| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Tomás's voice echoed back [back]" | | 1 | "He was breathing hard [hard]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.325 | | leniency | 0.65 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 97.44% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1956 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 69.33% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1956 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "treacherous" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "chaotic" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "churned" | | 5 | "firmly" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "churn" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 62 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1937 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 1481 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Greek | 1 | | Street | 2 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 15 | | Old | 1 | | Compton | 1 | | London | 4 | | Brixton | 1 | | Underground | 1 | | Glock | 3 | | Morris | 6 | | Limehouse | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Spanish | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Tomás | 11 | | Bone | 3 | | Collectors | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Glock" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Market" | | 5 | "Spanish" | | 6 | "Saint" | | 7 | "Christopher" | | 8 | "Tomás" | | 9 | "Collectors" |
| | places | | 0 | "Greek" | | 1 | "Street" | | 2 | "Old" | | 3 | "Compton" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Brixton" | | 6 | "Limehouse" |
| | globalScore | 0.994 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 93.18% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "shapes that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly" | | 1 | "looked like a maintenance entrance for th" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1937 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 35.87 | | std | 22.77 | | cv | 0.635 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 81 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 66 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 72 | | 13 | 57 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 55 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 78 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 59 | | 25 | 70 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 74 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 53 | | 42 | 51 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 51 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 43 | | 48 | 47 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 74.21% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 265 | | matches | | 0 | "were approaching" | | 1 | "were following" | | 2 | "was drinking" | | 3 | "was hauling" | | 4 | "was breathing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.074 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell hit her—rotting vegetables, stale beer, something underneath it all that reminded her of copper and burnt matches." | | 1 | "Her left ankle screamed when she landed—old injury from a foot pursuit in Brixton, never healed right—but she kept moving." | | 2 | "The air changed, growing warmer despite the depth, thick with smells she couldn't identify—incense and ozone and something alive, something animal." | | 3 | "The crowd—if it could be called that—moved between the stalls with purpose, exchanging goods and coin and things that writhed in sealed jars." | | 4 | "His eyes—warm brown, almost kind—dropped to her torch, then to the hand resting on her weapon." | | 5 | "She noted the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck, the scar running along his left forearm—knife wound, old, maybe five or six years healed." | | 6 | "The warmth in his eyes hardened into something else—recognition, maybe, or resignation." | | 7 | "Their faces were hidden beneath deep hoods, but she could see their hands—too long, fingers jointed in wrong places, ending in what might have been claws." | | 8 | "Quinn and Tomás reached another passage—this one narrower, the walls pressing close enough that they had to move single file." | | 9 | "\"Detective Quinn.\" Tomás met her eyes, and in his gaze she saw something she recognized—the same haunted knowledge that greeted her every morning in the mirror." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1495 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "open, revealing concrete stairs" | | 1 | "alike pressing against their" |
| | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.036120401337792644 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008026755852842809 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 14.24 | | std | 9.21 | | cv | 0.647 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 37 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 62.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4117647058823529 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 63.49% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she'd followed the rules." | | 1 | "Somewhere ahead, she heard the" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "She keyed her radio without" | | 1 | "Her hand found her torch," | | 2 | "Her body didn't recover like" | | 3 | "She hit the fence at" | | 4 | "Her left ankle screamed when" | | 5 | "She should call for backup." | | 6 | "She counted forty steps, then" | | 7 | "It was a market." | | 8 | "She'd heard rumors, whispers from" | | 9 | "She'd dismissed it as urban" | | 10 | "She could feel it, that" | | 11 | "His eyes—warm brown, almost kind—dropped" | | 12 | "His accent was Spanish, softened" | | 13 | "He glanced over his shoulder," | | 14 | "She noted the Saint Christopher" | | 15 | "He stepped closer, lowering his" | | 16 | "He stopped, his gaze flicking" | | 17 | "Their faces were hidden beneath" | | 18 | "He was right." | | 19 | "Her hand had already closed" |
| | ratio | 0.257 | |
| 40.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain came down in" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slammed" | | 2 | "She keyed her radio without" | | 3 | "Static crackled back." | | 4 | "The rain must be interfering" | | 5 | "The alley swallowed her whole." | | 6 | "Darkness pressed in from both" | | 7 | "The smell hit her—rotting vegetables," | | 8 | "Her hand found her torch," | | 9 | "Spirals and geometric shapes that" | | 10 | "The suspect vaulted a chain-link" | | 11 | "Quinn pushed harder, her thighs" | | 12 | "Her body didn't recover like" | | 13 | "She hit the fence at" | | 14 | "Her left ankle screamed when" | | 15 | "The suspect had disappeared through" | | 16 | "Quinn slowed, her free hand" | | 17 | "The door hung open, revealing" | | 18 | "Water dripped somewhere below, the" | | 19 | "She should call for backup." |
| | ratio | 0.838 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 62.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Stalls crowded together in chaotic rows, lit by floating lanterns that contained no visible flame." | | 1 | "She'd heard rumors, whispers from informants who'd gone pale when she pressed them for details." | | 2 | "A black market that existed somewhere beneath London, moving through abandoned spaces like a disease through a bloodstream." | | 3 | "Another stall displayed weapons that hurt to look at directly, their edges existing in more dimensions than her eyes could process." | | 4 | "The Bone Collectors were following now, their movements wrong in ways that made Quinn's stomach churn." | | 5 | "Her torch flickered, the beam dimming as if something was drinking the light." | | 6 | "The symbols pulsed with light that had nothing to do with her dying torch." |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He glanced, his jaw tightening" | | 1 | "He stopped, his gaze flicking to something over her shoulder" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "He was breathing hard (be breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.025 | | leniency | 0.05 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.05 | |