Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY95MPG7NH2NMHG46893QD

Run Details

Duration:
8.7s
Cost:
$0.002281

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The moonlight filtered through twisted oak branches, casting spindly shadows across the Richmond Park clearing. Aurora Carter pulled her jacket tighter, her breath forming small clouds in the chilled night air. She'd come to the Fae Grove for a reason, though the specifics blurred at the edges of her memory. The standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their ancient surfaces mottled with lichen and moss. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, impossibly vibrant despite the late autumn darkness. Something about their unnatural brightness made her skin crawl. Her fingers unconsciously traced the Heartstone pendant around her neck. It felt warmer than usual, pulsing with a faint inner glow that seemed to match her increasingly rapid heartbeat. A sound broke the silence. Not quite a whisper, not quite a rustle. Something between a breath and a scrape against bark. Aurora froze. Nothing moved. Yet. The wildflowers nearest her shifted, though no breeze disturbed the heavy stillness. Their petals turned toward her, synchronized like a hundred tiny eyes. Watching. Her rational mind fought against the growing sense of wrongness. This was Richmond Park. A place she knew. A place that should be familiar. But tonight, it wasn't. The standing stones seemed to lean imperceptibly closer. Their lichen-covered surfaces no longer looked like simple rock, but like faces frozen mid-expression. Waiting. Another sound. Closer this time. Something dragging. Something that didn't belong. Aurora's hand instinctively reached for her pendant. Its crimson stone felt impossibly warm against her skin.
total_cost0.0022808000000000004

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount245
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount245
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"chilled"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"sentinels"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"synchronized"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"chilled"
1"loomed"
2"sentinels"
3"traced"
4"silence"
5"whisper"
6"synchronized"
7"sense of"
8"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences31
matches(empty)
50.69% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences31
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences31
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords243
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount243
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Carter1
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Aurora3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.883
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences18
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"glow that seemed to match her increasingly rapid heartbeat"
1"Not quite a whisper, not quite a rustle"
2"not quite a rustle"
3"Something between a breath and a scrape against"
4"looked like simple rock, but like faces f"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount243
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences31
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs11
mean22.09
std12.99
cv0.588
sampleLengths
050
135
229
324
43
524
624
74
823
911
1016
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences31
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs36
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences31
ratio0
matches(empty)
77.86% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount245
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.05714285714285714
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.02857142857142857
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences31
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences31
mean7.84
std5.32
cv0.679
sampleLengths
015
116
219
315
411
59
610
719
85
98
109
112
122
131
1412
1511
161
1710
184
194
206
214
228
2314
241
252
263
272
284
297
309
93.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.6129032258064516
totalSentences31
uniqueOpeners19
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences24
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences24
matches
0"She'd come to the Fae"
1"Her fingers unconsciously traced the"
2"It felt warmer than usual,"
3"Their petals turned toward her,"
4"Her rational mind fought against"
5"Their lichen-covered surfaces no longer"
6"Its crimson stone felt impossibly"
ratio0.292
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount21
totalSentences24
matches
0"The moonlight filtered through twisted"
1"Aurora Carter pulled her jacket"
2"She'd come to the Fae"
3"The standing stones loomed like"
4"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, impossibly"
5"Something about their unnatural brightness"
6"Her fingers unconsciously traced the"
7"It felt warmer than usual,"
8"A sound broke the silence."
9"Something between a breath and"
10"The wildflowers nearest her shifted,"
11"Their petals turned toward her,"
12"Her rational mind fought against"
13"This was Richmond Park."
14"A place she knew."
15"A place that should be"
16"The standing stones seemed to"
17"Their lichen-covered surfaces no longer"
18"Something that didn't belong."
19"Aurora's hand instinctively reached for"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences24
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences11
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"It felt warmer than usual, pulsing with a faint inner glow that seemed to match her increasingly rapid heartbeat."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.3597%