Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYA0B5HJZ7H6QEY6SNK1JG

Run Details

Duration:
10.9s
Cost:
$0.002556

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station echoed with a hollow stillness that set Detective Harlow Quinn's teeth on edge. Her leather-strapped watch caught the dim emergency lighting as she crouched beside the chalk outline, boot treads leaving faint marks on the dusty concrete floor. "This doesn't make sense," she muttered, her salt-and-pepper hair catching the harsh overhead light. Detective Marcus Reyes shifted uncomfortably. "Looks like a standard ritualistic killing to me. Multiple puncture wounds, precise placement." Quinn's sharp jaw tightened. She'd seen enough supernatural crime scenes in her eighteen years on the force to know this was anything but standard. The body had been positioned with deliberate care - each limb angled exactly twenty-seven degrees from the central axis, hands positioned palm-up in a pattern that suggested something more than mere murder. She pulled on a latex glove, carefully examining the wound patterns. The punctures weren't random. They formed a complex geometric design that reminded her of something she'd seen in her partner Morris's old case files - before he disappeared three years ago. "Look at the spacing," Quinn said, her brown eyes narrowing. "These aren't random stab wounds. This is a map." Reyes scoffed. "A map? It's a crime scene, Quinn. Not some mystical treasure hunt." She ignored him, pulling a small brass compass from her jacket pocket. The verdigris-coated instrument was a relic from her last encounter with the supernatural - a Veil Compass that could detect supernatural energy. The needle trembled, then spun wildly before settling in an unexpected direction. Something was very wrong here. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden held secrets. Quinn could feel them pressing against the edges of perception, like whispers just beyond hearing. This crime scene was a message - but to whom?
total_cost0.002556

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
65.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount291
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount291
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"standard"
count2
2
word"complex"
count1
3
word"encounter"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"standard"
2"complex"
3"encounter"
4"trembled"
5"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences19
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences19
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences22
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords289
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount247
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube2
Detective2
Harlow1
Quinn4
Marcus1
Reyes2
Morris1
Veil1
Compass1
Camden1
persons
0"Detective"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Marcus"
4"Reyes"
5"Morris"
6"Camden"
places(empty)
globalScore0.69
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences14
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount289
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences22
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean28.9
std16.18
cv0.56
sampleLengths
042
114
218
356
442
519
614
746
85
933
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences19
matches
0"been positioned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs38
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences22
ratio0.182
matches
0"The body had been positioned with deliberate care - each limb angled exactly twenty-seven degrees from the central axis, hands positioned palm-up in a pattern that suggested something more than mere murder."
1"They formed a complex geometric design that reminded her of something she'd seen in her partner Morris's old case files - before he disappeared three years ago."
2"The verdigris-coated instrument was a relic from her last encounter with the supernatural - a Veil Compass that could detect supernatural energy."
3"This crime scene was a message - but to whom?"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount249
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.0321285140562249
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.01606425702811245
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences22
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences22
mean13.14
std7.77
cv0.592
sampleLengths
017
125
214
35
413
54
620
732
811
94
1027
1110
129
132
1412
1512
1622
1712
185
198
2015
2110
93.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5909090909090909
totalSentences22
uniqueOpeners13
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences18
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences18
matches
0"Her leather-strapped watch caught the"
1"she muttered, her salt-and-pepper hair"
2"She'd seen enough supernatural crime"
3"She pulled on a latex"
4"They formed a complex geometric"
5"She ignored him, pulling a"
ratio0.333
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount18
totalSentences18
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station echoed"
1"Her leather-strapped watch caught the"
2"she muttered, her salt-and-pepper hair"
3"Detective Marcus Reyes shifted uncomfortably."
4"Quinn's sharp jaw tightened."
5"She'd seen enough supernatural crime"
6"The body had been positioned"
7"She pulled on a latex"
8"The punctures weren't random."
9"They formed a complex geometric"
10"Quinn said, her brown eyes"
11"She ignored him, pulling a"
12"The verdigris-coated instrument was a"
13"The needle trembled, then spun"
14"Something was very wrong here."
15"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
16"Quinn could feel them pressing"
17"This crime scene was a"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences18
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"They formed a complex geometric design that reminded her of something she'd seen in her partner Morris's old case files - before he disappeared three years ago."
1"The verdigris-coated instrument was a relic from her last encounter with the supernatural - a Veil Compass that could detect supernatural energy."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn said, her brown eyes narrowing"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.4
69.4022%