Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY9G5MSB4G6H86YJY5DQBQ

Run Details

Duration:
14.8s
Cost:
$0.009275
Provider:
BaseTen

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the crime scene tape. The abandoned Tube station breathed cold air up from the tracks, a subterranean chill that clung to her wool coat. Her leather watch strap creaked as she checked the time. Three in the morning. The platform stretched into darkness, illuminated only by the harsh white of forensic lamps. She spotted the body immediately. Male, mid-thirties, sprawled across the yellowed tiles near the edge of the platform. His throat bore bruises in the shape of fingers. Open and shut strangulation, except the positioning was wrong. His legs dangled toward the tracks, but no scuff marks marred the tile near his heels. He hadn't kicked. Hadn't fought. "Detective Quinn." She turned. Eva Kowalski emerged from the shadows near the tunnel mouth, her curly red hair catching the lamplight like copper wire. She carried that worn leather satchel, stuffed until the straps strained. Her round glasses slid down her nose, and she pushed them up with a finger already ink-stained. "You called this in?" "I found him." Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear. Her gaze dropped to the body, then skittered away. "I was researching down here. For the Museum." Quinn stepped closer to the corpse. The man's eyes stared at the curved ceiling tiles. His pockets were turned inside out, but a wallet remained in his back pocket, fat with cash. Robbery wasn't the motive. She crouched, her military bearing keeping her back straight even at this angle. The bruises on his throat were too symmetrical. Too perfect. "Strangulation." Eva hugged her satchel. "Look at his hands." Quinn checked. The man's fingernails were clean. No skin under them. No defensive wounds. But his palms bore strange burns, circular patterns etched into the flesh like brands. "Acid?" "Sigils." Eva's voice dropped. She stepped closer, her trainers squeaking on the tile. "Protective markings. Someone burned them into him while he was still alive. Or tried to." Quinn stood. Her leather watch caught the light. She scanned the platform. The forensic team had dusted for prints near the body, but the tiles further out remained untouched. She walked to the tunnel entrance. Cold air poured from the darkness, carrying the smell of rust and ozone. Something glinted on the ground. She crouched again. A small brass compass lay near the track bed, its casing green with verdigris. The face bore etched markings she didn't recognize—geometric patterns that seemed to shift when she blinked. The needle spun wildly, not north, not anywhere fixed. It pointed toward the tunnel wall. "Eva." Quinn didn't look up. "What is this?" Footsteps approached. Eva's breath caught. "A Veil Compass." She knelt beside Quinn, her knee nearly touching the track. "It points toward supernatural rifts. Portals." Quinn picked it up. The brass was ice-cold. The needle steadied, pointing directly at the tunnel wall where brick met tile. Solid stone. No door. "The victim had this?" "He was running from something." Eva tucked her hair back again. Her hands shook. "Or toward something. The compass leads to the Veil Market. It moves, Quinn. Every full moon. Tonight's location is this station." Quinn stood, pocketing the compass. She walked back to the body. The bruises on his throat weren't from human hands. The symmetry was too precise, the spacing too wide. She imagined invisible fingers closing around his neck while he clutched at his palms, burning his own flesh with protective sigils that failed. "Your partner," Eva said quietly. "DS Morris. He died three years ago. Unexplained circumstances." Quinn's jaw tightened. Her sharp jawline caught the lamplight. "Supernatural origins," Eva continued. "You don't understand yet what killed him. But you're starting to see, aren't you? The evidence that doesn't add up. The bruises that don't match human anatomy. The compass spinning toward brick walls." Quinn looked at the tunnel. The darkness seemed thicker now, breathing. She checked her watch. Three-fifteen. The Market had closed, or moved, or simply hidden itself behind the veil of perception that separated her world from whatever had crushed this man's throat. "File this as a homicide," Quinn said. Her voice carried the precision of her military bearing. "Unknown perpetrator. But mark the evidence as compromised. The bruising pattern suggests..." She paused. The compass in her pocket grew warm. "Anomalies." Eva nodded, clutching her satchel. "The Veil leaves traces. Even when it seals shut." Quinn turned toward the exit. She didn't look back at the body, but she felt the weight of the brass compass pulling her toward the wall where no door existed. DS Morris had died in a warehouse with similar bruises. She'd spent three years chasing shadows. Tonight, the shadows finally had a shape. She climbed the stairs toward the street, Eva following behind. The abandoned station swallowed the lamplight as they left, and somewhere in the dark, the compass needle spun again, pointing toward secrets that refused to stay buried.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.083
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount821
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount821
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"perfect"
2"etched"
3"scanned"
4"footsteps"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
73.17% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords816
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount661
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn12
Tube1
Kowalski1
Footsteps1
Market1
Morris1
Eva10
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Footsteps"
4"Market"
5"Morris"
6"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.592
windowScore0.333
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"patterns that seemed to shift when she blinked"
1"seemed thicker now, breathing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount816
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean26.32
std19.41
cv0.737
sampleLengths
057
157
22
350
44
528
659
71
88
928
101
1128
1248
135
1448
158
165
1719
1825
194
2035
2152
2214
239
2437
2542
2638
2714
2846
297
3037
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs124
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences97
ratio0.01
matches
0"The face bore etched markings she didn't recognize—geometric patterns that seemed to shift when she blinked."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount666
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.036036036036036036
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.013513513513513514
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean8.41
std6.44
cv0.766
sampleLengths
09
120
210
34
414
55
613
79
89
916
103
112
122
132
1420
1511
1617
174
1811
199
208
216
229
2317
244
2513
268
272
281
294
304
312
325
334
343
3514
361
374
389
3915
402
416
424
4317
446
4513
465
473
4814
4916
61.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3917525773195876
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences70
matches
0"Her leather watch strap creaked"
1"She spotted the body immediately."
2"His throat bore bruises in"
3"His legs dangled toward the"
4"He hadn't kicked."
5"She carried that worn leather"
6"Her round glasses slid down"
7"Her gaze dropped to the"
8"His pockets were turned inside"
9"She crouched, her military bearing"
10"She stepped closer, her trainers"
11"Her leather watch caught the"
12"She scanned the platform."
13"She walked to the tunnel"
14"She crouched again."
15"It pointed toward the tunnel"
16"She knelt beside Quinn, her"
17"Her hands shook."
18"She walked back to the"
19"She imagined invisible fingers closing"
ratio0.371
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences70
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
1"The abandoned Tube station breathed"
2"Her leather watch strap creaked"
3"The platform stretched into darkness,"
4"She spotted the body immediately."
5"His throat bore bruises in"
6"His legs dangled toward the"
7"He hadn't kicked."
8"Eva Kowalski emerged from the"
9"She carried that worn leather"
10"Her round glasses slid down"
11"Eva tucked a curl behind"
12"Her gaze dropped to the"
13"Quinn stepped closer to the"
14"The man's eyes stared at"
15"His pockets were turned inside"
16"Robbery wasn't the motive."
17"She crouched, her military bearing"
18"The bruises on his throat"
19"Eva hugged her satchel."
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She imagined invisible fingers closing around his neck while he clutched at his palms, burning his own flesh with protective sigils that failed."
1"The abandoned station swallowed the lamplight as they left, and somewhere in the dark, the compass needle spun again, pointing toward secrets that refused to st…"
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She knelt, her knee nearly touching the track"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.083
79.8380%