Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYBP1WJZRXS017G8RK7KXV

Run Details

Duration:
33.5s
Cost:
$0.022140

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement like bullets, each drop exploding against Detective Harlow Quinn's leather jacket as she sprinted down the narrow Soho alley. Her worn boots splashed through puddles that reflected the fractured neon light from The Raven's Nest's green sign, now fifty metres behind her. "Stop! Police!" she shouted, her voice barely cutting through the storm's roar. The figure ahead—medium height, dark clothing—vaulted over a low brick wall with practiced ease. Quinn cursed under her breath, her military training kicking in as she pursued. Eighteen years on the force had taught her to trust her instincts, and every instinct screamed that this runner was connected to the string of unexplained disappearances plaguing North London. She cleared the wall, landing hard on the other side. Her quarry had gained ground, weaving between parked cars with the fluid movement of someone who knew these streets intimately. Quinn's lungs burned as she pushed herself harder, rain stinging her eyes. The chase led them away from Soho's familiar chaos, through twisting side streets that grew progressively darker. Streetlights became sparse, their orange glow struggling against the storm's fury. Quinn's radio crackled with static—she was moving beyond reliable range. "Suspect heading north on foot," she panted into her collar mic, knowing the transmission would likely fragment. "Pursuing through—" The figure ahead suddenly veered left, disappearing into what appeared to be solid shadow between two Victorian buildings. Quinn slowed, drawing her torch. The narrow gap barely accommodated her shoulders as she squeezed through, brick scraping against her jacket. She emerged into a small courtyard dominated by a rusted iron grate set into the ground. The suspect knelt beside it, hands working at something Quinn couldn't see clearly through the rain. "Freeze!" Quinn's voice echoed off the surrounding walls. "Hands where I can see them!" The figure looked up—a flash of pale skin, eyes that seemed to catch and hold the meager light. Then they dropped something small and white into the grate's mechanism. Metal groaned, and the heavy cover swung open on hidden hinges. "You don't understand what you're chasing, Detective Quinn." The voice was male, younger than she'd expected, with an accent she couldn't place. But what made her blood run cold was that he knew her name. "How do you—" He dropped through the opening, vanishing into the darkness below. Quinn approached the grate cautiously, torch beam probing the depths. Stone steps descended into a tunnel that looked far older than London's Victorian infrastructure. The air rising from below carried scents that didn't belong—incense, ozone, something organic that made her stomach clench. Her radio gave a final burst of static before dying completely. She thought of DS Morris, her partner who'd vanished three years ago during a case that had started just like this. One moment he'd been beside her, pursuing a suspect into London's hidden places. The next morning, they'd found his jacket floating in the Thames, no other trace. The official report blamed equipment failure and drowning. Quinn knew better. Morris had been a strong swimmer, cautious to a fault. Whatever had taken him down there in the darkness had been something the Metropolitan Police weren't equipped to handle. But she'd learned things since then. Made connections. The pattern of disappearances, the witnesses who described impossible things before recanting their statements, the locations that seemed to exist in the spaces between official maps. She checked her watch—11:47 PM. Her shift had ended two hours ago, but this felt too important to hand off to the night crew. Too personal. Quinn descended the first few steps, keeping one hand on the rough stone wall. The opening above provided the only light, a grey circle that seemed to shrink with each step down. Her torch beam revealed more stone steps, carved with symbols that predated any architectural style she recognised. The tunnel leveled out after twenty steps. Ahead, the passage branched into multiple directions, and Quinn could hear voices echoing from somewhere deeper in the network. Not just voices—music, laughter, the sound of commerce being conducted. She pressed herself against the wall as two figures emerged from the left passage. They moved past her hiding spot without noticing, their conversation drifting back: "—told you the bone token wouldn't work much longer—" "—market's moving again after tomorrow night—" "—too many surface dwellers getting curious—" They disappeared up the stairs, leaving Quinn alone with the knowledge that she'd stumbled onto something vast and organised. This wasn't just a hiding place—it was an entire community existing beneath London's streets. Her torch flickered, battery warning light glowing amber. She had perhaps thirty minutes of illumination left, assuming the old device held its charge. Enough time to follow the suspect deeper into whatever lay ahead, or to retreat and call for backup that wouldn't believe her report. The smart play was retreat. Wait for daylight, bring a team, approach this methodically. But Morris hadn't had backup when he'd needed it. And somewhere in this underground maze, the suspect who knew her name was disappearing deeper into shadows that might swallow him as completely as they'd swallowed her partner. Quinn moved forward, following the sound of distant voices. The passage opened into a wider space, and she caught her first glimpse of what lay ahead—lights strung between stone arches, the warm glow of lanterns, the bustle of a market that operated by rules she didn't understand. She clicked off her torch and stepped into the darkness.
total_cost0.02214

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount919
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"cautiously"
2"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount919
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"practiced ease"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"depths"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"practiced ease"
2"familiar"
3"echoed"
4"depths"
5"stomach"
6"echoing"
7"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
32.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences65
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords907
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.88% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount877
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Soho2
Raven1
Nest1
North1
London4
Victorian2
Morris3
Thames1
Metropolitan1
Police1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Nest"
3"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"North"
3"London"
4"Thames"
globalScore0.759
windowScore0.833
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"eyes that seemed to catch and hold the meager light"
1"locations that seemed to exist in the spaces between official maps"
2"circle that seemed to shrink with each step down"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount907
matches(empty)
70.05% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"screamed that this"
1"was that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean28.34
std15.65
cv0.552
sampleLengths
046
112
257
342
438
519
639
732
814
940
108
1127
123
1310
1442
1511
1648
1740
1834
1926
2049
2136
2226
239
246
256
2633
2746
2814
2937
3047
3110
94.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"was connected"
1"being conducted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was disappearing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences69
ratio0.159
matches
0"The figure ahead—medium height, dark clothing—vaulted over a low brick wall with practiced ease."
1"Quinn's radio crackled with static—she was moving beyond reliable range."
2"The figure looked up—a flash of pale skin, eyes that seemed to catch and hold the meager light."
3"The air rising from below carried scents that didn't belong—incense, ozone, something organic that made her stomach clench."
4"She checked her watch—11:47 PM."
5"Not just voices—music, laughter, the sound of commerce being conducted."
6"\"—told you the bone token wouldn't work much longer—\""
7"\"—market's moving again after tomorrow night—\""
8"\"—too many surface dwellers getting curious—\""
9"This wasn't just a hiding place—it was an entire community existing beneath London's streets."
10"The passage opened into a wider space, and she caught her first glimpse of what lay ahead—lights strung between stone arches, the warm glow of lanterns, the bustle of a market that operated by rules she didn't understand."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount694
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"moving beyond reliable range."
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02881844380403458
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01440922190201729
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean13.14
std6.9
cv0.525
sampleLengths
023
123
212
314
413
530
610
720
812
917
1011
1110
1217
132
1418
155
1616
1716
1816
198
206
2118
2211
2311
248
2514
2613
273
2810
2910
3014
3118
3211
3321
3413
3514
368
373
3810
3919
406
412
4226
435
4419
452
4614
4718
4817
497
78.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4782608695652174
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners33
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Then they dropped something small"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences63
matches
0"Her worn boots splashed through"
1"she shouted, her voice barely"
2"She cleared the wall, landing"
3"Her quarry had gained ground,"
4"she panted into her collar"
5"She emerged into a small"
6"He dropped through the opening,"
7"Her radio gave a final"
8"She thought of DS Morris,"
9"She checked her watch—11:47 PM."
10"Her shift had ended two"
11"Her torch beam revealed more"
12"She pressed herself against the"
13"They moved past her hiding"
14"They disappeared up the stairs,"
15"Her torch flickered, battery warning"
16"She had perhaps thirty minutes"
17"She clicked off her torch"
ratio0.286
55.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences63
matches
0"Her worn boots splashed through"
1"she shouted, her voice barely"
2"The figure ahead—medium height, dark"
3"Quinn cursed under her breath,"
4"She cleared the wall, landing"
5"Her quarry had gained ground,"
6"Quinn's lungs burned as she"
7"The chase led them away"
8"Streetlights became sparse, their orange"
9"Quinn's radio crackled with static—she"
10"she panted into her collar"
11"The figure ahead suddenly veered"
12"Quinn slowed, drawing her torch."
13"The narrow gap barely accommodated"
14"She emerged into a small"
15"The suspect knelt beside it,"
16"Quinn's voice echoed off the"
17"The figure looked up—a flash"
18"Metal groaned, and the heavy"
19"The voice was male, younger"
ratio0.81
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Her worn boots splashed through puddles that reflected the fractured neon light from The Raven's Nest's green sign, now fifty metres behind her."
1"Her quarry had gained ground, weaving between parked cars with the fluid movement of someone who knew these streets intimately."
2"Stone steps descended into a tunnel that looked far older than London's Victorian infrastructure."
3"The air rising from below carried scents that didn't belong—incense, ozone, something organic that made her stomach clench."
4"The pattern of disappearances, the witnesses who described impossible things before recanting their statements, the locations that seemed to exist in the spaces…"
5"Enough time to follow the suspect deeper into whatever lay ahead, or to retreat and call for backup that wouldn't believe her report."
6"And somewhere in this underground maze, the suspect who knew her name was disappearing deeper into shadows that might swallow him as completely as they'd swallo…"
7"The passage opened into a wider space, and she caught her first glimpse of what lay ahead—lights strung between stone arches, the warm glow of lanterns, the bus…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she shouted, her voice barely cutting through the storm's roar"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"she panted (pant)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.4
71.6847%