Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYAPKZZN7H07JTJDASCYXN

Run Details

Duration:
33.8s
Cost:
$0.039631
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last takeaway bag slid across the polished mahogany, its plastic handles crinkling a final, weary complaint. Aurora Carter tugged the thermal bag closed, the zip grating against the silence of the nearly empty bar. Just one more trip back to the Golden Empress and she could retreat upstairs, peel off her damp jacket, and forget the lingering scent of MSG and London rain that clung to her like a second skin. Silas was at the far end of the bar, wiping down glasses with a slow, methodical rhythm, his movements economical and precise. He caught her eye and gave a slight nod, a silent dismissal she gratefully accepted. She turned, her hand already on the strap of her bag. “Carter? Good god, is that you?” The voice was a ghost, a tailored, confident echo from a life she had buried under miles of motorway and a stack of unpaid bills. She froze, her back still to the speaker. It was a voice that belonged in a wood-panelled courtroom or a Cardiff rugby club, not here, in the dim, map-lined confines of The Raven’s Nest. Slowly, she pivoted. He sat in one of the dark leather booths, a half-empty glass of whisky sweating onto a coaster. The man he had become was an unnervingly polished version of the boy she remembered. His suit was a sharp, expensive grey, his hair artfully dishevelled, his face holding the easy assurance of someone whose path had been straight and well-lit. Leo Stevens. He looked as though he had stepped directly out of the future her father had planned for her. “Leo.” The name felt foreign on her tongue. He smiled, a wide, brilliant thing that didn’t quite reach his eyes. “I knew it. I’d recognise that scowl anywhere. What are you doing here? I thought you’d be drowning in case law by now.” He gestured to her uniform, the bright gold dragon embroidered on the chest. The question hung in the air, heavy with unspoken judgment. Aurora forced a thin smile, pulling the strap of the delivery bag higher on her shoulder. It felt like a shield. “Delivering dinner. Someone in Soho has a craving for Yu-Fei’s crispy duck.” “Right.” He took a slow sip of his whisky, his gaze roaming over her. “London suits you. Or wears you down. I can’t decide which.” “A bit of both.” An awkward silence settled between them, filled only by the gentle clink of glass as Silas continued his work. Leo swirled the amber liquid in his tumbler. “So, no more Pre-Law, then? Your dad was so certain you’d be the next great Carter barrister.” “Plans change.” She kept her voice flat, devoid of invitation. She could feel the past clawing at her, the suffocating weight of expectation, the ghost of lecture halls and a future she’d run from. The small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist seemed to prickle. “I heard,” he said, his voice dropping an octave. “About you and Evan. Eva told my sister. Messy business, that.” Aurora’s jaw tightened. Of course. The gossip network of their old life was as efficient as ever. She pictured the whispers filtering through their hometown, painting her as the unstable one, the one who ran. “It was a long time ago.” “Still.” He leaned forward, elbows on the table, the picture of earnest concern. “He took it hard, Rory. Really hard. Hasn't been the same since.” The use of her old nickname was a deliberate intimacy, an attempt to bridge the chasm of years between them. It felt like a violation. Only her friends here called her Rory. He was a relic, and he was using a key he no longer had the right to hold. From the end of the bar, a low voice cut through the tension. “Carter. On the house.” Silas stood there, holding a short glass filled with ice and a dark soda. He placed it on the bar in front of her, his hazel eyes meeting hers for a fraction of a second. It was an offer, an anchor. She gave him a grateful, almost imperceptible nod and walked towards the bar, away from the booth. She took the glass, the cold a welcome shock against her skin. Leo watched the exchange, a flicker of something unreadable in his expression. He drained his whisky and rose, sliding out of the booth and approaching the bar. He was taller than she remembered, his expensive cologne cutting through the bar’s familiar scent of old wood and spilled ale. “Look, I didn’t mean to dredge things up,” he said, his tone softer now. “It’s just… a shock. Seeing you like this.” “I’m fine, Leo.” “Are you?” He leaned against the bar, his proximity making her want to shrink away. “Because he isn’t. Evan’s been asking about you. Constantly. At first, everyone just thought he was heartbroken. Now…” He trailed off, letting the implication fester. Aurora took a long drink of the cola, the ice rattling against her teeth. She could feel Silas’s presence beside her, a solid, unmoving shadow. He hadn’t gone back to his glasses. He was just standing there, watching. “I don’t care how Evan is.” “You should.” Leo’s voice was low, urgent. He put his hand on the bar, his fingers just inches from hers. “He’s a client of my firm now. His father pulled some strings. Funny how things work out. He thinks you owe him, Rory. He says you didn’t just leave. He said you took something.” The air left her lungs. An old, cold dread, something she thought she’d outrun, coiled in her stomach. It wasn’t just about the emotional wreckage anymore, the bruises that had faded. It was about the lie he had built around her departure, the story he must have told everyone. “That’s ridiculous.” “Is it?” Leo’s eyes were hard now, the friendly reunion stripped away to reveal something calculating beneath. “He seems convinced. And he has a lot of time and a lot of money to spend on finding things that belong to him.” His gaze dropped to the delivery bag still slung over her shoulder. “He asked me to find you. Said he just wanted to talk.” The lie was so bald, so poisonous, it almost made her laugh. Evan didn't talk. He broke things. “Tell him I’m not interested.” “I don’t think you understand.” Leo leaned in closer, his voice dropping to a near whisper. “This isn't a social call. He knows I’m in London.” Behind them, the heavy oak door of The Raven’s Nest creaked open, letting in a slice of the wet, neon-slicked Soho night. A cold draft snaked through the bar, carrying the distant wail of a siren. Leo’s gaze flickered past her shoulder, towards the entrance. A slow, chilling smile touched his lips. “In fact, he was supposed to meet me here.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the friendly reunion stripped away [away]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.355
leniency0.71
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.065
91.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1150
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1150
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"efficient"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"implication"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"calculating"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"methodical"
2"echo"
3"unspoken"
4"could feel"
5"weight"
6"efficient"
7"tension"
8"flicker"
9"unreadable"
10"familiar"
11"implication"
12"stomach"
13"calculating"
14"whisper"
15"flickered"
16"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1143
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount880
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Leo"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Leo"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Cardiff1
Raven2
Nest2
Stevens1
Silas4
Aurora4
Rory1
Soho1
Leo7
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Stevens"
4"Silas"
5"Aurora"
6"Rory"
7"Leo"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
2"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1143
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean30.89
std24.91
cv0.806
sampleLengths
0109
111
26
362
479
58
635
744
812
925
104
1127
1217
1344
1420
1535
166
1725
1850
1913
204
2170
2248
2322
243
2533
2645
276
2854
2949
302
3165
3218
335
3426
3552
369
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs128
matches
0"was using"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences89
ratio0
matches(empty)
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount886
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"dim, map-lined confines"
1"sharp, expensive grey, his"
2"small, crescent-shaped scar"
3"wet, neon-slicked Soho"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03837471783295711
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010158013544018058
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean12.84
std7.35
cv0.573
sampleLengths
017
118
237
322
415
511
66
725
88
926
103
1118
1215
1326
142
1518
168
1712
1823
1913
2010
2116
225
2312
2414
2511
264
2719
288
2917
3010
3124
3210
339
3411
353
362
3712
3818
396
4013
4112
4220
435
447
4518
4613
474
4814
4921
58.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.39325842696629215
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences67
matches
0"Just one more trip back"
1"Slowly, she pivoted."
2"Only her friends here called"
ratio0.045
11.04% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences67
matches
0"He caught her eye and"
1"She turned, her hand already"
2"She froze, her back still"
3"It was a voice that"
4"He sat in one of"
5"His suit was a sharp,"
6"He looked as though he"
7"He smiled, a wide, brilliant"
8"He gestured to her uniform,"
9"It felt like a shield."
10"He took a slow sip"
11"She kept her voice flat,"
12"She could feel the past"
13"he said, his voice dropping"
14"She pictured the whispers filtering"
15"He leaned forward, elbows on"
16"It felt like a violation."
17"He was a relic, and"
18"He placed it on the"
19"It was an offer, an"
ratio0.522
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences67
matches
0"The last takeaway bag slid"
1"Aurora Carter tugged the thermal"
2"Silas was at the far"
3"He caught her eye and"
4"She turned, her hand already"
5"The voice was a ghost,"
6"She froze, her back still"
7"It was a voice that"
8"He sat in one of"
9"The man he had become"
10"His suit was a sharp,"
11"He looked as though he"
12"The name felt foreign on"
13"He smiled, a wide, brilliant"
14"He gestured to her uniform,"
15"The question hung in the"
16"Aurora forced a thin smile,"
17"It felt like a shield."
18"He took a slow sip"
19"An awkward silence settled between"
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"It was a voice that belonged in a wood-panelled courtroom or a Cardiff rugby club, not here, in the dim, map-lined confines of The Raven’s Nest."
1"She pictured the whispers filtering through their hometown, painting her as the unstable one, the one who ran."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"He took, his gaze roaming over her"
1"he said, his voice dropping an octave"
2"he said, his tone softer now"
3"He leaned, his proximity making her want to shrink away"
4"Leo’s voice, urgent"
5"Leo leaned, his voice dropping to a near whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Leo’s voice (leo voice)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.097
leniency0.194
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.065
81.8181%