Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY9NVMVEPB0SXAWB72F7RX

Run Details

Duration:
10.7s
Cost:
$0.002628

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station echoed with a hollow stillness that made Quinn's skin crawl. Fluorescent emergency lights flickered, casting sickly shadows across the concrete floor where the body lay crumpled like a discarded marionette. Quinn knelt, her worn leather watch catching a glint of light as she carefully examined the corpse. Something felt off. The victim—male, mid-thirties—showed no signs of traditional trauma. No blood. No obvious wounds. Just a look of absolute terror frozen on his pale features. "What do you make of this?" she muttered, more to herself than to her partner. Detective Rodriguez shifted uncomfortably. "Looks like a standard cardiac event. Guy probably had a heart attack." Quinn's sharp jaw tightened. Eighteen years on the force had taught her that nothing was ever that simple. Her fingers traced the outline of a strange marking partially hidden beneath the victim's collar—intricate symbols that looked more like an arcane script than anything medical. The station itself felt wrong. Beneath the usual musty underground smell, something else lingered. A faint trace of ozone. Burnt electricity. Something that reminded her of the unexplained circumstances surrounding her former partner's death three years ago. She pulled out an evidence bag, carefully extracting a small brass object from near the body. A compass. But not like any she'd seen before. Its face was etched with protective sigils, the needle quivering slightly despite the lack of movement. "Rodriguez, have forensics check this," she said, her voice crisp with military precision. "And I want a full background on our victim." The other detective looked skeptical but nodded. Quinn knew she had a reputation for seeing patterns others missed. Her instincts had solved cases that stumped entire departments. Her mind was already connecting threads. The location. The strange markings. The compass. Something told her this was more than a simple death. Far more.
total_cost0.002628

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
51.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount309
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Rodriguez"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount309
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"standard"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"flickered"
2"glint"
3"standard"
4"traced"
5"intricate"
6"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences32
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences32
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences34
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords305
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.74% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount273
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.47
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Quinn4
Detective1
Rodriguez1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Detective"
2"Rodriguez"
places(empty)
globalScore0.767
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences19
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount305
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
55.15% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean30.5
std10.46
cv0.343
sampleLengths
034
144
215
316
444
537
641
722
827
925
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences32
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs42
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences34
ratio0.059
matches
0"The victim—male, mid-thirties—showed no signs of traditional trauma."
1"Her fingers traced the outline of a strange marking partially hidden beneath the victim's collar—intricate symbols that looked more like an arcane script than anything medical."
86.55% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount277
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"usual musty underground smell,"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.04693140794223827
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.021660649819494584
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences34
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences34
mean8.97
std6.05
cv0.674
sampleLengths
014
120
217
33
48
52
63
711
815
94
1012
114
1214
1326
145
159
165
172
1816
1916
202
217
2216
2313
249
257
2611
279
286
292
303
312
3210
332
86.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5882352941176471
totalSentences34
uniqueOpeners20
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences26
matches
0"Just a look of absolute"
ratio0.038
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences26
matches
0"she muttered, more to herself"
1"Her fingers traced the outline"
2"She pulled out an evidence"
3"Its face was etched with"
4"she said, her voice crisp"
5"Her instincts had solved cases"
6"Her mind was already connecting"
ratio0.269
75.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount20
totalSentences26
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station echoed"
1"Quinn knelt, her worn leather"
2"Something felt off."
3"The victim—male, mid-thirties-showed no signs"
4"she muttered, more to herself"
5"Detective Rodriguez shifted uncomfortably."
6"Quinn's sharp jaw tightened."
7"Her fingers traced the outline"
8"The station itself felt wrong."
9"A faint trace of ozone."
10"Something that reminded her of"
11"She pulled out an evidence"
12"Its face was etched with"
13"she said, her voice crisp"
14"The other detective looked skeptical"
15"Quinn knew she had a"
16"Her instincts had solved cases"
17"Her mind was already connecting"
18"The strange markings."
19"Something told her this was"
ratio0.769
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences26
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences12
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station echoed with a hollow stillness that made Quinn's skin crawl."
1"Her fingers traced the outline of a strange marking partially hidden beneath the victim's collar—intricate symbols that looked more like an arcane script than a…"
2"Something that reminded her of the unexplained circumstances surrounding her former partner's death three years ago."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she muttered, more to herself than to her partner"
1"she said, her voice crisp with military precision"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
73.4688%