| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1375 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "utterly" | | 3 | "truly" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.82% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1375 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "coded" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "profound" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "throbbed" | | 7 | "sentinel" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "wavered" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "sense of" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "treacherous" | | 17 | "vibrated" | | 18 | "unraveling" | | 19 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 139 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 139 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 142 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 47 | | totalWords | 1364 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "Meet me at the grove. Midnight. It’s the only place he can’t follow. Bring the stone." | | 1 | "You’re not as tough as you think you are, Rory. You just freeze up." | | 2 | "It’s just the wind. It’s a badger. It’s your imagination, you idiot. Eva’s late, that’s all." | | 3 | "ping" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1349 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Eva | 5 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 37.64% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking on a breathing creatu" | | 1 | "seemed larger than it had from the outside, the far side no closer than when she started" | | 2 | "humming that seemed to come from everywhere at once, vibrating up through the soles of her boots" | | 3 | "not quite touching the glowing flora" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.733 | | wordCount | 1364 | | matches | | 0 | "Not vanishing, but unraveling, its darkness dissipating like smoke in a sudden" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 35.89 | | std | 18.59 | | cv | 0.518 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 62 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 46 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 55 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 51 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 53 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | | |
| 42.25% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 142 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park tasted different after sunset—thicker, with a metallic tang that clung to the back of Rory’s throat." | | 1 | "The sounds of the city—the distant hum of the A316, a siren wailing miles away—snuffed out like a candle." | | 2 | "A flicker of movement at the very edge of her vision—a shift in the darkness between two trees." | | 3 | "It raised a long, slender limb—an arm, maybe—and pointed a finger that tapered into a sharp, darkness-shrouded point." | | 4 | "A different sound began—a low, deep thrumming from the ground itself, answering the stone’s call." |
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| 87.61% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1360 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "strange, beautiful, unnerving thing." | | 1 | "sharp, darkness-shrouded point." |
| | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.04044117647058824 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011029411764705883 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 142 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 142 | | mean | 9.61 | | std | 6.48 | | cv | 0.674 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 34.98% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.3028169014084507 | | totalSentences | 142 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course it didn’t." | | 1 | "Just this strange, beautiful, unnerving" | | 2 | "Just deeper shadow." | | 3 | "Instead, she slammed the pulsating" | | 4 | "Then it was gone." | | 5 | "Slowly, she pushed herself up" |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 70.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d walked these paths a" | | 1 | "She found the standing stones" | | 2 | "She pulled her jacket tighter." | | 3 | "Her voice was too loud," | | 4 | "It’s the only place he" | | 5 | "She’d found it tucked inside" | | 6 | "She moved further into the" | | 7 | "It was beautiful." | | 8 | "It was all wrong." | | 9 | "She took another step, and" | | 10 | "She jerked her head around," | | 11 | "Her voice wavered" | | 12 | "She hated that it wavered." | | 13 | "*You’re not as tough as" | | 14 | "You just freeze up.*" | | 15 | "She clenched her fists, the" | | 16 | "she muttered to herself, a" | | 17 | "She stood perfectly still, every" | | 18 | "*It’s just the wind." | | 19 | "It’s a badger." |
| | ratio | 0.375 | |
| 26.41% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 111 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She’d walked these paths a" | | 2 | "The pendant resting against her" | | 3 | "She found the standing stones" | | 4 | "Wildflowers she couldn’t name bloomed" | | 5 | "This was the place." | | 6 | "The Fae Grove." | | 7 | "Rory stepped between two of" | | 8 | "The change was immediate." | | 9 | "The sounds of the city—the" | | 10 | "A profound, ringing silence descended," | | 11 | "She pulled her jacket tighter." | | 12 | "Her voice was too loud," | | 13 | "Eva’s message had been clear:" | | 14 | "It’s the only place he" | | 15 | "Rory’s fingers closed around the" | | 16 | "The silver chain was cool," | | 17 | "She’d found it tucked inside" | | 18 | "She moved further into the" | | 19 | "The flowers brushed against her" |
| | ratio | 0.867 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park tasted different after sunset—thicker, with a metallic tang that clung to the back of Rory’s throat." | | 1 | "She moved further into the clearing, her boots sinking into moss so deep and soft it felt like walking on a breathing creature." | | 2 | "The flowers brushed against her jeans, leaving trails of shimmering pollen." | | 3 | "The only answer was a low, melodic humming that seemed to come from everywhere at once, vibrating up through the soles of her boots." | | 4 | "It had no face, no features, just a suggestion of a head that tilted too far to one side, observing her." | | 5 | "The humming grew louder, filling her head, drowning out her own frantic thoughts." | | 6 | "It raised a long, slender limb—an arm, maybe—and pointed a finger that tapered into a sharp, darkness-shrouded point." | | 7 | "She scrambled backward on her elbows, kicking up clumps of glowing earth." | | 8 | "The branch passed through the figure’s torso as if through smoke, and a soundless, freezing cold rushed up her arm." | | 9 | "Not vanishing, but unraveling, its darkness dissipating like smoke in a sudden gale." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |