| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "It gestured expansively [expansively]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.422 | | leniency | 0.844 | | rawRatio | 0.053 | | effectiveRatio | 0.044 | |
| 89.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1891 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 76.20% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1891 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "dancing" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "raced" | | 7 | "potential" | | 8 | "comfortable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" | | 2 | "try to" | | 3 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 169 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1863 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.36% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 1436 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 1.39 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 20 | | Camden | 1 | | High | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Tomás | 1 | | Herrera | 10 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Latin | 1 | | Taser | 1 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Highgate | 2 | | Cemetery | 1 | | Morris | 5 | | Underground | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Laughter | 2 | | Rain | 2 | | Procedure | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Tomás" | | 3 | "Herrera" | | 4 | "Saint" | | 5 | "Christopher" | | 6 | "Raven" | | 7 | "Morris" | | 8 | "Underground" | | 9 | "Laughter" | | 10 | "Rain" | | 11 | "Procedure" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "High" | | 2 | "Street" | | 3 | "Highgate" |
| | globalScore | 0.804 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like exhaust and desperation" | | 1 | "looked like Latin" | | 2 | "sounded like a marketplace" | | 3 | "looked like a human tooth the size of her" | | 4 | "maps that seemed to move when she looked at them directly" | | 5 | "something between surprise and hunger" | | 6 | "sounded like wind through dead leaves" | | 7 | "quite faces, eyes that reflected light in ways that human eyes shouldn't" | | 8 | "sounded like a sentence being passed" | | 9 | "not-quite eye fixed on Quinn" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1863 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 169 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 68 | | mean | 27.4 | | std | 21.21 | | cv | 0.774 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 42 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 72 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 59 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 80 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 61 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 36 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 42 | | 46 | 43 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 43 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 90.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "been pulled" | | 1 | "were lined" | | 2 | "been scratched" | | 3 | "been transformed" | | 4 | "was involved" | | 5 | "being passed" | | 6 | "was outnumbered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 257 | | matches | | 0 | "was pursuing" | | 1 | "was talking" | | 2 | "wasn't coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 169 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "Her lungs burned—eighteen years on the force and she still couldn't outrun a twenty-nine-year-old with paramedic training." | | 1 | "Her other hand rested on her baton—she'd left her Taser in the car, hadn't expected a foot chase when she'd spotted Herrera leaving the Raven's Nest an hour ago." | | 2 | "Old brick walls, slick with moisture and something that might have been moss—or might not." | | 3 | "Quinn checked her watch—the worn leather band was damp against her wrist, the face reading 11:47 PM." | | 4 | "The walls were lined with old Underground tiles—white with a green border—but the station name had been scratched away, replaced with symbols she didn't recognize." | | 5 | "Some looked normal—hoodies and jeans, shopping bags and umbrellas." | | 6 | "The scar on his left forearm caught the strange light as he reached into his jacket and pulled out something small—a bone, yellowed with age, carved with tiny markings." | | 7 | "The woman with too many fingers froze mid-motion, her eyes—all four of them—fixing on Quinn with something between surprise and hunger." | | 8 | "Quinn turned, trying to keep her back to a wall, but there were no walls anymore—just bodies pressing closer, faces that weren't quite faces, eyes that reflected light in ways that human eyes shouldn't." | | 9 | "A figure emerged from the throng—tall, thin, wearing a suit that might have been fashionable a century ago." | | 10 | "\"—you are standing in my market, in my domain, without payment or permission. That makes you either very brave or very foolish.\"" | | 11 | "Probably die in the attempt—she was outnumbered a hundred to one by things she couldn't even name." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1429 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.03358992302309307 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007697690692792162 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 169 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 169 | | mean | 11.02 | | std | 9.21 | | cv | 0.835 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 37 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 65.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.4319526627218935 | | totalSentences | 169 | | uniqueOpeners | 73 | |
| 53.33% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "More like the sound adults" | | 1 | "Probably die in the attempt—she" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn't stop." | | 1 | "They never did." | | 2 | "Her lungs burned—eighteen years on" | | 3 | "Her voice echoed off the" | | 4 | "Her other hand rested on" | | 5 | "She'd only wanted to ask" | | 6 | "She whipped around." | | 7 | "She pulled out her radio." | | 8 | "She'd seen it in his" | | 9 | "She had maybe six hours" | | 10 | "She started down the ladder." | | 11 | "She spotted Herrera near a" | | 12 | "He was talking to an" | | 13 | "She handed him a leather" | | 14 | "She stepped out of the" | | 15 | "She advanced toward him, baton" | | 16 | "He backed away, bumping into" | | 17 | "His voice cracked" | | 18 | "Its face was wrong, features" | | 19 | "Her name in its mouth" |
| | ratio | 0.232 | |
| 44.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 104 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hammered down on" | | 1 | "He didn't stop." | | 2 | "They never did." | | 3 | "Quinn pushed through a cluster" | | 4 | "Her lungs burned—eighteen years on" | | 5 | "The wet air tasted like" | | 6 | "Herrera glanced back, his face" | | 7 | "The alley stank of rotting" | | 8 | "Quinn's hand found her torch," | | 9 | "The alley dead-ended twenty meters" | | 10 | "Her voice echoed off the" | | 11 | "Rain dripped from a fire" | | 12 | "Quinn moved forward, sweeping her" | | 13 | "Her other hand rested on" | | 14 | "She'd only wanted to ask" | | 15 | "The one that reminded her" | | 16 | "A scraping sound." | | 17 | "Metal on stone." | | 18 | "She whipped around." | | 19 | "The opening was barely wide" |
| | ratio | 0.832 | |
| 40.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "To three years of questions" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 44.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The alley dead-ended twenty meters ahead at a brick wall tagged with something that looked like Latin." | | 1 | "Procedure said a lot of things that didn't account for three years of dead ends and cold cases and the look on Morris's face in those last moments, when he'd se…" | | 2 | "But she'd thought the same thing three years ago, standing over Morris's body, looking at wounds that no weapon she knew could have made." | | 3 | "He was talking to an old woman wrapped in shawls, his hands gesturing urgently." | | 4 | "Quinn turned, trying to keep her back to a wall, but there were no walls anymore—just bodies pressing closer, faces that weren't quite faces, eyes that reflecte…" | | 5 | "A figure emerged from the throng—tall, thin, wearing a suit that might have been fashionable a century ago." | | 6 | "Its face was wrong, features slightly too symmetrical, eyes too deep-set, mouth curved in a smile that showed too many teeth." |
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| 72.37% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands" | | 1 | "Herrera pushed, his hands raised" |
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| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "another voice added (add)" | | 1 | "His voice (his voice)" | | 2 | "The figure laughed (laugh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.178 | | leniency | 0.356 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |