Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYCKKVTWM9C08GQ5N7M9HW

Run Details

Duration:
1m 31s
Cost:
$0.001605
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park tasted different after sunset—thicker, with a metallic tang that clung to the back of Rory’s throat. She’d walked these paths a hundred times on her delivery route, but never this late, and never with purpose. The pendant resting against her collarbone pulsed a steady, warm rhythm, a silent guide through the deepening dark. She found the standing stones exactly where Eva’s frantic, coded message said they would be. Ancient oaks, twisted and gnarled, formed a near-perfect circle just off the main path, their roots snaking over the earth like petrified serpents. Wildflowers she couldn’t name bloomed in violent profusion between the roots, their petals glowing with a faint, impossible luminescence under the sliver of moon. This was the place. The Fae Grove. Rory stepped between two of the massive trunks, the pendant’s warmth flaring against her skin as she crossed the threshold. The change was immediate. The sounds of the city—the distant hum of the A316, a siren wailing miles away—snuffed out like a candle. A profound, ringing silence descended, broken only by the rustle of leaves in a wind she couldn’t feel. She pulled her jacket tighter. “Eva?” Her voice was too loud, swallowed by the dense air almost before it left her lips. No answer came. Of course it didn’t. Eva’s message had been clear: *Meet me at the grove. Midnight. It’s the only place he can’t follow. Bring the stone.* Rory’s fingers closed around the Heartstone pendant. The silver chain was cool, but the crimson gem at its center throbbed with a living heat. She’d found it tucked inside a takeaway container from Golden Empress two days ago, with no note, no explanation. Just this strange, beautiful, unnerving thing. And then Eva’s message, scrawled on a napkin and slipped under her door. She moved further into the clearing, her boots sinking into moss so deep and soft it felt like walking on a breathing creature. The flowers brushed against her jeans, leaving trails of shimmering pollen. The air grew warmer, humid, carrying a cloying scent of honeysuckle and damp earth. It was beautiful. It was all wrong. A crack snapped in the trees to her right. Rory spun, her heart hammering against her ribs. “Eva? Is that you?” Nothing moved. The trees stood sentinel, their branches still. The only movement was the gentle sway of the glowing flowers. An owl should have called. A fox should have scurried. This was a park. There should have been life. This silence was a vacuum. She took another step, and the pendant flared, a sudden, sharp heat that made her gasp. At the same moment, a whisper brushed against her ear, a sigh of sound without words. She jerked her head around, scanning the shadows between the thick oaks. Empty. “Hello?” Her voice wavered. She hated that it wavered. Evan’s voice echoed in her memory, cold and mocking. *You’re not as tough as you think you are, Rory. You just freeze up.* She clenched her fists, the small crescent scar on her left wrist a pale smudge in the weird light. “I’m not freezing,” she muttered to herself, a habit she’d picked up living alone. “I’m assessing.” Another sound, this one from behind her. A soft, shuffling step. Not an animal. Too deliberate. Too… bipedal. Rory didn’t turn. She stood perfectly still, every muscle taut, listening with her whole body. The shuffling stopped. The pulsing of the pendant was a frantic drumbeat against her sternum. *It’s just the wind. It’s a badger. It’s your imagination, you idiot. Eva’s late, that’s all.* But the wind didn’t shuffle. Badgers didn’t feel… attentive. She forced herself to move, to walk toward the center of the grove where the flowers grew tallest, their light casting her long, distorted shadow ahead of her. The sense of being watched was a physical pressure between her shoulder blades. She was a specimen under glass. A flicker of movement at the very edge of her vision—a shift in the darkness between two trees. She snapped her gaze toward it. Nothing. Just deeper shadow. She kept walking, her pace quicker now. The clearing seemed larger than it had from the outside, the far side no closer than when she started. Another whisper, this one closer. It wasn’t a language she knew, but the tone was clear. Mocking. Hungry. “Who’s there?” she demanded, her voice sharper now, laced with a fear she refused to let take over. “Show yourself!” The only answer was a low, melodic humming that seemed to come from everywhere at once, vibrating up through the soles of her boots. It was a tune she almost recognized, a nursery rhyme her mother used to sing, but the notes were twisted, sour. The flowers around her began to sway in time with it, though the air remained utterly still. The pendant burned, a searing brand against her skin. Rory fumbled with the clasp, her fingers clumsy with panic. She couldn’t get it off. The silver felt fused to her neck. She yanked at it, the chain biting into her flesh. A figure detached itself from the shadows of a great oak twenty feet away. It was not Eva. It was tall and impossibly thin, a man-shaped void where the grove’s light simply died. It had no face, no features, just a suggestion of a head that tilted too far to one side, observing her. It didn’t walk. It drifted, its feet not quite touching the glowing flora. Rory’s breath hitched in her throat. Every instinct screamed at her to run, but her legs were leaden. The thing’s presence was a cold weight pushing down on her, pinning her in place. The humming grew louder, filling her head, drowning out her own frantic thoughts. It raised a long, slender limb—an arm, maybe—and pointed a finger that tapered into a sharp, darkness-shrouded point. Not at her. At the pendant still burning on her chest. Its intention was a cold certainty in her mind. It wanted the stone. The paralysis broke. Rory stumbled backward, her boots catching on the treacherous moss. She fell hard, the impact jarring her teeth. The thing glided forward, silent and relentless, closing the distance without any apparent effort. She scrambled backward on her elbows, kicking up clumps of glowing earth. Her hand closed around a fallen branch. She swung it wildly, a pathetic defense. The branch passed through the figure’s torso as if through smoke, and a soundless, freezing cold rushed up her arm. She cried out, dropping the wood, her fingers numb. It was almost upon her, that pointed finger stretching out to touch the gemstone. The humming was deafening, a physical force. Rory did the only thing she could think of. She ripped the pendant from her neck with a brutal, desperate yank, the chain snapping with a sharp *ping*. She didn’t throw it at the thing. Instead, she slammed the pulsating crimson stone flat against the earth, into the soft, breathing moss. The effect was instantaneous. The humming cut off. The figure recoiled as if struck, a ripple of distorted darkness passing through its form. The wildflowers at its non-feet withered and turned black, their light snuffing out. A different sound began—a low, deep thrumming from the ground itself, answering the stone’s call. The earth beneath her palm vibrated, a powerful, ancient heartbeat. The thing hesitated, its form flickering uncertainly. It took one more gliding step toward her, its pointed finger trembling. Then it was gone. Not vanishing, but unraveling, its darkness dissipating like smoke in a sudden gale. The silence rushed back in, heavier and more profound than before. Rory remained on the ground, panting, her hand still pressed over the Heartstone buried in the dirt. The gem’s heat was fading, its pulse slowing to match the deep, steady rhythm of the ground. She was alone. Truly alone. Slowly, she pushed herself up to her knees. The broken silver chain dangled from her numb fingers. The crescent scar on her wrist stood out lividly white. In the perfect, watchful silence of the grove, a single, glowing flower near her knee unfurled a new blossom, its petals the colour of fresh blood.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:35:53.6Z" 2/19/2026, 12:35:53 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1375
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
2"utterly"
3"truly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1375
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"coded"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"profound"
count2
5
word"silence"
count4
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"sentinel"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"wavered"
count2
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"searing"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
16
word"treacherous"
count1
17
word"vibrated"
count1
18
word"unraveling"
count1
19
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"coded"
2"perfect"
3"warmth"
4"profound"
5"silence"
6"throbbed"
7"sentinel"
8"whisper"
9"scanning"
10"wavered"
11"echoed"
12"sense of"
13"flicker"
14"searing"
15"weight"
16"treacherous"
17"vibrated"
18"unraveling"
19"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences139
matches
0"y with panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences139
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords47
totalWords1364
ratio0.034
matches
0"Meet me at the grove. Midnight. It’s the only place he can’t follow. Bring the stone."
1"You’re not as tough as you think you are, Rory. You just freeze up."
2"It’s just the wind. It’s a badger. It’s your imagination, you idiot. Eva’s late, that’s all."
3"ping"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1349
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory11
Eva5
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone2
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
37.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like walking on a breathing creatu"
1"seemed larger than it had from the outside, the far side no closer than when she started"
2"humming that seemed to come from everywhere at once, vibrating up through the soles of her boots"
3"not quite touching the glowing flora"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.733
wordCount1364
matches
0"Not vanishing, but unraveling, its darkness dissipating like smoke in a sudden"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences142
matches
0"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean35.89
std18.59
cv0.518
sampleLengths
058
169
261
350
462
555
621
744
845
932
1035
1148
1216
139
1447
1554
1618
1720
1862
1941
2014
214
2249
2346
2429
2513
2635
2755
2821
2951
304
3132
3225
3319
3417
3545
365
3753
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences139
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs212
matches
0"was deafening"
42.25% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences142
ratio0.035
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park tasted different after sunset—thicker, with a metallic tang that clung to the back of Rory’s throat."
1"The sounds of the city—the distant hum of the A316, a siren wailing miles away—snuffed out like a candle."
2"A flicker of movement at the very edge of her vision—a shift in the darkness between two trees."
3"It raised a long, slender limb—an arm, maybe—and pointed a finger that tapered into a sharp, darkness-shrouded point."
4"A different sound began—a low, deep thrumming from the ground itself, answering the stone’s call."
87.61% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1360
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"strange, beautiful, unnerving thing."
1"sharp, darkness-shrouded point."
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.04044117647058824
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.011029411764705883
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean9.61
std6.48
cv0.674
sampleLengths
021
119
218
315
423
524
64
73
820
94
1019
1118
125
1317
143
154
1610
171
187
193
207
2117
2219
236
2413
2523
2611
2714
283
294
309
318
324
332
347
3511
365
375
384
395
405
4116
4216
4312
441
454
465
479
4810
494
34.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.3028169014084507
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences128
matches
0"Of course it didn’t."
1"Just this strange, beautiful, unnerving"
2"Just deeper shadow."
3"Instead, she slammed the pulsating"
4"Then it was gone."
5"Slowly, she pushed herself up"
ratio0.047
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences128
matches
0"She’d walked these paths a"
1"She found the standing stones"
2"She pulled her jacket tighter."
3"Her voice was too loud,"
4"It’s the only place he"
5"She’d found it tucked inside"
6"She moved further into the"
7"It was beautiful."
8"It was all wrong."
9"She took another step, and"
10"She jerked her head around,"
11"Her voice wavered"
12"She hated that it wavered."
13"*You’re not as tough as"
14"You just freeze up.*"
15"She clenched her fists, the"
16"she muttered to herself, a"
17"She stood perfectly still, every"
18"*It’s just the wind."
19"It’s a badger."
ratio0.375
26.41% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences128
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"She’d walked these paths a"
2"The pendant resting against her"
3"She found the standing stones"
4"Wildflowers she couldn’t name bloomed"
5"This was the place."
6"The Fae Grove."
7"Rory stepped between two of"
8"The change was immediate."
9"The sounds of the city—the"
10"A profound, ringing silence descended,"
11"She pulled her jacket tighter."
12"Her voice was too loud,"
13"Eva’s message had been clear:"
14"It’s the only place he"
15"Rory’s fingers closed around the"
16"The silver chain was cool,"
17"She’d found it tucked inside"
18"She moved further into the"
19"The flowers brushed against her"
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park tasted different after sunset—thicker, with a metallic tang that clung to the back of Rory’s throat."
1"She moved further into the clearing, her boots sinking into moss so deep and soft it felt like walking on a breathing creature."
2"The flowers brushed against her jeans, leaving trails of shimmering pollen."
3"The only answer was a low, melodic humming that seemed to come from everywhere at once, vibrating up through the soles of her boots."
4"It had no face, no features, just a suggestion of a head that tilted too far to one side, observing her."
5"The humming grew louder, filling her head, drowning out her own frantic thoughts."
6"It raised a long, slender limb—an arm, maybe—and pointed a finger that tapered into a sharp, darkness-shrouded point."
7"She scrambled backward on her elbows, kicking up clumps of glowing earth."
8"The branch passed through the figure’s torso as if through smoke, and a soundless, freezing cold rushed up her arm."
9"Not vanishing, but unraveling, its darkness dissipating like smoke in a sudden gale."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.571
76.8779%