Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYBS1376DY118020WHDGJ8

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Duration:
1m 50s
Cost:
$0.009611
Provider:
Friendli

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The amber light hit Aurora's face like a physical weight. She squinted against it, one hand flying up to shield her eyes as the world bled into existence around her. The portal behind them—a tear in reality that Nyx had pulled her through—shimmered like oil on water before collapsing in on itself with a sound like breaking glass. 'Welcome to Dymas.' Nyx's whisper carried that strange wind-blown quality, their shadow form flickering at the edges where the amber light touched them. Aurora turned in a slow circle. Her boots sank into grass the colour of burnt honey, each blade thick and soft beneath her feet. The landscape rolled away in every direction—endless vineyards stretching toward a horizon that seemed too far away, orchards heavy with fruit she couldn't name, gardens spiralling in patterns that hurt her eyes if she followed them too long. The sky burned with that deep amber glow, no sun visible, just radiance emanating from everywhere and nowhere. 'It's warm.' She hadn't meant to speak aloud. 'Gluttony runs hot.' Nyx drifted beside her, their violet eyes scanning the vista. 'Everything here feeds something. The land, the air, the souls. All consumption.' Aurora's hand went to her chest without thinking. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against her sternum, that faint warmth she'd grown accustomed to now a steady thrum against her ribs. Here, in this place, it felt almost alive. They walked. There was no path, but the grass bent ahead of them as if something had already passed that way. The air smelled of honey and something richer underneath—wine, maybe, or the ghost of a feast long finished. Aurora breathed it in despite herself, and her stomach clenched with a hunger she hadn't felt moments before. 'The pendant.' Nyx's voice dropped lower. 'It knows this place.' 'It should. The codex said it came from here.' Aurora pulled the chain over her head, letting the crimson gemstone catch the amber light. It glowed from within, that soft pulse quickening. 'Someone sent it to me. Someone wanted me to find this realm.' 'Or wanted Dymas to find you.' She didn't respond to that. Ahead, the vineyards gave way to an orchard of trees with bark like polished obsidian. Fruit hung from their branches—globes of deep purple that seemed to shift and move when she looked at them directly. She stepped closer, her curiosity overriding the unease crawling up her spine. 'Don't.' Nyx materialised in front of her, solid and blocking her path. Their humanoid form held steady, shadow given shape and intent. 'The fruit here answers to Belphegor. One bite and you belong to the realm. Another soul for the feasts.' Aurora stepped back. The purple globes had stopped moving. Had they ever moved at all, or had the light played tricks on her eyes? 'The souls.' She looked past Nyx to the endless orchards. 'The codex mentioned master chefs. Helbound souls.' 'Most of them chose their contracts.' Nyx turned, their form rippling as they surveyed the landscape. 'Wealth, power, pleasure. They traded their eternity for a season of excess. Now they cook for the courts of Hel, forever seeking a flavour they can never quite capture again.' A sound drifted across the orchard. Laughter, distant and layered, accompanied by the clinking of glass and the low hum of conversation. Aurora's head turned toward it automatically. 'Feast halls.' Nyx followed her gaze. 'Dymas is never quiet. There's always a table somewhere, always a celebration. The Prince ensures it.' 'Prince Belphegor.' 'He'll know we're here. May already know.' Nyx's violet eyes narrowed. 'Shades aren't welcome in his courts. Too much... history between the realms.' Aurora touched the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. Isolde's gift sat cold against her palm, that moonsilver edge catching the amber light and throwing it back in silver-white fragments. The Seer had pressed it into her hands three nights ago, her lavender eyes distant, her voice a murmur of riddles about hungers that consume and debts that must be paid. 'The blade will cut through wards,' Isolde had said. 'But it cannot cut through appetite. Remember that, Aurora Carter. The hungers you meet in Dymas will know your name before you speak it.' 'We should keep moving.' Aurora released the blade and adjusted the strap of her bag. 'The pendant's pulling us somewhere. I can feel it.' Nyx studied her for a long moment. Their form shifted, shadow curling at the edges like smoke in a breeze that didn't exist. 'You're handling this well. For a mortal who'd never left her plane until yesterday.' 'I'm handling it the same way I handle everything.' Aurora started walking, the grass crunching softly beneath her boots. 'One step at a time, no room for panic.' 'Your ex—he took that from you? The ability to panic?' Her jaw tightened. 'Evan took plenty. Left some things, too.' They walked in silence for a while, the orchard giving way to gardens where flowers bloomed in spirals of amber and crimson. The petals seemed too large, too perfect, and when Aurora brushed against one, it released a scent that made her mouth water instantly. 'Everything here wants to be consumed,' Nyx said. 'The land itself is an invitation.' 'And the people who live here? The souls?' 'They're the guests. The entertainment. Sometimes the main course, if they displease the wrong host.' A path appeared beneath their feet—pale stone worn smooth by centuries of footsteps. Aurora followed it without comment, the pendant's pulse growing stronger with each stride. The warmth had spread from her chest down to her fingertips, and she recognised the sensation from the first time she'd held the stone. Guidance. Direction. Something was calling to it. Or someone. The garden opened into a courtyard. Aurora stopped at its edge, her breath catching before she could stop it. Fountains dominated the space—dozens of them, each carved from a different coloured stone, each spouting liquid that caught the amber light and scattered it in prisms. Wine flowed from fountains of deep burgundy marble. What looked like melted gold poured from fountains of black stone. And in the centre, a fountain of white marble released a constant stream of something that glowed faintly blue, the liquid rising and falling in a slow rhythm like breathing. 'The heart of the garden.' Nyx appeared beside her, their voice barely a whisper now. 'Old magic. Older than the realm itself, some say.' Aurora stepped into the courtyard. The stone was warm beneath her boots, and she realised with a start that the ground hummed—a low vibration she could feel through the soles of her shoes. The fountains weren't just decorative. They were part of something larger, a network of power that fed into the land itself. 'Why would someone send me here?' She turned the pendant over in her hands, watching the crimson stone catch the light. 'What's in Dymas that they wanted me to find?' 'Answers, perhaps.' Nyx drifted toward the central fountain, their shadow form bending around its edges. 'Or questions you haven't learned to ask yet.' The blue liquid pulsed. Aurora watched it rise and fall, that strange rhythm almost hypnotic. 'Isolde said the Veil is weakening.' She joined Nyx at the fountain's edge. 'That the solstice will bring tears. Is that why we're here? Is Dymas connected to the Veil?' 'Everything is connected to the Veil.' Nyx's violet eyes glowed brighter, fixed on the pulsing liquid. 'The barrier between worlds runs through all realms—not just Earth. What happens in Dymas echoes in your world. What happens in your world reaches here.' 'So if the Veil breaks—' 'All doors open at once.' The pendant flared. Aurora gasped, the sudden heat against her palm almost painful. The crimson glow brightened, pulsing in time with the fountain's rhythm, and for a moment—just a moment—she could feel something on the other side. A presence. A mind that brushed against hers like fingers trailing through water. Then it was gone. The pendant cooled. The fountain returned to its steady pulse. 'We need to find out who sent this.' Aurora's voice came out steadier than she felt. 'And what they want me to do with it.' Nyx turned to face her, their shadow form solidifying into something almost human. 'Some doors, once opened, cannot be closed. Are you certain you want to knock?' Aurora looked out across the courtyard, past the fountains, to where the amber sky met the endless vineyards. Somewhere in this realm of excess and indulgence, someone was waiting for her. Someone who knew her name, who'd sent her a piece of Dymas itself. 'I didn't come this far to stand at the threshold.' She met Nyx's violet gaze. 'If there's something I'm supposed to find, I'll find it. If there's something I'm supposed to fight—' She touched the Fae blade at her hip. 'I'll fight it.' Nyx made a sound that might have been a laugh, if shadows could laugh. 'Then let's hope your appetite for answers exceeds the realm's appetite for you.' They moved deeper into the courtyard, the warm amber light swallowing their shadows whole. Behind them, the fountains pulsed on, eternal and patient, feeding a hunger that had never once been sated.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1543
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1543
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count3
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"almost alive"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count3
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"marble"
count2
13
word"could feel"
count2
14
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"shimmered"
2"whisper"
3"scanning"
4"pulsed"
5"warmth"
6"almost alive"
7"stomach"
8"pulse"
9"silence"
10"perfect"
11"footsteps"
12"marble"
13"could feel"
14"echoes"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences151
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1529
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.37% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1047
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora15
Nyx4
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
Prince1
May1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Seer1
Carter1
Dymas4
Fae2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Pendant"
3"Hel"
4"Prince"
5"Seer"
6"Carter"
7"Dymas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.784
windowScore1
77.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared beneath their feet—pale stone worn smooth by centuries of footsteps"
1"looked like melted gold poured from fount"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1529
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences151
matches
0"passed that way"
1"Remember that, Aurora"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean28.85
std18.79
cv0.651
sampleLengths
058
123
280
38
425
537
657
710
844
96
1052
1141
1224
1317
1446
1528
1622
172
1823
1960
2033
2124
2237
2328
2410
2510
2645
2714
288
2915
3057
312
3219
3375
3424
3554
3630
3723
3815
3930
4041
415
425
4350
4414
4525
4627
4744
4832
498
98.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"was gone"
1"been sated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was calling"
1"was waiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences151
ratio0.053
matches
0"The portal behind them—a tear in reality that Nyx had pulled her through—shimmered like oil on water before collapsing in on itself with a sound like breaking glass."
1"The landscape rolled away in every direction—endless vineyards stretching toward a horizon that seemed too far away, orchards heavy with fruit she couldn't name, gardens spiralling in patterns that hurt her eyes if she followed them too long."
2"The air smelled of honey and something richer underneath—wine, maybe, or the ghost of a feast long finished."
3"Fruit hung from their branches—globes of deep purple that seemed to shift and move when she looked at them directly."
4"A path appeared beneath their feet—pale stone worn smooth by centuries of footsteps."
5"Fountains dominated the space—dozens of them, each carved from a different coloured stone, each spouting liquid that caught the amber light and scattered it in prisms."
6"The stone was warm beneath her boots, and she realised with a start that the ground hummed—a low vibration she could feel through the soles of her shoes."
7"The crimson glow brightened, pulsing in time with the fountain's rhythm, and for a moment—just a moment—she could feel something on the other side."
91.25% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount60
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.05
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences151
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences151
mean10.13
std7.11
cv0.702
sampleLengths
010
120
228
323
46
518
638
718
88
913
104
116
122
138
1421
158
162
1719
1818
1918
206
214
222
2322
248
255
267
276
285
2915
3020
3112
3212
3310
346
358
365
373
386
3915
4010
415
422
4316
443
459
4618
476
4816
496
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.44370860927152317
totalSentences151
uniqueOpeners67
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"Sometimes the main course, if"
1"Then it was gone."
2"Somewhere in this realm of"
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences88
matches
0"She squinted against it, one"
1"Her boots sank into grass"
2"It glowed from within, that"
3"She didn't respond to that."
4"She stepped closer, her curiosity"
5"Their humanoid form held steady,"
6"They traded their eternity for"
7"I can feel"
8"Their form shifted, shadow curling"
9"Her jaw tightened."
10"They walked in silence for"
11"They were part of something"
12"She touched the Fae blade"
13"They moved deeper into the"
ratio0.159
85.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences88
matches
0"The amber light hit Aurora's"
1"She squinted against it, one"
2"The portal behind them—a tear"
3"Aurora turned in a slow"
4"Her boots sank into grass"
5"The landscape rolled away in"
6"The sky burned with that"
7"The land, the air, the"
8"Aurora's hand went to her"
9"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against"
10"Here, in this place, it"
11"The air smelled of honey"
12"Aurora breathed it in despite"
13"The codex said it came"
14"It glowed from within, that"
15"Someone wanted me to find"
16"She didn't respond to that."
17"Fruit hung from their branches—globes"
18"She stepped closer, her curiosity"
19"Their humanoid form held steady,"
ratio0.75
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"Now they cook for the"
1"If there's something I'm supposed"
ratio0.023
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The landscape rolled away in every direction—endless vineyards stretching toward a horizon that seemed too far away, orchards heavy with fruit she couldn't name…"
1"She stepped closer, her curiosity overriding the unease crawling up her spine."
2"Their form shifted, shadow curling at the edges like smoke in a breeze that didn't exist."
3"The petals seemed too large, too perfect, and when Aurora brushed against one, it released a scent that made her mouth water instantly."
4"Fountains dominated the space—dozens of them, each carved from a different coloured stone, each spouting liquid that caught the amber light and scattered it in …"
5"And in the centre, a fountain of white marble released a constant stream of something that glowed faintly blue, the liquid rising and falling in a slow rhythm l…"
6"They were part of something larger, a network of power that fed into the land itself."
7"A mind that brushed against hers like fingers trailing through water."
8"Someone who knew her name, who'd sent her a piece of Dymas itself."
9"Behind them, the fountains pulsed on, eternal and patient, feeding a hunger that had never once been sated."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.2930%