Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
147
glossingSentenceCount
13
matches
0
"sounded like rain through sand"
1
"as if listening"
2
"as if hearing a joke they didn’t understand"
3
"looked like a painting someone was rotati"
4
"felt like the only sentence that could"
5
"as if listening to an old spine crack in its own chest"
6
"not quite hear but felt in the hollow of my skull: you came for a truth that does not end where you think"
7
"as if listening to the tick of a clock I could not hear"
8
"as if guarding it, while the third, that eerie, almost not-there presence, hovered near the outer fringe of the stones, watching everything, listening to something inside the hollow of the Hel doorway"
9
"smelled like rain and copper and old coins"
10
"felt like a blade against my thoughts"
11
"something like velvet and rust"
12
"as if answering a question I hadn’t yet dared to ask"
"Time folded in on itself inside these roots and branches; an hour inside could be minutes outside, or it could swallow a whole afternoon and spit you out somewhere you didn’t recognise."
1
"I trusted the pulse because it matched the beat in my left wrist, where a small crescent scar had lain since childhood—proof that fear could cut deep without teaching you how to scream."
2
"At first I heard it as a rhythm I could almost place—drip, drip—though the drip came from nowhere and everywhere at once."
3
"A sound rose—soft as silk, sharp as a knife’s edge—and the grove answered in a chorus of tiny noises that felt almost deliberate."
4
"Not human, not animal, something in between—slender, tall, with a presence that pressed against the skin like cold water poured over your head."
5
"It did not speak aloud; it pressed a question into the space between us with eyes that glowed a soft, impossible blue."
6
"The voice wasn’t male or female—human understanding strained at its pitch and cadence."
7
"The standing stones—rough, ancient—stood like sentinels."
8
"It did something with the air—a tremor at the edge of perception, a perturbation in the space just beyond the edge of my sight."
9
"The figure raised a hand—an elegant, pale thing with long fingers and no nails to speak of."
10
"The thing—whatever it was—stood next to the doorway in a way that suggested it owned the space, not just occupied it."
11
"The figure’s lips did not move, but the space between us filled with a new sound—the soft scrabble of something scraping along the stones, a whisper of cloth on stone, a soft, childlike chime that wasn’t bells and wasn’t perfectly human."
12
"A second silhouette—no, not a silhouette, but a second breath of the grove—slid into view, taller than the first, slender and motionless in the shadow between two stones."
13
"The grove did not tremble with fear; it trembled with curiosity, as if it expected something to happen and was resigned to witnessing it."
14
"The edge of my sight caught movement again—this time a figure more of suggestion than shape, a presence that did not advance so much as insinuate itself into the space between us."
15
"The second silhouette raised a hand, palm open, and in that gesture I saw something I recognised from my own past—a name spoken softly to a child who slept too little."
16
"A sudden, sharp crack split the air—the kind of sound that makes your bones answer in fear."
17
"The Wildflowers’ petals trembled; one blossom, purple-black and almost luminescent, swiveled toward me as if it had eyes and chose to rest on my shoulder for a moment before fluttering away."
18
"A sudden, desperate thought rose in me—Could I survive the Hel portal if I passed through tonight?"
19
"For a moment the grove opened, not a door but a window, and beyond it I saw a thread of moving light—the Hel, a seam between two worlds, strong enough to hold a future if you believed in it, fragile enough to tear you apart if you blinked."
20
"Then the first silhouette stepped forward once more, and something moved with it—an absence, a slipping away of a presence that should have shadowed its steps but did not."
21
"The second silhouette did not move; it simply absorbed light, becoming less a shape and more a texture of the air itself."
22
"And then, from the very edge of perception, a sound grew and grew until it dominated the space—the sound of something very old waking up, something with a dozen names and no names at all."
23
"The Heartstone’s warmth braided with that other presence, and I understood—whatever came through tonight would demand a bargain."
24
"And then a sound beyond sound—a sudden, abrupt click like a lock turning, muffled by distance and age—and the Hel portal flared."
25
"The approaches of that presence blocked my breath; I felt it more than I saw it, a pressure that pressed against my lungs and whispered a single, chilling sentence into the space between my ribs: You are not ready."
26
"The pulse in the Heartstone surged, not violently but with assurance, and the world narrowed to a single point—the place where I stood, the stones around me, the portal that glowed with pale intent, and the figure who would decide whether I walked away with part of my soul intact."
27
"The moment before I crossed, the grove stuttered—the light wavered, the petals froze mid‑bloom, and the world in that loop of time trembled with a fierce, sudden edge."
28
"Then the world snapped shut behind me with a cold, final air—that moment when nothing is certain and everything is possible—and I found myself standing in something not quite real, with the Heartstone burning at my sternum and the two silhouettes of the grove receding into memory, while the third presence pressed closer, and the pulse in my scar beat louder, as if answering a question I hadn’t yet dared to ask."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
131
technicalSentenceCount
29
matches
0
"The Heartstone hung warm at my chest, a small warmth in a sea of cold air that smelled of pine needles and old rain."
1
"The stones around me hummed with a low, stubborn vitality, as if they were listening for something I hadn’t learned the words to say."
2
"The benefactor who’d handed me the pendant had vanished into the ether of memory, leaving only the warm sting of its birthmark‑like glow and a note that said, s…"
3
"I steadied my breath, finger pressing into the scar on my wrist as if the mark were a seal I could break if I pulled enough air into my lungs."
4
"A sound rose—soft as silk, sharp as a knife’s edge—and the grove answered in a chorus of tiny noises that felt almost deliberate."
5
"The scent shifted, a blend of wet bark and something metallic, and the wildflowers that had refused to die in this place trembled as if hearing a joke they didn…"
6
"The binding in my scar tingled, a memory pricking at the back of my skull, telling me to run, to dive into the trees and never come back."
7
"The pendant’s warmth intensified, and the light around the circle gathered, forming a doorway of sorts in the air, a window with no glass, a portal that hummed …"
8
"I shifted my stance, feeling the ground give way ever so slightly beneath one boot, as if the earth itself were tilting toward revelation and I was not prepared…"
9
"The figure’s lips did not move, but the space between us filled with a new sound—the soft scrabble of something scraping along the stones, a whisper of cloth on…"
10
"The two figures formed a loose triangle, one at each end of the glade, the third barely there, a suggestion of something that belonged to the space in between."
11
"The faint edge of a scent rose again, copper and rain and something almost like lilac, and something in the back of my skull whispered that I should turn and ru…"
12
"The pale figure stepped closer, the blue light in its eyes boiling to a pale white, and the other silhouette bent its head as if listening to an old spine crack…"
13
"The grove did not tremble with fear; it trembled with curiosity, as if it expected something to happen and was resigned to witnessing it."
14
"The stems of the wildflowers fanned outward in a slow, impossible bloom, petals opening and closing in the same moment, as if commanded by a single, unseen hand…"
15
"It should have looked absurd, but it felt almost ceremonial, like a ritual performed by plants that exist only in a book of fae lore I had never finished readin…"
16
"The second silhouette raised a hand, palm open, and in that gesture I saw something I recognised from my own past—a name spoken softly to a child who slept too …"
17
"The two silhouettes froze, the one closest to me lowering its head as if listening to the tick of a clock I could not hear."
18
"I felt the scar on my wrist tug as if it remembered this exact door in a different life, a door I had believed sealed long ago."
19
"The glow of the Hel doorway widened fractionally, and the silhouettes bent toward it as if drawn by gravity, by necessity, by some obligation I had no part in s…"
20
"The pulse in the pendant leapt, louder, a drumbeat against my sternum, a speed‑up in a body that had learned to survive by keeping its own tempo."
21
"The two silhouettes now stood at the portal as if guarding it, while the third, that eerie, almost not-there presence, hovered near the outer fringe of the ston…"
22
"The third came forward more decisively, the thing that did not belong to light or shadow, something with a breath that smelled like rain and copper and old coin…"
23
"I returned to the centre of the circle, to the warm heartbeat against my chest, to the way the stones thrummed in a rhythm that matched the pulse in my scar and…"
24
"The pulse in the Heartstone surged, not violently but with assurance, and the world narrowed to a single point—the place where I stood, the stones around me, th…"
25
"I felt the scar ashore with that ancient memory, felt the pendant’s glow spike in a last, bright flare, and I stepped toward the Hel doorway, toward the thing t…"
26
"And in the moment of crossing, the last thing I heard was the grove’s old oak creaking a reply to the Hel’s demand, a sound that might have been laughter or a h…"
27
"Then the world snapped shut behind me with a cold, final air—that moment when nothing is certain and everything is possible—and I found myself standing in somet…"
28
"The horror, restraint intact, waited in the silence that followed, and the next breath would decide everything."