Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYCGKHWB3HDEY3N557NDCG

Run Details

Duration:
2m 9s
Cost:
$0.001074
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in The Raven’s Nest was its usual mixture of old wood, spilled whiskey, and distant rain. Aurora wiped down the last of the afternoon’s glasses, her movements economical. The crescent scar on her wrist caught the dim light from the green neon sign bleeding through the front window. Silas was in the back, inventory ledgers spread before him, his silver signet ring tapping a silent rhythm on the oak. The door opened with a soft groan, letting in a slice of damp Soho evening. A man stepped inside, pausing to let his eyes adjust. He was tall, wearing a coat that was too heavy for the London drizzle, his shoulders set with a tension that didn’t belong to a casual drinker. He scanned the room, his gaze passing over the maps on the walls, the empty booths, and landing on her. Aurora felt the recognition like a skipped heartbeat. It wasn’t instantaneous. The face was older, the lines deeper, the softness of youth pared away to something harder, more defined. But the eyes were the same. A clear, unsettling grey she hadn’t seen in seven years. “Rory?” His voice was lower, rougher around the edges. It was the voice of the boy who’d sat next to her in A-level history, who’d shared illicit cigarettes behind the bike sheds, who’d talked about joining the navy while she’d talked about law school. A lifetime ago. “Leo.” She didn’t mean to say his name. It just left her lips, flat and toneless. She set the glass down on the polished counter. He approached the bar, his movements careful, as if navigating a minefield. He shrugged out of the coat, draping it over a stool. Underneath, he wore a simple dark sweater, jeans. Nothing that shouted, but everything about him now seemed to whisper of a different life. “You look exactly the same,” he said. A faint smile touched his mouth, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “I don’t.” “You do. The hair. The…” He gestured vaguely towards her face, then let his hand drop. “I heard you’d moved to London. Didn’t know you were… working here.” “It’s a bar. People drink here.” She reached for a clean towel, began polishing a spotless section of counter. “What are you doing in Soho, Leo? Last I heard you were on a frigate somewhere near Gibraltar.” “That was a while back.” “Right.” An awkward silence stretched between them, filled by the hum of the cooler and the distant sound of Silas shifting in the back room. Leo finally slid onto a stool. “Can I get a whiskey? Whatever you’ve got that’s single malt. Neat.” She turned, selected a bottle from the middle shelf, poured two fingers into a tumbler. She pushed it across to him. Her fingers didn’t brush his. He took the glass, cradled it in both hands, staring into the amber liquid. “I got out. The navy.” “I gathered.” “It wasn’t… it wasn’t what I thought it would be.” “What is?” He looked up at her then, and the weight in his grey eyes was a physical thing. “You were always sharp.” “You were always vague.” She leaned back against the sink, arms crossed. “Out. Meaning what? You’re a civilian now? You sell insurance?” A flicker of something—annoyance, pain—crossed his face. He took a slow sip of the whiskey. “Something like that.” “Don’t be cryptic, Leo. It’s been seven years. You either tell me or you don’t, but I’m not playing twenty questions.” He let out a long, slow breath. “I do consultancy. Security consultancy.” “For who?” “Governments. Corporations. People who need things kept quiet, or people who need things found.” He set the glass down with a soft click. “I’m good at finding things.” She studied him. The boy who’d wanted to see the world from the deck of a ship was gone. In his place was a man whose stillness was absolute, whose gaze missed nothing. He carried himself like Silas did, but where Silas’s authority was worn-in, comfortable, Leo’s was coiled, ready. “You’re a spy.” He gave a minute shake of his head. “Not officially. Not anymore. The lines get blurry.” “And you just happened to wander into this particular bar.” “I was in the area.” “Bullshit.” He smiled, a real one this time, fleeting and familiar. “Still sharp.” He drained the rest of the whiskey. “I heard a rumor. That a guy named Silas ran a place around here. A guy who used to be in the game. A guy who knows people. I came to see if the rumor was true.” “And is it?” “The bookshelf by the far wall doesn’t sit flush with the others. The hinges are probably on the inside.” He didn’t even glance towards the secret room. “So, yes. It’s true.” His eyes came back to her. “What I didn’t hear was that you were part of the furniture.” “I’m not. I live upstairs. I help out.” “You help out.” He repeated the phrase as if tasting it, finding it bland. “Rory Carter. Top of our year. Debating champion. Your dad had your acceptance to Cardiff Law framed.” Her cheeks warmed. “Things change.” “Do they?” He leaned forward, his voice dropping. “What happened? You were going to change the world from a courtroom. Now you’re pulling pints in a spymaster’s pub.” “It’s a bar. And I deliver Chinese food by day. It pays the bills.” The words came out colder than she intended. “Evan.” She went very still. “Don’t.” “I heard about that, too. After I got back. I tried to find you. Your mother said you’d gone to London, changed your number.” “You tried to find me.” A hollow laugh escaped her. “Seven years later.” “I was deployed, Rory. For most of it. Communications were… limited.” “Convenient.” He flinched. The silence this time was heavier, thick with all the unsaid years. Regret had a texture, she thought. It was like the smoke that used to hang in this bar before the ban, a haze you could almost touch. “I’m sorry,” he said finally. The words were simple, stripped bare. “For what? Not calling? Not writing? For walking out of that graduation party and onto a train and never looking back?” She shook her head, turning to refill his glass without him asking. “It’s fine, Leo. We were kids. We all make choices.” “You didn’t choose this.” “How do you know what I chose?” She slammed the bottle down a little too hard. “You think I’m some damsel in a tower? That I ended up here because some guy was mean to me and I had to run away?” She held up her left wrist, the small crescent scar pale against her skin. “I got this falling out of a tree trying to rescue a cat you dared me to climb for. I’ve always made my own messes. I’m still making them.” He stared at her scar, then at her face. The professional detachment he’d walked in with had vanished. He just looked tired, and sad, and like the boy she’d known. “I didn’t mean it like that.” “I know.” The anger drained out of her, leaving her deflated. “I know you didn’t. It’s just… you show up here. Looking like that. Saying you look for things for a living. And you’re sitting in a bar run by my… by Silas. It’s a lot.” “I can go.” “No.” The word surprised her. “Not yet. Finish your drink.” He obeyed, lifting the fresh glass. They lapsed into a quieter silence. The tension had shifted, the initial shock worn down to a raw, familiar ache. “You were right, you know,” he said after a while, staring into his whiskey. “It wasn’t an adventure. It was just… a job. A cold, calculated, often ugly job. I got good at it. I lost the taste for it, but I was good.” “And now you consult.” “Now I consult. I find missing people. Missing assets. I follow money trails and digital ghosts. It’s cleaner, in a way. Less blood on my hands.” He rubbed a thumb over his knuckle. There were scars there, too. Small, white, precise. “I thought, maybe, if I could find other things… it would balance the scales.” “Does it?” “No.” The honesty of it hung between them. She believed him. “Why did you really come here, Leo? To see Silas? Or…” “To see if you were here.” He met her gaze directly. “The rumor about Silas was just the excuse I gave myself. I knew you were in London. I had an address, an old one. I went there. A woman named Eva said you might be here. She was… protective.” “Eva’s a good friend.” “She is.” He swirled the whiskey. “I just wanted to see you. To know you were okay.” “And now you’ve seen me.” “Now I’ve seen you.” He finished the second drink. “You’re not okay. But you’re alive. You’re smart. You’re surviving. It’s more than a lot of people get.” He stood, pulling his coat back on. He pulled a card from his inside pocket, a simple white rectangle with just a phone number embossed in black. He placed it on the bar, next to his empty glass. “If you ever need anything. If you ever need someone found. Or if you just… want to talk about something other than the past.” He gave her that faint, ghostly smile again. “It was good to see you, Rory.” He turned and walked towards the door, his footsteps quiet on the worn floorboards. He didn’t look back. Aurora stared at the card. She didn’t pick it up. She listened as the door opened and closed, the bell giving a soft, solitary chime. The space where he had been sitting felt suddenly, profoundly empty. From the doorway to the back room, Silas cleared his throat. She hadn’t heard him approach. He stood with his weight on his good leg, his hazel eyes watching her, reading the whole scene in her posture. “An old friend?” “Something like that.” “He’s changed.” “Haven’t we all?” Silas nodded slowly, his signet ring glinting as he reached up to adjust his collar. “He left his payment on the bar.” Aurora looked down. Next to the empty whiskey glass and the white card were two crisp twenty-pound notes, folded neatly under the tumbler. Exact change, plus a generous tip. The gesture of a man who paid his debts, who left no loose ends. She picked up the glass, the money, the card. She pocketed the money, held the card for a moment between her fingers, then slid it into the back of the till. Out of sight, but not gone. “Yes,” she said to the empty room. “He’s changed.”
created_at"2026-02-19T12:35:50.522Z" 2/19/2026, 12:35:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"She leaned back [back]"
2"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences87
tagDensity0.287
leniency0.575
rawRatio0.12
effectiveRatio0.069
88.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1794
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"really"
2"suddenly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1794
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"tension"
count2
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"navigating"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"comfortable"
count1
8
word"fleeting"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count2
10
word"calculated"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"solitary"
count1
13
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"scanned"
2"navigating"
3"whisper"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"flicker"
7"comfortable"
8"fleeting"
9"familiar"
10"calculated"
11"footsteps"
12"solitary"
13"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1790
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1034
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.58
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
London1
Silas6
Leo2
Aurora4
persons
0"Silas"
1"Leo"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if navigating a minefield"
1"as if tasting it, finding it bland"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1790
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean21.83
std19.55
cv0.895
sampleLengths
071
172
245
31
446
51
624
746
819
92
1028
1137
125
131
1442
1526
1619
172
1810
192
2021
2122
2218
2321
2412
252
2628
2750
283
2916
3010
315
321
3356
343
3549
368
3731
385
3928
4022
411
425
4324
4413
4511
461
4741
4811
4943
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"was gone"
1"was worn"
2"was coiled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences164
ratio0.006
matches
0"A flicker of something—annoyance, pain—crossed his face."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1038
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"clear, unsettling grey she"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.028901734104046242
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008670520231213872
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean10.91
std8.56
cv0.784
sampleLengths
018
112
220
321
415
510
627
720
88
93
1018
116
1210
131
148
1535
163
171
187
198
209
2112
2211
238
2415
257
2612
272
2816
2912
3019
3118
325
331
3424
356
3612
3715
386
395
4014
415
422
4310
442
4517
464
4712
4810
497
46.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.32926829268292684
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences100
matches
0"He was tall, wearing a"
1"He scanned the room, his"
2"It wasn’t instantaneous."
3"His voice was lower, rougher"
4"It was the voice of"
5"She didn’t mean to say"
6"It just left her lips,"
7"She set the glass down"
8"He approached the bar, his"
9"He shrugged out of the"
10"He gestured vaguely towards her"
11"She reached for a clean"
12"She turned, selected a bottle"
13"She pushed it across to"
14"Her fingers didn’t brush his."
15"He took the glass, cradled"
16"He looked up at her"
17"She leaned back against the"
18"He took a slow sip"
19"He let out a long,"
ratio0.6
5.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences100
matches
0"The air in The Raven’s"
1"Aurora wiped down the last"
2"The crescent scar on her"
3"Silas was in the back,"
4"The door opened with a"
5"A man stepped inside, pausing"
6"He was tall, wearing a"
7"He scanned the room, his"
8"Aurora felt the recognition like"
9"It wasn’t instantaneous."
10"The face was older, the"
11"A clear, unsettling grey she"
12"His voice was lower, rougher"
13"It was the voice of"
14"A lifetime ago."
15"She didn’t mean to say"
16"It just left her lips,"
17"She set the glass down"
18"He approached the bar, his"
19"He shrugged out of the"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He was tall, wearing a coat that was too heavy for the London drizzle, his shoulders set with a tension that didn’t belong to a casual drinker."
1"He scanned the room, his gaze passing over the maps on the walls, the empty booths, and landing on her."
2"It was the voice of the boy who’d sat next to her in A-level history, who’d shared illicit cigarettes behind the bike sheds, who’d talked about joining the navy…"
3"He approached the bar, his movements careful, as if navigating a minefield."
85.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He leaned, his voice dropping"
1"She shook, turning to refill his glass without him asking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences87
tagDensity0.057
leniency0.115
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.023
80.6800%