Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYC76CVGKWCBAAW6J7R17Y

Run Details

Duration:
1m 30s
Cost:
$0.001019
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, a relentless drumbeat on the asphalt that turned the city’s sodium-orange glow into a smear. Harlow Quinn’s breath was a sharp rasp, swallowed by the storm. Her leather watch strap was slick against her skin, the face fogged. Ahead, a figure in a dark coat—Tomás Herrera—splashed through a flooded gutter and ducked into a narrow service alley between a shuttered record shop and a takeaway. Quinn didn’t break stride. Her shoes, built for pavement not pursuit, skidded on wet brick. She caught herself against a damp wall, her sharp jaw set. Three years since Morris. Three years of dead ends that smelled of ozone and burnt sugar, of case files that dissolved into bureaucratic mist. This man, Herrera, was a thread. A thread that led to the others, the ones who moved through London like ghosts. The ones who might know what happened in that warehouse. “Herrera! Police! Stop!” Her shout was lost. He was already at the alley’s end, wrenching open a rusted metal door set into the ground. A maintenance hatch. He vanished into the dark. Quinn reached the hatch. A square of deeper blackness, a cold, damp breath rising from it. Metal rungs led down. She pulled a small torch from her coat, the beam cutting through the rain to illuminate the first few steps descending into the earth. The sound of footsteps echoed up from below, rapid and fading. This wasn’t on any map. This wasn’t a sewer access. She knew the city’s underbelly, the official one. This was something else. She went down. The rungs were icy, gritty with rust. The air changed. The clean, cold scent of rain gave way to damp concrete, mildew, and something else—ozone again, and a coppery tang, like old blood and hot wiring. The sound of the storm faded to a distant murmur. Below, a faint, greenish light pulsed. Her feet hit solid ground—a disused platform. Not just disused. Forgotten. The tiles were a pattern she didn’t recognize, the roundels on the walls devoid of any station name. The green light came from ahead, around a bend where the tunnel curved. The air thrummed with a low, sub-audible hum that set her teeth on edge. She moved with military precision, back to the wall, torch extinguished. She unclipped her holster, her hand resting on the grip of her service pistol. The weight was a familiar comfort in a place that felt profoundly wrong. Voices filtered down the tunnel. Not echoes, but a low babble of conversation. The clink of glass. The smell grew more complex—spices, incense, the acrid bite of chemicals. She peered around the curve. The abandoned Tube station was not abandoned. It was a bazaar. Stalls lined the old platform, cobbled together from scrap wood and old shipping containers, lit by flickering lanterns that burned with unnatural colours: violet, bile-green, a deep arterial red. Canopies of strange fabrics billowed in a non-existent breeze. Figures moved through the aisles—some human, some decidedly not. A vendor with skin like polished bark haggled with a woman whose shadow writhed independently on the wall. A creature covered in matted feathers clacked a beak over a tray of glittering stones. In the centre of it all, she saw him. Tomás Herrera, shaking rain from his dark curls, his hand instinctively going to the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat. He was speaking urgently to a tall individual in a long, grey coat, their face obscured by a deep hood. *The Veil Market.* The words surfaced from a stack of confiscated journals, from whispers in holding cells she’d been told to ignore. A supernatural black market. Moves every full moon. Entry required a bone token. Herrera had led her right to its heart. Her pulse hammered against her ribs. This was beyond her remit. Beyond any sane protocol. Following a suspect into an active railway tunnel was one thing. Following him into a hidden bazaar of… things… was career suicide at best. At worst, it was what happened to Morris. He’d chased a lead into a place that didn’t make sense, and he’d never come out. But Morris’s face, frozen in her memory, wasn’t the one of caution. It was the one from the pub, leaning forward, saying, “The truth’s down in the dark, Harlow. Always is.” Herrera was finishing his transaction. He took a small, wrapped parcel from the grey-coated figure and turned, his warm brown eyes scanning the crowd. They passed over the tunnel entrance, over the shadows where she stood. If she retreated now, called for backup, what would she say? *Suspect fled into a magical fairy market under Camden.* They’d suspend her on the spot. They’d bury it, like they’d buried everything about Morris. Herrera and his clique would vanish, and the thread would be lost forever. If she went in, she was unarmed in any way that mattered. Her badge meant nothing here. Her pistol might as well be a toy. Herrera began to move, not back towards the entrance, but deeper into the market, towards a curtained-off area at the far end of the platform. Decision point. Quinn’s hand left her gun. She stepped out of the tunnel and onto the platform. The atmosphere shifted instantly. Conversations dipped. Dozens of eyes, of all shapes and hues, turned towards her. The hum in the air sharpened. She felt exposed, a splash of drab reality in a sea of impossible colour. She kept her bearing straight, her gaze locked on Herrera’s retreating back, and walked forward as if she had every right to be there. A hand shot out from a stall—a hand with too many knuckles. Its owner, a wizened thing with milk-white eyes, blocked her path. “Token, walker.” She met its blank gaze. “I’m with him.” She jerked her chin towards Herrera, now almost at the far curtains. The creature sniffed, its nostrils flaring. “Smells of iron and paperwork. No token.” The dismissal was final. Other market-goers were watching, their postures shifting from curiosity to threat. Herrera heard the exchange. He stopped and looked back. His eyes widened in genuine shock when he saw her. Not fear, but a frantic, urgent surprise. He gave a sharp, almost imperceptible shake of his head. *Don’t.* It was the warning that decided her. Quinn ignored the creature. “Herrera! A word. Now.” The market seemed to hold its breath. Herrera’s shoulders slumped in resignation. He muttered something to the grey-coated figure, then turned and strode back towards her, his expression tight. He grabbed her arm, his grip firm. The scar on his forearm was a pale line against his olive skin. “You have no idea what you’ve done,” he hissed, pulling her away from the main thoroughfare towards a recessed doorway. “You can’t be here.” “I go where my suspects go.” “This isn’t a suspect. This is a feeding ground. Your badge is a dinner bell here.” He glanced over her shoulder, his body subtly positioning itself between her and the watching crowd. “You need to leave. The way you came. Right now.” “You’re coming with me.” “I can’t. I have people who need this.” He tapped the parcel in his coat. “Medicine. The kind you can’t get in your world.” “My world? This is London.” “Not this part.” His voice dropped lower. “Listen to me, Detective Quinn. Your partner. Morris.” Her blood went cold. “What about him?” “He was asking the right questions in the wrong places. Like you are now.” Tomás’s eyes were earnest, fearful for her. “He followed a lead to a procurement auction. For… subjects. He interrupted it. They didn’t know he was police. They just knew he was a mortal in a place he shouldn’t be.” The noise of the market faded. All she heard was the low thrum and his words. “Who are ‘they’?” “The people who run the things your department has a special filing cabinet for. The ‘ignore and discredit’ cabinet.” He looked past her again, his anxiety spiking. “You have to go. They’ve already marked you. Every second you stand here, you’re in more danger.” “Give me a name. For Morris.” “I can’t. Not here. And not if you’re in a body bag.” He pushed her gently but firmly back towards the tunnel entrance. “Go. Pretend you never saw this. For your sake.” A figure detached from the shadows near a stall selling jars of luminous liquid. Tall, slender, wearing an impeccably tailored suit that seemed to drink the light. Its attention was fixed on them. Tomás saw it too. “Too late,” he whispered, despair in his voice. “Run. Don’t look back. Don’t come here again.” He gave her a hard shove towards the dark mouth of the access tunnel. The suited figure began to move, cutting through the crowd with unnatural grace.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.321
leniency0.643
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1481
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1481
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"echoes"
count1
6
word"complex"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoed"
2"pulsed"
3"weight"
4"familiar"
5"echoes"
6"complex"
7"pulse"
8"scanning"
9"firmly"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
75.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences128
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords13
totalWords1466
ratio0.009
matches
0"The Veil Market."
1"Suspect fled into a magical fairy market under Camden."
2"Don’t."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1233
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Quinn5
Tomás4
Herrera11
Morris4
London1
Tube1
Saint1
Christopher1
Veil1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"suit that seemed to drink the light"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.046
wordCount1466
matches
0"Not echoes, but a low babble of conversation"
1"not back towards the entrance, but deeper into the market, towards a curtained-off area at the"
2"Not fear, but a frantic, urgent surprise"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean29.92
std20.87
cv0.698
sampleLengths
070
181
23
329
455
522
63
752
856
938
1028
115
1211
1380
1449
1535
168
1763
1831
1936
2048
2125
2225
232
2415
2561
2625
2720
2828
2937
307
318
3249
3324
346
3542
364
3724
385
3915
407
4153
4219
4344
446
4532
4633
4720
4827
97.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences128
matches
0"been told"
1"was unarmed"
2"was fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs214
matches
0"was speaking"
1"was finishing"
2"were watching"
24.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences145
ratio0.041
matches
0"Ahead, a figure in a dark coat—Tomás Herrera—splashed through a flooded gutter and ducked into a narrow service alley between a shuttered record shop and a takeaway."
1"The clean, cold scent of rain gave way to damp concrete, mildew, and something else—ozone again, and a coppery tang, like old blood and hot wiring."
2"Her feet hit solid ground—a disused platform."
3"The smell grew more complex—spices, incense, the acrid bite of chemicals."
4"Figures moved through the aisles—some human, some decidedly not."
5"A hand shot out from a stall—a hand with too many knuckles."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1248
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, greenish light pulsed."
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.02403846153846154
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008814102564102564
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean10.11
std6.74
cv0.666
sampleLengths
020
111
212
327
44
511
611
74
820
96
1015
1110
123
134
1417
153
165
174
1812
194
2024
2111
225
235
248
254
263
277
283
2926
3010
316
327
333
341
3518
3613
3714
3811
3914
4013
415
428
434
4411
455
467
474
4829
499
51.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3793103448275862
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners55
27.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"At worst, it was what"
ratio0.008
73.66% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences123
matches
0"Her leather watch strap was"
1"Her shoes, built for pavement"
2"She caught herself against a"
3"Her shout was lost."
4"He was already at the"
5"He vanished into the dark."
6"She pulled a small torch"
7"She knew the city’s underbelly,"
8"She went down."
9"Her feet hit solid ground—a"
10"She moved with military precision,"
11"She unclipped her holster, her"
12"She peered around the curve."
13"It was a bazaar."
14"He was speaking urgently to"
15"Her pulse hammered against her"
16"He’d chased a lead into"
17"It was the one from"
18"He took a small, wrapped"
19"They passed over the tunnel"
ratio0.366
41.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences123
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets,"
1"Harlow Quinn’s breath was a"
2"Her leather watch strap was"
3"Quinn didn’t break stride."
4"Her shoes, built for pavement"
5"She caught herself against a"
6"This man, Herrera, was a"
7"A thread that led to"
8"The ones who might know"
9"Her shout was lost."
10"He was already at the"
11"A maintenance hatch."
12"He vanished into the dark."
13"Quinn reached the hatch."
14"A square of deeper blackness,"
15"Metal rungs led down."
16"She pulled a small torch"
17"The sound of footsteps echoed"
18"This wasn’t on any map."
19"This wasn’t a sewer access."
ratio0.837
81.30% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"If she retreated now, called"
1"If she went in, she"
ratio0.016
79.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets, a relentless drumbeat on the asphalt that turned the city’s sodium-orange glow into a smear."
1"Three years of dead ends that smelled of ozone and burnt sugar, of case files that dissolved into bureaucratic mist."
2"Stalls lined the old platform, cobbled together from scrap wood and old shipping containers, lit by flickering lanterns that burned with unnatural colours: viol…"
3"She kept her bearing straight, her gaze locked on Herrera’s retreating back, and walked forward as if she had every right to be there."
4"Other market-goers were watching, their postures shifting from curiosity to threat."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He looked, his anxiety spiking"
42.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"leaning forward saying (leaning forward saying)"
1"he hissed (hiss)"
2"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.214
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.214
79.5777%