Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY9PA3RR7FV3Z475RHAAQN

Run Details

Duration:
9.9s
Cost:
$0.002622

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green sign flickered above the entrance, casting an emerald glow across the worn cobblestones of Soho. Inside The Raven's Nest, shadows danced between black and white photographs and weathered maps that hung like memories on the walls. Silas Blackwood polished a glass behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the dim light. His right hand—adorned with a silver signet ring—moved with practiced precision, each movement betraying decades of muscle memory from his intelligence days. The bell above the door chimed. A woman walked in, her straight black hair framing a face that held more tension than recognition. Aurora Carter scanned the bar, her bright blue eyes cutting through the dim atmosphere. Their eyes met. "Eva?" Silas's voice carried a note of surprise. "Not quite," Aurora said, sliding onto a barstool. "Rory Carter. I live upstairs." A flicker of something—recognition, maybe disappointment—crossed Silas's face. He set the glass down. "You look like her," he said. Aurora's fingers traced the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. A nervous habit from childhood. "So I've been told." The silence stretched between them, weighted with unspoken stories. Silas poured two glasses of whiskey without asking, a gesture that suggested he knew more than he was saying. "You're not what I expected," Aurora finally broke the silence. Silas raised an eyebrow. "And what did you expect?" "Someone... older. More worn down." She took a careful sip of whiskey. "A retired spy who runs a bar shouldn't look so..." She gestured vaguely. "Alive?" A ghost of a smile crossed his lips. Their conversation hung in the air, two strangers who weren't quite strangers, connected by threads of history neither fully understood.
total_cost0.0026216

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount284
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount284
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"tension"
2"scanned"
3"flicker"
4"traced"
5"silence"
6"unspoken"
7"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences23
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences23
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences26
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords278
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
44.07% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount236
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.12
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Blackwood1
Carter1
Aurora4
Silas5
persons
0"Blackwood"
1"Carter"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
globalScore0.441
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences16
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite strangers, connected by threads of history neither fully understood"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount278
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences26
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean18.53
std11.83
cv0.638
sampleLengths
039
138
237
33
48
513
613
76
820
928
1010
119
1225
139
1420
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences23
matches(empty)
37.40% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs41
matches
0"was saying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences26
ratio0.077
matches
0"His right hand—adorned with a silver signet ring—moved with practiced precision, each movement betraying decades of muscle memory from his intelligence days."
1"A flicker of something—recognition, maybe disappointment—crossed Silas's face."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount242
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.0371900826446281
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.012396694214876033
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences26
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences26
mean10.69
std5.82
cv0.544
sampleLengths
018
121
216
322
46
517
614
73
88
98
105
118
125
136
1411
155
164
179
1819
1910
204
215
2212
2313
249
2520
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.6153846153846154
totalSentences26
uniqueOpeners16
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences22
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences22
matches
0"His right hand—adorned with a"
1"Their eyes met."
2"He set the glass down."
3"She took a careful sip"
4"She gestured vaguely"
5"Their conversation hung in the"
ratio0.273
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount21
totalSentences22
matches
0"The neon green sign flickered"
1"Silas Blackwood polished a glass"
2"His right hand—adorned with a"
3"The bell above the door"
4"A woman walked in, her"
5"Aurora Carter scanned the bar,"
6"Their eyes met."
7"Silas's voice carried a note"
8"Aurora said, sliding onto a"
9"A flicker of something—recognition, maybe"
10"He set the glass down."
11"Aurora's fingers traced the small"
12"A nervous habit from childhood."
13"The silence stretched between them,"
14"Silas poured two glasses of"
15"Aurora finally broke the silence"
16"Silas raised an eyebrow."
17"She took a careful sip"
18"She gestured vaguely"
19"A ghost of a smile"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences22
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Inside The Raven's Nest, shadows danced between black and white photographs and weathered maps that hung like memories on the walls."
1"A woman walked in, her straight black hair framing a face that held more tension than recognition."
2"Their conversation hung in the air, two strangers who weren't quite strangers, connected by threads of history neither fully understood."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
70.2933%