Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYBKCCCSTFYJ7Z9WH49BYR

Run Details

Duration:
12.3s
Cost:
$0.001012
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed down, turning the already grimy London streets into slick, black mirrors reflecting the hurried neon glow. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath plumed in the frigid air, each ragged gasp a testament to the furious pace she maintained. Her worn leather watch, a faithful companion through eighteen years of service, felt heavy on her wrist, a useless anchor in this current, desperate sprint. The suspect, a blur of dark clothing and panicked movements, darted ahead, a fleeting phantom swallowed by the downpour and the labyrinthine alleyways of Soho. She’d spotted him near The Raven's Nest, a place she’d kept under surveillance for weeks, a hunch gnawing at her gut. The suspect’s hurried step, the furtive glance over his shoulder – it all screamed guilt. He hadn’t been quick enough. Now, the chase was on, a primal dance under the sodden cloak of night. The suspect rounded a corner, splashing through a puddle that sent a spray of foul water against the soot-stained brickwork. Harlow followed, her boots echoing a staccato rhythm against the cobblestones. The man was gaining on her, his agility a testament to something more than just a desire to evade capture. He scrambled over a low wall, disappearing into a narrow passage. Harlow vaulted the wall with practiced ease, her muscles burning, her lungs screaming. This wasn’t merely a street chase anymore; it was a pursuit into the forgotten bowels of the city. The passage opened into a wider, disused service alley, lined with overflowing dumpsters and skeletal fire escapes. A sickly green neon sign flickered erratically above a grimy entryway – The Raven’s Nest. The suspect slipped inside. Doubt, cold and sharp as shrapnel, pricked at Harlow. This bar, Silas’ bar, was known for its clientele, its hushed conversations in the hidden back room. It was rumored to be a nexus, a place where shadows coalesced. She pushed the door open, the bell above the entrance emitting a mournful jangle that no one seemed to hear. The air inside was thick with the smell of stale beer, cheap perfume, and something else, something organic and faintly metallic. Dim light, filtered through the grime-streaked windows, barely illuminated the sparse tables and worn bar. The suspect was already gone, vanished like smoke. A bartender, his face a blank canvas of indifference, wiped down the counter with a sodden rag. "Seen a man run through here, just now?" Harlow’s voice, usually a steady instrument of command, held a rough edge. The bartender’s eyes, dark and unreadable, met hers for a flicker. He gave a slow shake of his head, his gaze drifting back to his task. Harlow’s gaze swept the room, her sharp eyes taking in the shadows that clung to the corners, the alcoves where conversations surely took place unseen. The walls, plastered with faded maps and sepia photographs of forgotten faces, seemed to whisper secrets. She moved towards the back, her hand instinctively resting on the cool steel of her service weapon, hidden beneath her damp coat. A large, cluttered bookshelf stood against the far wall, its shelves crammed with dusty tomes. It looked out of place, too deliberate. She ran a gloved hand along its spines, her fingers probing. One book, bound in cracked leather, felt different, loose. With a firm push, the entire section of the bookshelf swung inward, revealing a dark, narrow opening. A chilling draft snaked out from the passage, carrying with it the faint scent of damp earth and something else… something ancient. This was it, the hidden back room, the space for clandestine meetings. She could hear the faint echo of footsteps, receding, growing fainter. Her suspect had used this passage. Her mind raced. This was beyond a simple street crime. The whispers about The Raven's Nest, the sudden disappearance of her suspect, the unnatural chill emanating from the hidden room – it all coalesced into a picture far darker than she’d initially painted. This was the territory DS Morris had ventured into, the territory that had swallowed him whole three years ago. The unexplained circumstances. The supernatural origins she couldn’t yet grasp. A gust of wind rattled the windowpanes, a mournful howl against the relentless drumming of the rain. She could turn back, report this, let the uniformed officers handle the mundane aspects of her investigation. But her partner's ghost, a silent specter, urged her forward. This was more than just a case. It was a reckoning. She checked the magazine in her weapon, the click of metal on metal unnaturally loud in the sudden quiet. The passage beckoned, a maw leading into the unknown. It smelled of secrets, of things that defied logic and everyday explanation. Things that had taken Morris. A sharp metallic clang echoed from somewhere deep within the darkness beyond the bookshelf. It was unlike anything she’d heard on the streets. It sounded like… hinges groaning under immense weight. Or perhaps something being dragged. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drumbeat of adrenaline and apprehension. Following him meant stepping into a world she’d only glimpsed in fragmented reports and hushed rumors. A world where the rules of engagement were fluid, where danger wore a thousand unseen faces. She took a deep breath, the heavy, damp air filling her lungs. Her reflection in the grimy bar mirror showed a woman hardened by years of looking into the abyss, her salt-and-pepper hair clinging damply to her temples, her jaw set in a grim line. The worn leather watch on her wrist seemed to vibrate with the urgency of the moment. "Right then," she murmured, the words a low growl against the din of the storm outside. She peered into the absolute blackness of the hidden passage. This was it. No turning back now. She gripped her weapon tighter, the familiar weight a small comfort, and stepped over thethreshold, the bookshelf clicking shut behind her with a soft, definitive thud. The rain outside seemed to fade instantly, replaced by a profound silence that prickled her skin. The air grew colder, thicker, pressing in on her. She was no longer on a city street, no longer in a familiar bar. She had crossed into something else entirely. She moved forward, her senses on high alert, her eyes struggling to pierce the oppressive gloom. The metallic clang, though fainter now, still echoed, a siren call from the depths. She descended. The passage sloped downwards, rough-hewn stone beneath her feet. The air grew heavy, carrying on it the faint, earthy scent of ozone and something acrid, like burnt chemicals. A low, guttural murmur reached her ears, indistinct, like a crowd speaking in hushed tones, or simply the hum of unseen machinery. She could feel it now, a thrumming energy that vibrated through the stone, through her very bones. It was the pulse of a hidden world. She paused, listening. The murmuring grew a little clearer, laced with the sharp, rapid patter of what sounded like hurried footsteps on pavement. Not stone, but pavement. Displaced. She strained her ears. Was that… a distant siren? No, not a siren. It was a rhythmic, metallic scraping. Something being dragged. Her foot brushed against something slick on the floor. She recoiled, raising her weapon. Her eyes adjusted slightly, revealing the faint sheen of moisture. Not water. Something thicker. Oily. She risked a quick sweep of her flashlight. The beam cut through the darkness, illuminating a smear of dark, viscous fluid trailing across the rough stone floor, leading deeper into the descent. It pulsed with an unnatural, faint luminescence. "Bloody hell," she whispered, the sound swallowed by the oppressive atmosphere. This was not just a back room. This was an entrance. An entrance to what? The scraping sound intensified, closer now, accompanied by a faint, rhythmic clanking. It was a peculiar sound, like a heavy cart being pulled over loose gravel, but with an underlying metallic resonance. She flattened herself against the cold, damp stone wall, her senses on overdrive. Ahead, the passage opened into a wider space, and a dim, flickering light became visible. Not gas lamps, not electric bulbs. Something… organic. It cast dancing shadows, elongating and contorting. She crept forward, her every movement calculated, precise. The smell intensified – ozone, sulphur, and a cloying sweetness that made her stomach churn. As she neared the opening, she heard voices. Low, guttural, speaking in languages she didn’t recognize, interspersed with sharp, clipped commands. Not human voices. Or at least, not entirely. A high-pitched whine, like a tortured mosquito, pulsed in the background, a constant, unnerving sound. She reached the edge of the opening, peering out into a vast, cavernous space. It was an abandoned Tube station, its vast expanse stretching out into the gloom. Rows of derelict train cars lined disused tracks, their windows dark and empty. But this was no ordinary abandoned station. It was alive. Stalls were set up along the platforms, draped with thick, dark fabric. Strange, pulsating lights, glowing with an eerie, bio-luminescent hue, illuminated mounds of shimmering dust, vials filled with swirling, colored liquids, and artifacts carved from bone and obsidian. Figures, cloaked and hooded, moved amongst the stalls, their faces hidden in shadow. The scraping sound resolved itself: a cart, laden with what looked like rough-hewn crates, being pulled by a hunched figure with unnaturally long limbs. This was it. The Veil Market. It moved, they said. Moved every full moon. And here she was, in its current Lair. Her suspect was here, somewhere in this impossible, underground bazaar. She saw him then, a flash of dark fabric near one of the stalls, arguing with a vendor whose face was obscured by a mask of polished silver. He looked desperate, his shoulders hunched, his hands gesturing wildly. The air vibrated with a tangible energy, a low thrum that resonated deep within her chest. Bone tokens. That was the entry requirement. She didn’t have one. She was an outsider, a trespasser in this realm of forbidden commerce. Her police-issued sidearm felt woefully inadequate against the backdrop of this alien landscape. Every instinct screamed at her to retreat, to escape this place before it consumed her. But the image of DS Morris, his partner lost to these depths, flashed behind her eyes. She had to know. She had to find out what happened. The choice was stark: retreat and live with the unanswered questions, or step into the Market and risk everything. Her gaze locked onto her fleeing suspect, a small knot of defiance tightening in her. She took a step forward.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:35:20.595Z" 2/19/2026, 12:35:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1757
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1757
totalAiIsms53
found
0
word"testament"
count2
1
word"fleeting"
count1
2
word"dance"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"desire"
count1
5
word"practiced ease"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"chilling"
count1
11
word"clandestine"
count1
12
word"echo"
count1
13
word"footsteps"
count2
14
word"raced"
count1
15
word"chill"
count1
16
word"maw"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count2
18
word"weight"
count2
19
word"apprehension"
count1
20
word"fragmented"
count1
21
word"familiar"
count2
22
word"profound"
count1
23
word"silence"
count1
24
word"oppressive"
count2
25
word"gloom"
count2
26
word"depths"
count2
27
word"could feel"
count1
28
word"vibrated"
count2
29
word"pulse"
count1
30
word"rhythmic"
count2
31
word"pulsed"
count2
32
word"resonance"
count1
33
word"electric"
count1
34
word"dancing"
count1
35
word"calculated"
count1
36
word"stomach"
count1
37
word"churn"
count1
38
word"resolved"
count1
39
word"tangible"
count1
40
word"resonated"
count1
41
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"testament"
1"fleeting"
2"dance"
3"echoing"
4"desire"
5"practiced ease"
6"flickered"
7"unreadable"
8"flicker"
9"whisper"
10"chilling"
11"clandestine"
12"echo"
13"footsteps"
14"raced"
15"chill"
16"maw"
17"echoed"
18"weight"
19"apprehension"
20"fragmented"
21"familiar"
22"profound"
23"silence"
24"oppressive"
25"gloom"
26"depths"
27"could feel"
28"vibrated"
29"pulse"
30"rhythmic"
31"pulsed"
32"resonance"
33"electric"
34"dancing"
35"calculated"
36"stomach"
37"churn"
38"resolved"
39"tangible"
40"resonated"
41"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences152
matches
0"looked desperate"
86.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences152
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1752
ratio0
matches(empty)
83.33% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"It moved, they said."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1725
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.35
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow6
Quinn1
Soho1
Raven3
Nest3
Morris3
Tube1
Veil1
Market2
Lair1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Market"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences110
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like hurried footsteps on pavement"
1"looked like rough-hewn crates, being pull"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.571
wordCount1752
matches
0"Not stone, but pavement"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean76.17
std41.52
cv0.545
sampleLengths
088
186
2136
381
420
526
6122
751
872
955
1045
1181
1261
13212
1450
1568
1626
1775
1867
1951
2076
2170
22133
91.41% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences152
matches
0"was rumored"
1"being dragged"
2"being dragged"
3"being pulled"
4"being pulled"
5"was obscured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs269
matches
0"was gaining"
48.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences152
ratio0.033
matches
0"The suspect’s hurried step, the furtive glance over his shoulder – it all screamed guilt."
1"This wasn’t merely a street chase anymore; it was a pursuit into the forgotten bowels of the city."
2"A sickly green neon sign flickered erratically above a grimy entryway – The Raven’s Nest."
3"The whispers about The Raven's Nest, the sudden disappearance of her suspect, the unnatural chill emanating from the hidden room – it all coalesced into a picture far darker than she’d initially painted."
4"The smell intensified – ozone, sulphur, and a cloying sweetness that made her stomach churn."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount288
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.03125
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.010416666666666666
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean11.53
std7.06
cv0.613
sampleLengths
018
120
225
325
421
515
65
714
820
911
1020
1111
1213
1318
1417
1515
164
179
1817
1912
2020
2121
2215
238
2417
2520
2611
2715
2825
2916
3022
3115
327
3311
349
3517
3620
372
3812
3911
406
413
427
4333
4419
453
467
4717
4817
4910
43.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.28289473684210525
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences141
matches
0"Her worn leather watch, a"
1"She’d spotted him near The"
2"He hadn’t been quick enough."
3"He scrambled over a low"
4"It was rumored to be"
5"She pushed the door open,"
6"He gave a slow shake"
7"She moved towards the back,"
8"It looked out of place,"
9"She ran a gloved hand"
10"She could hear the faint"
11"Her suspect had used this"
12"Her mind raced."
13"She could turn back, report"
14"It was a reckoning."
15"She checked the magazine in"
16"It smelled of secrets, of"
17"It was unlike anything she’d"
18"It sounded like…"
19"Her heart hammered against her"
ratio0.404
41.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences141
matches
0"Rain lashed down, turning the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath plumed"
2"Her worn leather watch, a"
3"The suspect, a blur of"
4"She’d spotted him near The"
5"The suspect’s hurried step, the"
6"He hadn’t been quick enough."
7"The suspect rounded a corner,"
8"Harlow followed, her boots echoing"
9"The man was gaining on"
10"He scrambled over a low"
11"Harlow vaulted the wall with"
12"This wasn’t merely a street"
13"The passage opened into a"
14"A sickly green neon sign"
15"The suspect slipped inside."
16"It was rumored to be"
17"She pushed the door open,"
18"The air inside was thick"
19"The suspect was already gone,"
ratio0.837
35.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"Now, the chase was on,"
ratio0.007
99.30% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences82
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The suspect rounded a corner, splashing through a puddle that sent a spray of foul water against the soot-stained brickwork."
1"Harlow’s gaze swept the room, her sharp eyes taking in the shadows that clung to the corners, the alcoves where conversations surely took place unseen."
2"This was the territory DS Morris had ventured into, the territory that had swallowed him whole three years ago."
3"The smell intensified – ozone, sulphur, and a cloying sweetness that made her stomach churn."
4"The air vibrated with a tangible energy, a low thrum that resonated deep within her chest."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
79.4145%