Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYDJ99VP2NBPDCN2P27RH3

Run Details

Duration:
8.7s
Cost:
$0.002388

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The underground Tube station reeked of stale air and something else—something metallic that caught in the back of Detective Harlow Quinn's throat. Her worn leather watch glinted under the flickering emergency lights as she crouched beside the body. Forensic markers dotted the concrete floor like yellow warning flags. The victim—male, mid-thirties—lay twisted at an unnatural angle, his limbs splayed like a broken marionette. Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as she studied the peculiar pattern of bruising around his neck. "Not a standard strangulation," she muttered. Eva Kowalski shifted beside her, the leather satchel stuffed with research volumes bumping against her hip. She tucked a strand of curly red hair behind her ear—a nervous habit Quinn had known since they first worked together. "The marks," Eva said, her round glasses reflecting the harsh forensic lights, "they're not consistent with human hands." Quinn's brown eyes narrowed. She'd seen enough unexplained cases in her eighteen years of service to know when something supernatural lurked beneath the surface. Her mind flickered to DS Morris—her former partner who vanished three years ago under circumstances that still haunted her dreams. "Look at the sigil pattern near the victim's left hand," Eva continued, pointing with a freckled finger. The detective leaned closer. Faint marks—almost like ritualistic etchings—were barely visible against the pale skin. Not blood. Not bruising. Something else entirely. "This wasn't a random kill," Quinn said. Her military precision bleeding into every word. "This was deliberate. Calculated."
total_cost0.002388

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount248
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount248
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"jaw clenched"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"calculated"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"standard"
2"flickered"
3"calculated"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences20
matches(empty)
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences20
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences21
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords240
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
30.38% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount209
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.39
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn5
Eva3
Kowalski1
Morris1
persons
0"Detective"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Eva"
4"Kowalski"
5"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.304
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences13
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount240
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences21
matches(empty)
91.06% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs9
mean26.67
std12.5
cv0.469
sampleLengths
038
140
26
337
418
544
617
722
818
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences20
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs35
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences21
ratio0.238
matches
0"The underground Tube station reeked of stale air and something else—something metallic that caught in the back of Detective Harlow Quinn's throat."
1"The victim—male, mid-thirties—lay twisted at an unnatural angle, his limbs splayed like a broken marionette."
2"She tucked a strand of curly red hair behind her ear—a nervous habit Quinn had known since they first worked together."
3"Her mind flickered to DS Morris—her former partner who vanished three years ago under circumstances that still haunted her dreams."
4"Faint marks—almost like ritualistic etchings—were barely visible against the pale skin."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount217
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.02304147465437788
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.013824884792626729
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences21
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences21
mean11.43
std6.82
cv0.597
sampleLengths
022
116
210
315
415
56
616
721
818
94
1020
1120
1217
134
1411
152
162
173
187
197
204
82.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5238095238095238
totalSentences21
uniqueOpeners11
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences16
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences16
matches
0"Her worn leather watch glinted"
1"She tucked a strand of"
2"She'd seen enough unexplained cases"
3"Her mind flickered to DS"
4"Her military precision bleeding into"
ratio0.313
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount14
totalSentences16
matches
0"The underground Tube station reeked"
1"Her worn leather watch glinted"
2"The victim—male, mid-thirties-lay twisted at"
3"Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as"
4"Eva Kowalski shifted beside her,"
5"She tucked a strand of"
6"Eva said, her round glasses"
7"Quinn's brown eyes narrowed."
8"She'd seen enough unexplained cases"
9"Her mind flickered to DS"
10"Eva continued, pointing with a"
11"The detective leaned closer."
12"Something else entirely."
13"Her military precision bleeding into"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences16
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Her mind flickered to DS Morris—her former partner who vanished three years ago under circumstances that still haunted her dreams."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva said, her round glasses reflecting the harsh forensic lights,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Eva continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
71.6787%