Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYBB0QK3P36FJXDCE1ZWBF

Run Details

Duration:
3m 51s
Cost:
$0.004069
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones rose from the damp earth of Richmond Park like knuckles breaking the surface of a murky pond. Moss clung to the bark in thick, velvet patches, glowing faintly in the dying light of the London evening. Aurora stopped at the edge of the circle, her breath pluming in the air despite the unseasonable warmth radiating from the wood. She pulled the collar of her jacket tighter, her fingers brushing the cold hilt of the moonsilver dagger tucked into her waistband. Nyx drifted beside her, a silhouette cut from the twilight itself. The shadow's form rippled, edges blurring into the surrounding gloom before sharpening again into a humanoid shape. Violet eyes ignited within the darkness of their face, fixed on the gap between two of the ancient trees. Crossing here feels like stepping into a held breath. Aurora reached out. Her fingertips met the space between the oaks. The air resisted, thick and viscous like water, before yielding with a pop that echoed in her inner ear. She stepped through. The grey smog of London vanished. The sky above shifted from bruised purple to a perpetual, golden dusk. No sun hung visible, yet light poured from everywhere, sourceless and warm. Aurora looked down at her boots. Where the London grass had been brown and matted, here it sprang back under her weight, vibrant green and interspersed with blooms that defied the season. Bluebells nodded alongside summer poppies and winter hellebores, all open and fragrant. She checked her wrist. The digital display on her watch flickered, numbers scrolling rapidly before settling on a time that matched neither London nor any timezone she recognized. Time doesn't hold shape here. Nyx's voice whispered on the wind, bypassing her ears to vibrate directly against her skull. The Shade moved ahead, their form solidifying into a tall figure clad in shifting dark fabric. They reached out a hand, and the shadows of the leaves stretched toward their fingers like iron filings to a magnet. Aurora walked deeper into the clearing. The silence pressed against her eardrums, heavy and absolute. No traffic hummed in the distance. No planes cut contrails across the golden sky. Only the sound of their footsteps crunching on the path existed, and even those seemed muted, swallowed by the earth. She placed a hand on the Fae-forged blade at her hip. The moonsilver bit into her palm through her glove, cold enough to burn. The metal hummed, a low resonance that traveled up her arm and settled in her teeth. This place remembers steel. It remembers blood, too. Aurora scanned the tree line. The oaks here stood wider than any in the mortal park, their branches weaving together to form a cathedral ceiling. Vines draped from above, heavy with fruit that glowed with a soft, internal luminescence. She plucked one from a low hanging branch. The skin felt like warm silk. She tossed it to Nyx. The Shade caught it without looking. The fruit passed through their shadowy hand and hovered in the air beside them, suspended by an unseen force. Consumption binds us to this realm. I cannot eat what grows in the light. Aurora pocketed the fruit. The warmth seeped through her jacket lining. She moved toward the center of the grove where the light intensified. The ground sloped gently downward, forming a natural amphitheater. Wildflowers carpeted the depression, a riot of color that hurt to look at directly. Reds bled into violets, yellows sparked like embers. She paused. A patch of disturbed earth lay ahead, but the grass stood undamaged. No blades bent. No soil compressed. Someone walked here. Nyx stopped, their violet gaze fixing on the empty path. Yet the ground bears no weight. Aurora crouched. She ran a hand over the spot. The grass tickled her palm, springy and alive. No footprints marred the surface. It looked as though a person had glided over the top of the vegetation without touching it. Isolde. The name slipped out before she could check it. The air shimmered around them, a heat haze rising from the flowers. The distortion matched the descriptions of the Veil, but thinner, woven into the landscape itself. Aurora stood, her hand resting on the dagger hilt again. The cold spread through her chest, steadying her pulse. We are being watched. Not watched. Observed. Nyx corrected. Their form expanded, shadows lengthening across the flowers without crushing them. There is a difference in intent. Aurora turned in a slow circle. The trees seemed to have shifted position while she looked away. The path they had entered from was no longer visible. Only the golden light and the endless ring of oaks remained. The scent of ozone grew stronger, mixing with the perfume of the blooms. It smelled like a storm trapped in a bottle. She took a step forward. The ground felt spongy, resilient. Her boot sank an inch before meeting resistance. This isn't just a garden. It's a cage. Or a sanctuary. Nyx drifted closer, the violet glow of their eyes reflecting in the polished surface of Aurora's blade. Boundaries serve both purposes depending on which side of the bars you stand. Aurora walked toward the center of the amphitheater. The light grew brighter, forcing her to squint. Her bright blue eyes watered in the glare. In the middle of the clearing stood a single stone altar, smooth and white, devoid of moss or lichen. Upon it rested a bowl filled with clear water. The surface of the water remained perfectly still, mirroring the golden sky above. She approached the altar. Her reflection stared back from the water, but the image lagged. She raised her hand; the reflection raised theirs a second later. Don't touch the water. Aurora pulled her hand back. The ripple in the reflection settled slowly, long after her own hand remained still. Why not? It shows what was, not what is. Nyx circled the altar, their shadow form passing over the stone without casting a shade. Look closely. Aurora leaned in. The water shifted. The reflection showed her standing in the same spot, but she wore different clothes. A scar she didn't possess marked her cheek. The background behind her reflection showed the grove in ruins, the trees blackened and smoking. She straightened up, her heart hammering against her ribs. The air in the grove suddenly felt colder, the golden light dimming by a fraction. That wasn't me. It is a possibility. A thread unwoven. Nyx turned toward the tree line. The shadows between the oaks deepened, pooling like ink. She comes. Aurora gripped the dagger. The moonsilver warmed slightly, reacting to the approaching presence. The grass ahead of them parted, not from wind, but as if making way. No footsteps sounded. No branches snapped. Yet the pressure in the clearing increased, pushing against Aurora's skin like a physical weight. She scanned the tree line. Nothing moved. The flowers remained still. The only sign of movement was the shifting of the light itself, bending around an invisible form moving toward them. Stay behind me. You cannot shield me from what walks without weight. Nyx stepped back, merging partially with the shadow of the altar. But I will stand with you. Aurora planted her feet. The cold of the blade seeped into her bones, sharpening her senses. The scent of ozone spiked, sharp and metallic. The water in the bowl on the altar began to vibrate, tiny ripples forming concentric circles despite the lack of touch. The light from the sky dimmed further, casting the grove into a deeper twilight. The wildflowers closed their petals one by one, starting from the outer edge of the clearing and moving inward toward the altar. The sound of the closing blooms sounded like a hundred tiny hands clapping in unison. Aurora waited. Her breath came steady, though her muscles coiled tight. The empty space before the altar shifted. The air distorted, bending light like heat haze on asphalt. A figure began to coalesce from the shimmer, distinct only by the absence of the golden background behind it. Silver hair appeared first, catching the dim light like spun glass. Then the outline of a face, pale and ageless. The figure stepped forward onto the grass. The blades bent under the weight, yet when the foot lifted, they sprang back instantly, leaving no trace of passage. Aurora tightened her grip on the hilt. The stranger stopped three paces from the altar. Pale lavender eyes locked onto Aurora's bright blue ones. The woman's expression remained neutral, unreadable, yet the air around her vibrated with unspoken words. Nyx bowed their head, a ripple passing through their shadowy form. Aurora kept her hand on the blade. The cold burned now, urgent and demanding. She waited for the woman to speak, but the silence stretched, heavy with the weight of the grove itself. The water in the bowl continued to ripple, though the surface remained unbroken.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
83.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1488
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"perfectly"
2"slowly"
3"suddenly"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1488
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"weight"
count6
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"footsteps"
count2
8
word"resonance"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count2
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"shimmered"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"sanctuary"
count1
14
word"unreadable"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
16
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"warmth"
2"gloom"
3"echoed"
4"weight"
5"flickered"
6"silence"
7"footsteps"
8"resonance"
9"scanned"
10"silk"
11"shimmered"
12"pulse"
13"sanctuary"
14"unreadable"
15"vibrated"
16"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences156
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1487
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.75% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1487
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.34
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London4
Shade2
Fae-forged1
Nyx10
Veil1
Aurora20
persons
0"Shade"
1"Nyx"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.828
windowScore1
37.39% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences111
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"seemed muted swallowed by the earth"
1"felt like warm silk"
2"smelled like a storm trapped in a bottle"
3"as if making way"
4"sounded like a hundred tiny hands clapping"
65.50% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.345
wordCount1487
matches
0"neither London nor"
1"not from wind, but as if making way"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean32.33
std20.84
cv0.645
sampleLengths
084
147
29
333
474
528
657
749
840
94
1062
1125
1214
1354
1420
1519
1639
171
1855
194
2022
2160
2218
238
2433
2565
2626
274
2819
292
3024
3143
3224
333
3424
3548
3631
373
3826
3945
4051
4147
4247
4339
4411
4546
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs252
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences156
ratio0.006
matches
0"She raised her hand; the reflection raised theirs a second later."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1488
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03024193548387097
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.010752688172043012
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean9.53
std5.75
cv0.603
sampleLengths
021
119
222
322
411
517
619
79
83
98
1019
113
126
1312
1412
156
1626
1712
184
1924
205
2115
2216
2321
246
259
266
278
2820
2911
3013
3116
324
334
345
3520
3614
378
386
395
406
4119
426
438
444
457
4612
479
4814
498
37.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.28846153846153844
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners45
68.97% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences145
matches
0"Only the sound of their"
1"Only the golden light and"
2"Then the outline of a"
ratio0.021
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences145
matches
0"She pulled the collar of"
1"Her fingertips met the space"
2"She stepped through."
3"She checked her wrist."
4"They reached out a hand,"
5"She placed a hand on"
6"It remembers blood, too."
7"She plucked one from a"
8"She tossed it to Nyx."
9"I cannot eat what grows"
10"She moved toward the center"
11"She ran a hand over"
12"It looked as though a"
13"We are being watched."
14"Their form expanded, shadows lengthening"
15"It smelled like a storm"
16"She took a step forward."
17"Her boot sank an inch"
18"It's a cage."
19"Her bright blue eyes watered"
ratio0.207
42.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences145
matches
0"The oak standing stones rose"
1"Moss clung to the bark"
2"Aurora stopped at the edge"
3"She pulled the collar of"
4"Nyx drifted beside her, a"
5"The shadow's form rippled, edges"
6"Violet eyes ignited within the"
7"Aurora reached out."
8"Her fingertips met the space"
9"The air resisted, thick and"
10"She stepped through."
11"The grey smog of London"
12"The sky above shifted from"
13"Aurora looked down at her"
14"Bluebells nodded alongside summer poppies"
15"She checked her wrist."
16"The digital display on her"
17"Time doesn't hold shape here."
18"Nyx's voice whispered on the"
19"The Shade moved ahead, their"
ratio0.834
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Aurora stopped at the edge of the circle, her breath pluming in the air despite the unseasonable warmth radiating from the wood."
1"The air resisted, thick and viscous like water, before yielding with a pop that echoed in her inner ear."
2"Where the London grass had been brown and matted, here it sprang back under her weight, vibrant green and interspersed with blooms that defied the season."
3"The digital display on her watch flickered, numbers scrolling rapidly before settling on a time that matched neither London nor any timezone she recognized."
4"The Shade moved ahead, their form solidifying into a tall figure clad in shifting dark fabric."
5"Vines draped from above, heavy with fruit that glowed with a soft, internal luminescence."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.5637%