| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1543 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1543 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "almost alive" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "marble" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "echoes" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 151 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1529 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.37% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1047 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.43 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 15 | | Nyx | 4 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | May | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Dymas | 4 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Prince" | | 5 | "Seer" | | 6 | "Carter" | | 7 | "Dymas" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.784 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 77.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared beneath their feet—pale stone worn smooth by centuries of footsteps" | | 1 | "looked like melted gold poured from fount" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1529 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "passed that way" | | 1 | "Remember that, Aurora" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 28.85 | | std | 18.79 | | cv | 0.651 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 60 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 57 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 75 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 54 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 41 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 50 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 44 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 98.17% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "was calling" | | 1 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 151 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "The portal behind them—a tear in reality that Nyx had pulled her through—shimmered like oil on water before collapsing in on itself with a sound like breaking glass." | | 1 | "The landscape rolled away in every direction—endless vineyards stretching toward a horizon that seemed too far away, orchards heavy with fruit she couldn't name, gardens spiralling in patterns that hurt her eyes if she followed them too long." | | 2 | "The air smelled of honey and something richer underneath—wine, maybe, or the ghost of a feast long finished." | | 3 | "Fruit hung from their branches—globes of deep purple that seemed to shift and move when she looked at them directly." | | 4 | "A path appeared beneath their feet—pale stone worn smooth by centuries of footsteps." | | 5 | "Fountains dominated the space—dozens of them, each carved from a different coloured stone, each spouting liquid that caught the amber light and scattered it in prisms." | | 6 | "The stone was warm beneath her boots, and she realised with a start that the ground hummed—a low vibration she could feel through the soles of her shoes." | | 7 | "The crimson glow brightened, pulsing in time with the fountain's rhythm, and for a moment—just a moment—she could feel something on the other side." |
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| 91.25% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 60 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 3 | | adverbRatio | 0.05 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 151 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 151 | | mean | 10.13 | | std | 7.11 | | cv | 0.702 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 66.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.44370860927152317 | | totalSentences | 151 | | uniqueOpeners | 67 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Sometimes the main course, if" | | 1 | "Then it was gone." | | 2 | "Somewhere in this realm of" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She squinted against it, one" | | 1 | "Her boots sank into grass" | | 2 | "It glowed from within, that" | | 3 | "She didn't respond to that." | | 4 | "She stepped closer, her curiosity" | | 5 | "Their humanoid form held steady," | | 6 | "They traded their eternity for" | | 7 | "I can feel" | | 8 | "Their form shifted, shadow curling" | | 9 | "Her jaw tightened." | | 10 | "They walked in silence for" | | 11 | "They were part of something" | | 12 | "She touched the Fae blade" | | 13 | "They moved deeper into the" |
| | ratio | 0.159 | |
| 85.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber light hit Aurora's" | | 1 | "She squinted against it, one" | | 2 | "The portal behind them—a tear" | | 3 | "Aurora turned in a slow" | | 4 | "Her boots sank into grass" | | 5 | "The landscape rolled away in" | | 6 | "The sky burned with that" | | 7 | "The land, the air, the" | | 8 | "Aurora's hand went to her" | | 9 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 10 | "Here, in this place, it" | | 11 | "The air smelled of honey" | | 12 | "Aurora breathed it in despite" | | 13 | "The codex said it came" | | 14 | "It glowed from within, that" | | 15 | "Someone wanted me to find" | | 16 | "She didn't respond to that." | | 17 | "Fruit hung from their branches—globes" | | 18 | "She stepped closer, her curiosity" | | 19 | "Their humanoid form held steady," |
| | ratio | 0.75 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Now they cook for the" | | 1 | "If there's something I'm supposed" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The landscape rolled away in every direction—endless vineyards stretching toward a horizon that seemed too far away, orchards heavy with fruit she couldn't name…" | | 1 | "She stepped closer, her curiosity overriding the unease crawling up her spine." | | 2 | "Their form shifted, shadow curling at the edges like smoke in a breeze that didn't exist." | | 3 | "The petals seemed too large, too perfect, and when Aurora brushed against one, it released a scent that made her mouth water instantly." | | 4 | "Fountains dominated the space—dozens of them, each carved from a different coloured stone, each spouting liquid that caught the amber light and scattered it in …" | | 5 | "And in the centre, a fountain of white marble released a constant stream of something that glowed faintly blue, the liquid rising and falling in a slow rhythm l…" | | 6 | "They were part of something larger, a network of power that fed into the land itself." | | 7 | "A mind that brushed against hers like fingers trailing through water." | | 8 | "Someone who knew her name, who'd sent her a piece of Dymas itself." | | 9 | "Behind them, the fountains pulsed on, eternal and patient, feeding a hunger that had never once been sated." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |