Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYBX6FQ0814PT1YHJYWXKH

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bell above the door chimed, a sound Rory usually ignored. Tonight, it grated. She balanced a stack of cardboard boxes, the flaps slick from the sudden downpour outside, and nudged the door shut with her hip. The familiar, comforting gloom of The Raven's Nest enveloped her, smelling of old wood, polished leather, and the faint, metallic tang of Silas’s preferred gin. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a clean white cloth. His movements were precise, economical. He didn’t look up. "Late." "Traffic was a nightmare. And it’s pissing down." Rory slid the boxes onto a dry patch of the floor. "Delivery for Yu-Fei. Some new ceramic bowls." "Leave them. I'll see he gets them." He placed the glass upside down on a shelf, its rim catching the low light. "You're dripping on my floor, Carter." Rory ran a hand through her damp black hair, pushing it away from her face. "Sorry." She glanced around. The bar was empty, save for a single figure hunched over a drink in the farthest corner, swallowed by shadow. A lone drinker. Not unusual for a Tuesday night. She moved towards the bar, peeling off her soaked jacket. The fabric was heavy and cold. "Whiskey," she said, her voice low. "Make it a large one." Silas reached for a bottle without a word. As he poured, the figure in the corner shifted. A chair scraped against the floorboards, a grating sound that cut through the quiet hum of the bar’s ancient refrigerator. Rory paid it no mind, her focus on the amber liquid glugging into the tumbler. The glass slid across the polished mahogany towards her. She wrapped her fingers around it, the chill seeping into her skin. "Rough day?" "The usual." She took a sip. The burn was welcome, a familiar fire in her chest. "Evan texted again." Silas’s jaw tightened, a subtle shift only someone who knew him well would notice. His hand rested on the bar, the silver signet ring on his right finger glinting. "And?" "And I blocked the number. Again." She stared into her drink. "It never ends, does it?" "Some things don't." His gaze drifted past her, towards the shadowy corner. "But some do." Before Rory could ask what he meant, a voice spoke from behind her, a voice she hadn't heard in five years but recognised instantly. It was smoother than she remembered, less frantic, but the cadence was the same. "They say you can't go home again, but they never mention anything about running into old ghosts in a Soho bar." Rory froze. The glass was halfway to her lips. Every muscle in her body went rigid. She turned slowly, her heart a frantic drum against her ribs. Eva stood there. But it wasn’t the Eva Rory remembered. The girl who had dragged her to pubs and clubs, who dyed her hair a new colour every month, who laughed with her entire body, was gone. In her place stood a woman. Her hair was a sleek, professional blonde instead of the chaotic pink-and-blue mohawk of their university days. She wore a tailored charcoal-grey coat that probably cost more than Rory’s monthly rent, and her face, once a canvas of expressive emotion, was a careful, neutral mask. Only her eyes were the same, a deep, knowing brown, and they were fixed on Rory. "Eva?" The name felt foreign on her tongue. "Rory." A small, tight smile touched Eva’s lips. "It’s been a while." "Five years." Rory’s voice was barely a whisper. She put her glass down, the click loud in the sudden silence. "What are you… I didn’t know you were back in London." "Just moved back. A new job." Eva gestured vaguely with a manicured hand. "You look well." The lie hung between them, fragile and obvious. Rory knew she looked tired. She looked like a woman who delivered Chinese food for a living and lived in a cramped flat above a bar, a woman who still flinched at the sound of a raised voice. Eva looked like a woman who won arguments in boardrooms. "You too," Rory lied back. "You look… different." "People change." Eva’s gaze flickered to Silas, who was watching them with an unnerving stillness, then back to Rory. "We do what we have to. To survive." Rory thought of the frantic phone call from Eva, the one that had convinced her to leave Cardiff, to leave Evan. *Just get out, Rory. Please. Get the next train.* That was the last time she had heard her voice. No texts, no emails. Just silence. Five years of it. "Is that what this is?" Rory asked, her voice harder than she intended. "Survival?" Eva’s mask didn’t crack, but something shifted in her eyes. A flicker of the old fire, maybe. Or just guilt. "It's a living." "You just left," Rory said, the words tumbling out now, a dam of five years of unspoken questions breaking. "You told me to run, and I did. I got on that train with nothing but a backpack and you just… vanished. I thought something had happened to you." "I had to make sure you were gone. That he couldn't follow you." Eva took a step closer. The scent of her expensive perfume, something floral and sharp, cut through the bar’s musky air. "It was safer that way. For both of us." "Safer?" Rory let out a short, sharp laugh that held no humour. "I spent a year looking over my shoulder, Eva. I slept on friends' sofas. I worked three jobs just to afford a room the size of a closet. All because you said it was 'safer'. What about you? What was so dangerous that you had to cut me out completely?" Eva’s composure finally fractured. She looked away, towards the rain-streaked window. "You wouldn't understand." "Try me." Rory’s hands were clenched into fists at her sides. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist tingled, an old phantom pain. "We were supposed to be best friends. We were family." "Family." Eva scoffed, the word laced with a bitterness Rory had never heard before. "Family is a liability. It's a weight around your neck. It's the person who knows where all the bodies are buried." Silas moved then, his limp barely noticeable as he rounded the end of the bar. He stopped beside Rory, a quiet, solid presence. "The lady asked you a question." Eva’s eyes darted to Silas, a flicker of fear in their depths. She assessed him in a single glance, her professional mask snapping back into place. "This doesn't concern you." "Anything that happens in my nest concerns me." Silas’s voice was calm, but it carried an undercurrent of steel that made the air feel thicker. He rested his hand on Rory’s shoulder, a gesture of both comfort and possession. "And Rory is under my protection." Eva stared at the hand, then at Rory. A long, tense silence stretched between them. The rain lashed against the windows, and the only sound was the distant wail of a siren. "You should have stayed in Cardiff, Rory," Eva said, her voice flat and cold. "You were never meant for this world." She turned and walked towards the door, her heels clicking sharply on the wooden floor. She didn’t look back. The bell chimed again, and she was gone, swallowed by the London night. Rory stood frozen, the echo of Eva’s words settling over her like a shroud. Silas’s hand was a warm weight on her shoulder. She reached up and touched her own wrist, her fingers tracing the thin, white scar. "Silas," she said, her voice shaking slightly. "Who was that? Really?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
80.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She glanced around [around]"
1"Eva gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"Rory lied back [back]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.12
80.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"completely"
2"sharply"
3"slightly"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count2
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"depths"
count1
14
word"echo"
count1
15
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"comforting"
2"gloom"
3"chill"
4"glinting"
5"chaotic"
6"whisper"
7"silence"
8"flickered"
9"flicker"
10"unspoken"
11"fractured"
12"weight"
13"depths"
14"echo"
15"tracing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"clenched into fists"
1"a flicker of fear"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences90
matches
0"a flicker of fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords9
totalWords1278
ratio0.007
matches
0"Just get out, Rory. Please. Get the next train."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount959
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory24
Raven1
Nest1
Silas9
Tuesday1
Eva15
Chinese1
Cardiff1
Evan1
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
5"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.249
windowScore0.167
77.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a woman who delivered Chinese"
1"looked like a woman who won arguments in"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1278
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean31.95
std20.43
cv0.639
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226
328
464
511
673
72
819
930
1016
1115
1238
1321
1427
15104
168
1712
1831
1916
2056
218
2227
2350
2414
2523
2648
2743
2862
2914
3034
3135
3229
3330
3445
3532
3621
3732
3838
3911
89.67% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"was gone"
1"were fixed"
2"were clenched"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences118
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount964
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.035269709543568464
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.014522821576763486
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean10.83
std7.76
cv0.716
sampleLengths
011
13
223
325
413
55
64
71
819
97
1022
116
1215
134
1420
153
166
1710
186
196
205
218
229
2320
2415
259
2612
272
286
2910
303
3114
3215
331
3411
355
3612
373
3824
3914
4021
412
427
437
4411
453
467
4727
486
4917
63.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4152542372881356
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners49
76.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Only her eyes were the"
1"*Just get out, Rory."
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences87
matches
0"She balanced a stack of"
1"His movements were precise, economical."
2"He didn’t look up."
3"He placed the glass upside"
4"She glanced around"
5"She moved towards the bar,"
6"she said, her voice low"
7"She wrapped her fingers around"
8"She took a sip"
9"His hand rested on the"
10"She stared into her drink"
11"His gaze drifted past her,"
12"It was smoother than she"
13"She turned slowly, her heart"
14"Her hair was a sleek,"
15"She wore a tailored charcoal-grey"
16"She put her glass down,"
17"She looked like a woman"
18"She looked away, towards the"
19"He stopped beside Rory, a"
ratio0.299
23.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences87
matches
0"The bell above the door"
1"Tonight, it grated."
2"She balanced a stack of"
3"The familiar, comforting gloom of"
4"Silas stood behind the bar,"
5"His movements were precise, economical."
6"He didn’t look up."
7"Rory slid the boxes onto"
8"He placed the glass upside"
9"Rory ran a hand through"
10"She glanced around"
11"The bar was empty, save"
12"A lone drinker."
13"She moved towards the bar,"
14"The fabric was heavy and"
15"she said, her voice low"
16"Silas reached for a bottle"
17"A chair scraped against the"
18"Rory paid it no mind,"
19"The glass slid across the"
ratio0.874
57.47% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Before Rory could ask what"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She looked like a woman who delivered Chinese food for a living and lived in a cramped flat above a bar, a woman who still flinched at the sound of a raised voi…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He placed, its rim catching the low light"
1"she said, her voice low"
2"Rory asked, her voice harder than she intended"
3"Eva said, her voice flat and cold"
4"she said, her voice shaking slightly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory lied back (lie)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.24
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.04
81.4629%