Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYCZJR5STZ56PFVEHJHTD4

Run Details

Duration:
51.2s
Cost:
$0.129150

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement in sheets, turning the Soho streets into rivers of black glass. Detective Harlow Quinn pressed herself against a brick wall, water streaming from her salt-and-pepper hair as she watched the figure dart between parked cars fifty metres ahead. Three weeks of surveillance, and finally the informant's tip had paid off. The suspect—one of the group her department had been tracking—moved with purpose through the downpour, unaware of her presence. Quinn's worn leather watch caught the amber streetlight as she checked the time. 11:47 PM. The streets had emptied, leaving only the occasional drunk stumbling between doorways. She pushed off the wall and followed, keeping to the shadows cast by shuttered shops. Her boots splashed through puddles, the sound masked by the storm's percussion. The suspect turned left at the corner, heading toward Camden. Quinn quickened her pace, military precision evident in every calculated step. The chase had started outside The Raven's Nest. She'd been watching the bar for hours, noting everyone who entered and left. The green neon sign had flickered in the rain, casting sickly light on the wet sidewalk. When the suspect emerged alone, something in their furtive glance had triggered Quinn's instincts. The same instincts that had kept her alive through eighteen years on the force. A taxi rushed past, throwing up a wave of filthy water. Quinn sidestepped it without breaking stride. The suspect was pulling away, moving faster now. They crossed the road without looking, forcing a late-night bus to brake hard. Quinn waited for it to pass before following. "Control, this is Detective Quinn." She spoke into her radio, voice steady despite her elevated breathing. "In foot pursuit of suspect, heading north on Camden High Street." Static crackled back. "Copy that, Quinn. Backup available?" She watched the figure disappear around another corner. "Negative. Suspect is mobile and I'll lose them if I wait." "Proceed with caution." Quinn clicked off the radio and broke into a run. Her sharp jaw set with determination as she rounded the corner. The suspect stood at the entrance to Camden Town station, fumbling with something in their pocket. The underground entrance gaped like a mouth in the ground, police tape across it indicating closure for maintenance. The suspect ducked under the tape and vanished down the steps. Quinn reached the entrance seconds later. Darkness swallowed the stairwell beyond the first few steps. No lights, no sounds except the rain drumming above and water trickling somewhere below. She pulled out her torch and directed its beam into the void. Wet footprints led down into blackness. Every rational part of her mind screamed danger. Pursuing a suspect into an abandoned Tube station alone violated every protocol. But Morris would have done it. Morris always said the job meant following leads wherever they went, no matter the risk. Three years since she'd lost him, and his voice still echoed in her head during moments like these. Quinn ducked under the tape. The temperature dropped ten degrees as she descended. Her torch beam cut through the darkness, revealing graffiti-covered tiles and puddles of stagnant water. The normal bustle of the Underground had been replaced by oppressive silence. At the bottom, the ticket hall stretched before her, barriers standing open like broken teeth. Movement to her left. Quinn swung her torch, catching a flash of motion disappearing down the escalator to the platforms. She vaulted the barriers and gave chase, taking the metal steps two at a time. The broken escalator groaned under her weight. Platform level brought new challenges. Service tunnels branched off in multiple directions. Quinn swept her torch across each opening, looking for any sign of her quarry. Water dripped from the ceiling in a steady rhythm. Then she spotted it—wet footprints leading toward a service door marked "Authorized Personnel Only." The door stood ajar. Quinn approached carefully, torch in one hand, the other hovering near her radio. Through the gap, she glimpsed flickering lights and heard voices. Multiple voices. This wasn't just a service tunnel. She eased the door open and stepped through. The narrow passage opened into a vast chamber she didn't remember from any station schematic. Lanterns hung from chains, casting dancing shadows on stone walls that looked far older than the Tube system. Dozens of people moved between makeshift stalls, examining goods laid out on tables. The air smelled of herbs, smoke, and something else—something that made her skin crawl. This wasn't possible. She'd studied every map of the Underground. This space shouldn't exist. "First time at the Veil Market?" Quinn spun toward the voice. A young man with olive skin stood behind her, hands raised peacefully. A scar ran along his left forearm, visible below his rolled sleeve. He wore a Saint Christopher medallion that caught the lamplight. "Easy there." His accent carried traces of Spanish warmth. "You look lost." Quinn's hand found her radio. "Metropolitan Police. This is an illegal gathering. Everyone needs to—" "That won't work down here." The man nodded at her radio. "No signal. The market has its own rules." Static confirmed his words. Quinn's sharp jaw tightened. "Who are you?" "Tomás Herrera. I provide medical services." He gestured at the crowd. "And you're Detective Quinn. Your reputation precedes you." "How do you—" "The same way I know you've been watching The Raven's Nest. The same way I know you lost someone three years ago." Tomás's warm brown eyes held sympathy. "Detective Morris stumbled into our world too. Difference is, he came alone at the wrong time." The mention of Morris hit Quinn like a physical blow. "You know what happened to him?" "I know he found something he couldn't understand. Something that found him back." Tomás glanced over his shoulder. "The person you're chasing—they're long gone by now. But you... you're standing at a crossroads." Around them, the market continued its strange commerce. Quinn saw objects that defied explanation, heard languages she didn't recognize. Every instinct told her to leave, call for backup, return with a full team. But Morris had been here. Morris had discovered this impossible place. "If I stay?" "Then maybe you learn what really happened to your partner. But once you know, there's no going back to seeing the world as you did before." The suspect she'd been chasing emerged from behind a stall, no longer running. They made eye contact across the crowded market, and Quinn understood. This had been intentional. She'd been led here.
total_cost0.12915

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.304
leniency0.609
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1082
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1082
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"streaming"
count1
1
word"quickened"
count1
2
word"calculated"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"streaming"
1"quickened"
2"calculated"
3"flickered"
4"echoed"
5"oppressive"
6"silence"
7"weight"
8"dancing"
9"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences88
matches
0"t with determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1073
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
47.73% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount880
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.05
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn18
Camden2
Raven1
Nest1
Static2
Town1
Tube2
Morris5
Underground2
Saint1
Christopher1
Spanish1
Tomás2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Static"
3"Morris"
4"Underground"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"Camden"
2"Raven"
3"Town"
globalScore0.477
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1073
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean28.24
std19.34
cv0.685
sampleLengths
042
158
248
365
446
527
68
719
83
955
1011
1141
126
1359
145
1550
1642
1749
184
1931
208
2160
2214
236
2439
2512
2615
2719
2811
2919
303
3144
3216
3333
3444
353
3626
3732
97.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"been replaced"
1"been led"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was pulling"
60.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences104
ratio0.029
matches
0"The suspect—one of the group her department had been tracking—moved with purpose through the downpour, unaware of her presence."
1"Then she spotted it—wet footprints leading toward a service door marked \"Authorized Personnel Only.\""
2"The air smelled of herbs, smoke, and something else—something that made her skin crawl."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount888
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"revealing graffiti-covered tiles"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.018018018018018018
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00563063063063063
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean10.32
std5.24
cv0.508
sampleLengths
015
127
212
319
413
52
612
715
812
910
1011
118
1213
1316
1414
1514
1611
176
188
1913
208
2116
2211
233
245
258
2611
273
2810
2911
3016
3118
3211
336
349
3514
3612
376
388
3912
406
4115
4218
435
448
4515
4612
4715
484
4916
74.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.46153846153846156
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners48
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then she spotted it—wet footprints"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences86
matches
0"She pushed off the wall"
1"Her boots splashed through puddles,"
2"She'd been watching the bar"
3"They crossed the road without"
4"She spoke into her radio,"
5"She watched the figure disappear"
6"Her sharp jaw set with"
7"She pulled out her torch"
8"Her torch beam cut through"
9"She vaulted the barriers and"
10"She eased the door open"
11"She'd studied every map of"
12"He wore a Saint Christopher"
13"His accent carried traces of"
14"He gestured at the crowd"
15"They made eye contact across"
16"She'd been led here."
ratio0.198
41.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences86
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn pressed herself"
1"The suspect—one of the group"
2"Quinn's worn leather watch caught"
3"The streets had emptied, leaving"
4"She pushed off the wall"
5"Her boots splashed through puddles,"
6"The suspect turned left at"
7"Quinn quickened her pace, military"
8"The chase had started outside"
9"She'd been watching the bar"
10"The green neon sign had"
11"The same instincts that had"
12"A taxi rushed past, throwing"
13"Quinn sidestepped it without breaking"
14"The suspect was pulling away,"
15"They crossed the road without"
16"Quinn waited for it to"
17"She spoke into her radio,"
18"Static crackled back."
19"She watched the figure disappear"
ratio0.837
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Quinn swung her torch, catching a flash of motion disappearing down the escalator to the platforms."
1"Lanterns hung from chains, casting dancing shadows on stone walls that looked far older than the Tube system."
2"He wore a Saint Christopher medallion that caught the lamplight."
3"Quinn saw objects that defied explanation, heard languages she didn't recognize."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She spoke, voice steady despite her elevated breathing"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.043
leniency0.087
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.087
84.4171%