Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
264
glossingSentenceCount
10
matches
0
"sounded like a question asked and answered"
1
"seemed almost affectionate"
2
"felt like a shelf in a storm could hold"
3
"felt like a doorway she’d once walked t"
4
"something like longing crossing her face bef"
5
"as if protesting another year of secrets"
6
"as if counting the lives it had touched.This ring has watched a great many plans go to ground, Rory"
7
"quite land"
8
"as if confessing a secret she’d kept even from herself: I’m not sure if I’ll stay in London, or if I’ll return to Cardiff when the wind shifts"
9
"as if acknowledging that the night had chosen to spare a moment for two people who had once moved through the world with fewer fuses and louder steps"
"Rory wore a coat that hid the lean lines she’d acquired—lines that wouldn’t have belonged to a girl who’d grown up chasing deadlines and late buses in Cardiff."
1
"She let the words drift, not admitting how the thought had gnawed at her for years—the possibility that she might circle back to the place she’d once thought she’d left behind for good."
2
"He did not rebuff the honesty in her statement; he pressed it with a measured breath, as if to steady the room around them."
3
"He glanced at the contents—a handful of photographs, a few loose papers, a name scrawled in a neat script."
4
"The handwriting is hers, yes, but it’s the tremor that follows—someone else’s fear."
5
"But I want a line of daylight between two nights we’ve lived through—the one that taught us to survive and the one that almost killed us."
6
"The Nest isn’t a sanctuary for heroes, Rory; it’s a ledger for what you’ve learned to live with."
7
"Rory: I came back to see if you could remember the old codes—how we spoke without speaking, how a plan could hinge on a single breath."
8
"The quiet is not your enemy; it’s your map."
9
"Rory’s eyes shifted toward the shelf—toward the secret door that had always waited for someone who understood secrets better than words."
10
"Rory stepped back from the bar, letting the green glow settle into the skin along her cheek, listening to the quiet breath of the room, listening to the old rhythm between them—the rhythm of a friendship that had survived the long, hard silence of years."
11
"She stepped into the rain, the city’s air cooler against her skin, and for the first time in years she felt a thread pull tight inside her chest—a thread that might, with time and the right decisions, become a line she could walk without looking down."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
211
technicalSentenceCount
26
matches
0
"The Raven’s Nest breathed rain-washed air as if it had just exhaled a long sigh."
1
"A bookshelf at the far corner housed a door that wasn’t a door at all, a secret room where meetings slipped out of daylight and into the weathered quiet between…"
2
"Rory wore a coat that hid the lean lines she’d acquired—lines that wouldn’t have belonged to a girl who’d grown up chasing deadlines and late buses in Cardiff."
3
"He looked older now, with a thinner line to his mouth, the kind that came from years of hearing too many plans whispered in the dark and never quite trusting th…"
4
"He finally looked up, hazel eyes steady, the weight in them as familiar as the signet ring he wore on his right hand, a silver circle that caught the room’s neo…"
5
"He leaned forward slightly, the green glow catching the lines around his eyes, making him look more like the seasoned operative the town whispered about than th…"
6
"He considered the line of her wrist as if it answered something more than words could."
7
"The lines around his eyes deepened as if the years themselves pressed there when life offered him a truth he hadn’t anticipated."
8
"He did not elaborate, letting the statement rest in the air between them, a shared familiarity that was almost a test."
9
"The words slipped out with a weight to them, a quiet kind of certainty that respected the truth she carried in her bones."
10
"He paused, eyes drifting to the silver signet ring, as if counting the lives it had touched.This ring has watched a great many plans go to ground, Rory."
11
"She looked at him with the quiet conviction that had kept her alive on streets and between shifting hours."
12
"The handwriting is hers, yes, but it’s the tremor that follows—someone else’s fear."
13
"He set the envelope down next to his glass, careful not to disturb the delicate balance of the space that existed between the spoken word and the unspoken one."
14
"She paused, then shrugged, a half-lelt of self-deprecating humor that didn’t quite land."
15
"She hesitated, then added, almost as if confessing a secret she’d kept even from herself: I’m not sure if I’ll stay in London, or if I’ll return to Cardiff when…"
16
"If you’re serious about a life that has room for your own footprint, you’ll step through that bookshelf and into daylight on your own terms."
17
"She slid the envelope toward him with a careful, almost ceremonial touch, as if she could pass along a part of herself in that thin rectangle of paper and ink."
18
"Silas reached out and took the envelope, his fingers brushing hers with the casual intimacy of two old friends who had learned to touch without intrusion."
19
"He looked at her with something like gratitude, or perhaps relief, as if acknowledging that the night had chosen to spare a moment for two people who had once m…"
20
"Rory stepped back from the bar, letting the green glow settle into the skin along her cheek, listening to the quiet breath of the room, listening to the old rhy…"
21
"He stood, the stool creaking again under the shift, and watched as Rory moved toward the door, her silhouette cutting a line through the green glow and heading …"
22
"He spoke softly, and for a moment the room listened, as if the walls themselves remembered the old days when the two of them had breathed into a shared future t…"
23
"She met Silas’s steady gaze and offered a small, almost conspiratorial smile, the kind that hid a storm behind it."
24
"She stepped into the rain, the city’s air cooler against her skin, and for the first time in years she felt a thread pull tight inside her chest—a thread that m…"
25
"The bell above the door rang once more as Rory disappeared into the rain-soaked street, and Silas watched the green glow cast a soft halo around the room, the s…"