Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY9XGZPNWB9ZW88CHCS7EH

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Duration:
10m 12s
Cost:
$0.019414
Provider:
DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked and I pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau filled the frame, his charcoal suit drinking the corridor's dim light. He leaned on his ivory cane, the silver ferrule scratching Eva's parquet floor. His platinum hair caught the glow from the streetlamp outside, slicked back and severe. "You changed the locks," he said. "You taught me how." Ptolemy streaked past my ankles and vanished behind the sofa. Smart cat. Lucien stepped forward. I didn't move. We stood toe to toe in the narrow entry. His amber eye caught the lamplight while the black one stayed flat as obsidian. Marseille cologne cut through the smell of old books and turmeric from downstairs. The heterochromia should have looked ridiculous, mismatched like buttons sewn on wrong. Instead, it made him look predatory, unfinished. "You're bleeding," he observed. I glanced at my left wrist. The crescent scar had split open, a thin red line bisecting the pale tissue. "Paper cut." "From research or evasion?" "Both." I shifted, blocking the view of the scattered scrolls on Eva's table. "State your business, Moreau. I'm working." He reached into his breast pocket. I flinched. He noticed, his jaw tightening, but he moved slowly, extracting a folded square of heavy cream cardstock. "Your former landlord in Cardiff filed eviction paperwork yesterday. For a Ms. Laila Carter." My stomach dropped. Laila. The name I used when I fled Evan. "That's not me anymore." "It is to anyone with access to the Land Registry and a grudge." He extended the card. "Evan's out, Aurora. Three days early for good behaviour." I didn't take the paper. The scar on my wrist throbbed. "You came all this way to deliver bad news? How charitable." "I came because Evan hired three men from the Avaros realm to find you. Half-breeds. Nasty tempers." He tapped his cane against the floorboards. "They'll check Silas's bar first. Then here." He stepped inside without an invitation. The flat smelled of patchouli and old paper, Eva's particular brand of chaos. Lucien navigated the narrow path between teetering stacks of occult texts with the ease of a man who'd memorized every hazard. Ptolemy watched from atop the bookshelf, his orange tabby fur bristling, tail twitching in a zig-zag pattern of distress. "Researching something specific?" Lucien picked up a scroll, his gloved fingers unrolling the vellum. "Summoning circles? For someone who claims to want a normal life, you surround yourself with abnormal things." "Normal doesn't exist. You proved that when you showed me what Evan really was." "I showed you the truth. You chose to run from it." "I chose to survive it." "And yet you came to London." He set the scroll down and turned. The amber eye caught the lamplight, warm and terrible. "Not Manchester. Not Edinburgh. You chose to live above Silas's bar, two streets from my office. Battleground, not sanctuary." The flat suddenly felt smaller, the walls of stacked research notes pressing inward like a constricting throat. "Why would demons from your father's territory involve themselves with a human abuser?" "Because Evan promised them something you stole when you left." Lucien's gaze dropped to my wrist, to the scar. "The crescent mark. It's not from a childhood accident, is it?" My hand curled into a fist, hiding the pale sickle shape. "Get out." "It matches the blade in this cane." He twisted the ivory handle. A thin glint of steel emerged, curved like a claw. "Evan wanted to brand you as property. You took the knife instead. My knife." The air left the room. Three years compressed into the space between heartbeats. The night I'd packed a single bag, the night I'd cut myself free of Evan's grip and dripped blood on the Cardiff carpet. Lucien had been there at the edges, watching, waiting. I'd thought he was just another fixer Silas knew. I'd thought he wouldn't care. "You left it embedded in his shoulder," Lucien continued, his voice dropping to that dangerous register that had always made my skin tighten. "I retrieved it. I kept it. Waiting for the day you'd understand what it truly signified." "You knew," I whispered. "I know everything in this city." He stepped closer, crowding me against the doorframe. His hand rose, not touching, just hovering near my cheek. "I knew you were too proud to ask for help. Too stubborn to accept it when offered. So I waited." "For what? For me to crawl back?" "For you to stop running." His thumb finally grazed my jaw, calloused and warm, then traced the rough skin of my fingers. "Working hard," he murmured, noting the callouses from hauling Golden Empress delivery bags up five flights of stairs. "The men Evan sent aren't human. They won't be stopped by pepper spray and a brave face, Rory." My name on his tongue felt like a spell. I hated that it still affected me, after eighteen months of silence. After he'd let me walk away without a word. "You let me go," I said. "You needed to breathe." "I needed you to fight for me." The silence stretched, brittle and sharp. Outside, a siren wailed past Brick Lane, dopplering into nothing. Lucien's expression fractured, something raw and hungry showing through the polished veneer. "I have been fighting," he said, his voice dropping to a low timbre that vibrated in my chest. "Evan's businesses are ashes. His accounts are frozen. The only thing left standing between him and a prison cell, or a shallow grave, is his obsession with retrieving what he considers his property." "I'm not property." "No." Lucien's hand slid to the back of my neck, fingers threading into my black hair. "You're the woman who carved a piece of herself out rather than submit. And I'm the fool who respected your autonomy enough to let you bleed alone." His mouth was inches from mine, the smell of bergamot and danger overwhelming. My back pressed against the doorframe, the wood digging into my spine. I should push him away. I should scream. Instead, I grabbed his silk tie and pulled. Our mouths crashed together, teeth clicking, all the anger and fear transmuting into something violent and necessary. He groaned, a French curse slipping against my lips as he pressed me harder into the wall. The cane clattered to the floor, forgotten. His hands were everywhere, mapping the territory he'd stayed away from, and I was burning, drowning, furious that he'd stayed away so long. A sharp rapping sounded from the window. Not the door. The window. Second floor. Brick Lane. Lucien broke the kiss, his body shielding mine automatically. We both looked at the glass. Three long scratches appeared, gouging deep into the pane from the outside. The glass didn't break. It melted, dripping like candle wax, and through the hollow space a grey hand reached in, fingers too long, joints bending wrong. "Too late," Lucien breathed. He retrieved his cane with a fluid motion, twisting the blade free. "They brought a shatterling." The window exploded inward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"suddenly"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"navigated"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"grave"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"throbbed"
2"navigated"
3"sanctuary"
4"glint"
5"traced"
6"silence"
7"fractured"
8"vibrated"
9"grave"
10"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1167
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.10% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount765
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva3
Ptolemy2
Evan2
Cardiff1
Silas1
Golden1
Empress1
Brick2
Lane2
Lucien11
French1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.781
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a spell"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1167
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean24.31
std18.59
cv0.765
sampleLengths
050
16
24
312
461
54
622
74
819
939
1016
1126
1222
1331
1459
1531
1614
1711
185
1941
2030
2130
2213
2336
2459
2539
264
2744
287
2958
3030
316
324
337
3428
3551
363
3743
3833
398
4064
417
425
434
4415
4538
4620
474
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs146
matches
0"was burning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences111
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount766
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02741514360313316
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005221932114882507
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean10.51
std6.41
cv0.61
sampleLengths
010
113
213
314
46
54
610
72
83
93
109
1114
1213
1312
147
154
166
1714
182
194
2013
216
226
232
2417
2514
263
271
288
294
3017
319
325
336
3411
3524
367
376
3813
3921
4019
4114
4217
4314
4411
455
4613
479
4819
4917
56.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.36936936936936937
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners41
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"Instead, it made him look"
1"Instead, I grabbed his silk"
ratio0.028
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences72
matches
0"He leaned on his ivory"
1"His platinum hair caught the"
2"I didn't move."
3"We stood toe to toe"
4"His amber eye caught the"
5"I glanced at my left"
6"I shifted, blocking the view"
7"He reached into his breast"
8"He noticed, his jaw tightening,"
9"My stomach dropped."
10"He extended the card"
11"I didn't take the paper."
12"He tapped his cane against"
13"He stepped inside without an"
14"He set the scroll down"
15"My hand curled into a"
16"He twisted the ivory handle"
17"I'd thought he was just"
18"I'd thought he wouldn't care."
19"He stepped closer, crowding me"
ratio0.5
8.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences72
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked and"
1"Lucien Moreau filled the frame,"
2"He leaned on his ivory"
3"His platinum hair caught the"
4"Ptolemy streaked past my ankles"
5"Lucien stepped forward."
6"I didn't move."
7"We stood toe to toe"
8"His amber eye caught the"
9"Marseille cologne cut through the"
10"The heterochromia should have looked"
11"I glanced at my left"
12"The crescent scar had split"
13"I shifted, blocking the view"
14"He reached into his breast"
15"He noticed, his jaw tightening,"
16"My stomach dropped."
17"The name I used when"
18"He extended the card"
19"I didn't take the paper."
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He noticed, his jaw tightening, but he moved slowly, extracting a folded square of heavy cream cardstock."
1"Lucien navigated the narrow path between teetering stacks of occult texts with the ease of a man who'd memorized every hazard."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Lucien picked up, his gloved fingers unrolling the vellum"
1"Lucien's hand slid, fingers threading into my black hair"
41.30% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"Lucien continued (continue)"
2"I whispered (whisper)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"Lucien breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.217
83.0458%