| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1958 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1958 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "comforting" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "lurch" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 182 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 182 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 185 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1962 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1947 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.51 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Mortlake | 1 | | Rory | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Isabella" | | 3 | "Plantation" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like the wrong answer, the way sho" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.51 | | wordCount | 1962 | | matches | | 0 | "not the one nearest to her, but the one directly across, the tallest of them, about six feet" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "drawn that breath" | | 1 | "total that Rory" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 39.24 | | std | 28.38 | | cv | 0.723 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 86 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 86 | | 4 | 91 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 93 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 78 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 74 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 50 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 57 | | 35 | 37 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 72 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 65 | | 40 | 69 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 50 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 58 | | 46 | 56 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 70 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 182 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 299 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "were creating" | | 2 | "was holding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 185 | | ratio | 0.076 | | matches | | 0 | "Ancient oaks — not the kind that grew in a London park, not really, their trunks wider than cars, bark folded and ridged like the faces of old men." | | 1 | "A sourceless pewter light suffused everything — the kind of light that existed before dawn in winter, flat and directionless, erasing shadow." | | 2 | "She pressed her palm flat against it and the rhythm matched her own heartbeat — which, she realized with an unpleasant lurch, was also accelerating." | | 3 | "The syllables didn't carry; they stuck to her lips, absorbed by the dead air." | | 4 | "But the flowers tilted another degree, and the nearest standing stone — the one to her left, waist-high, rounded at the top like a worn molar — gave off a faint vibration she felt through the soles of her trainers." | | 5 | "One of the standing stones — not the one nearest to her, but the one directly across, the tallest of them, about six feet high — had a mark on it." | | 6 | "It was shorter than the rest, its surface darker, its shape wrong — too narrow, too upright, without the rounded weathering of its neighbors." | | 7 | "And it had a shape — not a recognizable symbol, nothing so generous." | | 8 | "She hadn't thought that possible, but it did — it intensified, compressing, until she felt the pressure of it in her chest, behind her eyes, in the roots of her teeth." | | 9 | "Holding it, and leaning down, just as before — the branches bowing, the canopy depressing, the distance between the crown of the grove and the top of her head shrinking by inches." | | 10 | "She held onto that — the mundane sensation of cold, wet grass under her hand." | | 11 | "It came down on her like a wave of cold — not wind, something thicker, heavier, carrying a scent of turned earth and iron and something sweet underneath that she couldn't name." | | 12 | "A sound that almost coalesced into language, that brushed against meaning the way the ninth stone had brushed against shape — nearly there, nearly recognizable, sliding away the moment she reached for it." | | 13 | "Every trace of light — the sourceless pewter glow, the soft luminescence of the flowers, the crimson ember at her chest — extinguished at once." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1943 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "cutting south-southeast past" |
| | adverbCount | 75 | | adverbRatio | 0.03860010293360782 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007720020586721565 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 185 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 185 | | mean | 10.61 | | std | 9.54 | | cv | 0.899 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 38.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 24 | | diversityRatio | 0.3081081081081081 | | totalSentences | 185 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a shift in the" | | 1 | "Only branches, twisted together so" | | 2 | "Then the ninth stone was" | | 3 | "More like a print." | | 4 | "Instead she sank into a" | | 5 | "Then the breath released." |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 93.10% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew the way." | | 1 | "She'd been here once before," | | 2 | "They'd stayed near the paths," | | 3 | "She'd never come from this" | | 4 | "She hadn't told anyone she" | | 5 | "She'd simply woken at quarter" | | 6 | "She slipped her phone back" | | 7 | "She counted them as she" | | 8 | "She'd read somewhere that foxglove" | | 9 | "It didn't seem like a" | | 10 | "She'd come because the pendant" | | 11 | "She didn't have a better" | | 12 | "She'd stopped examining it somewhere" | | 13 | "She was afraid now." | | 14 | "Her heel caught a root," | | 15 | "She steadied herself." | | 16 | "It pulsed faster now, the" | | 17 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 18 | "Her voice came out wrong." | | 19 | "She tried again, louder." |
| | ratio | 0.317 | |
| 73.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 112 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "The last bus had dropped" | | 1 | "Rory held her phone out" | | 2 | "She knew the way." | | 3 | "That was the strange part." | | 4 | "She'd been here once before," | | 5 | "That visit they hadn't gone" | | 6 | "They'd stayed near the paths," | | 7 | "Rory had never entered the" | | 8 | "She'd never come from this" | | 9 | "The pendant sat warm against" | | 10 | "She hadn't told anyone she" | | 11 | "She'd simply woken at quarter" | | 12 | "She slipped her phone back" | | 13 | "The standing stones rose among" | | 14 | "She counted them as she" | | 15 | "The air changed." | | 16 | "The hum of the distant" | | 17 | "The wildflowers started at the" | | 18 | "Bluebells and foxglove and something" | | 19 | "She'd read somewhere that foxglove" |
| | ratio | 0.772 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Twenty minutes of walking through wet grass in trainers that had no business being out past midnight, the hem of her jeans wicking up damp in a cold band around…" | | 1 | "She'd never come from this direction, cutting south-southeast past the Isabella Plantation boundary, heading for a part of the park that didn't appear on any of…" | | 2 | "Not Yu-Fei, who would have insisted on driving her in the delivery van and waiting with the engine running." | | 3 | "Bluebells and foxglove and something white she didn't recognize, all blooming in the dark, each petal holding a faint luminescence as if they'd soaked up a day'…" | | 4 | "A sourceless pewter light suffused everything — the kind of light that existed before dawn in winter, flat and directionless, erasing shadow." | | 5 | "The silence had a pressure to it, the way deep water has pressure, pushing against her eardrums, making her swallow." | | 6 | "Four long streaks drawn downward, as if something with fingers had dragged them through a substance she didn't want to identify and wiped them clean against the…" | | 7 | "A long, rattling inhalation that started at one edge of the clearing and moved across to the other, as though whatever produced it had a mouth wide enough to sp…" | | 8 | "Holding it, and leaning down, just as before — the branches bowing, the canopy depressing, the distance between the crown of the grove and the top of her head s…" | | 9 | "A sound that almost coalesced into language, that brushed against meaning the way the ninth stone had brushed against shape — nearly there, nearly recognizable,…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |