| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1131 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1131 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "cacophony" | | 12 | "crystalline" | | 13 | "synchronized" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 44.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1118 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1036 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Laila | 1 | | Malphora | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Laila" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 56.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like it, carried on the wind that" | | 1 | "shadows that seemed to move independently of their sources" | | 2 | "mouth that seemed to smile without moving" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.894 | | wordCount | 1118 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the stone but from the air itself, surrounding her, pressing in on all sid" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.85% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 29.42 | | std | 11.71 | | cv | 0.398 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 179 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "The research she'd done since receiving the mysterious artifact pointed to one place—the Fae Grove." | | 1 | "A whisper caught her attention—her name, or something like it, carried on the wind that had suddenly picked up." | | 2 | "A child's laughter—innocent, cruel—rippled through the grove." | | 3 | "It had developed a face—eyes that followed her, a mouth that seemed to smile without moving." | | 4 | "In its illumination, she saw them—figures in the shadows between the trees, tall and thin with too many joints in their limbs." | | 5 | "The creature flinched back, its face—what she could see of it—contorting in anger or pain." | | 6 | "Their whispers filled her mind, a cacophony of voices that spoke words she almost understood—promises, threats, truths that would break her sanity." | | 7 | "It was more than an artifact; it was a key, a weapon, a connection to something ancient and powerful." | | 8 | "The figures were closer, their features becoming clearer in the pendant's light—hollow eyes, skin like old parchment, mouths filled with needle-like teeth." | | 9 | "They called her by names she didn't recognize—Laila, Malphora—titles and honors from a time she couldn't remember, a life she hadn't lived." |
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| 98.30% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1049 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.04194470924690181 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012392755004766444 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 11.77 | | std | 5.22 | | cv | 0.443 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 43.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3368421052631579 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Normally, the sight would have" | | 1 | "Just the rustling of leaves" | | 2 | "Just more flowers, more stones," |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 89.77% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "She'd never been to this" | | 2 | "She stepped between them, the" | | 3 | "She whispered to the pendant," | | 4 | "She traced one with her" | | 5 | "Her voice sounded small in" | | 6 | "She unclasped it, holding it" | | 7 | "Its crimson glow illuminated the" | | 8 | "She turned, but saw nothing." | | 9 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 10 | "It seemed to come from" | | 11 | "She turned to face it," | | 12 | "It had developed a face—eyes" | | 13 | "She looked down." | | 14 | "Their eyes reflected the pendant's" | | 15 | "They didn't listen." | | 16 | "They flowed forward, their movements" | | 17 | "It reached her ankles now," | | 18 | "She demanded, struggling against the" | | 19 | "Their whispers filled her mind," |
| | ratio | 0.326 | |
| 29.77% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The London night air bit" | | 1 | "The moon, a sliver of" | | 2 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 3 | "The pendant had been pulsing" | | 4 | "The research she'd done since" | | 5 | "Aurora quickened her pace, her" | | 6 | "The trees around her seemed" | | 7 | "She'd never been to this" | | 8 | "The standing stones appeared suddenly" | | 9 | "She stepped between them, the" | | 10 | "She whispered to the pendant," | | 11 | "Tonight, it made her stomach" | | 12 | "Something was wrong." | | 13 | "The flowers leaned away from" | | 14 | "The air tasted of ozone" | | 15 | "Aurora circled the clearing, the" | | 16 | "The grove looked the same" | | 17 | "The stones had new markings," | | 18 | "She traced one with her" | | 19 | "A whisper caught her attention—her" |
| | ratio | 0.86 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 89.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant had been pulsing for days, a steady rhythm against her chest that grew stronger each night." | | 1 | "During daylight hours, families picnicked and children played, oblivious to the pocket realm that existed just beyond their perception." | | 2 | "Its crimson glow illuminated the space around her, casting long, distorted shadows that seemed to move independently of their sources." | | 3 | "Their whispers filled her mind, a cacophony of voices that spoke words she almost understood—promises, threats, truths that would break her sanity." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She whispered, its crimson gem glowing faintly against her palm" | | 1 | "Aurora commanded, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 2 | "Aurora replied, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "She said, the words feeling foreign on her tongue" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "She demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |