Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYD3DG5P7K1TXAJNPXSBYQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.080140
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open and the smell of cardamom drifted up from the curry house below, warm and thick, mixing with the November cold that clung to the figure standing on the landing. Lucien Moreau looked like he'd walked out of a magazine editorial and directly into the wrong postcode. Charcoal suit pressed to razor lines, platinum hair slicked back without a strand loose, his ivory-handled cane resting against the cracked tile floor of the corridor. He belonged in Mayfair. In members-only clubs with leather chairs and whisky served in crystal. Not here, not on Brick Lane, not outside a flat that smelled of old paper and cat. Rory held the door half-open, her body filling the gap. She wore an oversized Cardiff University hoodie and joggers, and her black hair was twisted up with a ballpoint pen jammed through it to hold it in place. She didn't speak. Didn't step aside. She stood there with one hand on the doorframe and the other curled around a mug of tea that had gone cold twenty minutes ago. "Before you shut the door," Lucien said. "Bold of you to assume I opened it for you." His mismatched eyes flicked past her shoulder into the flat — the stacked books, the scattered scrolls, the chaos of Eva's research notes spread across every horizontal surface like academic shrapnel. His jaw tightened, almost imperceptibly. The amber eye caught the light from the hallway's single fluorescent tube. The black one absorbed it. "Eva is not here," Rory said. "She's in Prague. If this is business—" "It is not business." The words sat between them. Rory's fingers whitened around the mug. From somewhere inside the flat, Ptolemy let out a low, unhurried meow, the kind of sound a cat makes when it has already decided it does not care about anything happening near the front door. "You can't just show up." "And yet." He spread one hand, palm up, as if presenting the obvious fact of his presence as evidence of some universal truth. The gesture was so characteristically him — theatrical, precise, infuriating — that Rory felt something clench behind her ribs. She stepped back. Not an invitation. A retreat. But he took it as one anyway, crossing the threshold with a slight incline of his head, the way someone enters a church. The cane clicked against the hardwood floor — one, two — and then he stopped in the narrow hallway, his shoulders almost brushing the walls on either side. She pushed the door shut. The three deadbolts stared at her. She locked the bottom one only. "Tea?" she asked, already walking toward the kitchen. "If it is no trouble." "Everything with you is trouble, Lucien." She filled the kettle, her back to him, and listened to the soft percussion of his cane as he moved into the sitting room. She heard him shift a stack of books — carefully, knowing him — to sit down. The sofa springs creaked. Six weeks. Six weeks since she'd last seen him, standing in the amber light outside Silas' bar, his collar turned up against the rain, telling her that what he'd done had been necessary. That the information he'd traded — her name, her connection to Eva, the nature of Eva's research — had bought them time. That the people hunting the Avaros grimoire would have found them anyway, and this way, at least, he'd controlled the terms. She'd said nothing. She'd walked up the stairs to her flat and locked the door and sat on the kitchen floor with her back against the cabinets and pressed the heels of her hands into her eye sockets until she saw colors. The kettle boiled. She poured two cups, dropped a teabag in each, and carried them out. He sat on the sofa with Ptolemy already installed on his lap, the tabby purring with the deep rumble of a diesel engine. Lucien's long fingers scratched behind the cat's ears. Traitor, Rory thought. She set his tea on the cluttered side table, pushing aside a paperback copy of something in Aramaic, and dropped into the armchair across from him. "You look tired," he said. "You look like you rehearsed something on the way here and you're stalling." His mouth twitched. Not quite a smile. The ghost of one. "I did rehearse. Three different versions. On the Tube." "You took the Tube?" "I am trying to be less conspicuous." Rory glanced at the ivory-handled cane, the tailored suit, the platinum hair, the heterochromatic eyes. "How's that working out?" "A woman on the Central line told me I looked like a vampire." "Close enough." He exhaled through his nose — almost a laugh. Then the trace of warmth left his face and something rawer surfaced. He looked down at Ptolemy, who had gone limp with contentment across his thighs. "I came to tell you something, and I need you to hear it before you decide what to do with me." "What to do with you. Like you're a parcel." "Like I am someone who wronged you and knows it." The flat went quiet. Below, muffled, the curry house rattled and hummed with a Friday night rush. Rory wrapped both hands around her mug even though the tea was still too hot to drink. "Go on, then." Lucien raised his gaze. The amber eye held the kind of clarity that could cut, and the black one — the one from his father's side, the demon side — was unreadable as deep water. "When I traded your name, I told myself it was strategy. I told myself I was protecting you, that a controlled leak is better than a discovered secret. I told myself a great many elegant things." He paused. His thumb stilled against Ptolemy's fur. "I have had six weeks to sit with what I did, and I no longer believe any of them." Rory said nothing. "I was afraid," he continued, and the word came out like he'd had to drag it up from somewhere physical, somewhere lodged beneath muscle and bone. "The people behind the grimoire hunt — you have seen what they do, Rory. You saw what was left of Hargrove. I looked at the situation and I panicked, and I used the only currency I have ever been good at spending. Other people's secrets." "My secrets." "Your secrets. Yes." She set the mug down. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light as she folded her arms. "You told people with knives and sigils where to find me. Where to find Eva's research." "I gave them a version. Enough to seem cooperative, not enough to—" "Not enough." The words came out flat as a slap. "They came to the restaurant, Lucien. To Golden Empress. Yu-Fei had to lie through her teeth. They searched the kitchen. They stood next to the ovens and described what they'd do to anyone hiding what they wanted." His face changed. She watched it happen — the careful composure splintering at the edges, hairline cracks spreading through porcelain. "I did not know they went to the restaurant." "Because you didn't ask. You made your elegant trade and you walked away and you didn't look back to see what it cost." He opened his mouth. Closed it. Ptolemy, unbothered by the tension sawing through the room, kneaded his claws into Lucien's thigh. He didn't flinch. "You are right," he said. "I know I'm right." "I did not come here to defend myself." "Then what did you come here for?" He looked at her. Straight on, no performance, no angle. She'd seen him talk his way through negotiations with entities that didn't technically have mouths. She'd seen him bluff a room full of people who could smell lies. But this — this stripped-back, defenseless thing he was doing with his face — she'd never seen. "Because I could not stay away any longer, and lying to myself about why felt worse than whatever you might say to me." Heat crawled up the back of her neck. She dug her thumbnail into the arm of the chair. "That's not fair." "No." "You can't just — you don't get to show up looking like that and say things like that and expect me to—" "I expect nothing. I am not here to collect. I am here because six weeks ago I watched you walk up those stairs and I have not been able to think clearly since." Rory stood. The abruptness of it startled Ptolemy, who sprang off Lucien's lap with an indignant chirp and vanished under the desk. She crossed to the window. Brick Lane glowed orange and wet below, the neon signs of the curry houses bleeding color onto the pavement. A man was singing somewhere. Off-key. Happy. She pressed her forehead to the cold glass. "The last man who said he was afraid," she said quietly, "used it as a reason to keep me small. Fear was always his excuse. For the jealousy. For the control. For—" She stopped. Breathed. "I left Cardiff because of someone else's fear, Lucien. I am not going to rearrange my life around yours." She heard the sofa creak. The cane. One step, then another, and then he was behind her — not touching, not close enough to touch, but close enough that she could feel the warmth of him through the thin hoodie, smell the cedar and old paper scent that clung to his suits. "I am not asking you to." "Then what are you asking?" "Permission to earn back what I broke." She turned. He was right there. Closer than she'd estimated. The heterochromatic eyes were level with hers — amber and black, human and something else, and both of them unbearably open. She could see the faint shadows beneath them. He hadn't been sleeping either. "You sold me out." "I did." "I trusted you. I don't — that's not something I hand out like sweets, Lucien. You know what it took for me to trust anyone after Evan. You knew, and you—" Her voice cracked. She hated it. She pressed her lips together and looked at the hollow of his throat instead of his eyes. His hand rose — slowly, deliberately, giving her every chance to step back. His fingers hovered near her jaw, not quite landing. "Tell me to leave and I will leave. Right now. No argument." She should. She knew she should. Every rational synapse in her brain lined up in neat formation and screamed it. He'd sold her name. He'd put Yu-Fei in danger. He'd put Eva's work at risk. He was half-demon, he was a broker who dealt in secrets, and the gentleness in his hand was the same gentleness he used to manipulate everyone. But his fingers trembled. She could see it. The faintest vibration, like a plucked string. She reached up and closed her hand around his wrist. His pulse kicked against her palm — fast, faster than it should have been for someone who made a living out of composure. "You don't get to do this halfway," she said. "If you're here, you're here. No trades. No angles. No elegant strategies." "No elegant strategies," he repeated, and the corner of his mouth pulled into something fragile and unguarded. She didn't let go of his wrist. His fingertips settled against her jaw, barely there, a question more than a touch. The calluses on his hand — from the hidden blade in that cane, from years of gripping it — were rough against her skin. "I'm still angry," she said. "I know." "This doesn't fix anything." "I know that too." She pulled his wrist down, and his hand fell away from her jaw, but she didn't release him. She held on, her thumb pressed against the tendon on the inside of his wrist, feeling the rabbit-fast pulse, and something unlocked in her chest that she'd spent six weeks bricking over. "Sit down," she said. "Drink your tea before it gets cold. And then you're going to tell me everything you actually traded — not the version you've edited. Everything." He nodded once. She let go. Stepped around him. Sat back down in the armchair and picked up her mug with hands that weren't quite steady. Lucien lowered himself onto the sofa. He picked up the tea. Ptolemy crept out from under the desk, considered the room's emotional landscape with obvious disdain, and jumped back onto his lap. Outside, the man had stopped singing. Rain began to tap against the window, soft and insistent, filling the silence between them with something that almost sounded like patience.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:36:09.782Z" 2/19/2026, 12:36:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.246
leniency0.492
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.033
92.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2093
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2093
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"crystal"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"porcelain"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"crystal"
1"flicked"
2"warmth"
3"unreadable"
4"porcelain"
5"tension"
6"could feel"
7"trembled"
8"pulse"
9"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences134
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences181
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2107
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1454
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
November1
Moreau1
Mayfair1
Brick2
Lane2
Cardiff1
University1
Eva4
Ptolemy7
Rory9
Avaros1
Aramaic1
Friday1
Lucien7
Breathed1
Yu-Fei1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Mayfair"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Cardiff"
4"Aramaic"
globalScore1
windowScore1
14.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like he'd walked out of a magazine"
1"as if presenting the obvious fact of his presence as evidence of some universal truth"
2"not quite landing"
3"sounded like patience"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.949
wordCount2107
matches
0"not touching, not close enough to touch, but close enough"
1"not close enough to touch, but close enough"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences181
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs90
mean23.41
std20.33
cv0.868
sampleLengths
033
175
269
37
410
553
613
74
811
935
105
1142
1259
1317
148
155
166
1744
1876
1942
2016
2160
225
2313
2420
254
267
2719
2813
292
3035
3121
329
3310
3434
353
3635
3763
383
3971
402
413
4236
4312
4447
4520
469
4723
4824
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"was twisted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs235
matches
0"was doing"
1"was singing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount21
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences181
ratio0.077
matches
0"His mismatched eyes flicked past her shoulder into the flat — the stacked books, the scattered scrolls, the chaos of Eva's research notes spread across every horizontal surface like academic shrapnel."
1"The gesture was so characteristically him — theatrical, precise, infuriating — that Rory felt something clench behind her ribs."
2"The cane clicked against the hardwood floor — one, two — and then he stopped in the narrow hallway, his shoulders almost brushing the walls on either side."
3"She heard him shift a stack of books — carefully, knowing him — to sit down."
4"That the information he'd traded — her name, her connection to Eva, the nature of Eva's research — had bought them time."
5"He exhaled through his nose — almost a laugh."
6"The amber eye held the kind of clarity that could cut, and the black one — the one from his father's side, the demon side — was unreadable as deep water."
7"She watched it happen — the careful composure splintering at the edges, hairline cracks spreading through porcelain."
8"But this — this stripped-back, defenseless thing he was doing with his face — she'd never seen."
9"One step, then another, and then he was behind her — not touching, not close enough to touch, but close enough that she could feel the warmth of him through the thin hoodie, smell the cedar and old paper scent that clung to his suits."
10"The heterochromatic eyes were level with hers — amber and black, human and something else, and both of them unbearably open."
11"His hand rose — slowly, deliberately, giving her every chance to step back."
12"His pulse kicked against her palm — fast, faster than it should have been for someone who made a living out of composure."
13"The calluses on his hand — from the hidden blade in that cane, from years of gripping it — were rough against her skin."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount938
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"great many elegant have"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03624733475479744
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009594882729211088
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences181
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences181
mean11.64
std9.94
cv0.854
sampleLengths
033
117
226
34
411
517
610
728
83
93
1025
117
1210
1331
145
1512
165
176
187
194
205
216
2235
235
2423
2519
263
273
282
2923
3028
315
326
336
348
355
366
3724
3816
394
402
4131
4222
4321
443
4539
463
4713
4823
498
44.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.3314917127071823
totalSentences181
uniqueOpeners60
28.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"Then the trace of warmth"
ratio0.009
13.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences116
matches
0"He belonged in Mayfair."
1"She wore an oversized Cardiff"
2"She didn't speak."
3"She stood there with one"
4"His mismatched eyes flicked past"
5"His jaw tightened, almost imperceptibly."
6"He spread one hand, palm"
7"She stepped back."
8"She pushed the door shut."
9"She locked the bottom one"
10"she asked, already walking toward"
11"She filled the kettle, her"
12"She heard him shift a"
13"She'd said nothing."
14"She'd walked up the stairs"
15"She poured two cups, dropped"
16"He sat on the sofa"
17"She set his tea on"
18"His mouth twitched."
19"He exhaled through his nose"
ratio0.517
37.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences116
matches
0"The door swung open and"
1"Lucien Moreau looked like he'd"
2"Charcoal suit pressed to razor"
3"He belonged in Mayfair."
4"Rory held the door half-open,"
5"She wore an oversized Cardiff"
6"She didn't speak."
7"She stood there with one"
8"His mismatched eyes flicked past"
9"His jaw tightened, almost imperceptibly."
10"The amber eye caught the"
11"The black one absorbed it."
12"The words sat between them."
13"Rory's fingers whitened around the"
14"He spread one hand, palm"
15"The gesture was so characteristically"
16"She stepped back."
17"The cane clicked against the"
18"She pushed the door shut."
19"The three deadbolts stared at"
ratio0.845
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The amber eye held the kind of clarity that could cut, and the black one — the one from his father's side, the demon side — was unreadable as deep water."
1"She'd seen him talk his way through negotiations with entities that didn't technically have mouths."
2"The abruptness of it startled Ptolemy, who sprang off Lucien's lap with an indignant chirp and vanished under the desk."
3"One step, then another, and then he was behind her — not touching, not close enough to touch, but close enough that she could feel the warmth of him through the…"
4"He was half-demon, he was a broker who dealt in secrets, and the gentleness in his hand was the same gentleness he used to manipulate everyone."
5"She held on, her thumb pressed against the tendon on the inside of his wrist, feeling the rabbit-fast pulse, and something unlocked in her chest that she'd spen…"
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he continued, and the word came out like he'd had to drag it up from somewhere physical, somewhere lodged beneath muscle and bone"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he continued (continue)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.18
leniency0.361
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.066
78.3105%