Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYD22HFTMWEZP5Z55G7C39

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.072475
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered down on Harlow Quinn's shoulders as she rounded the corner onto Camden High Street, her boots slapping against slick pavement. Thirty meters ahead, Tomás Herrera's dark jacket disappeared into the crowd of late-night stragglers huddled under awnings and umbrellas. "Stop! Police!" He didn't stop. They never did. Quinn pushed through a cluster of teenagers sharing a cigarette, ignoring their protests as she knocked the smoke from someone's hand. Her lungs burned—eighteen years on the force and she still couldn't outrun a twenty-nine-year-old with paramedic training. The wet air tasted like exhaust and desperation. Herrera glanced back, his face pale under the sodium streetlights, that Saint Christopher medallion catching the glow for just a moment before he ducked left into a narrow alley between a tattoo parlor and a kebab shop. She followed. The alley stank of rotting garbage and stale beer. Quinn's hand found her torch, the beam cutting through the darkness to illuminate graffiti-covered walls and overflowing bins. No sign of him. The alley dead-ended twenty meters ahead at a brick wall tagged with something that looked like Latin. "Herrera!" Her voice echoed off the close walls. "I just want to talk. About the Whitmore case. About what you saw that night." Nothing. Rain dripped from a fire escape above, plinking against metal. Quinn moved forward, sweeping her torch across doorways and shadows. Her other hand rested on her baton—she'd left her Taser in the car, hadn't expected a foot chase when she'd spotted Herrera leaving the Raven's Nest an hour ago. She'd only wanted to ask questions about the body they'd found in Highgate Cemetery, the one with the strange symbols carved into its chest. The one that reminded her too much of Morris. A scraping sound. Metal on stone. She whipped around. Behind a dumpster, a rusted grate had been pulled aside, revealing a dark hole in the ground. The opening was barely wide enough for a person to squeeze through, and a ladder descended into blackness. Quinn crouched at the edge, shining her torch down. The beam didn't reach the bottom. Old brick walls, slick with moisture and something that might have been moss—or might not. The smell that wafted up was wrong. Not sewage, not the musty decay of abandoned tunnels. Something sweeter. Incense, maybe. And underneath it, something older. She pulled out her radio. Static. Tried her phone. No signal. "Damn it." Procedure said call for backup. Procedure said secure the perimeter and wait. Procedure said a lot of things that didn't account for three years of dead ends and cold cases and the look on Morris's face in those last moments, when he'd seen something that Quinn still couldn't explain. Herrera knew something. She'd seen it in his eyes at the Raven's Nest, the way he'd gone pale when she'd mentioned the symbols. The way he'd run. Quinn checked her watch—the worn leather band was damp against her wrist, the face reading 11:47 PM. She had maybe six hours before dawn, before the day shift started asking questions about why she was pursuing unauthorized leads on her own time again. She started down the ladder. The rungs were slippery and the descent seemed to go on forever, her torch clenched between her teeth as she climbed. Fifty rungs. Sixty. The sounds of the city above faded until all she could hear was her own breathing and the distant drip of water. When her boots finally hit solid ground, Quinn found herself in a tunnel that shouldn't exist. The walls were lined with old Underground tiles—white with a green border—but the station name had been scratched away, replaced with symbols she didn't recognize. Gas lamps flickered in brackets along the walls, casting dancing shadows, though she couldn't see any gas lines. Ahead, the tunnel opened into something larger. Light spilled from around a corner, accompanied by the murmur of voices and what sounded like a marketplace. Haggling. Laughter. The clink of coins. Quinn drew her baton and moved forward, pressing her back against the wall as she approached the opening. What she saw made her stop breathing. The abandoned Tube station had been transformed into a bazaar straight out of a fever dream. Stalls crowded the platform, draped in fabrics that shimmered with colors she couldn't name. Vendors called out in languages she didn't recognize, selling goods displayed under lights that cast no shadows. A woman with too many fingers arranged bottles of liquid that glowed faintly blue. A man with skin like bark haggled over what looked like a human tooth the size of her fist. And everywhere, people. Dozens of them, maybe hundreds, moving through the market with the casual ease of regular customers. Some looked normal—hoodies and jeans, shopping bags and umbrellas. Others didn't look human at all. Quinn pressed deeper into the shadows, her heart hammering against her ribs. This wasn't possible. This couldn't be real. But she'd thought the same thing three years ago, standing over Morris's body, looking at wounds that no weapon she knew could have made. She spotted Herrera near a stall selling maps that seemed to move when she looked at them directly. He was talking to an old woman wrapped in shawls, his hands gesturing urgently. The scar on his left forearm caught the strange light as he reached into his jacket and pulled out something small—a bone, yellowed with age, carved with tiny markings. The old woman took it, examined it, nodded. She handed him a leather pouch in exchange. Quinn's jaw tightened. Whatever this place was, whatever Herrera was involved in, it connected to the body in Highgate. To Morris. To three years of questions without answers. She stepped out of the shadows. The reaction was immediate. Heads turned. Conversations stopped. The woman with too many fingers froze mid-motion, her eyes—all four of them—fixing on Quinn with something between surprise and hunger. "Police," Quinn said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. "Nobody move." Laughter rippled through the crowd. Not mocking, exactly. More like the sound adults make when a child says something unintentionally amusing. Herrera's face went white. "Detective, you shouldn't be here." "Neither should you." She advanced toward him, baton raised. "Tomás Herrera, I need you to come with me. We can talk about this somewhere—" "You don't understand." He backed away, bumping into the map stall. The vendor hissed something in a language that sounded like wind through dead leaves. "You can't be here. You don't have a token. They'll—" "They'll what?" The crowd had started to close in. Quinn turned, trying to keep her back to a wall, but there were no walls anymore—just bodies pressing closer, faces that weren't quite faces, eyes that reflected light in ways that human eyes shouldn't. "She smells like iron," someone said. A woman's voice, melodic and cold. "And grief. Old grief, carried close." "Fresh meat," another voice added. "Been a while since we had uninvited law." Quinn's grip tightened on her baton. "Stay back. All of you." "Detective." Herrera pushed through the crowd, his hands raised. "Please. Listen to me. This place—the Veil Market—it has rules. You came without a bone token. Without invitation. They have rights here that your laws don't recognize." "I don't care about their bloody rules." "You should." His voice cracked. "I've seen what happens to people who break them." The crowd parted. A figure emerged from the throng—tall, thin, wearing a suit that might have been fashionable a century ago. Its face was wrong, features slightly too symmetrical, eyes too deep-set, mouth curved in a smile that showed too many teeth. "Detective Harlow Quinn," it said. Her name in its mouth sounded like a sentence being passed. "Eighteen years of service. Lost partner, DS Thomas Morris, three years past. Cause of death listed as unknown trauma. The truth, of course, is rather more complicated." Quinn's blood ran cold. "How do you know that?" "Information is currency here, Detective. And you—" The figure tilted its head at an angle that no human neck should allow. "—you are standing in my market, in my domain, without payment or permission. That makes you either very brave or very foolish." "I'm pursuing a suspect." "Mr. Herrera is a valued customer. Whatever disputes you have with him in the world above, they hold no weight down here." The figure's smile widened. "However. I am not unreasonable. You came seeking answers. That much is written in the lines of your face, the tension in your shoulders. You want to know what killed your partner. What left those marks on the Highgate corpse. What hides in the shadows of your city." Quinn said nothing. Her throat had gone dry. "I can give you those answers. For a price." "I don't make deals with—" She stopped. With what? She didn't even know what this thing was. "With creatures like me?" The figure laughed, a sound like glass breaking. "You already have, Detective. Every time you looked the other way when a case didn't make sense. Every time you filed an incomplete report because the truth was too strange. Every time you told yourself there must be a rational explanation." It leaned closer, and Quinn caught a scent like old books and copper. "The bargain has already begun. The only question is how far you're willing to go to see it through." Behind her, Herrera made a small sound of distress. "Detective, don't. Whatever it offers, the price is always more than you think." Quinn's mind raced. She could try to fight her way out. Probably die in the attempt—she was outnumbered a hundred to one by things she couldn't even name. She could agree to whatever terms this creature offered and deal with the consequences later. Or she could retreat. Climb back up that ladder, file a report that no one would believe, and spend another three years chasing shadows. Morris's face flashed through her memory. The fear in his eyes. The way he'd grabbed her arm and tried to say something, tried to warn her, before the light went out of him entirely. "What's the price?" she heard herself ask. The figure's smile became something almost genuine. Almost warm. "A question for a question, Detective. The traditional currency of those who deal in truth." It gestured expansively at the market around them. "Ask me what killed Thomas Morris. In exchange, you will answer one question of mine, honestly and completely." "And if I don't like your question?" "Then you don't receive your answer. You leave this place unharmed—I am not in the business of damaging potential future customers—and you continue your life of comfortable ignorance." The figure spread its hands. "The choice, as they say, is yours." Rain dripped somewhere in the darkness above. The market had gone quiet, every eye and not-quite-eye fixed on Quinn. She thought about procedure. About backup that wasn't coming. About eighteen years of playing by rules that had never once explained the inexplicable. "One question," she said. Herrera made a noise like a wounded animal. The crowd leaned in. The figure's teeth gleamed. "Detective Harlow Quinn," it said, savoring each syllable. "We have a deal."
created_at"2026-02-19T12:36:08.408Z" 2/19/2026, 12:36:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"It gestured expansively [expansively]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.422
leniency0.844
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.044
89.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1891
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1891
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"potential"
count1
8
word"comfortable"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"flickered"
2"dancing"
3"shimmered"
4"weight"
5"tension"
6"raced"
7"potential"
8"comfortable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences144
matches(empty)
83.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences144
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
2"try to"
3"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences169
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1863
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.36% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1436
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn20
Camden1
High1
Street1
Tomás1
Herrera10
Saint1
Christopher1
Latin1
Taser1
Raven2
Nest2
Highgate2
Cemetery1
Morris5
Underground1
Tube1
Laughter2
Rain2
Procedure3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Raven"
7"Morris"
8"Underground"
9"Laughter"
10"Rain"
11"Procedure"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Highgate"
globalScore0.804
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount10
matches
0"tasted like exhaust and desperation"
1"looked like Latin"
2"sounded like a marketplace"
3"looked like a human tooth the size of her"
4"maps that seemed to move when she looked at them directly"
5"something between surprise and hunger"
6"sounded like wind through dead leaves"
7"quite faces, eyes that reflected light in ways that human eyes shouldn't"
8"sounded like a sentence being passed"
9"not-quite eye fixed on Quinn"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1863
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences169
matches
0"up that ladder"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean27.4
std21.21
cv0.774
sampleLengths
042
12
26
346
437
52
648
723
811
972
106
1138
1255
1311
142
1549
1627
1743
185
1946
2059
2131
2218
237
2480
2534
2643
2761
2816
2928
306
3129
3214
3321
349
3524
3635
372
3841
3918
4013
4111
4236
437
4414
4542
4643
479
4843
494
90.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences144
matches
0"been pulled"
1"were lined"
2"been scratched"
3"been transformed"
4"was involved"
5"being passed"
6"was outnumbered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs257
matches
0"was pursuing"
1"was talking"
2"wasn't coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences169
ratio0.071
matches
0"Her lungs burned—eighteen years on the force and she still couldn't outrun a twenty-nine-year-old with paramedic training."
1"Her other hand rested on her baton—she'd left her Taser in the car, hadn't expected a foot chase when she'd spotted Herrera leaving the Raven's Nest an hour ago."
2"Old brick walls, slick with moisture and something that might have been moss—or might not."
3"Quinn checked her watch—the worn leather band was damp against her wrist, the face reading 11:47 PM."
4"The walls were lined with old Underground tiles—white with a green border—but the station name had been scratched away, replaced with symbols she didn't recognize."
5"Some looked normal—hoodies and jeans, shopping bags and umbrellas."
6"The scar on his left forearm caught the strange light as he reached into his jacket and pulled out something small—a bone, yellowed with age, carved with tiny markings."
7"The woman with too many fingers froze mid-motion, her eyes—all four of them—fixing on Quinn with something between surprise and hunger."
8"Quinn turned, trying to keep her back to a wall, but there were no walls anymore—just bodies pressing closer, faces that weren't quite faces, eyes that reflected light in ways that human eyes shouldn't."
9"A figure emerged from the throng—tall, thin, wearing a suit that might have been fashionable a century ago."
10"\"—you are standing in my market, in my domain, without payment or permission. That makes you either very brave or very foolish.\""
11"Probably die in the attempt—she was outnumbered a hundred to one by things she couldn't even name."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1429
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.03358992302309307
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.007697690692792162
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences169
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences169
mean11.02
std9.21
cv0.835
sampleLengths
023
119
22
33
43
521
617
78
837
92
109
1118
124
1317
148
1515
161
1710
1810
1929
2024
219
223
233
243
2517
2618
279
286
2915
307
319
322
332
345
355
361
373
382
392
405
417
4237
433
4420
454
4617
4726
485
4921
65.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4319526627218935
totalSentences169
uniqueOpeners73
53.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences125
matches
0"More like the sound adults"
1"Probably die in the attempt—she"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences125
matches
0"He didn't stop."
1"They never did."
2"Her lungs burned—eighteen years on"
3"Her voice echoed off the"
4"Her other hand rested on"
5"She'd only wanted to ask"
6"She whipped around."
7"She pulled out her radio."
8"She'd seen it in his"
9"She had maybe six hours"
10"She started down the ladder."
11"She spotted Herrera near a"
12"He was talking to an"
13"She handed him a leather"
14"She stepped out of the"
15"She advanced toward him, baton"
16"He backed away, bumping into"
17"His voice cracked"
18"Its face was wrong, features"
19"Her name in its mouth"
ratio0.232
44.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences125
matches
0"The rain hammered down on"
1"He didn't stop."
2"They never did."
3"Quinn pushed through a cluster"
4"Her lungs burned—eighteen years on"
5"The wet air tasted like"
6"Herrera glanced back, his face"
7"The alley stank of rotting"
8"Quinn's hand found her torch,"
9"The alley dead-ended twenty meters"
10"Her voice echoed off the"
11"Rain dripped from a fire"
12"Quinn moved forward, sweeping her"
13"Her other hand rested on"
14"She'd only wanted to ask"
15"The one that reminded her"
16"A scraping sound."
17"Metal on stone."
18"She whipped around."
19"The opening was barely wide"
ratio0.832
40.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"To three years of questions"
ratio0.008
44.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The alley dead-ended twenty meters ahead at a brick wall tagged with something that looked like Latin."
1"Procedure said a lot of things that didn't account for three years of dead ends and cold cases and the look on Morris's face in those last moments, when he'd se…"
2"But she'd thought the same thing three years ago, standing over Morris's body, looking at wounds that no weapon she knew could have made."
3"He was talking to an old woman wrapped in shawls, his hands gesturing urgently."
4"Quinn turned, trying to keep her back to a wall, but there were no walls anymore—just bodies pressing closer, faces that weren't quite faces, eyes that reflecte…"
5"A figure emerged from the throng—tall, thin, wearing a suit that might have been fashionable a century ago."
6"Its face was wrong, features slightly too symmetrical, eyes too deep-set, mouth curved in a smile that showed too many teeth."
72.37% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
1"Herrera pushed, his hands raised"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"another voice added (add)"
1"His voice (his voice)"
2"The figure laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.178
leniency0.356
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.133
80.7767%