Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYCT7YJX79AWA4A3W0J4K6

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant burned against her chest like a hot coal. Rory grabbed the Heartstone through her jacket, pulling it away from her skin. Its deep crimson centre pulsed with a rapid rhythm, the faint inner glow intensifying with each beat. She had followed its warmth across half of London tonight, through streets she knew and alleys she didn't, until the familiar iron gates of Richmond Park loomed before her. Now the thing practically thrummed. She shouldn't have come. Every instinct she possessed screamed it, the same instincts that had gotten her out of Cardiff, out of that flat, out of Evan's reach. But the pendant had never done this before. In three months of wearing it, the mysterious gift from an equally mysterious sender had done nothing but exist, a strange weight around her neck that she'd learned to ignore. Tonight it demanded attention. The gates stood open. Richmond Park didn't close, not really, but nobody came here after dark. Not the sensible sort, anyway. Rory stepped through, her trainers silent on the paved path, the pendant's warmth a constant pressure against her sternum. She walked for what felt like twenty minutes. The path wound through grassland that stretched into darkness on either side, the distant shapes of trees black against the marginally lighter sky. No streetlights here. She'd left her bike locked at the gate, had considered going back for the torch on her handlebars, but the pendant had practically dragged her forward. Something ahead. A shape in the darkness that shouldn't be there. Rory stopped. Squinted. Standing stones. Massive, ancient oaks that had grown into twisted pillars, their bark smoothed by centuries of wind and rain. They formed a rough circle about thirty feet across, and even from this distance, Rory could see the difference in the space within. Wildflowers. Blooming in November. The pendant's pulse quickened. She approached the circle slowly, her breath visible in the cold air. Inside the ring of oak stones, the temperature shifted. Warmer. The scent of summer grass and honeysuckle hung heavy where it had no right to exist. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in colours she could barely make out in the darkness, blues and purples and yellows that belonged to June gardens, not autumn nights. Rory stepped between two of the standing oaks. The change hit her like walking through a membrane. One moment, November cold. The next, a stillness so complete it pressed against her ears. The distant sounds of London traffic vanished. The wind died. Even her own footsteps seemed to swallow themselves. The wildflowers glowed faintly. Not with light, exactly, more with presence. She could see them now, see the clearing in perfect clarity despite the absence of any obvious light source. The pendant had gone cold. That was wrong. She knew, with a certainty that settled in her gut like ice water, that this was wrong. The thing had burned hot since midnight, had led her across London with increasing urgency, and now it had simply stopped? Rory looked down at her chest. The Heartstone's crimson centre had gone dark. No glow. No pulse. Just a dead stone on a silver chain. "Okay." She kept her voice low, barely a whisper. "This is fine. Just a weird clearing in a park. Totally normal stuff." She turned back the way she'd come. The standing stones were gone. Rory spun, her heart hammering against her ribs. The oak pillars that had marked the boundary of the clearing simply weren't there anymore. Behind her, more wildflowers stretched into darkness. To her left, more of the same. To her right— She turned in a full circle. No exit. No path. Just endless wildflowers and that strange ambient light that came from nowhere. "Think, Rory. Think." She pressed her palms against her thighs, forcing her breathing to slow. "Time moves differently here. The codex said that. An hour inside can be minutes or days outside." She hadn't read that in a codex. She'd heard it somewhere. A voice in a dream, maybe. Or a warning she'd forgotten she'd received. The point was, she needed to move. Standing still in a place like this was begging for trouble. She picked a direction and walked. The wildflowers crunched beneath her trainers, dry despite their impossible bloom. The scent of honeysuckle had grown stronger, cloying now, thick enough to taste on her tongue. After a few minutes of walking, she noticed the shapes. Movement at the edge of her vision. Nothing definite, just a suggestion of displacement in the flowers, like something moving through tall grass. When she turned her head, nothing. When she walked, it returned. Rory stopped walking. The movement stopped too. "Someone there?" Silence. That oppressive, absolute silence that made her own heartbeat sound like thunder. She took a step backward. The wildflowers behind her crunched. Not from her footfall. From something else. Rory whirled. Nothing but endless blooms stretching into darkness. Her hand went to the pendant without conscious thought. The stone was still cold, still dead, but as her fingers closed around it, she felt something else. A hairline crack running through the centre. That hadn't been there before. She walked faster. Not running yet, because running meant panic and panic meant mistakes. But fast. Purposeful. The shapes at her periphery grew bolder, closer, until she could almost make out forms in the corner of her eye. Low to the ground. Moving on too many legs. Or no legs at all. "Don't look," she whispered to herself. "Just keep moving." The honeysuckle smell had turned rotten. Sweetness decayed into something that made her stomach clench. Underneath it, a new scent emerged. Copper and salt. Blood. Rory stopped. Pressed her hand over her nose and mouth. The wildflowers ahead of her had changed colour. She hadn't noticed the transition, but now that she looked, she couldn't unsee it. The blues and purples had darkened to a deep crimson that matched the pendant's memory. These weren't wildflowers. She looked closer. The petals were too thin. Too uniform. And in the centre of each bloom, where pollen should be, a small dark spot that looked uncomfortably like a pupil. The flowers were watching her. Rory backed away, her trainers crushing petals that released not sap, but something darker. Thicker. The scent of blood intensified. The movement at her periphery surged closer. She ran. The wildflowers grabbed at her ankles, their stems twisting around her calves like tendrils. She kicked free, stumbled forward, caught herself on hands that sank into soil that was suddenly wet. Wet and warm. Rory scrambled upright, wiping her palms on her jeans. They came away dark. The shapes were no longer at the edge of her vision. They were here, in the clearing with her, emerging from between the watching flowers like shadows given form. Low and elongated, their bodies comprised of angles that hurt to look at directly. They made no sound. Even their movement was silent, a gliding across the ground that suggested no feet, no limbs, just purposeful displacement. She counted five. Six. Eight. They circled her. Rory's hand found the pendant again. She pulled it over her head, the chain catching in her hair, and held the stone before her like a talisman. It remained dark, but the crack in its centre had grown. A thin line of light showed through, barely visible. One of the shapes lunged. Rory swung the pendant on instinct. The stone connected with something that made no sound but gave off a sensation of intense cold, a flash of darkness that blinded her for half a second. When her vision cleared, the shape had retreated. They all had, circling at a greater distance now. The pendant's crack had spread. A spiderweb of thin lines across the dark surface, and through each one, the faintest glow of crimson light. "Not dead," she breathed. "Just waiting." For what, she didn't know. But the shapes seemed to know. They had stopped their advance, their impossible bodies hovering at the edge of the flower line, their presence a weight against her skin like static electricity before a storm. Then the flowers began to scream. It wasn't a sound, exactly. More a pressure in her skull, a frequency that bypassed her ears entirely and struck something deeper. The watching blooms turned their pupil-centres toward the sky, toward something above her, and the scream built and built until Rory's nose began to bleed. She dropped to her knees. The pendant swung from her grip, its chain caught around her fingers. The shapes surged forward. And from somewhere in the endless wildflower field, a voice spoke her name.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1442
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1442
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"oppressive"
count1
12
word"footfall"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"familiar"
3"loomed"
4"weight"
5"pulse"
6"quickened"
7"footsteps"
8"perfect"
9"whisper"
10"silence"
11"oppressive"
12"footfall"
13"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences160
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences165
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1441
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1396
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
London3
Richmond2
Park2
Cardiff1
Evan1
Rory15
November2
June1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Evan"
2"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Cardiff"
4"November"
5"June"
globalScore0.963
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like twenty minutes"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.082
wordCount1441
matches
0"not really, but nobody came here after dark"
1"not sap, but something darker"
2"no sound but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences165
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean20.3
std18.27
cv0.9
sampleLengths
010
159
25
366
44
540
660
711
83
943
104
114
1265
138
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1530
165
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186
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225
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334
342
3513
365
3712
389
3934
405
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425
439
4424
451
4610
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483
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences160
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs222
matches
0"was begging"
1"were watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences165
ratio0.006
matches
0"To her right—"
99.92% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1397
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.04008589835361489
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.012884753042233358
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences165
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences165
mean8.73
std6.83
cv0.782
sampleLengths
010
113
217
329
45
54
624
78
830
94
104
1112
125
1319
148
1523
163
1726
182
199
202
211
222
2318
2423
251
263
274
2812
299
301
3116
3227
338
349
354
3611
377
383
398
404
417
4219
435
443
4517
4621
476
487
492
55.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3696969696969697
totalSentences165
uniqueOpeners61
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences138
matches
0"Even her own footsteps seemed"
1"Just a dead stone on"
2"Just endless wildflowers and that"
3"Even their movement was silent,"
4"Then the flowers began to"
5"More a pressure in her"
ratio0.043
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences138
matches
0"Its deep crimson centre pulsed"
1"She had followed its warmth"
2"She shouldn't have come."
3"She walked for what felt"
4"She'd left her bike locked"
5"They formed a rough circle"
6"She approached the circle slowly,"
7"She could see them now,"
8"She knew, with a certainty"
9"She kept her voice low,"
10"She turned back the way"
11"She turned in a full"
12"She pressed her palms against"
13"She hadn't read that in"
14"She'd heard it somewhere."
15"She picked a direction and"
16"She took a step backward."
17"Her hand went to the"
18"She walked faster."
19"she whispered to herself"
ratio0.246
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences138
matches
0"The pendant burned against her"
1"Rory grabbed the Heartstone through"
2"Its deep crimson centre pulsed"
3"She had followed its warmth"
4"She shouldn't have come."
5"Every instinct she possessed screamed"
6"Tonight it demanded attention."
7"The gates stood open."
8"Richmond Park didn't close, not"
9"Rory stepped through, her trainers"
10"She walked for what felt"
11"The path wound through grassland"
12"She'd left her bike locked"
13"A shape in the darkness"
14"They formed a rough circle"
15"The pendant's pulse quickened."
16"She approached the circle slowly,"
17"The scent of summer grass"
18"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in"
19"Rory stepped between two of"
ratio0.71
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences138
matches
0"Now the thing practically thrummed."
1"To her left, more of"
2"To her right—"
ratio0.022
55.39% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Every instinct she possessed screamed it, the same instincts that had gotten her out of Cardiff, out of that flat, out of Evan's reach."
1"The path wound through grassland that stretched into darkness on either side, the distant shapes of trees black against the marginally lighter sky."
2"Massive, ancient oaks that had grown into twisted pillars, their bark smoothed by centuries of wind and rain."
3"Just endless wildflowers and that strange ambient light that came from nowhere."
4"That oppressive, absolute silence that made her own heartbeat sound like thunder."
5"The stone connected with something that made no sound but gave off a sensation of intense cold, a flash of darkness that blinded her for half a second."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
87.8111%