Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYBKFJ7JP9GXFS6SF2A02P

Run Details

Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.057240
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain battered the pavement of Soho, turning the grimy asphalt into a sleek, reflective river that caught the green bleed of the neon sign above the door. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air hung heavy with the scent of damp wool, stale tobacco, and the sharp, piney bite of gin. Aurora Carter leaned her elbows on the polished mahogany of the bar, chin resting in her palms, watching the few scattered patrons nurse their sorrows. She wasn't supposed to be working tonight, but Silas’s knee was acting up—the old injury from Prague swelling with the drop in barometric pressure. He was in the back, likely nursing a whiskey and pretending to do inventory while staring at ghosts. So she stood sentinel, her straight black hair forming a curtain around her face, shielding her from the inquisitive glances of a tourist couple near the window. The brass bell above the door chimed, a cheerful sound that clashed with the gloom. A man shook a dripping umbrella onto the mat, the movement sharp and precise. He wore a charcoal overcoat that cost more than Rory made in six months of delivering noodles for the Golden Empress. He turned, smoothing the lapels, and the dim amber light caught the sharp angle of his jaw. Rory’s breath hitched, locking in her throat. For a second, she considered ducking behind the taps. The impulse to flee, so carefully cultivated over the last three years, flared in her chest like a struck match. But his eyes swept the room and landed on her. There was a pause, a microscopic calibration of reality, before his polite detachment shattered. "Aurora?" The name sounded foreign. Too formal. Too clean for this place where maps on the walls charted dead empires and the photos captured men who no longer existed. She straightened, forcing her spine against the edge of the back counter. "Hello, Marcus." Marcus wavered, then approached the bar. He moved differently now. In Cardiff, he had shambled, weighed down by backpacks full of tort law textbooks and the crushing expectation of his father’s firm. Now, he cut through the space with the arrogance of a man who billed by the minute. He stopped, placing a hand on the wood. A gold watch peeked from under a crisp white cuff. "I thought I was hallucinating. The firm has me in London for a deposition, I took a wrong turn looking for a cab, and... Jesus. Aurora Carter." "Just Rory now." She reached for a rag and began wiping down a spot that was already clean. The circular motion gave her hands something to do; otherwise, they might shake. "What can I get you?" Marcus blinked, the professional veneer slipping. "A drink? I don't know. Scotch. Neat. Whatever you have that burns." She turned to the shelf, her fingers finding the bottle of Glenfiddich by muscle memory. She could feel his eyes on her back, dissecting the changes. The flannel shirt, the worn denim, the tension in her shoulders that hadn't been there when they used to study in the university library until dawn. She poured the amber liquid into a heavy tumbler and slid it across the wood. He took it but didn't drink. "Three years, Rory. Not a text. Not an email. You just vanished. We thought..." He trailed off, looking around the dimly lit bar, taking in the peeling wallpaper and the scent of old dust. "We thought something happened to you. Something worse than leaving." "I needed to leave." "Without saying goodbye to me?" "Especially without saying goodbye to you." The words hung between them, heavy and wet. Marcus took a drink, wincing as it went down. "Because I represented the path? Or because I was friends with Evan?" The name made the scar on her left wrist itch. It was a phantom sensation, a reminder of the crescent-shaped mark and the night the glass table shattered. "You weren't friends. You were peers. There's a difference." "I sat next to him in Constitutional Law." Marcus swirled the ice he hadn't asked for, realizing too late the drink was neat. He stared into the glass. "He’s a junior partner now. Did you know that? engaged to a girl from the valleys. Very wholesome. Very public." Rory’s grip on the rag tightened until her knuckles turned the color of old parchment. "I don't keep up with the alumni newsletter." "I do." Marcus looked up, his eyes searching hers, looking for the bright-eyed girl who debated ethics with ferocious idealism. He didn't find her. He found someone harder, a woman who looked at the door every time it opened. "I asked him about you once. About a month after you disappeared. We were at a mixer." "I don't want to know." "He laughed," Marcus continued, ignoring her. "He said you weren't cut out for the pressure. Said you were fragile." "I'm sure that made everyone feel better." "It made me want to punch him." Marcus sighed, a long exhale that deflated his expensive posture. "But I didn't. I laughed along. Because I needed the reference." Rory stopped wiping the counter. She looked at him, really looked at him, for the first time since he entered. The lines around his eyes were deeper. There was a grayness to his skin that spoke of eighty-hour weeks and vitamin D deficiency. He had the success they had both clawed for, and he looked miserable. "We make our choices," she said, her voice soft. "Do we?" He gestured to the bar, to the empty stools, to the rain slashing against the window. "Is this a choice, Rory? Serving drinks to strangers in Soho? You were the smartest person in our year. You argued circles around the professors. You were going to be a barrister. You were going to change things." "I am changing things." "What things?" "Kegs. Ashtrays. The playlist." A dry smile touched her lips, but it didn't reach her bright blue eyes. "I have peace, Marcus. Most days." He leaned in, the scent of expensive cologne warring with the bar's musk. "Do you? Make-believe names. Hiding in the dark. It’s not peace, it’s a holding pattern. You’re waiting for the other shoe to drop." "The shoe dropped three years ago. I'm just watching the ripples." The door to the back room creaked open. Silas emerged, limping slightly, his hazel eyes scanning the room with the predatory grace of a feline. He saw Marcus, saw the proximity, and the tension in Rory's posture. He didn't intervene, but his presence shifted the air in the room. He moved to the far end of the bar and began polishing glasses, his silver signet ring clicking rhythmically against the crystal. A silent assertion of territory. Marcus glanced at the older man, sensing the shift. He straightened, pulling his coat tighter. "Your boss?" "My landlord. My friend." "You have new friends." Marcus finished his drink in one swallow. The unspoken accusation stung more than the alcohol. *You replaced us.* "Old friends are heavy," Rory said. "They remember who you were supposed to be." Marcus stared at the empty glass. He reached for his wallet, pulling out a sleek black card. "Let me take you to dinner. Real dinner. Not... whatever you eat here. We can talk. Properly. I can help you, Rory. If you’re in trouble. If it’s money, or legal—" "Put it away." Her voice was sharp, cutting through the ambient jazz playing low on the speakers. "I just want to help." "You want to fix it," she corrected. "You want to patch up the hole in your conscience because you laughed at Evan’s joke three years ago. You want to buy me a steak and convince me to come back and finish my degree so the world makes sense again. So that the bright girl didn't end up pouring whiskey in a dive." Marcus froze, the card hovering halfway to the counter. His face flushed, a slow burn of shame creeping up his neck. He lowered his hand, sliding the wallet back into his pocket. "Is it really that simpler to hate me than to admit you made a mistake?" "I don't hate you, Marcus." She looked at her wrist, thumb mesmerizing index finger over the crescent scar. "And I didn't make a mistake. I survived. There’s a distinct difference that they don't teach in torts." He stood there for a long moment, the silence stretching, filled only by the hum of the refrigerator and the distant siren of a police car navigating the labyrinth of London streets. He looked at her, truly seeing the stranger wearing his friend's face. The softness was gone, replaced by a brittle resilience that frightened him. "I miss you," he whispered. It was an admission of defeat. "I know." Rory picked up his glass, dunking it into the soapy water of the sink. "I miss who I was, too. But she didn't make it out of Cardiff." Marcus nodded slowly. He buttoned his coat, the fabric stiff and unyielding. He tapped the bar twice—an old signal from the library, meaning *time to go*. "If you ever... if you change your mind. I'm in the directory." "Goodbye, Marcus." He turned and walked to the door. He didn't look back. The bell chimed again, a cheerful farewell, and then he was swallowed by the London night, just another silhouette against the rain. Rory stood motionless, her hands submerged in the warm, soapy water. The heat seeped into her skin, but it couldn't reach the cold knot in her stomach. Silas moved down the bar, his limp pronounced as he favored his left leg. He didn't ask who the man was. He didn't ask if she was okay. He simply placed a clean, dry glass in front of her and poured a measure of the good stuff—the bottle he kept under the counter for himself. "Rain's coming down harder," Silas murmured, his voice gravel and smoke. Rory pulled her hands from the water, drying them on a towel. She picked up the glass. "Yeah. It'll wash the streets clean by morning." "Ideally." Silas drank from his own glass, his eyes fixed on the door where Marcus had exited. "But some stains set deep." Rory took a sip, the whiskey burning a path through the numbness. She traced the rim of the glass, listening to the relentless drumming against the pane. "He made associate." "Poor bastard," Silas said. Rory let out a breath she hadn't realized she was holding, a short, sharp sound that might have been a laugh if there had been any humor in it. She turned away from the door, away from the street, and looked at the map on the wall behind the bar. It was an old naval chart, full of dragons and warnings of deep water. "Yeah. Poor bastard."
created_at"2026-02-19T12:35:20.697Z" 2/19/2026, 12:35:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.621
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1810
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
2"really"
3"slightly"
4"truly"
5"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1810
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"sentinel"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count2
3
word"wavered"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"tension"
count2
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"navigating"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"sentinel"
1"gloom"
2"shattered"
3"wavered"
4"could feel"
5"tension"
6"reminder"
7"scanning"
8"crystal"
9"unspoken"
10"silence"
11"navigating"
12"stomach"
13"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences103
matches
0"looked miserable"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords6
totalWords1803
ratio0.003
matches
0"You replaced us."
1"time to go"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1281
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Marcus"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Marcus"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Silas6
Prague1
Rory11
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Glenfiddich1
Marcus14
London2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Marcus"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Prague"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
globalScore0.954
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1803
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean29.56
std21.03
cv0.712
sampleLengths
075
169
215
352
47
553
61
728
814
949
1045
1136
1218
1352
1415
1550
164
175
186
1929
2037
2148
2223
2356
245
2519
267
2728
2856
299
3056
314
322
3324
3436
3511
3676
3717
384
3922
4014
4148
4217
435
4462
4547
4636
4756
4811
4930
98.45% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"was gone"
1"was swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs217
matches
0"was acting"
1"was holding"
62.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences142
ratio0.028
matches
0"She wasn't supposed to be working tonight, but Silas’s knee was acting up—the old injury from Prague swelling with the drop in barometric pressure."
1"The circular motion gave her hands something to do; otherwise, they might shake."
2"He tapped the bar twice—an old signal from the library, meaning *time to go*."
3"He simply placed a clean, dry glass in front of her and poured a measure of the good stuff—the bottle he kept under the counter for himself."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1287
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02097902097902098
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008547008547008548
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean12.7
std8.3
cv0.653
sampleLengths
027
123
225
324
418
527
615
714
821
917
107
119
1220
1310
1414
151
164
172
1822
1912
202
216
224
2322
2417
258
2610
2727
2818
2913
305
316
3212
3315
3411
3526
3615
376
3834
3910
404
415
426
438
449
4512
4610
4718
489
4923
38.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.30985915492957744
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners44
34.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Too clean for this place"
ratio0.01
32.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences98
matches
0"She wasn't supposed to be"
1"He was in the back,"
2"He wore a charcoal overcoat"
3"He turned, smoothing the lapels,"
4"She straightened, forcing her spine"
5"He moved differently now."
6"He stopped, placing a hand"
7"She reached for a rag"
8"She turned to the shelf,"
9"She could feel his eyes"
10"She poured the amber liquid"
11"He took it but didn't"
12"He trailed off, looking around"
13"It was a phantom sensation,"
14"He stared into the glass."
15"He didn't find her."
16"He found someone harder, a"
17"She looked at him, really"
18"He had the success they"
19"she said, her voice soft"
ratio0.469
11.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences98
matches
0"Aurora Carter leaned her elbows"
1"She wasn't supposed to be"
2"He was in the back,"
3"The brass bell above the"
4"A man shook a dripping"
5"He wore a charcoal overcoat"
6"He turned, smoothing the lapels,"
7"Rory’s breath hitched, locking in"
8"The impulse to flee, so"
9"The name sounded foreign."
10"She straightened, forcing her spine"
11"Marcus wavered, then approached the"
12"He moved differently now."
13"He stopped, placing a hand"
14"A gold watch peeked from"
15"She reached for a rag"
16"The circular motion gave her"
17"Marcus blinked, the professional veneer"
18"She turned to the shelf,"
19"She could feel his eyes"
ratio0.898
51.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Now, he cut through the"
ratio0.01
61.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Rain battered the pavement of Soho, turning the grimy asphalt into a sleek, reflective river that caught the green bleed of the neon sign above the door."
1"Aurora Carter leaned her elbows on the polished mahogany of the bar, chin resting in her palms, watching the few scattered patrons nurse their sorrows."
2"So she stood sentinel, her straight black hair forming a curtain around her face, shielding her from the inquisitive glances of a tourist couple near the window…"
3"He wore a charcoal overcoat that cost more than Rory made in six months of delivering noodles for the Golden Empress."
4"The flannel shirt, the worn denim, the tension in her shoulders that hadn't been there when they used to study in the university library until dawn."
5"There was a grayness to his skin that spoke of eighty-hour weeks and vitamin D deficiency."
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice soft"
46.55% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Marcus swirled (swirl)"
1"Marcus continued (continue)"
2"Marcus sighed (sigh)"
3"she corrected (correct)"
4"he whispered (whisper)"
5"Silas murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.155
leniency0.31
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.207
81.0298%