Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYA9CA7MJFBMXQN8QEJ969

Run Details

Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.003884
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest breathed rain-washed air as if it had just exhaled a long sigh. The green neon sign above the door hummed, a tired beacon for late arrivals and long-buried conversations. Maps hung on the walls like old weather, and photographs in black and white kept time in flourished frames. A bookshelf at the far corner housed a door that wasn’t a door at all, a secret room where meetings slipped out of daylight and into the weathered quiet between strangers. Aurora Carter stepped inside and let the door sigh shut behind her. The air smelled of citrus and rain-washed brick, of copper and sour beer. Her eyes, bright blue, scanned the room in a single, practiced sweep, pausing on the far end where a familiar silhouette stood behind the bar. Silas Blackwood hadn’t changed in any obvious way, except for the way the room seemed to tilt toward him whenever he moved. Rory wore a coat that hid the lean lines she’d acquired—lines that wouldn’t have belonged to a girl who’d grown up chasing deadlines and late buses in Cardiff. Her hair was the same straight, shoulder-length black, and the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the neon glow as she rolled up her sleeve half a turn, just enough to remind herself it existed. Rory: I wasn’t sure you’d still be running this brand of trouble at this hour. Silas: Trouble’s cheap here. It comes with the chairs and the smoke. He didn’t look up, just kept his glass steady in the glow of the backbar light and the green sign that refused to blink away the night. The door chimed again as another patron found a stool, but Rory’s attention stayed on the man who had once taught her more in a whisper than any lecture hall ever did. He looked older now, with a thinner line to his mouth, the kind that came from years of hearing too many plans whispered in the dark and never quite trusting the daylight that followed. Rory moved closer, letting the quiet of the room press in like a hand on the back of her neck. The scent of old wood and the tang of a rainstorm clung to her coat. Rory: It’s been a while, Silas. I almost forgot your bar had a memory. Silas: Bars keep what they’re fed. He finally looked up, hazel eyes steady, the weight in them as familiar as the signet ring he wore on his right hand, a silver circle that caught the room’s neon and tossed little sparks across the surface of the glass. He set the ring against a napkin, a soft click that sounded like a question asked and answered at once. A moment stretched between them, thick enough to tilt the air. Rory’s glance flicked to the bookshelf behind the bar, to the seam where the wood met its secret world. The door to the back room lay there, patient as a rumor. Rory: I’ve done two deliveries and quit thinking about what might have followed, just to stand here and pretend time hasn’t cut a string between us. Silas: Time cuts what it wants, Rory. He fixed his eyes on her with the same measured calm a man uses when he’s watching a target walk into a trap and is given no choice but to smile. You can still hear the footsteps. Rory: Cardiff feels like a lifetime ago and yesterday both. She lowered her sleeve and let the line of her jaw harden, the way a person does when a memory threatens to drag them under. I’ve got a life now, and I’ve learned to keep it upright. Silas: You’ve learned to walk with the weight, then. He finally moved, lifting a glass to his lips but drawing the moment out by letting the glass hover a tremor above the surface, catching the light, then setting it down with a soft sigh. Your life doesn’t look like the one you left behind. Rory: It never does. I’m not the girl who used to sketch the map of London on napkins just to remind myself there was a way out of every door we walked through. She chuckled, though it lacked the spark of conviction. I’m the one who delivers things for a living now. A quiet job, until it isn’t. Silas studied her, a quiet calculation behind his eyes. The muscles along his jaw tightened, and the limp in his left leg made a faint sound as he shifted to plant his weight more solidly on his good knee. Silas: People need quiet things. Quiet rooms. He gestured toward the hidden back room with a tilt of his head that seemed almost affectionate. You ever think you’d end up here, Rory? Rory: Not in a thousand, old friend. She let the words drift, not admitting how the thought had gnawed at her for years—the possibility that she might circle back to the place she’d once thought she’d left behind for good. The room’s shadow seemed to listen, eager to keep its own counsel. The bar’s murmur swelled and ebbed around them, like a tide they’d learned to ride with their eyes closed. Rory’s gaze slid toward Silas’s hands, the way his fingers were callused and precise, the way the right-hand ring looked when it caught a glint of neon and blazed for a heartbeat before returning to its quiet silver. Rory: I came here because it felt like a shelf in a storm could hold me up long enough to think about you without the thought collapsing into something else. Silas: You’ve learned to stabilize yourself on smaller things, then. He tipped the breath of a smile into his words, and it wasn’t a cruel smile, not exactly. It was the smile of a man who has spent years untangling people, deciding when to push and when to let go. You’ve learned to trust your own weather. Rory: I’ve learned to trust what I can see, not what I want to see. She pulled a chair out and seated herself, careful to place her weight evenly, not letting her shawl brush the surface of the bar in a way that drew attention. You’re running a front, aren’t you? A room that’s a room and nothing more? Silas: The Nest is a stage and a shelter, sometimes both. He leaned forward slightly, the green glow catching the lines around his eyes, making him look more like the seasoned operative the town whispered about than the bar owner the tourists photographed. The room has doors you can name, and doors you pretend don’t exist. The door you’ve come through tonight isn’t the one you’re meant to trust. Rory looked away, toward the bookshelf and then back to him. The moment she found his gaze again, it carried something of a shield she hadn’t expected from him. He wore his years like a suit of quiet armor, and the knee’s limp reminded her of the cost of every choice that had led to this moment. Rory: I’m not here to pry into your business, Silas. If you figure you want to keep some parts in the shadows, I won’t pretend I don’t understand. Silas: You’ve always known that I don’t pretend anything, Rory. He did not rebuff the honesty in her statement; he pressed it with a measured breath, as if to steady the room around them. The ring on his finger flashed again, and the hallways of memory trembled at the gleam. A breath of silence settled between them, a space full of unspoken years. Rory traced a finger along the edge of the counter, watching the glass tremble just a fraction before settling. Rory: You taught me to read a room like a map. To notice the corners and the footprints. I’ve kept that. I’ve learned to watch the door and listen for the sound a foot makes when it slides across the floor. Silas: Those are still the skills that keep you alive, then. He spoke softly, his voice lower, a trick he’d learned in nights spent listening to conversations that never happened in daylight. The Nest hummed with the quiet of a bar at midnight, with people who wanted to disappear for a moment and pretend the world hadn’t moved an inch. Rory: It’s more than that now. It’s not just survival. It’s a plan, or a version of one, something I don’t admit to myself most days. She reopened the sleeve and let the scar rest against the pale skin of her wrist, a small line of memory and proof of something she’d endured a long time ago. Silas: A plan requires trust, Rory. He considered the line of her wrist as if it answered something more than words could. People trust the wrong things, and the right things hide in plain sight. Rory: I’ve learned to trust the clock more than the people who set it. She looked him in the eye, unflinching. I came here to tell you something you already know and to ask you something you wouldn’t say aloud. Silas turned his glass in slow circles, the lime-green reflection throwing bars of color across his face. The signet ring glinted once more. Silas: Then say it. Rory: I’m not the same person who left, Silas. Not in the head or the heart. I don’t know if that’s good or bad. She shrugged, a small movement that carried more weight than it should have. I’ve learned to live with the parts that don’t fit, to pretend the quiet is enough. Silas: The world isn’t kind to people who pretend for too long. He set the glass down and studied her for a long moment, his expression unmasked in a way it hadn’t allowed himself to be in years. The lines around his eyes deepened as if the years themselves pressed there when life offered him a truth he hadn’t anticipated. Rory: There were days I woke up and didn’t remember who I was supposed to be anymore. There were nights I remembered perfectly and regretted every decision that brought me to that moment. Silas: You’ve learned to negotiate that memory instead of letting it own you. The Nest is a good place to test that theory. A quiet laugh moved through Rory, brittle and bright at once, and she found her gaze drawn to the bookshelf. The back room’s secretive invitation hovered in the space between them, a rumor that existed in every corner of the Nest. Rory: I used to have a simple plan, you know. It started with Cardiff and the quiet hum of a future I could almost hear. She paused, letting the words settle. I was going to study law, finish something I’d left half-done when the door slammed on my past. Silas: Plans have the habit of changing when you’re not paying attention. He did not sugarcoat the truth. If you’ve come back to remember the hinge that time forgot, you’re not the only one. Rory studied him again, noting how the years had etched his face with careful lines, as if time itself had authored his expression and then stepped back to observe the result. The knee’s limp remained, a silent punctuation mark that reminded both of them that some wounds don’t heal so cleanly. Rory: Eva told me London would teach me what Cardiff forgot. She paused, the memory tugging at her throat. Eva’s name felt like a doorway she’d once walked through, a doorway she’d left open in case someone followed. Silas: Eva is still here, in some form or other. He did not elaborate, letting the statement rest in the air between them, a shared familiarity that was almost a test. Rory: She’s a compass I learned not to trust. Rory’s voice softened, almost to a whisper. I came here tonight because this city can swallow a person whole and spit out the pieces it thinks it can reuse. I wanted to be sure I hadn’t become something else that could swallow me back. Silas: You’re still you, Rory. The words slipped out with a weight to them, a quiet kind of certainty that respected the truth she carried in her bones. You’re not a reflection of your mistakes, you’re a record of your choices. Rory: That record is a map I don’t know how to read anymore. She looked toward the secret door again, a glimmer of something like longing crossing her face before she pressed it down. I came to ask you what you fear in your own life. Not what you fear for me. Silas: Fear changes shape with the person who carries it. He shifted, and the chair creaked under him as if protesting another year of secrets. The room behind the bookshelf breathes when you do. It’s the only place in this building where a man can pretend the world outside hasn’t grown teeth. Rory: I’ve learned to swallow a lot of teeth and not flinch. She let the words sit, then added softly: I’ve learned to keep moving. Silas: You’ve learned to stay ahead of the dark, or at least not let it catch you on a bad night. He paused, eyes drifting to the silver signet ring, as if counting the lives it had touched.This ring has watched a great many plans go to ground, Rory. You’ve watched the same thing happen to the people you cared about. Rory: I’m not here to talk about the ring or the past as a museum piece. I’m here because I’m tired of pretending the present isn’t made of the same dust as yesterday. Silas: Then tell me what you want to do with today. He leaned back, giving the room permission to listen as if it had a say in their lives. Tell me what you want to save. Rory: Right now? A few hours of not being someone else’s memory. Just a little tonight, a thread to pull when all of it starts to pull me under again. She brushed a strand of hair from her cheek, then hesitated, as if she were about to name something she’d guarded too long. Silas: You always did have a talent for choosing the moment you spoke, not the moment you were told. He tilted his head, a semblance of a smile returning. You’ve never needed a loud stage to matter. Rory: I’m not the same person who left Cardiff with Eva’s name on my lips, not the one who carried Evan’s shadow for years. She drew a slow breath, and the room seemed to lean closer. I’ve learned not to measure worth by the distance I’ve moved, but by the weight of what I carry when I return to a place. Silas: The weight is heavier than the body you wear. The door between rooms hummed softly, the sound almost inaudible yet insistent, like a memory trying to slip free. You’ve come back with something in your pockets, Rory. What is it you truly carry? Rory’s eyes didn't falter. She looked at him with the quiet conviction that had kept her alive on streets and between shifting hours. She pulled a small envelope from inside her coat, not a grand gesture, but enough to make a certain moment in the Nest feel heavier. Rory: It’s not a deed or a plan, but a name. She slid the envelope across the bar where the edge of the counter met the wood, and the envelope stopped just short of his hand, as if it were waiting for consent to be opened. She kept talking, voice steady, eyes on him. I’ve learned to write down the names of the people I can’t forget and pretend they don’t belong to me anymore. This one belongs to someone I’m trying to stop from slipping away. Silas reached forward without touching the envelope, earning the room’s quiet as if the air itself paused. He palmed the envelope, then opened it with a slow, deliberate motion that suggested he was unfolding a map rather than a letter. Silas: It’s the past you’re asking me to carry, or the future you’re bargaining with. He glanced at the contents—a handful of photographs, a few loose papers, a name scrawled in a neat script. The handwriting was familiar to him, and his expression shifted subtly, a sign he was listening not only to the words but to the tremor in her breath. Rory: A letter from someone I once trusted. She spoke not aloud but with the weight of the truth she carried in her chest, the truth that she dared not release into the air unless she could see what it did to the room. I want you to tell me what you think it means that I’m still holding on to someone else’s fear. Silas: People carry fear for others because it’s easier than carrying it for themselves. He looked up from the papers, meeting her gaze with an intensity that was almost tender. The Nest has learned to become a library for those who don’t know how to shelve their own histories. Rory: It means I’m not just moving through London anymore. It means I want to decide what I carry next. Not what carries me. Silas: And you’ve found something you’re willing to fight for. He studied the photographs more closely, as if the faces in them could tell him something a map never could. Tell me who. Rory: Eva’s name sits at the edge of the page, along with a man she once trusted. The handwriting is hers, yes, but it’s the tremor that follows—someone else’s fear. The letter is a thread to pull us both back into each other’s lives for a moment. Silas: You’re not pulling me back, Rory. You’re reminding yourself of the ground you’ve already walked and what you chose to leave behind when you chose your own path. He paused, letting the weight of his words settle, as if the room itself could hold the moment still. The door behind the bookshelf whispered. Rory: I know what I’m asking for isn’t simple, Silas. Not for you, not for me. But I want a line of daylight between two nights we’ve lived through—the one that taught us to survive and the one that almost killed us. Silas: Then you’ll find daylight in the ordinary, not the grand gesture. He set the envelope down next to his glass, careful not to disturb the delicate balance of the space that existed between the spoken word and the unspoken one. The Nest isn’t a sanctuary for heroes, Rory; it’s a ledger for what you’ve learned to live with. Rory: I came back to see if you could remember the old codes—how we spoke without speaking, how a plan could hinge on a single breath. She smiled, though there was no warmth in it, only the memory of it. I didn’t come to borrow protection or to demand answers. I came to see if there was room left for who I used to be in the person I’ve become. Silas: The codes still work if you’re patient enough to listen. He glanced toward the door, toward the hidden room, and then back to her. You’ve carried a lot of quiet with you, Rory. The quiet is not your enemy; it’s your map. Rory: Silence can be a weapon or a shelter. She let the words drift, then spoke with a sudden clarity that surprised her own voice. I want to do something for once without thinking of what it costs someone else. Not just for me, but for the people I’ve carried in memory. Silas: Then tell me what you’re willing to risk. He leaned forward, his tone more intimate, as if the room itself leaned in to hear. The silver ring flashed again, catching the neon glow and turning the moment into a small, bright punctuation. Rory: I want to walk out of here knowing I didn’t leave a mark behind that makes the future harder for someone I care about. I want to choose a way forward that isn’t a trap I’m only now learning how to escape. Silas: A choice implies consequences, Rory. But it also implies agency. He set the papers back into the envelope, guiding it with quiet purpose toward the edge of the bar where it could be picked up later by someone who deserved to carry it. If you’re ready to face that, you won’t be walking alone. The Nest can be a partner if you want it to be. Rory looked at him, letting the weight of his words press into the hollow she’d carried for years. She thought of Eva and of the life she’d chosen to let go, of the long corridor of days she’d walked through to arrive at this moment, and of the handwriting that would always connect the past to this present. Rory: I’ve spent too long trying not to see what’s in front of me. She paused, then shrugged, a half-lelt of self-deprecating humor that didn’t quite land. I don’t know if there’s a future where I can look back without flinching, but I’ll take a shot at it. The older she grew, the more she respected the line she’d learned to walk. Silas: Good. He spoke softly, almost a caress for the admission he’d waited years to hear. You’ll need two things: a plan that doesn’t end you where you started, and a friend who knows how to disappear when the night demands it. Rory: I’ve got both of those, for now. She hesitated, then added, almost as if confessing a secret she’d kept even from herself: I’m not sure if I’ll stay in London, or if I’ll return to Cardiff when the wind shifts. If I leave, it won’t be because I failed here. It’ll be because I finally learned to choose. Silas: The day you decide, I’ll be the last to know what you’ve done and the first to see what you’ve become. He rose slightly from his stool, a gesture that invited a temporary alliance rather than a final parting. If you’re serious about a life that has room for your own footprint, you’ll step through that bookshelf and into daylight on your own terms. Rory: And if I’m not? She kept her gaze steady, the question unspoken but loud enough to echo through the room. If I’m not, I’ll circle back here and tell you I’ve lost the thread again. Silas: Then I’ll be here, but not for long. He let that settle, a quiet promise that glowed in the green light like an unspoken oath. The Nest won’t hold forever. But as long as the door’s open, you’ll have the space to decide. Rory stood, the chair’s legs rasping softly against the floor as she pushed away. She slid the envelope toward him with a careful, almost ceremonial touch, as if she could pass along a part of herself in that thin rectangle of paper and ink. Rory: If you hear the sound of someone breathing on a map, you’ll know it’s me deciding which city deserves to keep me. Silas reached out and took the envelope, his fingers brushing hers with the casual intimacy of two old friends who had learned to touch without intrusion. Silas: And if you don’t hear that sound, if the map stays still, you’ll know I’ve found a way to read the air without needing a compass. The moment felt taut, a line drawn in ink that could either hold or break. Rory’s eyes shifted toward the shelf—toward the secret door that had always waited for someone who understood secrets better than words. The door remained a quiet rumor, yet it hummed in the hall of memory, inviting, never forcing. Rory: I’m not asking you to open it for me tonight. Just tell me you’ll keep the light on. Silas pressed his lips into a thin line, a gesture that might have once signified restraint but now read as a vow. He glanced at the clock on the wall, its hands moving with the patient insistence of a countdown she could feel in her bones. Silas: The light stays on when there’s a reason to stay. He looked at her with something like gratitude, or perhaps relief, as if acknowledging that the night had chosen to spare a moment for two people who had once moved through the world with fewer fuses and louder steps. The Nest will keep your space, Rory. For as long as you need. Rory stepped back from the bar, letting the green glow settle into the skin along her cheek, listening to the quiet breath of the room, listening to the old rhythm between them—the rhythm of a friendship that had survived the long, hard silence of years. Rory: Then I’ll come back when I know what I want to say to you that isn’t just a threat to the life I’m trying to build. She let the words loosen and be carried away by the din of mugs and murmurs and the distant clatter of someone’s memory. I won’t pretend the past isn’t here. Silas’s gaze softened, a man who’d spent a lifetime keeping his own counsel and now offered another’s a measure of it. He stood, the stool creaking again under the shift, and watched as Rory moved toward the door, her silhouette cutting a line through the green glow and heading toward the rain-slick street. Silas: You’ll choose what you carry, Rory. And you’ll carry it with a weight that will either keep you honest or push you toward something you’ve earned. He spoke softly, and for a moment the room listened, as if the walls themselves remembered the old days when the two of them had breathed into a shared future that never quite arrived. Rory paused at the threshold, looking back one last time as the door’s bell sang its quiet note. She met Silas’s steady gaze and offered a small, almost conspiratorial smile, the kind that hid a storm behind it. Rory: Then I’ll find out what I’m capable of when the door stays closed for a while. She spoke with a clarity that surprised her own ears. Good night, Silas. Silas: Good night, Rory. And if you ever decide to walk through the door again, know you won’t be walking alone. She stepped into the rain, the city’s air cooler against her skin, and for the first time in years she felt a thread pull tight inside her chest—a thread that might, with time and the right decisions, become a line she could walk without looking down. The door to the Nest stayed, as always, a breathless secret in the lamplight, waiting for the next time someone chose to reveal what time had done to them. The bell above the door rang once more as Rory disappeared into the rain-soaked street, and Silas watched the green glow cast a soft halo around the room, the signet ring on his finger catching a moment of brightness before returning to its quiet self. The night settled back into its slow rhythm, as if a friend of theirs had finally closed a door gently rather than forcing an exit with force. The Raven’s Nest kept its breath, and the city kept its own steady guard around two people who had learned, again, how to carry a life that refused to stay bought in a single moment.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
88.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4610
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count6
2
adverb"perfectly"
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adverb"truly"
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4
adverb"gently"
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100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
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word"trembled"
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word"could feel"
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highlights
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2"familiar"
3"whisper"
4"weight"
5"flicked"
6"measured"
7"footsteps"
8"glint"
9"trembled"
10"silence"
11"unspoken"
12"traced"
13"etched"
14"intensity"
15"sanctuary"
16"warmth"
17"echo"
18"could feel"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count3
highlights
0"the weight of the truth"
1"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences282
matches(empty)
77.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount8
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences282
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"feel"
3"think"
4"decide"
5"hear"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"happen to"
2"starts to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences282
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4589
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
74.82% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions188
wordCount4589
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest13
Carter1
Blackwood1
Cardiff6
Trouble1
Rory69
Silas51
Bars1
Time1
You21
London4
People3
Plans1
Eva6
Fear1
Right1
Evan1
Silence1
Good3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Trouble"
5"Rory"
6"Silas"
7"Bars"
8"Time"
9"You"
10"People"
11"Plans"
12"Eva"
13"Evan"
14"Silence"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.748
windowScore0.833
55.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences264
glossingSentenceCount10
matches
0"sounded like a question asked and answered"
1"seemed almost affectionate"
2"felt like a shelf in a storm could hold"
3"felt like a doorway she’d once walked t"
4"something like longing crossing her face bef"
5"as if protesting another year of secrets"
6"as if counting the lives it had touched.This ring has watched a great many plans go to ground, Rory"
7"quite land"
8"as if confessing a secret she’d kept even from herself: I’m not sure if I’ll stay in London, or if I’ll return to Cardiff when the wind shifts"
9"as if acknowledging that the night had chosen to spare a moment for two people who had once moved through the world with fewer fuses and louder steps"
10"something like gratitude, or perhaps relief"
47.46% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches7
per1kWords1.525
wordCount4589
matches
0"no choice but"
1"not to measure worth by the distance I’ve moved, but by the weight of what I carry"
2"not a grand gesture, but enough to make a certain moment in the Nest feel heavier"
3"not a deed or a plan, but a name"
4"not only to the words but to the tremor in her breath"
5"not aloud but with the weight of the truth she carried in her chest, the t"
6"Not just for me, but for the people I’ve carried in memory"
83.92% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount7
totalSentences282
matches
0"negotiate that memory"
1"test that theory"
2"means that I’m"
3"face that, you"
4"let that settle"
5"hear that sound"
6"acknowledging that the"
58.91% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs98
mean46.83
std16.68
cv0.356
sampleLengths
082
172
264
315
439
566
635
714
867
942
1026
1144
1247
1354
1458
1539
1632
1752
1857
1930
2057
2159
2269
2357
2428
2550
2632
2741
2860
2957
3035
3140
3223
334
3453
3560
3633
3723
3841
3949
4034
4151
4238
4331
4453
4541
4652
4752
4825
4961
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences282
matches
0"fed"
1"is given"
2"were callused"
3"meant"
4"was supposed"
5"were told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs850
matches
0"were waiting"
1"was unfolding"
2"was listening"
21.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences282
ratio0.043
matches
0"Rory wore a coat that hid the lean lines she’d acquired—lines that wouldn’t have belonged to a girl who’d grown up chasing deadlines and late buses in Cardiff."
1"She let the words drift, not admitting how the thought had gnawed at her for years—the possibility that she might circle back to the place she’d once thought she’d left behind for good."
2"He did not rebuff the honesty in her statement; he pressed it with a measured breath, as if to steady the room around them."
3"He glanced at the contents—a handful of photographs, a few loose papers, a name scrawled in a neat script."
4"The handwriting is hers, yes, but it’s the tremor that follows—someone else’s fear."
5"But I want a line of daylight between two nights we’ve lived through—the one that taught us to survive and the one that almost killed us."
6"The Nest isn’t a sanctuary for heroes, Rory; it’s a ledger for what you’ve learned to live with."
7"Rory: I came back to see if you could remember the old codes—how we spoke without speaking, how a plan could hinge on a single breath."
8"The quiet is not your enemy; it’s your map."
9"Rory’s eyes shifted toward the shelf—toward the secret door that had always waited for someone who understood secrets better than words."
10"Rory stepped back from the bar, letting the green glow settle into the skin along her cheek, listening to the quiet breath of the room, listening to the old rhythm between them—the rhythm of a friendship that had survived the long, hard silence of years."
11"She stepped into the rain, the city’s air cooler against her skin, and for the first time in years she felt a thread pull tight inside her chest—a thread that might, with time and the right decisions, become a line she could walk without looking down."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount4610
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount166
adverbRatio0.03600867678958785
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.005639913232104121
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences282
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences282
mean16.27
std8.97
cv0.551
sampleLengths
015
117
219
331
412
513
625
722
828
936
1015
114
128
1327
1432
1534
1620
1715
186
198
206
2141
2220
2311
2419
2512
2626
277
2831
296
3010
3125
3212
339
3435
3510
364
3729
389
3910
406
419
4230
435
442
4517
468
477
4833
4912
43.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.09929078014184398
totalSentences282
uniqueOpeners28
23.81% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences280
matches
0"Just a little tonight, a"
1"Just tell me you’ll keep"
ratio0.007
62.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount110
totalSentences280
matches
0"Her eyes, bright blue, scanned"
1"Her hair was the same"
2"It comes with the chairs"
3"He didn’t look up, just"
4"He looked older now, with"
5"I almost forgot your bar"
6"He finally looked up, hazel"
7"He set the ring against"
8"He fixed his eyes on"
9"You can still hear the"
10"She lowered her sleeve and"
11"I’ve got a life now,"
12"He finally moved, lifting a"
13"Your life doesn’t look like"
14"I’m not the girl who"
15"She chuckled, though it lacked"
16"I’m the one who delivers"
17"He gestured toward the hidden"
18"You ever think you’d end"
19"She let the words drift,"
ratio0.393
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount182
totalSentences280
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest breathed rain-washed"
1"The green neon sign above"
2"Maps hung on the walls"
3"A bookshelf at the far"
4"Aurora Carter stepped inside and"
5"The air smelled of citrus"
6"Her eyes, bright blue, scanned"
7"Silas Blackwood hadn’t changed in"
8"Rory wore a coat that"
9"Her hair was the same"
10"It comes with the chairs"
11"He didn’t look up, just"
12"The door chimed again as"
13"He looked older now, with"
14"Rory moved closer, letting the"
15"The scent of old wood"
16"I almost forgot your bar"
17"He finally looked up, hazel"
18"He set the ring against"
19"A moment stretched between them,"
ratio0.65
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount7
totalSentences280
matches
0"If you figure you want"
1"To notice the corners and"
2"If you’ve come back to"
3"If you’re ready to face"
4"If I leave, it won’t"
5"If you’re serious about a"
6"If I’m not, I’ll circle"
ratio0.025
54.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences211
technicalSentenceCount26
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest breathed rain-washed air as if it had just exhaled a long sigh."
1"A bookshelf at the far corner housed a door that wasn’t a door at all, a secret room where meetings slipped out of daylight and into the weathered quiet between…"
2"Rory wore a coat that hid the lean lines she’d acquired—lines that wouldn’t have belonged to a girl who’d grown up chasing deadlines and late buses in Cardiff."
3"He looked older now, with a thinner line to his mouth, the kind that came from years of hearing too many plans whispered in the dark and never quite trusting th…"
4"He finally looked up, hazel eyes steady, the weight in them as familiar as the signet ring he wore on his right hand, a silver circle that caught the room’s neo…"
5"He leaned forward slightly, the green glow catching the lines around his eyes, making him look more like the seasoned operative the town whispered about than th…"
6"He considered the line of her wrist as if it answered something more than words could."
7"The lines around his eyes deepened as if the years themselves pressed there when life offered him a truth he hadn’t anticipated."
8"He did not elaborate, letting the statement rest in the air between them, a shared familiarity that was almost a test."
9"The words slipped out with a weight to them, a quiet kind of certainty that respected the truth she carried in her bones."
10"He paused, eyes drifting to the silver signet ring, as if counting the lives it had touched.This ring has watched a great many plans go to ground, Rory."
11"She looked at him with the quiet conviction that had kept her alive on streets and between shifting hours."
12"The handwriting is hers, yes, but it’s the tremor that follows—someone else’s fear."
13"He set the envelope down next to his glass, careful not to disturb the delicate balance of the space that existed between the spoken word and the unspoken one."
14"She paused, then shrugged, a half-lelt of self-deprecating humor that didn’t quite land."
15"She hesitated, then added, almost as if confessing a secret she’d kept even from herself: I’m not sure if I’ll stay in London, or if I’ll return to Cardiff when…"
16"If you’re serious about a life that has room for your own footprint, you’ll step through that bookshelf and into daylight on your own terms."
17"She slid the envelope toward him with a careful, almost ceremonial touch, as if she could pass along a part of herself in that thin rectangle of paper and ink."
18"Silas reached out and took the envelope, his fingers brushing hers with the casual intimacy of two old friends who had learned to touch without intrusion."
19"He looked at her with something like gratitude, or perhaps relief, as if acknowledging that the night had chosen to spare a moment for two people who had once m…"
20"Rory stepped back from the bar, letting the green glow settle into the skin along her cheek, listening to the quiet breath of the room, listening to the old rhy…"
21"He stood, the stool creaking again under the shift, and watched as Rory moved toward the door, her silhouette cutting a line through the green glow and heading …"
22"He spoke softly, and for a moment the room listened, as if the walls themselves remembered the old days when the two of them had breathed into a shared future t…"
23"She met Silas’s steady gaze and offered a small, almost conspiratorial smile, the kind that hid a storm behind it."
24"She stepped into the rain, the city’s air cooler against her skin, and for the first time in years she felt a thread pull tight inside her chest—a thread that m…"
25"The bell above the door rang once more as Rory disappeared into the rain-soaked street, and Silas watched the green glow cast a soft halo around the room, the s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.3456%