| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 78.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 919 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 919 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "practiced ease" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "depths" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 32.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 907 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.88% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 877 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.48 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 13 | | Soho | 2 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | North | 1 | | London | 4 | | Victorian | 2 | | Morris | 3 | | Thames | 1 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Nest" | | 3 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "North" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Thames" |
| | globalScore | 0.759 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "eyes that seemed to catch and hold the meager light" | | 1 | "locations that seemed to exist in the spaces between official maps" | | 2 | "circle that seemed to shrink with each step down" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 907 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.05% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "screamed that this" | | 1 | "was that he" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 28.34 | | std | 15.65 | | cv | 0.552 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 47 | | 31 | 10 |
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| 94.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "was connected" | | 1 | "being conducted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0.159 | | matches | | 0 | "The figure ahead—medium height, dark clothing—vaulted over a low brick wall with practiced ease." | | 1 | "Quinn's radio crackled with static—she was moving beyond reliable range." | | 2 | "The figure looked up—a flash of pale skin, eyes that seemed to catch and hold the meager light." | | 3 | "The air rising from below carried scents that didn't belong—incense, ozone, something organic that made her stomach clench." | | 4 | "She checked her watch—11:47 PM." | | 5 | "Not just voices—music, laughter, the sound of commerce being conducted." | | 6 | "\"—told you the bone token wouldn't work much longer—\"" | | 7 | "\"—market's moving again after tomorrow night—\"" | | 8 | "\"—too many surface dwellers getting curious—\"" | | 9 | "This wasn't just a hiding place—it was an entire community existing beneath London's streets." | | 10 | "The passage opened into a wider space, and she caught her first glimpse of what lay ahead—lights strung between stone arches, the warm glow of lanterns, the bustle of a market that operated by rules she didn't understand." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 694 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "moving beyond reliable range." |
| | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.02881844380403458 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01440922190201729 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 13.14 | | std | 6.9 | | cv | 0.525 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 78.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4782608695652174 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 52.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Then they dropped something small" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Her worn boots splashed through" | | 1 | "she shouted, her voice barely" | | 2 | "She cleared the wall, landing" | | 3 | "Her quarry had gained ground," | | 4 | "she panted into her collar" | | 5 | "She emerged into a small" | | 6 | "He dropped through the opening," | | 7 | "Her radio gave a final" | | 8 | "She thought of DS Morris," | | 9 | "She checked her watch—11:47 PM." | | 10 | "Her shift had ended two" | | 11 | "Her torch beam revealed more" | | 12 | "She pressed herself against the" | | 13 | "They moved past her hiding" | | 14 | "They disappeared up the stairs," | | 15 | "Her torch flickered, battery warning" | | 16 | "She had perhaps thirty minutes" | | 17 | "She clicked off her torch" |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 55.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Her worn boots splashed through" | | 1 | "she shouted, her voice barely" | | 2 | "The figure ahead—medium height, dark" | | 3 | "Quinn cursed under her breath," | | 4 | "She cleared the wall, landing" | | 5 | "Her quarry had gained ground," | | 6 | "Quinn's lungs burned as she" | | 7 | "The chase led them away" | | 8 | "Streetlights became sparse, their orange" | | 9 | "Quinn's radio crackled with static—she" | | 10 | "she panted into her collar" | | 11 | "The figure ahead suddenly veered" | | 12 | "Quinn slowed, drawing her torch." | | 13 | "The narrow gap barely accommodated" | | 14 | "She emerged into a small" | | 15 | "The suspect knelt beside it," | | 16 | "Quinn's voice echoed off the" | | 17 | "The figure looked up—a flash" | | 18 | "Metal groaned, and the heavy" | | 19 | "The voice was male, younger" |
| | ratio | 0.81 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 18.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Her worn boots splashed through puddles that reflected the fractured neon light from The Raven's Nest's green sign, now fifty metres behind her." | | 1 | "Her quarry had gained ground, weaving between parked cars with the fluid movement of someone who knew these streets intimately." | | 2 | "Stone steps descended into a tunnel that looked far older than London's Victorian infrastructure." | | 3 | "The air rising from below carried scents that didn't belong—incense, ozone, something organic that made her stomach clench." | | 4 | "The pattern of disappearances, the witnesses who described impossible things before recanting their statements, the locations that seemed to exist in the spaces…" | | 5 | "Enough time to follow the suspect deeper into whatever lay ahead, or to retreat and call for backup that wouldn't believe her report." | | 6 | "And somewhere in this underground maze, the suspect who knew her name was disappearing deeper into shadows that might swallow him as completely as they'd swallo…" | | 7 | "The passage opened into a wider space, and she caught her first glimpse of what lay ahead—lights strung between stone arches, the warm glow of lanterns, the bus…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she shouted, her voice barely cutting through the storm's roar" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 1 | "she panted (pant)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |