Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYC4EMJGYP9J1V2P85SJAB

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46.9s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gate to Richmond Park was a black maw in the London night. Aurora Carter slipped through it, the metal cold against her hand. The city’s hum, a constant she’d grown used to, faded behind her with each step on the damp path. She wasn't here for a midnight stroll. The pendant resting against her sternum had been pulsing with a slow, insistent heat for the last hour, a silent demand pulling her west. Her phone’s flashlight cut a nervous path through the undergrowth. The beam caught the reflective eyes of a deer, which vanished without a sound. Even the animals were quiet tonight. The air grew still, the usual rustle of leaves and chirp of insects absent. A silence so complete it felt like a pressure against her eardrums. She knew the way. She’d only been here once, with Eva, on a bright summer afternoon. The Grove had felt magical then, a sun-dappled secret. Now, in the moonless dark, it felt like a mouth waiting to close. The ancient oak standing stones loomed out of the gloom, smooth and grey, taller than she remembered. They didn't look carved so much as grown, their bark like gnarled, ancient skin. Stepping between them was like crossing a threshold. The air changed, growing thick and heavy with the scent of earth and something else, something sweet and cloying. The wildflowers Isolde had spoken of were still here, a carpet of impossible colour in the gloom. Petals the colour of bone and bruised plums, of deep indigo and sickly green, all blooming under a sky with no light for them. The pendant grew warmer, a deep, thrumming heat spreading into her chest. It wasn't just a guide anymore. It was a beacon. Rory stopped in the centre of the clearing, her flashlight beam sweeping over the circle of stones. Nothing. Just the flowers and the oppressive silence. She pulled the chain from under her jumper. The crimson gemstone, usually faintly glowing, now pulsed with a visible inner light, like a trapped heart. It cast a red shimmer on her fingers. A sound broke the silence. It wasn't a snap of a twig or the hoot of an owl. It was a single, clear note like a stone dropped into a deep well. The sound resonated, hanging in the dead air long after it should have faded. Rory swung the flashlight towards the source, the beam trembling slightly. Nothing. Just the dark, impassive faces of the stones. Her heart hammered a little faster against her ribs. Cool-headed, she told herself. It’s just the wind. Or a fox. They make strange noises. But there was no wind. She took a slow breath, the sweet scent of the flowers catching in her throat. It was too sweet, thick and cloying like funeral parlour flowers left in the sun for a week. She scanned the clearing again, this time more slowly, from the edges inward. A flicker of motion at the base of the largest stone. Not an animal. It was a shadow that moved against other shadows, detaching and then melting back into the darkness. She froze, the beam of her torch fixed on the spot. Her knuckles were white around the phone. Nothing there. The pendant was hot now, almost uncomfortably so. She let it drop, the silver chain stinging her skin. This was wrong. All of it. The silence, the heat, the single, impossible note. She pulled out her phone to check the time. Maybe it wasn't as late as she thought. The screen lit up, casting her face in a pale, ghostly blue. 11:47 PM. She frowned, thumb hovering over the screen to check her messages. She looked up, scanned the grove again for a full minute, the hair on her arms prickling. The feeling of being watched was a physical weight, a pressure between her shoulder blades. She looked back down at her phone. 11:47 PM. The numbers hadn't changed. She stared at them, her mind refusing to process it. She locked the screen and unlocked it again. The same time. A cold dread, sharp and acidic, coiled in her stomach. The time in the Grove. It didn't just move differently. It could stop. The sweet scent of the flowers was gone, replaced by the smell of ozone and wet stone, like the air after a lightning strike. The colours of the petals seemed to deepen in the gloom, the whites taking on a pearlescent sheen, the purples darkening to a flat, lightless black. They were no longer just blooming. They were drinking in the darkness. Another sound. A soft, scraping noise. Like fingernails being drawn slowly across bark. Rory backed away, one step, then another, her eyes fixed on the standing stone where she’d seen the shadow move. Her cool-headed intellect was screaming at her to run, to get out of this place, but her legs felt heavy, mired in the unnatural air. The pendant against her skin was a brand. *They are not like us, Eva had said, her voice a memory. They don't see the world the same way. Their rules are not our rules.* A shape uncurled from behind the stone. It was tall and thin, a spindly silhouette that seemed to absorb the faint light around it. It moved with a liquid grace that was not human, its limbs bending at angles that made her own bones ache in sympathy. It stepped clear of the stone, and the moonlight, weak as it was, caught it. Its skin was the pale, waxy white of a grub. It was naked, its form sexless and smooth. But it was the face that held her, that froze the scream in her throat. There were no eyes, no nose, just a smooth, featureless oval of skin. And below it, a mouth. A thin, perfect slit that opened too wide, revealing not teeth, but a row of bristle-like filaments, twitching. The voice wasn't a sound. It was a vibration in the bones of her skull, a thought that was not her own. *Little bird. Little Laila. You have brought us a key.* Rory’s breath hitched. Laila. A name she hadn't heard in years, a name from a life she had fled. It knew. It knew her. The creature’s head tilted, a gesture of curiosity that was infinitely more terrifying than any snarl. Its long, pale arm rose, a finger pointing not at her face, but at her chest. At the pendant. The heat from the gemstone intensified into a searing agony. *Give it to us,* the thought-voice resonated, calm and devoid of all emotion. *Let us open the door.*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
86.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1110
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1110
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"maw"
count1
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count3
4
word"beacon"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"resonated"
count2
8
word"scanned"
count2
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"maw"
1"silence"
2"loomed"
3"gloom"
4"beacon"
5"oppressive"
6"pulsed"
7"resonated"
8"scanned"
9"flicker"
10"weight"
11"stomach"
12"perfect"
13"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences112
matches
0"e in sympathy"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences112
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords45
totalWords1106
ratio0.041
matches
0"They are not like us, Eva had said, her voice a memory. They don't see the world the same way. Their rules are not our rules."
1"Little bird. Little Laila. You have brought us a key."
2"Give it to us,"
3"Let us open the door."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Cool-headed, she told herself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1106
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Laila"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Carter1
Eva2
Grove2
Isolde1
Laila2
Rory4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Isolde"
3"Laila"
4"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
55.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a pressure against her eardru"
1"felt like a mouth waiting to close"
2"silhouette that seemed to absorb the faint light around it"
19.17% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.808
wordCount1106
matches
0"not teeth, but a row of bristle-like filaments, twitching"
1"not at her face, but at her chest"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean35.68
std25.27
cv0.708
sampleLengths
074
156
238
399
422
558
65
761
824
95
1046
1149
122
1361
142
1550
162
1748
1862
1913
2053
2126
227
2355
2469
2522
2610
2724
2835
2910
3018
95.86% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences112
matches
0"was gone"
1"being drawn"
2"was, caught"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs159
matches
0"were drinking"
1"was screaming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences112
ratio0
matches(empty)
97.16% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1110
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.043243243243243246
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010810810810810811
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean9.88
std6.07
cv0.615
sampleLengths
013
111
219
37
424
510
614
76
814
912
104
1112
129
1313
1417
1514
168
1719
1817
1924
2012
216
224
2317
241
257
268
2717
288
295
3013
3114
3214
3311
341
358
369
374
384
393
404
415
4215
4318
4413
4511
463
4717
4811
497
38.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.30357142857142855
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences102
matches
0"Even the animals were quiet"
1"Just the flowers and the"
2"Just the dark, impassive faces"
3"Maybe it wasn't as late"
ratio0.039
47.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences102
matches
0"She wasn't here for a"
1"Her phone’s flashlight cut a"
2"She knew the way."
3"She’d only been here once,"
4"They didn't look carved so"
5"It wasn't just a guide"
6"It was a beacon."
7"She pulled the chain from"
8"It cast a red shimmer"
9"It wasn't a snap of"
10"It was a single, clear"
11"Her heart hammered a little"
12"It’s just the wind."
13"They make strange noises."
14"She took a slow breath,"
15"It was too sweet, thick"
16"She scanned the clearing again,"
17"It was a shadow that"
18"She froze, the beam of"
19"Her knuckles were white around"
ratio0.431
48.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences102
matches
0"The gate to Richmond Park"
1"Aurora Carter slipped through it,"
2"The city’s hum, a constant"
3"She wasn't here for a"
4"The pendant resting against her"
5"Her phone’s flashlight cut a"
6"The beam caught the reflective"
7"The air grew still, the"
8"A silence so complete it"
9"She knew the way."
10"She’d only been here once,"
11"The Grove had felt magical"
12"The ancient oak standing stones"
13"They didn't look carved so"
14"The air changed, growing thick"
15"The wildflowers Isolde had spoken"
16"Petals the colour of bone"
17"The pendant grew warmer, a"
18"It wasn't just a guide"
19"It was a beacon."
ratio0.824
49.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"Now, in the moonless dark,"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"It was a shadow that moved against other shadows, detaching and then melting back into the darkness."
1"A thin, perfect slit that opened too wide, revealing not teeth, but a row of bristle-like filaments, twitching."
2"The creature’s head tilted, a gesture of curiosity that was infinitely more terrifying than any snarl."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.7317%