Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYB9GNE1B62VZ1MXZYVWCF

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Duration:
38.6s
Cost:
$0.004392
Provider:
WandB

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open three inches, stopped by the security chain. Aurora Carter squinted through the gap, one bright blue eye visible in the dim hallway lighting. "Lucien." Her voice carried no warmth. "Aurora." His smooth French accent wrapped around her name like silk. "May I come in?" Rory's fingers tightened on the doorframe. Three deadbolts. She'd installed them herself after Evan. After everything. Lucien stood in the hallway, impeccably dressed as always in a tailored charcoal suit, his ivory-handled cane resting against his leg. One amber eye, one black eye—both fixed on her through the narrow opening. "What do you want?" she asked. "We need to talk." "That's what you said last time." Her jaw tightened. "Before you disappeared for six months without a word." Lucien's hand moved to his tie, straightening it. A nervous habit she'd once found endearing. "Circumstances were complicated." "They always are with you." She started to close the door. His cane shot out, blocking the gap. "Please, Aurora. Five minutes." Rory stared at the cane, then back at his face. The heterochromatic eyes that had once made her heart race now just made her tired. She closed her own eyes for a moment, sighed, then unhooked the security chain. The flat smelled of old paper, curry from the restaurant below, and Ptolemy's litter box. Books and scrolls covered every available surface, stacked in precarious towers that threatened to topple at the slightest vibration. A tabby cat stretched on the sofa, blinked at Lucien once, then curled back to sleep. "Your feline still dislikes me." Lucien stepped inside, his presence suddenly making the cramped space feel even smaller. "Ptolemy has excellent judgment." Rory crossed her arms. "You have three minutes. Clock starts now." Lucien removed his jacket, folding it neatly over the back of a chair—clearly an invitation to stay longer. "The supernatural underground is buzzing." "So? Not my problem anymore." "It is when they're whispering about you." His amber eye caught the afternoon light streaming through the grimy window. "About what you can do." "I told you, I'm done with all that." Rory ran a hand through her straight black hair. "I deliver food. I go home. I try to sleep without nightmares. That's my life now." "Normal doesn't suit you." He took a step closer, the scent of expensive cologne and something else—something metallic and otherworldly—filling the space between them. "I saw you yesterday. Outside the Golden Empress." Rory's breath hitched. "You were watching me?" "Protecting you." His voice softened. "Someone's asking questions about the Cardiff incident." Her fingers instinctively touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "That's over. Evan's gone." "Not just Evan." Lucien's cane tapped against the floorboards. "Others know what happened. What you did." "I didn't do anything." Even to her own ears, the denial sounded weak. "You saved Eva's life." Another step closer. "You opened a door that shouldn't have been opened, and you pulled her back before it closed." Rory turned away, walking to the window that overlooked Brick Lane. "I don't know what you're talking about." "Yes, you do." His reflection appeared beside hers in the glass. "I taught you better than to lie, Aurora." She whirled around, anger flashing in her blue eyes. "You taught me how to survive, then vanished when I needed you most!" "I was protecting you!" "By leaving? By letting me think—" She cut herself off, turning away again. "It doesn't matter now." "It does to me." When she didn't respond, he continued, "I never meant to hurt you." Rory laughed, a harsh sound. "Could have fooled me." "I had obligations." His voice dropped lower. "To my father's realm. Things I couldn't explain." "Things you still can't explain, I'm guessing." She finally turned back to face him. "Why are you really here, Lucien?" He reached into his suit pocket, withdrew a folded piece of paper. "They know what you are. What you can become." "I'm human." The words felt hollow even as she said them. "Half-human, perhaps." He held out the paper. "Like me." Rory didn't take it. "I'm nothing like you." "Aren't you?" Lucien stepped forward until they were barely a foot apart. "I see the way you move, the way you notice things others don't. The way the air around you sometimes shimmers when you're angry." She swallowed hard. "That's not—" "It is." His fingers brushed her wrist, near the scar. "I felt it the first time we met. That pull. That connection." "The only thing I feel when I look at you is betrayal." But her voice had lost its edge. Lies, all of it. Her body remembered his touch, remembered the electricity that had passed between them. Remembered nights spent talking about realms and magic, about his demon father and human mother, about her own inexplicable abilities that she'd always dismissed as coincidence. Lucien's thumb stroked her skin. "I came back because I couldn't stay away. Because I heard rumors about someone with power gathering in London, and I knew it was you." "I don't want this life." But her resolve was crumbling. "You don't have a choice anymore." His other hand came up to cup her face. "They're coming for you, Aurora. With or without me." The familiar warmth spread through her at his touch, that dangerous current she'd tried so hard to forget. Her eyes closed involuntarily, leaning into his hand for just a second before pulling away. "You can't just show up after six months and expect—" she started. "I expect nothing." Lucien's voice was rough. "I'm asking for a chance to explain. To help you." "Why?" His heterochromatic eyes held hers. "Because I care about you. Because I never stopped." Rory's phone buzzed on the cluttered coffee table—a reminder of her normal life, her job waiting. She glanced at it, then back at Lucien, at the impossible choice he was offering. "I have to get to work," she said, the words a lifeline to the ordinary world she'd built. "Will you come back?" he asked. "Will you let me explain everything?" Rory grabbed her delivery bag from the hook by the door. "I don't know." "That's not a no." A small smile touched his lips. "It's not a yes either," she countered, shouldering past him. "I need time." "Take all the time you need." He followed her to the door. "But don't take too long. They're closer than you think." Rory paused with her hand on the doorknob, the weight of his words settling over her. "What happens if I say no? To everything. To you. To this... world?" Lucien's expression softened. "Then I'll protect you anyway. Like I should have done before." His simple declaration hung in the air between them, heavy with regret and possibility. Rory opened her mouth to respond, but no words came out. Instead, she pulled the door open and stepped into the hallway, leaving Lucien alone in her flat, surrounded by her books and her secrets and the sleeping cat who had somehow known all along that things would never be simple between them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"smooth French accent wrapped around [around]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.392
leniency0.784
rawRatio0.034
effectiveRatio0.027
91.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1186
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1186
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"race"
count1
3
word"streaming"
count1
4
word"otherworldly"
count1
5
word"resolve"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"silk"
2"race"
3"streaming"
4"otherworldly"
5"resolve"
6"familiar"
7"reminder"
8"weight"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences74
matches
0"y with regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1178
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
65.01% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount706
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
French1
Rory12
Evan1
Lucien12
Ptolemy1
Brick1
Lane1
Lies1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.65
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared beside hers in the glass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1178
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean19.31
std12.35
cv0.639
sampleLengths
027
16
215
350
46
54
618
718
811
911
1039
1150
1218
1315
1423
155
1624
1733
1832
197
2012
2116
2216
2313
2424
2518
2619
2722
284
2917
3016
319
3215
3320
3421
3511
369
378
3836
395
4022
4119
4243
4330
4410
4524
4633
4712
4817
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
88.89% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs120
matches
0"was crumbling"
1"was offering"
43.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences115
ratio0.035
matches
0"One amber eye, one black eye—both fixed on her through the narrow opening."
1"Lucien removed his jacket, folding it neatly over the back of a chair—clearly an invitation to stay longer."
2"\"Normal doesn't suit you.\" He took a step closer, the scent of expensive cologne and something else—something metallic and otherworldly—filling the space between them."
3"Rory's phone buzzed on the cluttered coffee table—a reminder of her normal life, her job waiting."
86.05% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount713
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.04908835904628331
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.012622720897615708
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean10.24
std6.27
cv0.612
sampleLengths
011
116
26
311
44
56
62
76
82
921
1013
116
124
139
149
158
167
173
1811
197
204
2110
2215
2314
2415
2519
2616
2718
288
297
3018
315
325
3319
345
3517
3616
3724
388
393
404
415
427
4312
444
459
467
4713
487
4917
67.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.43478260869565216
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners50
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Instead, she pulled the door"
ratio0.014
51.88% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences69
matches
0"Her voice carried no warmth"
1"His smooth French accent wrapped"
2"She'd installed them herself after"
3"Her jaw tightened"
4"She started to close the"
5"His cane shot out, blocking"
6"She closed her own eyes"
7"His amber eye caught the"
8"He took a step closer,"
9"His voice softened"
10"Her fingers instinctively touched the"
11"His reflection appeared beside hers"
12"She whirled around, anger flashing"
13"She cut herself off, turning"
14"His voice dropped lower"
15"She finally turned back to"
16"He reached into his suit"
17"He held out the paper"
18"She swallowed hard."
19"His fingers brushed her wrist,"
ratio0.42
10.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences69
matches
0"The door creaked open three"
1"Aurora Carter squinted through the"
2"Her voice carried no warmth"
3"His smooth French accent wrapped"
4"Rory's fingers tightened on the"
5"She'd installed them herself after"
6"Lucien stood in the hallway,"
7"Her jaw tightened"
8"Lucien's hand moved to his"
9"A nervous habit she'd once"
10"She started to close the"
11"His cane shot out, blocking"
12"Rory stared at the cane,"
13"The heterochromatic eyes that had"
14"She closed her own eyes"
15"The flat smelled of old"
16"Books and scrolls covered every"
17"A tabby cat stretched on"
18"Lucien stepped inside, his presence"
19"Rory crossed her arms"
ratio0.899
72.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Even to her own ears,"
ratio0.014
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Books and scrolls covered every available surface, stacked in precarious towers that threatened to topple at the slightest vibration."
1"Her body remembered his touch, remembered the electricity that had passed between them."
2"Instead, she pulled the door open and stepped into the hallway, leaving Lucien alone in her flat, surrounded by her books and her secrets and the sleeping cat w…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Lucien stepped, his presence suddenly making the cramped space feel even smaller"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she didn't (do)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.054
leniency0.108
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.027
83.5759%