| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 29 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "smooth French accent wrapped around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 74 | | tagDensity | 0.392 | | leniency | 0.784 | | rawRatio | 0.034 | | effectiveRatio | 0.027 | |
| 91.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1186 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1186 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "race" | | 3 | "streaming" | | 4 | "otherworldly" | | 5 | "resolve" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "weight" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of his words" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1178 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.01% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 706 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.7 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | French | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Evan | 1 | | Lucien | 12 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Lies | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.65 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared beside hers in the glass" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1178 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 19.31 | | std | 12.35 | | cv | 0.639 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 43 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.89% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "was crumbling" | | 1 | "was offering" |
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| 43.48% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "One amber eye, one black eye—both fixed on her through the narrow opening." | | 1 | "Lucien removed his jacket, folding it neatly over the back of a chair—clearly an invitation to stay longer." | | 2 | "\"Normal doesn't suit you.\" He took a step closer, the scent of expensive cologne and something else—something metallic and otherworldly—filling the space between them." | | 3 | "Rory's phone buzzed on the cluttered coffee table—a reminder of her normal life, her job waiting." |
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| 86.05% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 713 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.04908835904628331 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012622720897615708 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 10.24 | | std | 6.27 | | cv | 0.612 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 67.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.43478260869565216 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 48.31% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she pulled the door" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 51.88% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice carried no warmth" | | 1 | "His smooth French accent wrapped" | | 2 | "She'd installed them herself after" | | 3 | "Her jaw tightened" | | 4 | "She started to close the" | | 5 | "His cane shot out, blocking" | | 6 | "She closed her own eyes" | | 7 | "His amber eye caught the" | | 8 | "He took a step closer," | | 9 | "His voice softened" | | 10 | "Her fingers instinctively touched the" | | 11 | "His reflection appeared beside hers" | | 12 | "She whirled around, anger flashing" | | 13 | "She cut herself off, turning" | | 14 | "His voice dropped lower" | | 15 | "She finally turned back to" | | 16 | "He reached into his suit" | | 17 | "He held out the paper" | | 18 | "She swallowed hard." | | 19 | "His fingers brushed her wrist," |
| | ratio | 0.42 | |
| 10.72% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The door creaked open three" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter squinted through the" | | 2 | "Her voice carried no warmth" | | 3 | "His smooth French accent wrapped" | | 4 | "Rory's fingers tightened on the" | | 5 | "She'd installed them herself after" | | 6 | "Lucien stood in the hallway," | | 7 | "Her jaw tightened" | | 8 | "Lucien's hand moved to his" | | 9 | "A nervous habit she'd once" | | 10 | "She started to close the" | | 11 | "His cane shot out, blocking" | | 12 | "Rory stared at the cane," | | 13 | "The heterochromatic eyes that had" | | 14 | "She closed her own eyes" | | 15 | "The flat smelled of old" | | 16 | "Books and scrolls covered every" | | 17 | "A tabby cat stretched on" | | 18 | "Lucien stepped inside, his presence" | | 19 | "Rory crossed her arms" |
| | ratio | 0.899 | |
| 72.46% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 57.14% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Books and scrolls covered every available surface, stacked in precarious towers that threatened to topple at the slightest vibration." | | 1 | "Her body remembered his touch, remembered the electricity that had passed between them." | | 2 | "Instead, she pulled the door open and stepped into the hallway, leaving Lucien alone in her flat, surrounded by her books and her secrets and the sleeping cat w…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 29 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien stepped, his presence suddenly making the cramped space feel even smaller" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 74 | | tagDensity | 0.054 | | leniency | 0.108 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.027 | |