Engineering logs confirm it." "Logs don't account for this." She traced the symbol. The vibration in the air spiked, making her teeth ache. She turned back to the body. From this angle, the frost pattern made more sense. It wasn't just a circle. It was a funnel. The cold hadn't emanated from the man; it had been pulled *from* him. sucked out through that gap in the frost, drawn toward the tunnel. Quinn returned to the platform, her mind racing. She crouched by the victim's head again. Under the collar of his suit, barely visible against the grey skin, sat a small burn mark. Circular. Perfect. "Evans, bag his hands. Don't touch the skin directly." "You think he held something?" "I think something held him." She scanned the area again, looking for what didn't belong. The moss on the tiles. It wasn't growing from the cracks. It clustered in specific spots, forming a trail leading from the tunnel mouth to the body. Tiny, bioluminescent spores clung to the man's shoes. "Bioluminescent moss doesn't grow in the Tube," she said, more to herself than Evans. "Maybe it's a new strain. Pollution does weird things." Evans shrugged, adjusting his mask again. "Look, Harlow, let's wait for the specialists. We don't know what we're dealing with here. Could be toxic." "We're dealing with a man drained of life and frozen from the inside out in a locked station." Quinn pulled a small notebook from her pocket. She sketched the frost pattern, the gap, the symbol on the wall. "Someone brought him here. Or something did." She stood and walked to the edge of the platform, shining her light down the track again. The moss trail continued, disappearing into the dark. But there was something else. A glint of metal half-buried in the gravel near the tunnel entrance. Quinn hopped down to the tracks again, ignoring Evans's protest. She approached the glint. It was a small brass object, tarnished with green verdigris. She picked it up with her tweezers. A compass. But the face was etched with strange sigils, and the needle didn't point north. It spun lazily, then snapped to point straight down the tunnel, trembling. "Compass?" Evans called out. "Why would a dead man have a broken compass?" "It's not broken." The needle pulsed with a faint blue light, matching the symbol on the wall. "And he didn't have it. It was dropped. By whoever—or whatever—took him." Quinn held the compass up. The needle vibrated violently now, pulling toward the darkness. The air pressure dropped, popping her ears. The moss on the walls flared brighter, illuminating a section of the tunnel that shouldn't exist. The bricks seemed to dissolve into a swirling mist, revealing a glimpse of a market stall draped in shadowy fabrics, voices chattering in a language that hurt her head. "Evans," she said, her voice steady despite the chill running down her spine. "Call it in. Tell them we have a potential supernatural incident. And get me the file on DS Morris. Now." "Supernatural?" Evans laughed, a nervous, brittle sound. "Guv, you've been working too hard. It's a gas leak. A weird chemical spill." Quinn watched the mist swirl. A figure moved within it, tall and indistinct, reaching out. The compass needle jerked, pointing straight at the apparition. "Gas leaks don't open doors, Evans." She tucked the compass into her evidence bag, her fingers tightening around the plastic. "And I don't believe in coincidences. Not anymore." The figure in the mist raised a hand. The compass in Quinn's bag grew hot against her thigh. She didn't flinch. She just watched, waiting for the next move, her instincts screaming that the real investigation had only just begun. The frost on the body cracked, a sharp sound like a gunshot in the quiet station.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1319
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1319
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"racing"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"glint"
count2
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count1
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"down her spine"
count1
15
word"potential"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"silence"
2"gloom"
3"shimmered"
4"echoed"
5"traced"
6"racing"
7"perfect"
8"scanned"
9"glint"
10"etched"
11"pulsed"
12"vibrated"
13"chill"
14"down her spine"
15"potential"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1316
ratio0.001
matches
0"from"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.01% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount985
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
CamdenTube1
Harlow1
Quinn13
London1
Evans10
October1
Morris1
Three3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Evans"
3"Morris"
4"Three"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.84
windowScore1
52.60% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like dried moss"
1"graffiti that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at it"
2"looked like charcoal, but the lines shimm"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1316
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"screaming that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean33.74
std18.19
cv0.539
sampleLengths
065
144
246
347
439
545
632
730
823
956
1016
1113
1262
134
142
1513
1645
1761
1817
1927
2019
2149
2234
239
245
2550
2614
2733
2845
2942
3059
3113
3229
3366
3433
3521
3624
3728
3856
95.43% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"were dilated"
1"been pulled"
2"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs166
matches
0"wasn't looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences125
ratio0.008
matches
0"The cold hadn't emanated from the man; it had been pulled *from* him."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount986
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03144016227180527
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007099391480730223
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean10.53
std6.44
cv0.612
sampleLengths
021
121
223
314
414
516
63
710
819
99
105
1112
1222
132
143
158
1612
1715
184
191
207
217
2238
239
242
258
264
279
2825
295
308
3115
3217
336
345
3515
3613
3710
386
393
4010
417
4214
4313
443
453
4611
4711
484
492
72.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.47580645161290325
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners59
68.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"Just that unnatural cold radiating"
1"Just the hum of the"
ratio0.021
88.04% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences97
matches
0"He fiddled with the strap"
1"She pushed past the tape,"
2"His skin held a grey,"
3"She crouched beside the body,"
4"She checked the time."
5"She tilted his head."
6"She stood, brushing dust from"
7"Her eyes caught the floor"
8"It formed a pattern, a"
9"She pointed to the gap"
10"She remembered Morris."
11"She stepped onto the tracks."
12"Her torch beam cut through"
13"She traced the symbol"
14"She turned back to the"
15"It wasn't just a circle."
16"It was a funnel."
17"She crouched by the victim's"
18"She scanned the area again,"
19"It wasn't growing from the"
ratio0.33
52.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences97
matches
0"Rain slicked the cracked tiles"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"The air tasted of ozone"
3"He fiddled with the strap"
4"Quinn ignored him."
5"She pushed past the tape,"
6"A man in a tattered"
7"His skin held a grey,"
8"She crouched beside the body,"
9"She checked the time."
10"Evans shuffled closer, keeping a"
11"Quinn ran a gloved finger"
12"Rigor mortis had set in"
13"She tilted his head."
14"The pupils were dilated, black"
15"She stood, brushing dust from"
16"Evans said, pointing a gloved"
17"Quinn walked a slow circle"
18"Her eyes caught the floor"
19"The frost didn't spread evenly."
ratio0.814
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over the yellow tape, her boots crunching on shattered glass and something that looked like dried moss."
1"His skin held a grey, waxy sheen, and frost feathered across his clothes, melting into puddles that steamed in the damp air."
2"The bricks seemed to dissolve into a swirling mist, revealing a glimpse of a market stall draped in shadowy fabrics, voices chattering in a language that hurt h…"
3"She just watched, waiting for the next move, her instincts screaming that the real investigation had only just begun."
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, more to herself than Evans"
1"she said, her voice steady despite the chill running down her spine"
2"She tucked, her fingers tightening around the plastic"
71.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
1"she ordered (order)"
2"Evans laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.158
83.5331%