Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYD4TGAKH91CB2NAVP2WKS

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Duration:
6m 2s
Cost:
$0.006108
Provider:
AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over the caution tape strung across the tunnel entrance. Damp concrete sweated under the glare of portable halogen lights. The air tasted of copper and old ozone, a sharp contrast to the usual stale urine and rust of the London Underground. This abandoned Tube station beneath Camden held secrets the Metropolitan Police database did not catalog. Quinn adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist. The hands ticked past midnight. DS Evans stood near the center of the platform, hands deep in the pockets of his high-visibility jacket. He kicked at a patch of moss growing on the tiles. Green vegetation had no business thriving this deep underground without sunlight. "Body's over by the ticket booth," Evans said. "Coroner's still poking around. Says cause of death is inconclusive. No marks, no blood." Quinn moved past him. Her boots clicked against the wet floor. The sound echoed too far, as if the tunnel stretched longer than physical geometry allowed. She stopped beside the corpse. A man in a tattered suit lay on his back. His eyes stared at the curved ceiling, pupils dilated wide enough to swallow the iris. "Identity?" "Nothing in the wallets. Cards are blank. Plastic strips with no numbers." Evans shifted his weight. "Looks like a drugging. Maybe a heart attack brought on by stress." Quinn crouched. She pulled a pair of latex gloves from her belt and snapped them onto her wrists. The sharp jawline of her face tightened as she leaned closer to the dead man's chest. His suit jacket was open. Inside the breast pocket, a brass object glinted under the halogen strip. She reached out. Her fingers hovered over the item before grasping it. The metal felt cold, leaching heat from her skin. She lifted the Veil Compass into the light. Verdigris stained the casing where the brass had oxidized. Sigils etched into the face pulsed with a faint, rhythmic luminescence that matched the beat of her own pulse. "Ever seen one of these?" Quinn asked. Evans leaned in. He squinted through the glare. "Looks like an antique. Pawn shop junk?" "Shade artisan work. Found in the restricted archives files." Quinn turned the compass over. The needle spun wildly, refusing to settle on North. It jerked toward the tunnel wall, then snapped back to the body. "This isn't junk. It points to rifts. Portals." "Portals." Evans straightened up. He rubbed the back of his neck. "You're buying into the occult rumors now, Quinn? After Morris?" Quinn froze. The mention of her lost partner landed like a physical blow. She tucked the compass into an evidence bag. The plastic crinkled in the silence. "Morris died because we ignored the evidence in front of us," Quinn said. "This man didn't die of a heart attack. Look at the tiles beneath him." Evans looked down. The moss he had kicked earlier grew in a perfect circle around the body. The green shoots avoided the suit fabric but thrived on the concrete inches away. "Mold spores," Evans said. "Common in damp places." "Mold doesn't grow in rings unless something radiates from the center." Quinn stood. She walked to the tunnel wall where the compass needle had pointed. A section of the tiled surface appeared normal until she ran her gloved hand over it. The grout felt warm. Vibrations hummed against her palm. "The Market moves every full moon. Tonight is the full moon." "The Veil Market?" Evans laughed. A short, sharp sound that died quickly in the damp air. "That's a urban legend. Truckers talk about it on the forums. You think a black market for magic spells killed this guy?" "I think he was selling something he couldn't control." Quinn returned to the body. She lifted the man's left hand. The skin on his fingertips was blackened, as if burned by extreme cold. "No entry requirement visible. No bone token on the chain." "Maybe he lost it." "Nobody enters without a token. The barrier rejects them." Quinn tapped the compass against her palm. The needle settled, pointing directly at the dead man's chest. "The energy signature originates from inside him. Not external." Evans frowned. He crouched beside her. He pulled a penlight from his pocket and shone it into the man's mouth. "Teeth are intact. No capsules." "Check the lining of the jacket." Quinn stepped back. She watched the halogen lights flicker. The voltage in the station fluctuated without pattern. "He swallowed it. Or it was planted." Evans reached into the jacket. He felt along the inner seam. His fingers stopped at the shoulder. He pulled a small pouch free. It was made of leather, stitched with thread that looked like human hair. He opened it. Dust spilled onto the floor. Grey ash mixed with tiny bone fragments. "Creepy," Evans said. "Could be anything. Ground-up pills for all we know." "Bone token residue." Quinn watched the ash settle. It didn't scatter in the draft. The particles clumped together, forming a small pile that defied gravity. "He used the token to enter. Then someone took it back. Or he consumed it to hide the evidence." "Consumed a bone token?" Evans stood. He wiped his hands on his trousers. "That's insane. You're building a fantasy novel instead of a case file." "I'm building a case file based on physics." Quinn pointed to the ash. "That mass shouldn't hold together. Gravity isn't working right here. The rift is open. Someone left it open." She walked toward the tunnel darkness beyond the platform edge. The shadows pooled thicker there, swallowing the light from the lamps. The compass needle swung violently, straining against the casing. "Where are you going?" Evans called out. "Protocol says we wait for SOCO." "Protocol assumes a standard crime scene." Quinn stopped at the edge of the light. The darkness pressed against her face. Cold air blew from the tunnel, carrying the scent of ozone and burnt sugar. "This scene changes in twenty minutes. The Market moves. If the rift closes, we lose the trail." "You can't go in there alone." Evans moved toward her. He reached for his radio. "I'm calling it in. We need backup." "Backup takes twenty minutes. The Market takes less." Quinn checked her watch. The leather strap creaked. "You stay here. Secure the body. Don't let anyone touch the ash." "Quinn." Evans's voice hardened. "Don't do this. You go down that tunnel, you're off the books. No support. No warrant." Quinn turned. The sharp line of her jaw set firm. She held up the evidence bag. The compass needle vibrated against the plastic. "I lost Morris because I waited for backup," Quinn said. "I'm not making that mistake again." She stepped into the tunnel. The halogen lights behind her flickered and died one by one, leaving only the glow of the compass face to light her path. The darkness wrapped around her shoulders. The air grew colder. The sound of Evans shouting her name faded, replaced by the low hum of the rift ahead. Quinn moved forward. Her boots found purchase on the slick tracks. The compass needle locked onto a point fifty yards ahead. A shimmer distorted the air, like heat haze on a summer road. Behind the distortion, shapes moved. Stalls. Figures. Lights that burned without fuel. She stopped. The shimmer pulsed. A figure stepped out from the distortion. Tall. Wearing a coat made of patches that shifted color when she blinked. The figure held a lantern that emitted no light, yet illuminated the space around it. Quinn gripped the evidence bag. Her thumb brushed the worn leather of her watch. She waited. The figure raised the lantern. The light revealed a face without features. Smooth skin where eyes and mouth should be. The figure pointed at the compass in her hand. A sound echoed in her head, not through her ears. A voice like grinding stone. *Token.* Quinn held up the bag with the ash. The figure shook its head. The lantern swung. The light swept over her body, lingering on the badge clipped to her belt. *Outsider.* The figure lowered the lantern. The darkness rushed back in. The shimmer began to fade. The Market was closing. Quinn stepped forward. She reached out toward the distortion. Her fingers brushed the cold surface of the rift. It felt like touching ice. The compass needle spun faster. The brass casing grew hot against her palm. Smoke rose from the evidence bag. The plastic began to melt. Quinn dropped the bag. It hit the tracks with a sizzle. The ash scattered. The wind picked up. Debris swirled around her ankles. Papers. Coins. Bones. The figure vanished into the haze. The rift narrowed. Quinn stood alone in the tunnel. The halogen lights behind her flickered back on. Evans's voice returned, distant but urgent. She looked at the melted plastic on the tracks. The compass lay beside it. The needle still pointed forward, into the closing gap. The wall behind the rift remained solid brick. No door. No passage. Quinn picked up the compass. The verdigris had spread. The sigils were darker now. She turned back toward the platform. Evans ran toward her, flashlight beam cutting through the dust. "Quinn!" Evans skidded to a halt. He looked at the tracks. He looked at the wall. "Where did it go? I saw lights." "It moved." Quinn pocketed the compass. The metal burned through her jacket. "The body wasn't the target. He was the key." "A key?" Evans shone his light on the melted plastic. "For what?" Quinn looked at her watch. The hands had stopped. The tick ceased. She tapped the glass. The second hand remained frozen on the twelve. "For whatever comes next," Quinn said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.963
rawRatio0.038
effectiveRatio0.037
96.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"database"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"pawn"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"standard"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count2
highlights
0"database"
1"echoed"
2"weight"
3"etched"
4"pulsed"
5"rhythmic"
6"pulse"
7"pawn"
8"silence"
9"perfect"
10"flicker"
11"standard"
12"vibrated"
13"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences177
matches(empty)
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences177
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences205
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1615
ratio0.001
matches
0"Token."
1"Outsider."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
32.85% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1195
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.34
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn28
London1
Underground1
Tube1
Camden1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Evans20
Veil1
Compass1
North1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Evans"
places
0"London"
1"Compass"
globalScore0.328
windowScore0.5
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared normal until she ran her gloved hand over it"
1"looked like human hair"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1615
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences205
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean29.36
std16.18
cv0.551
sampleLengths
075
140
222
356
41
528
651
757
87
915
1043
1121
1227
1327
1431
158
1661
1738
1843
194
2035
2125
2230
2351
2412
2544
2625
2731
2830
2913
3051
3122
3228
3320
3423
3516
3655
3745
3840
3936
4024
411
4230
431
4442
4524
4626
4729
4835
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences177
matches
0"was blackened"
1"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs226
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences205
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1196
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.01588628762541806
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004180602006688963
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences205
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences205
mean7.88
std4.57
cv0.58
sampleLengths
013
110
222
315
410
55
618
711
811
98
1014
114
127
1315
145
1510
1615
171
1816
1912
202
2116
2216
235
2412
253
269
279
288
299
3019
317
323
335
347
3514
369
3712
388
394
407
4110
422
4311
448
456
4613
4714
483
4914
38.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats27
diversityRatio0.3073170731707317
totalSentences205
uniqueOpeners63
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences151
matches
0"He kicked at a patch"
1"Her boots clicked against the"
2"She stopped beside the corpse."
3"His eyes stared at the"
4"She pulled a pair of"
5"His suit jacket was open."
6"She reached out."
7"Her fingers hovered over the"
8"She lifted the Veil Compass"
9"He squinted through the glare."
10"It jerked toward the tunnel"
11"He rubbed the back of"
12"She tucked the compass into"
13"She walked to the tunnel"
14"She lifted the man's left"
15"He crouched beside her."
16"He pulled a penlight from"
17"She watched the halogen lights"
18"He felt along the inner"
19"His fingers stopped at the"
ratio0.265
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount142
totalSentences151
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
1"The air tasted of copper"
2"This abandoned Tube station beneath"
3"Quinn adjusted the worn leather"
4"The hands ticked past midnight."
5"DS Evans stood near the"
6"He kicked at a patch"
7"Quinn moved past him."
8"Her boots clicked against the"
9"The sound echoed too far,"
10"She stopped beside the corpse."
11"A man in a tattered"
12"His eyes stared at the"
13"Evans shifted his weight"
14"She pulled a pair of"
15"The sharp jawline of her"
16"His suit jacket was open."
17"She reached out."
18"Her fingers hovered over the"
19"The metal felt cold, leaching"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The sound echoed too far, as if the tunnel stretched longer than physical geometry allowed."
1"Sigils etched into the face pulsed with a faint, rhythmic luminescence that matched the beat of her own pulse."
2"The skin on his fingertips was blackened, as if burned by extreme cold."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Evans laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.148
leniency0.296
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.037
82.3587%