Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY9H66XFX0N5F1H0KNY366

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Duration:
46.3s
Cost:
$0.001655
Provider:
Novita

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The mist clinging to Richmond Park’s ancient oaks tasted of copper and iron. It tasted like a world trying to heal itself after a deep cut. Rory adjusted the strap of her delivery satchel, the leather worn smooth by weeks of carrying takeout boxes and stacks of leather-bound law journals. At her hip, the Fae-Forged Blade rubbed against her thigh, a heavy, frigid weight that had nothing to do with the damp chill seeping through her coat. She didn’t draw it, but the grip of her left hand relaxed, just an inch, allowing the scar just below her wrist to itch. Nyx drifted ahead, her violet eyes glimmering like bioluminescent stains in the gloom. The Shade hadn’t taken a solid form in over an hour, preferring to flow between the trunks of the great trees like spilled ink. "Isolde," Rory called out, her voice cutting through the thick, stagnant air of the pine grove. "Are you sure the Veil is thin enough?" The woman with the waist-length silver hair stepped out from behind a moss-covered boulder. Her pale lavender eyes held that hollow, timeless quality that always made Rory’s stomach do a slow flip. "Thin as paper over a papercut, dear Aurora," Isolde replied. Her voice was a mix of a sigh and a chime, unhurried. "But paper burns. You must watch your feet." Rory nodded, checking the compass on her phone. It spun wildly, the needle dancing like a drunkard. She shoved it back into her pocket. The supernatural energy here pressed against her skin, pricking at the hairs on her arms. "Footsteps," Nyx observed, the shadow figure detaching from the tree bark and reforming into a towering humanoid silhouette. "In this place, they do not echo." "We walk light," Isolde said. She turned toward a cluster of massive oak trees, their bark peeling in unnatural, spiraling patterns. Rory followed, the air suddenly changing. The scent of pine was gone, replaced by something sweeter—like crushed roses and ozone. The temperature dropped. It wasn't the bite of winter; it was the kind of cold that you felt in your teeth, the kind that made your breath plume visible even though the fog had vanished. They reached the boundary. Before them stood two standing stones, ancient and grey, older than the British monarchy. They were connected by a lintel of green ivy that pulsed faintly. For a moment, the space between the trees shimmered, a distortion in the air like heat rising from asphalt on a highway. Rory stepped forward. The ground felt spongy, yielding like a mattress filled with water. She passed through the shimmer. The transition wasn't a moment, it was a gasp. The heavy, grey sky of London vanished, replaced by a dome of indigo and violet so deep it hurt to look at it. The walls of the grove were vertical walls of interlocking vines and ferns that bloomed with flowers the size of dinner plates—orchids the color of bruised plums. "God," Rory whispered, the word lodging in her throat. "Welcome to the garden," Isolde said, her voice sounding suddenly distant. "Or the waiting room." Rory blinked, turning in a circle. The alien nature of the place hit her not as a visual shock, but as a pressure on her skull. The birdsong outside had been chirping and melodic; here, the air hummed. It was a low, vibrating frequency that seemed to vibrate in her teeth. She lifted her hand. In the real world, her skin looked pale and tired. Here, under the alien sun, she was glowing, faint blue veins standing out against her dark skin. "We shouldn't have come," Rory said, pulling her coat tighter. It felt flimsy now. "Nyx, check the perimeter." The shadow figure blurred, moving to the perimeter of the grove in a flash of motion. For a second, Nyx was solid, sharp edges defined by the play of light. Then, she was just a smear on the wall of ferns. "There are no bugs here," Nyx said, re-forming with a sigh. "No wolves. No cars. Just... things that shouldn't exist." "Things that want to eat you if you stop looking at them," Rory added, patting the pocket containing the Heartstone Pendant. It remained cool against her leg, indifferent to the magical storm raging around them. Isolde wandered toward a pool of water that rippled without wind. "Time flows crookedly here, Rory. The second hand on your watch maybe ticks, or maybe it screams." Rory looked at her wrist. The watch face was cracked, but the second hand was frozen. "Move," she said, her voice sharp. They began to trek deeper into the grove. The ground was covered in a carpet of moss so thick it felt like walking on a wet blanket. The silence here wasn't empty; it was heavy. It smelled of ancient pollen and dry earth. Every thirty paces or so, Rory would stumble. The ground felt uneven, but the ground was perfectly level. "It's the time dilation," Nyx said, appearing above Rory’s head for a split second before sinking back into the shadows of a massive fig tree. "One step in here takes ten outside. We are moving through sludge." "This place is a drug," Rory muttered. She raised the Fae blade, testing the weight in her hand. The metal gleamed with a pale, ghostly light. "Isolde, stop touching things. Nothing is real here." Isolde smiled, revealing teeth that were a little too sharp. "Nothing in London is real, either. We just have forgotten the rules." The oracle walked ahead, her silver hair floating as if she were submerged in water. She stepped carefully, her boots sinking slightly into the loam, yet she never wobbled. "Look at the flowers," Isolde instructed. Rory looked. A patch of bluebells was blooming, then instantly turning brown and shriveling, their petals turning to ash. Before the ash hit the ground, the stem snapped, and a new bloom erupted, vibrant and wet with sap. "It's eating itself," Rory said, disgust warring with awe. "Growth is violent," Isolde said, her eyes fixed on a white spider weaving a web that spanned three inches in the air. The spider was the size of a coin. "You seek a way to Hel? Or do you seek a way out of your own mistakes?" Rory stopped. She looked at the Fae blade, then at the shadowy shape of Nyx, and finally at the exiled Seer walking serenely through the madness. "This is a bad idea," Rory said, her voice trembling slightly. "I can feel it in my bones." "You feel the Boundary," Nyx said, materializing beside her. The Shade leaned in, her faint violet eyes boring into Rory’s. "It’s a wall. And we are standing right next to the dynamite." "We need to go back," Rory said, turning around. She stepped forward, eager to leave the vertigo-inducing paradise. She felt a hand on her shoulder. It wasn't warm, but it wasn't cold either. It felt like a ghostly pressure. She spun around. Isolde stood a few feet away, smiling that cryptic smile. She hadn't moved, yet the space between them had shifted. "I told you," Isolde said. "Time waits for no one, and it also waits for everyone." She pointed to the standing stones they had just passed. At the stones, the mist was swirling violently. The gap between the trees was closing, the vines reaching out to embrace them, the flowers blooming fast enough to create a wall of color that blurred into solid light. "We can't go back the way we came," Rory said, panic rising in her chest. She grabbed Isolde by the arm. The oracle was insubstantial, a ghost sliding through her grip. "Isolde!" "The way back is not through the stones," Isolde whispered, her voice echoing from everywhere at once. "It is through the sun, or beneath the root. Or perhaps... through the dream." The ground lurched beneath Rory’s boots. The trees, previously static pillars of wood and leaf, leaned in, their branches swaying as if awakened from a long nap. "Run!" Rory screamed. Nyx dissolved into a black puddle and reformed a few yards ahead, shifting solid just long enough to reach out a hand. "Here. Now. Before it remembers we are here." Rory turned and sprinted. The greenery blurred past her eyes. The air pressure pushed against her back, as if the very atmosphere wanted to crush them into the earth. She skidded to a halt, breathless, chest heaving. They had stopped at the edge of a small clearing dominated by a massive, gnarled tree that had a hollow in its trunk large enough to fit a car. Nyx was materializing, looking dazed. Isolde was nowhere to be seen, though the silver of her hair hung from the tree branches, fluttering in the windless air. Rory looked down. She could see her feet. Then, above her, the silver hair coalesced into a figure. "We have stopped," Isolde said, dropping gracefully from the branches. She landed with no sound, her footsteps vanishing into the grass. "For now."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.561
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1512
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"perfectly"
2"carefully"
3"slightly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1512
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"dancing"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count2
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"lurched"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"chill"
2"gloom"
3"stomach"
4"dancing"
5"footsteps"
6"echo"
7"pulsed"
8"shimmered"
9"silence"
10"echoing"
11"lurched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences111
matches
0"g with awe"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences111
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1506
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1249
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Shade2
Rory25
Isolde13
British1
London1
Nyx9
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Fae3
Seer1
persons
0"Blade"
1"Shade"
2"Rory"
3"Isolde"
4"Nyx"
5"Seer"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
globalScore0.499
windowScore0.333
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"tasted like a world trying to heal itself"
1"frequency that seemed to vibrate in her teeth"
2"felt like walking on a wet blanket"
3"felt like a ghostly pressure"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.664
wordCount1506
matches
0"not as a visual shock, but as a pressure on her skull"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean26.89
std15.05
cv0.56
sampleLengths
026
175
237
324
432
530
639
725
821
955
104
1148
1214
135
1459
159
1615
1751
1831
1918
2041
2120
2235
2328
2416
256
2643
2718
2837
2934
3022
3129
326
3338
349
3547
3626
3718
3832
3939
403
4120
4216
4310
4438
4532
4631
4727
483
4930
92.62% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences111
matches
0"was gone"
1"were connected"
2"was covered"
3"were submerged"
51.85% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs225
matches
0"was glowing"
1"was blooming"
2"was swirling"
3"was closing"
4"was materializing"
32.12% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences129
ratio0.039
matches
0"The scent of pine was gone, replaced by something sweeter—like crushed roses and ozone."
1"It wasn't the bite of winter; it was the kind of cold that you felt in your teeth, the kind that made your breath plume visible even though the fog had vanished."
2"The walls of the grove were vertical walls of interlocking vines and ferns that bloomed with flowers the size of dinner plates—orchids the color of bruised plums."
3"The birdsong outside had been chirping and melodic; here, the air hummed."
4"The silence here wasn't empty; it was heavy."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1255
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.036653386454183264
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.012749003984063745
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean11.67
std6.62
cv0.567
sampleLengths
013
113
224
327
424
513
624
716
88
914
1018
1110
1212
138
148
159
167
1715
1818
197
205
2116
226
2314
243
2532
264
2714
2812
2922
303
3111
325
339
3423
3527
369
3711
384
396
4020
4112
4213
434
4410
4517
4610
474
484
4916
42.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2868217054263566
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners37
64.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"Then, she was just a"
1"Then, above her, the silver"
ratio0.019
91.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences103
matches
0"It tasted like a world"
1"She didn’t draw it, but"
2"Her pale lavender eyes held"
3"Her voice was a mix"
4"It spun wildly, the needle"
5"She shoved it back into"
6"She turned toward a cluster"
7"It wasn't the bite of"
8"They reached the boundary."
9"They were connected by a"
10"She passed through the shimmer."
11"It was a low, vibrating"
12"She lifted her hand."
13"It felt flimsy now."
14"It remained cool against her"
15"she said, her voice sharp"
16"They began to trek deeper"
17"It smelled of ancient pollen"
18"She raised the Fae blade,"
19"She stepped carefully, her boots"
ratio0.32
3.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences103
matches
0"The mist clinging to Richmond"
1"It tasted like a world"
2"Rory adjusted the strap of"
3"She didn’t draw it, but"
4"Nyx drifted ahead, her violet"
5"The Shade hadn’t taken a"
6"Rory called out, her voice"
7"The woman with the waist-length"
8"Her pale lavender eyes held"
9"Her voice was a mix"
10"Rory nodded, checking the compass"
11"It spun wildly, the needle"
12"She shoved it back into"
13"The supernatural energy here pressed"
14"Nyx observed, the shadow figure"
15"She turned toward a cluster"
16"Rory followed, the air suddenly"
17"The scent of pine was"
18"The temperature dropped."
19"It wasn't the bite of"
ratio0.913
97.09% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"Before them stood two standing"
1"Before the ash hit the"
ratio0.019
50.26% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"At her hip, the Fae-Forged Blade rubbed against her thigh, a heavy, frigid weight that had nothing to do with the damp chill seeping through her coat."
1"The walls of the grove were vertical walls of interlocking vines and ferns that bloomed with flowers the size of dinner plates—orchids the color of bruised plum…"
2"Isolde smiled, revealing teeth that were a little too sharp."
3"The oracle walked ahead, her silver hair floating as if she were submerged in water."
4"A patch of bluebells was blooming, then instantly turning brown and shriveling, their petals turning to ash."
5"The gap between the trees was closing, the vines reaching out to embrace them, the flowers blooming fast enough to create a wall of color that blurred into soli…"
6"They had stopped at the edge of a small clearing dominated by a massive, gnarled tree that had a hollow in its trunk large enough to fit a car."
38.04% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Isolde said, her voice sounding suddenly distant"
1"she said, her voice sharp"
2"Rory said, her voice trembling slightly"
3"Isolde whispered, her voice echoing from everywhere at once"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Rory called out (call out)"
1"Nyx observed (observe)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
3"Rory added (add)"
4"Rory muttered (mutter)"
5"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
6"Rory screamed (scream)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.537
leniency1
rawRatio0.318
effectiveRatio0.318
75.4914%