Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY9W0YGRZSYWQEDBZTJFZN

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5.1
Duration:
2m 2s
Cost:
$0.046620
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain smeared the city into streaks of light and shadow. The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest bled over the pavement and painted everyone who passed in sickly colour. Harlow leaned against a lamppost across the road, collar up, hands deep in her coat pockets. Water gathered along the line of her sharp jaw and slipped under the collar. The worn leather strap of her watch tugged at damp skin each time she flexed her fingers. Her eyes never left the doorway of the bar. He stepped out at last. Hood up, shoulders hunched, plastic takeaway bag swinging at his side. Wrong for the weather; the bag sagged as if it carried bricks instead of food. He hesitated under the neon, checked the street. Harlow watched his gaze slide right over her. She pushed off the post. He moved north toward the main road. No umbrella, just the hood. Trainers hit puddles with the light stride of someone used to running. Her phone vibrated in her pocket. She ignored it, cut across traffic, drew close. He checked over his shoulder again. His gaze narrowed when it landed on her. He quickened his pace. Harlow matched it. Her breath came slower than his, trained and measured. Eighteen years of foot chases had carved grooves into her muscles. He crossed against the light and slipped between a black cab and a bus. The driver leaned on his horn. “Police,” Harlow called over the noise, her voice flat. “Stop where you are.” He didn’t even glance back. She swore under her breath and bolted after him, boots splashing filthy water up her trousers. The bus driver spat a curse as she dodged past his bumper. The suspect took off down a side street. The main drag’s glow vanished. The brick walls here pressed in and the street narrowed to an alley that stank of old beer and rotting takeaway. Rain drummed on overflowing bins. “You run, you add another charge,” her voice bounced off the walls. “Get lost!” His shout broke, more panic than bravado. He jerked the takeaway bag up like a shield, shoulder-checking an overflowing bin. Cans and bottles clattered over the wet ground. One rolled toward Harlow’s foot. She hopped over it, kept her stride. The alley spat them out onto another road, this one busier, streetlights glaring on slick tarmac. Cars crawled, tyres spitting dirty water. A double-decker wheezed past, windows fogged. Harlow closed the gap. She saw the damp dark hair at the edge of his hood, the twitch of his jaw. “Hands where I can see them.” He cut left without warning, vaulted a low barrier and dropped onto a set of stone steps that led down to a pedestrian underpass. Water streamed down the walls in greasy sheets and pooled on the concrete. Harlow followed. Her left knee twinged at the sudden descent, a reminder of a chase from years back and a fence that hadn’t given way. She ignored it and took the steps two at a time. By the time she reached the bottom, he’d already crossed the underpass and bounded up the far side. A group of teenagers in soaked hoodies scattered out of his way. “What’s his problem?” one of them muttered. “Him,” another jerked his chin as Harlow thundered past. She flashed her warrant card without breaking stride. “Met Police. Move.” They opened like a curtain. Back on street level, the city had shifted. Shopfronts leaned in close, narrow and crowded, their signs in mismatched fonts. A half-lit kebab shop. A shuttered tattoo studio. A charity shop with a warped mannequin staring out from behind steamed glass. Above, a sign pointed: Camden Town. He headed toward the Tube. Harlow’s chest pulled tight. Not from the run. From memory. Morris’s face flared behind her eyes, soaked in blood and tunnel grime, pupils blown wide with that last staggered breath. The wet concrete of the platform under her knees as she tried in vain to find the source of the bleeding that hadn’t made sense. The tunnels had never felt the same. She spat rain and went after the suspect. The entrance to the Underground loomed ahead, a dark, yawning mouth, stairs angling down. Commuters huddled past, shoulders hunched, heads bowed against the downpour. The suspect barged through them, earning curses and shoves. Harlow followed, her hand brushing the butt of her holstered pistol under her coat. London hadn’t changed for her; pages of policy and the same old restrictions. Firearms were a last resort. This felt like something else entirely. The air grew warmer as she descended, the mix of wet wool, cheap perfume, and metal. At the ticket barrier he didn’t slow, just vaulted through the gap by the attendant’s booth. The attendant jerked up. “Oi—” “Police,” Harlow snapped, flashing her warrant card, not pausing for any further questions. She pushed past the barrier as shouts rose behind her, boots clanging on metal. The suspect didn’t head for the main platform. He veered off toward a “Staff Only” door at the end of a side corridor. The fluorescent tubes here flickered, and water stains bloomed across the ceiling tiles. He rattled the handle. Locked. He dropped the russet takeaway bag for half a second, dug under his hoodie, and pulled something from a chain around his neck. Not a key. A small, pale shape, no longer than a thumb, smoothed with age. Bone. He pressed it to the lock. The metal clicked. The door swung in. He grabbed the bag and slipped through. Harlow slid to a halt, rain from her coat shoulders dripping onto the dirty linoleum. She stared at the door. It hung ajar. No one else had seen what he used. Commuters hurried past at the far end of the corridor, oblivious. She pushed the door with two fingers. The hinges didn’t squeal. No staff notices, no clutter of mops or cleaning supplies. Just a narrow concrete stairwell plunging down into dim orange light that pulsed as if with a slow heartbeat. The sound reached her next. A low, constant murmur, too steady for a single crowd. It rolled up the stairwell, thick with haggling voices, clinks of metal on metal, and something that didn’t fit any market she knew. A dry chime like glass teeth. Harlow listened for the suspect’s footsteps. Nothing. She stepped inside and pulled the door shut behind her. The noise of the Tube station cut off in an instant. Only the stairwell’s own air remained, cooler, dense. A thread of scent snaked up to her, strange and layered: incense, singed hair, metal polish, and the copper tang she knew far too well. Her thumb pressed against the familiar groove of her watch. Morris had given it to her after their first year on the job. She rubbed the leather clean of damp. “Not the time,” she muttered to the stubborn thought of him. Her radio crackled in her pocket at last. Dispatch’s voice rasped through the static. “DI Quinn, your location?” She drew it out, eyes on the orange glow below. “In pursuit, Camden Town Station. Suspect male, grey hoodie, jeans. Headed into restricted access. Possible link to Soho incident. I’ll update.” “Backup en route. Do not enter hazardous areas on your own.” The words hung between them. Her jaw clenched. “Noted.” She clipped the radio back to her belt. Then she descended. The steps grew slick under her boots, filmed with something more than water. Dark streaks scored the concrete, like old burn marks that refused to die. Her fingertips brushed the wall for balance, and grit came away under her hand. The orange light swelled. The murmur became voices. A woman haggling over a price. “That’s goat’s blood. You charged me half that last winter.” A man with a voice like rust. “Then winter came cheap.” Harlow slowed. Her hand hovered near her holster. The stairwell opened without warning. One more step and she stood on the lip of a vast, disused platform. The tracks themselves lay buried under rows of stalls and awnings, patched together from tarps and scavenged wood. The old station signs had been scraped off or painted over with symbols that swam if she looked too long. Lanterns hung from cables and hooks, casting a patchwork of colours: bruised purple, sickly green, fire yellow. The Veil Market breathed before her. No posters. No familiar adverts for phone plans or West End shows. Instead, banners made from stitched leather, some still bearing the faint shadow of hair. Crates. Tables. Blankets on the ground, each piled with things that glimmered or writhed or pulsed like organs. Her pulse calmed instead of racing. Habit. New scene. Assess and log. She stood at the edge and watched. The crowd moved in restless eddies. Some looked normal enough: men in damp overcoats, women in chunky knitwear and boots, faces weathered or smooth. Others didn’t. A tall figure in a hooded cloak that never quite landed on a colour, its edges blurred like heat haze. A person with eyes too pale, pupils a thin ring that mirrored the lantern flames. A child who held a glass jar pressed to her chest, something dark and many-legged inside it watching with more attention than she liked. At one stall, a man held out his arm as another hovered a small silver knife above his skin. The seller’s hands shook with age or strain while he traced symbols just shy of the man’s wrist. The smell of burnt salt and something sharper rose with each near-touch. Harlow scanned for the grey hoodie. There, by a pillar, halfway down the platform. The suspect stood stiff, takeaway bag clutched against his chest. He spoke to a man whose hair curled short against an olive-toned neck, a thin scar along his left forearm caught the lantern light each time he gestured. A Saint Christopher medallion glinted at his throat. The paramedic from the file. Tomás Herrera. License revoked. Suspected link to unregistered clinics. The name flashed across her memory with the neat font of casework. She drifted along the wall, half-shadowed, letting the flow of people shield her. No one paid her much attention. A few eyes lingered on the plain cut of her coat, the set of her shoulders. Not tourist, not trader. Something else. An old woman blocked her path, bones like hooked wire under thin skin, a basket on her arm filled with candles that burnt with blue flames. “You’re far from your beat.” Harlow kept moving. “Not buying.” “You already did.” The old woman sniffed. “In blood. Long ago.” Harlow brushed past, spine rigid. Herrera’s voice reached her, softened by distance. “You’re late. You know what this stuff does if it sits too long?” The suspect shifted. “Cops at the Nest. One of them tailed me.” Herrera’s gaze flicked over the space, sharp and quick. “Here?” “Lost her topside, I think.” Harlow eased behind a crate stacked with jars. Things floated in the murk: an eye that tracked on its own, a curled hand with webbed fingers, teeth threaded on wire. Herrera’s hand settled on the takeaway bag. “Relax. You made it. Bone got you in, didn’t it?” The suspect pulled the small white token from his hoodie again, let it dangle from its chain. In the lantern light the carving showed. Not random. Not a bit of scrap or jewellery. A tiny femur etched with lines that hooked into each other, no language she knew. “Would’ve been easier if you just met me at the bar,” the suspect muttered. “At the bar, anyone watches.” Herrera’s mouth barely moved. “Here, no one talks.” Harlow’s palms itched. She logged each word, each object, each face. Glances. Access rituals. The way the token fit that lock upstairs. Her radio gave a soft crackle in her belt, a reminder of another world above this one. Backup. Procedures. Forms. Her gaze snagged on the nearest stall. Teeth. Dozens of them in small cloth pouches, each tied with a different colour thread. Human, canine, some too long and too thin for either. A handwritten sign above, letters cramped. “Night-sleepers. Memory biters. Sweethearts.” The seller’s eyes met hers. Twin pools of ink. No white. “You look like a woman with regrets,” their voice poured over her like oil. “Don’t we all.” Her own voice sounded flat even to her. The seller smiled, threads of spit shining at the corners of their mouth. “Want one gone? Easy price.” “I’m working.” Harlow shifted away. Herrera took the takeaway bag and opened it enough for her to catch a glimpse. Vials racked in foam. Thick liquid in each, darker than blood. Not opaque. Something moved in several of them, twitching against the glass. Herrera’s voice dropped. “Market closes in thirty. After that, it all shifts. I’m not storing live draught anywhere above ground.” The suspect wiped his palm on his jeans. “It’s for them, yeah? Your … lot?” Herrera’s jaw tightened. “You get paid. You don’t ask that again.” The suspect dropped his gaze. Harlow’s attention flicked to the far end of the platform. A stone archway sunk into the wall, lined with bones instead of bricks, each one hammered into the mortar like nails. Two figures flanked it, faces wrapped in scarves, eyes dark above. In their hands, long rods tipped with carved vertebrae. They watched the flow of people who approached, each visitor pressing something small and pale into their palms. Bone tokens. Beyond the arch lay deeper shadow, a tunnel with light that pulsed a slow blue. She caught a slice of something on the other side: stalls with no lanterns, only jars that glowed from within, and shapes that didn’t move quite right. Herrera nudged the suspect toward that arch. “Payment first. Then we go through.” The suspect’s fingers shook as he cupped the bone token, thumb tracing the etchings. Harlow’s mouth dried. If he went through, she’d lose him. The tunnel beyond that arch did not belong to the city on any map. Her Met ID meant nothing down here. Her pistol might. Dispatch’s warning crawled back from memory. Do not enter hazardous areas on your own. She scanned the market again. No uniforms. No CCTV. No way to explain any of this in a report without earning an appointment with Occupational Health. Her hand closed on something cold. The old woman with the candles had drifted near again. She pressed an object into Harlow’s palm, wrapped her fingers around it. “You’ll need it if you go chasing rabbits,” the crone rasped. “They don’t open the bones for free.” Harlow looked down. A tiny fragment of bone lay in her hand, carved and smoothed. Different from the suspect’s. Smaller, with a spiral etched into one end, like a storm caught in miniature. “I didn’t—” “Already paid.” The woman’s grin showed three teeth, all sharp. “In grieving. In the tunnel. Years ago. Remember?” Morris’s face again. The unnatural way the blood had run uphill on the platform wall, abandoning gravity, streaking toward that dark gap where no train had come. Harlow pocketed the token. Fingers brushed the Saint Christopher medallion of Herrera across the platform as he shifted; it caught the lantern light again, a brief star in the murk. Her choice solidified. Stay at the edge, wait for backup, risk the trail going cold in a place that would vanish with the full moon. Or step in, follow them through the arch, into a world that had stolen DS Morris and left questions rotting in her file cabinets. She watched Herrera and the suspect join the small knot of people at the bone-lined gateway. One of the guards held out a gloved hand. “Token.” The suspect placed his bone into the palm. The guard’s fingers curled around it. For a heartbeat, the etched lines on the bone glowed, sinking into the glove, then vanished. “Market welcomes you.” Herrera followed, holding up his own bone sliver between two fingers. The guard dipped his head in a gesture that almost looked like respect. Harlow stepped away from the crate, the decision burning clean and simple in her chest. Her boots carried her toward the arch and the guards with their bone-tipped staff, into the press of bodies and flicker of impossible lights, her hand already closing around the token in her pocket.
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native_tokens_reasoning980
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.261
leniency0.522
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2731
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2731
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"quickened"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count2
4
word"thundered"
count1
5
word"blown wide"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count3
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count2
11
word"jaw clenched"
count1
12
word"charged"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"traced"
count1
16
word"scanned"
count2
17
word"flicked"
count2
18
word"etched"
count3
19
word"tracing"
count1
20
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"quickened"
2"measured"
3"reminder"
4"thundered"
5"blown wide"
6"loomed"
7"flickered"
8"pulsed"
9"footsteps"
10"familiar"
11"jaw clenched"
12"charged"
13"pulse"
14"racing"
15"traced"
16"scanned"
17"flicked"
18"etched"
19"tracing"
20"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences267
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences267
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences299
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2722
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount2476
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Harlow26
Camden1
Town1
Tube2
Underground1
Veil1
Market1
West1
End1
Saint2
Christopher2
Herrera12
Met1
Occupational1
Health1
Morris4
One3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Market"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Herrera"
7"Morris"
8"One"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"Tube"
3"West"
4"End"
globalScore0.975
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences180
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like something else entirely"
1"looked like respect"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2722
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences299
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs150
mean18.15
std16.42
cv0.905
sampleLengths
030
147
29
339
48
55
624
714
814
94
1023
1120
1213
135
1428
1539
1612
179
1833
1928
2021
216
2237
2336
2430
257
269
278
283
295
3041
316
325
3310
3445
357
368
3733
3838
3932
404
411
4213
4314
4436
455
4639
476
483
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences267
matches
0"been scraped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs397
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences299
ratio0.01
matches
0"Wrong for the weather; the bag sagged as if it carried bricks instead of food."
1"London hadn’t changed for her; pages of policy and the same old restrictions."
2"Fingers brushed the Saint Christopher medallion of Herrera across the platform as he shifted; it caught the lantern light again, a brief star in the murk."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2485
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"purple, sickly green, fire"
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.021730382293762576
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.002414486921529175
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences299
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences299
mean9.1
std6.21
cv0.682
sampleLengths
010
120
216
314
417
59
65
711
815
98
108
115
127
135
1412
156
168
176
188
194
203
219
2211
2314
246
259
264
275
2816
2912
308
315
3221
335
3412
359
3613
378
385
397
4016
416
426
434
4417
456
4624
4713
482
4923
51.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.34782608695652173
totalSentences299
uniqueOpeners104
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences240
matches
0"Just a narrow concrete stairwell"
1"Only the stairwell’s own air"
2"Then she descended."
3"Instead, banners made from stitched"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount65
totalSentences240
matches
0"Her eyes never left the"
1"He stepped out at last."
2"He hesitated under the neon,"
3"She pushed off the post."
4"He moved north toward the"
5"Her phone vibrated in her"
6"She ignored it, cut across"
7"He checked over his shoulder"
8"His gaze narrowed when it"
9"He quickened his pace."
10"Her breath came slower than"
11"He crossed against the light"
12"He didn’t even glance back."
13"She swore under her breath"
14"her voice bounced off the"
15"His shout broke, more panic"
16"He jerked the takeaway bag"
17"She hopped over it, kept"
18"She saw the damp dark"
19"He cut left without warning,"
ratio0.271
47.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount198
totalSentences240
matches
0"Rain smeared the city into"
1"The green neon sign of"
2"Harlow leaned against a lamppost"
3"Water gathered along the line"
4"The worn leather strap of"
5"Her eyes never left the"
6"He stepped out at last."
7"Hood up, shoulders hunched, plastic"
8"He hesitated under the neon,"
9"Harlow watched his gaze slide"
10"She pushed off the post."
11"He moved north toward the"
12"Trainers hit puddles with the"
13"Her phone vibrated in her"
14"She ignored it, cut across"
15"He checked over his shoulder"
16"His gaze narrowed when it"
17"He quickened his pace."
18"Harlow matched it."
19"Her breath came slower than"
ratio0.825
41.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences240
matches
0"By the time she reached"
1"If he went through, she’d"
ratio0.008
94.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences103
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest bled over the pavement and painted everyone who passed in sickly colour."
1"Just a narrow concrete stairwell plunging down into dim orange light that pulsed as if with a slow heartbeat."
2"It rolled up the stairwell, thick with haggling voices, clinks of metal on metal, and something that didn’t fit any market she knew."
3"The old station signs had been scraped off or painted over with symbols that swam if she looked too long."
4"A child who held a glass jar pressed to her chest, something dark and many-legged inside it watching with more attention than she liked."
5"An old woman blocked her path, bones like hooked wire under thin skin, a basket on her arm filled with candles that burnt with blue flames."
6"They watched the flow of people who approached, each visitor pressing something small and pale into their palms."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow called, her voice flat"
63.04% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"them muttered (mutter)"
1"Harlow snapped (snap)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"The old woman sniffed (sniff)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.109
leniency0.217
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.174
89.1922%