Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY9GDP6EH4TD8DK4RJNYS4

Run Details

Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.072785
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last bus had dropped her at the Richmond Park gate twenty minutes ago. Twenty minutes of walking through wet grass in trainers that had no business being out past midnight, the hem of her jeans wicking up damp in a cold band around her ankles. Rory held her phone out for the torch, the beam catching rain-beaded spiderwebs strung between hawthorn branches like tiny chandeliers, each one gone the instant the light passed. She knew the way. That was the strange part. She'd been here once before, in daylight, with Eva chattering beside her about some documentary on Richmond's deer population. That visit they hadn't gone deep. They'd stayed near the paths, taken pictures, caught the bus home before the gates closed. Rory had never entered the park at night. She'd never come from this direction, cutting south-southeast past the Isabella Plantation boundary, heading for a part of the park that didn't appear on any of the information boards. And yet her feet found every root, every dip, every mossy stone as if she'd walked the route a hundred times. The pendant sat warm against her sternum, pulsing in slow, even thumps like a second heartbeat. She hadn't told anyone she was coming. Not Eva. Not Silas. Not Yu-Fei, who would have insisted on driving her in the delivery van and waiting with the engine running. She'd simply woken at quarter past eleven with the certainty that she needed to be here, the Heartstone already glowing faintly through the cotton of her sleep shirt, its crimson light painting the ceiling of her flat above the bar. She slipped her phone back into her jacket pocket. Ahead, the treeline thickened. Ancient oaks — not the kind that grew in a London park, not really, their trunks wider than cars, bark folded and ridged like the faces of old men. The standing stones rose among them, pale and smooth, their surfaces untouched by lichen or weather. She counted them as she passed between the first pair. One. Two. The air changed. The hum of the distant A-road vanished as though someone had pressed a pillow over the world's mouth. Three. Four. The wildflowers started at the fifth stone. Bluebells and foxglove and something white she didn't recognize, all blooming in the dark, each petal holding a faint luminescence as if they'd soaked up a day's worth of sun and were slowly bleeding it back out. She'd read somewhere that foxglove was called dead man's bells. It didn't seem like a comforting thing to remember. The Fae Grove opened before her, a clearing ringed by the final stones. The canopy overhead was so dense that no sky showed through, yet the space wasn't dark. A sourceless pewter light suffused everything — the kind of light that existed before dawn in winter, flat and directionless, erasing shadow. Rory stopped at the clearing's edge. She listened. Nothing. Not the rustle of a hedgehog in the brush, not the distant bark of a fox. Not even wind. The silence had a pressure to it, the way deep water has pressure, pushing against her eardrums, making her swallow. She'd come because the pendant had called her. She didn't have a better way to describe it. The stone had pulsed, and she had known: the Grove, tonight, alone. The logic of it didn't survive examination. She'd stopped examining it somewhere around Mortlake, on the bus, staring at her own reflection in the rain-streaked window and wondering why she wasn't afraid. She was afraid now. The wrongness crept in like a change in temperature. Not something she could point to. Not a sound or a sight. Just a shift in the quality of the silence, as if the Grove had been holding its breath and had now, very quietly, exhaled. The wildflowers at her feet tilted. Not all of them. Not at once. A slow wave, radiating outward from the center of the clearing, each stem leaning a few degrees, then a few more, until every bloom pointed toward her like the needle of a compass finding north. Rory took a step backward. Her heel caught a root, and she stumbled, throwing her arms out for balance. In the half-second her gaze swung upward, she caught movement in the canopy. Something pulling back. Something that had been leaning down. When she looked again, there was nothing. Only branches, twisted together so tightly they formed a solid ceiling. No gaps. No movement. She steadied herself. Touched the pendant through her jacket. It pulsed faster now, the intervals shortening, warm enough that she could feel it through fabric and cotton undershirt alike. She pressed her palm flat against it and the rhythm matched her own heartbeat — which, she realized with an unpleasant lurch, was also accelerating. "All right," she whispered. Her voice came out wrong. Too close. The syllables didn't carry; they stuck to her lips, absorbed by the dead air. She tried again, louder. "All right. I'm here." Nothing answered. She hadn't expected anything to. But the flowers tilted another degree, and the nearest standing stone — the one to her left, waist-high, rounded at the top like a worn molar — gave off a faint vibration she felt through the soles of her trainers. Something moved behind her. She spun. The treeline. The oaks. The dark corridor she'd walked through to reach this place. Nothing stood among the trunks. Nothing she could see. But the distance between the trees had changed. She was certain of it. The gap she'd walked through five minutes ago was narrower. The two oaks on either side had leaned toward each other, their upper branches interlocked like fingers. "That wasn't like that before." Her voice, again, went nowhere. Flat. Swallowed. The words didn't echo off the stones or bounce from the canopy. They simply ceased to exist the moment they left her mouth. Rory turned back to the clearing. One of the standing stones — not the one nearest to her, but the one directly across, the tallest of them, about six feet high — had a mark on it. A dark smear at head height. She hadn't noticed it when she arrived. She was very, very sure it hadn't been there, because she'd looked at that stone first when she entered the grove. She'd looked at each one. Counted them. She counted them now. Eight. There had been eight before. She'd passed them in pairs. One-two, three-four, five-six. The pair at the clearing's edge made seven-eight. Nine stones stood around her. The ninth was behind her and to her right, in a gap between two others where no gap had existed a minute ago. It was shorter than the rest, its surface darker, its shape wrong — too narrow, too upright, without the rounded weathering of its neighbors. Rory stared at it and the pendant flared hot against her chest. Not warm. Hot. A sharp, adrenal sting, like a wasp trapped between skin and fabric. She hissed and pulled the chain away from her body. The crimson glow bled through her fingers, painting the grass red, and in that red light the ninth stone looked less like a stone. It had texture. Fine, fibrous texture. Something that could have been grain in wood or could have been something else. Fibers. Threads. The surface moved, a slow rippling, so subtle she questioned whether her own shaking hands were creating the illusion. She held her breath and went still. The rippling continued. Then the ninth stone was a stone again. Rough. Grey. Mute. She blinked and couldn't remember why she'd thought otherwise. The pendant cooled against her palm, returning to its earlier rhythmic pulse. The wildflowers around the clearing relaxed their lean, straightening degree by degree, pointing back toward the absent sky. Rory released the pendant and flexed her fingers. A red impression of the chain remained on her palm, raw and stinging. She looked at it without processing, then looked up. The clearing was empty. The stones numbered eight. She counted twice, turning slowly, touching each one with her eyes. Eight. The gap where the ninth had stood held only foxglove and bluebell, their stalks unbent, their petals turned upward. But the smear on the tallest stone remained. Darker now. Wet-looking. And it had a shape — not a recognizable symbol, nothing so generous. More like a print. Four long streaks drawn downward, as if something with fingers had dragged them through a substance she didn't want to identify and wiped them clean against the pale surface. The silence deepened. She hadn't thought that possible, but it did — it intensified, compressing, until she felt the pressure of it in her chest, behind her eyes, in the roots of her teeth. The pendant pulsed. Deep in the canopy overhead, something breathed. Not wind. Breath. A long, rattling inhalation that started at one edge of the clearing and moved across to the other, as though whatever produced it had a mouth wide enough to span the entire grove. Rory locked her eyes on the branches above and saw them bend inward under a weight she couldn't see. Leaves rustled. Twigs snapped. A fine rain of bark dust drifted down and settled on her shoulders. The exhalation never came. Whatever had drawn that breath was holding it. Holding it, and leaning down, just as before — the branches bowing, the canopy depressing, the distance between the crown of the grove and the top of her head shrinking by inches. She felt the air pressure change, felt the cold of something vast pressing down above her, felt the pendant sear a circle against her chest. Rory didn't run. Running felt like the wrong answer, the way shouting felt wrong in this place. Instead she sank into a crouch, slowly, keeping her head up and her eyes on the canopy. She pressed her palm against the cold grass and curled her fingers into the earth. The blades were wet. Real. She held onto that — the mundane sensation of cold, wet grass under her hand. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the pendant's glow and shone white for a moment, a sliver of old pain. She clenched her fist. "I know you're there." The words didn't die this time. They carried upward, through the compressed air, into the dense tangle of branches. They carried, and something in the canopy shifted, and the silence broke with a sound like a single footstep on dry leaves, though there was no ground up there, only dark. Then the breath released. It came down on her like a wave of cold — not wind, something thicker, heavier, carrying a scent of turned earth and iron and something sweet underneath that she couldn't name. It pressed her hair flat against her skull and rippled the surface of the wildflowers and pushed the breath from her lungs in a thin gasp. In the wake of it, close as a whisper against the shell of her ear, she heard a voice. Not words. Not quite. A sound that almost coalesced into language, that brushed against meaning the way the ninth stone had brushed against shape — nearly there, nearly recognizable, sliding away the moment she reached for it. The pendant went dark. Every trace of light — the sourceless pewter glow, the soft luminescence of the flowers, the crimson ember at her chest — extinguished at once. The Grove plunged into a black so total that Rory couldn't see her own hand in front of her face. She crouched in the wet grass with her fingers in the dirt and her heart hammering in her throat and waited for whatever came next. In the perfect dark, something touched the top of her head.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1958
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
2
adverb"very"
count3
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"very"
3"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1958
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"comforting"
count1
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"lurch"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"comforting"
1"silence"
2"pulsed"
3"could feel"
4"lurch"
5"echo"
6"rhythmic"
7"pulse"
8"weight"
9"whisper"
10"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences182
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences182
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences185
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1962
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1947
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
Eva2
Isabella1
Plantation1
Silas1
Yu-Fei1
Heartstone1
London1
Fae1
Grove4
Mortlake1
Rory10
persons
0"Eva"
1"Silas"
2"Heartstone"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Isabella"
3"Plantation"
4"London"
5"Fae"
6"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences106
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like the wrong answer, the way sho"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.51
wordCount1962
matches
0"not the one nearest to her, but the one directly across, the tallest of them, about six feet"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences185
matches
0"drawn that breath"
1"total that Rory"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean39.24
std28.38
cv0.723
sampleLengths
074
186
221
386
491
52
663
757
82
940
1061
114
1293
1341
1422
1554
1633
1747
184
1965
205
2130
2278
234
2422
255
2674
2734
2841
297
303
3150
3230
3339
3457
3537
367
3772
384
3965
4069
4126
424
4350
444
4558
4656
474
4870
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences182
matches
0"was called"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs299
matches
0"was coming"
1"were creating"
2"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences185
ratio0.076
matches
0"Ancient oaks — not the kind that grew in a London park, not really, their trunks wider than cars, bark folded and ridged like the faces of old men."
1"A sourceless pewter light suffused everything — the kind of light that existed before dawn in winter, flat and directionless, erasing shadow."
2"She pressed her palm flat against it and the rhythm matched her own heartbeat — which, she realized with an unpleasant lurch, was also accelerating."
3"The syllables didn't carry; they stuck to her lips, absorbed by the dead air."
4"But the flowers tilted another degree, and the nearest standing stone — the one to her left, waist-high, rounded at the top like a worn molar — gave off a faint vibration she felt through the soles of her trainers."
5"One of the standing stones — not the one nearest to her, but the one directly across, the tallest of them, about six feet high — had a mark on it."
6"It was shorter than the rest, its surface darker, its shape wrong — too narrow, too upright, without the rounded weathering of its neighbors."
7"And it had a shape — not a recognizable symbol, nothing so generous."
8"She hadn't thought that possible, but it did — it intensified, compressing, until she felt the pressure of it in her chest, behind her eyes, in the roots of her teeth."
9"Holding it, and leaning down, just as before — the branches bowing, the canopy depressing, the distance between the crown of the grove and the top of her head shrinking by inches."
10"She held onto that — the mundane sensation of cold, wet grass under her hand."
11"It came down on her like a wave of cold — not wind, something thicker, heavier, carrying a scent of turned earth and iron and something sweet underneath that she couldn't name."
12"A sound that almost coalesced into language, that brushed against meaning the way the ninth stone had brushed against shape — nearly there, nearly recognizable, sliding away the moment she reached for it."
13"Every trace of light — the sourceless pewter glow, the soft luminescence of the flowers, the crimson ember at her chest — extinguished at once."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1943
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cutting south-southeast past"
adverbCount75
adverbRatio0.03860010293360782
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.007720020586721565
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences185
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences185
mean10.61
std9.54
cv0.899
sampleLengths
014
132
228
34
45
519
66
715
88
929
1021
1116
127
132
142
1519
1640
179
184
1929
2016
2110
221
231
243
2518
261
271
287
2937
3010
319
3213
3316
3422
356
362
371
3816
393
4020
418
429
4312
447
4525
464
479
486
496
38.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.3081081081081081
totalSentences185
uniqueOpeners57
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences145
matches
0"Just a shift in the"
1"Only branches, twisted together so"
2"Then the ninth stone was"
3"More like a print."
4"Instead she sank into a"
5"Then the breath released."
ratio0.041
93.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences145
matches
0"She knew the way."
1"She'd been here once before,"
2"They'd stayed near the paths,"
3"She'd never come from this"
4"She hadn't told anyone she"
5"She'd simply woken at quarter"
6"She slipped her phone back"
7"She counted them as she"
8"She'd read somewhere that foxglove"
9"It didn't seem like a"
10"She'd come because the pendant"
11"She didn't have a better"
12"She'd stopped examining it somewhere"
13"She was afraid now."
14"Her heel caught a root,"
15"She steadied herself."
16"It pulsed faster now, the"
17"She pressed her palm flat"
18"Her voice came out wrong."
19"She tried again, louder."
ratio0.317
73.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount112
totalSentences145
matches
0"The last bus had dropped"
1"Rory held her phone out"
2"She knew the way."
3"That was the strange part."
4"She'd been here once before,"
5"That visit they hadn't gone"
6"They'd stayed near the paths,"
7"Rory had never entered the"
8"She'd never come from this"
9"The pendant sat warm against"
10"She hadn't told anyone she"
11"She'd simply woken at quarter"
12"She slipped her phone back"
13"The standing stones rose among"
14"She counted them as she"
15"The air changed."
16"The hum of the distant"
17"The wildflowers started at the"
18"Bluebells and foxglove and something"
19"She'd read somewhere that foxglove"
ratio0.772
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences75
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Twenty minutes of walking through wet grass in trainers that had no business being out past midnight, the hem of her jeans wicking up damp in a cold band around…"
1"She'd never come from this direction, cutting south-southeast past the Isabella Plantation boundary, heading for a part of the park that didn't appear on any of…"
2"Not Yu-Fei, who would have insisted on driving her in the delivery van and waiting with the engine running."
3"Bluebells and foxglove and something white she didn't recognize, all blooming in the dark, each petal holding a faint luminescence as if they'd soaked up a day'…"
4"A sourceless pewter light suffused everything — the kind of light that existed before dawn in winter, flat and directionless, erasing shadow."
5"The silence had a pressure to it, the way deep water has pressure, pushing against her eardrums, making her swallow."
6"Four long streaks drawn downward, as if something with fingers had dragged them through a substance she didn't want to identify and wiped them clean against the…"
7"A long, rattling inhalation that started at one edge of the clearing and moved across to the other, as though whatever produced it had a mouth wide enough to sp…"
8"Holding it, and leaning down, just as before — the branches bowing, the canopy depressing, the distance between the crown of the grove and the top of her head s…"
9"A sound that almost coalesced into language, that brushed against meaning the way the ninth stone had brushed against shape — nearly there, nearly recognizable,…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
82.8536%