Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYDQ6H5PYKMY7DF9791YWR

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Duration:
40.8s
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$0.004949
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Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The London night air bit at Aurora's exposed skin as she slipped through the wrought-iron gates of Richmond Park. The moon, a sliver of silver against the velvet sky, offered little guidance through the winding paths. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant beneath her jacket, its familiar warmth a small comfort against the chill. The pendant had been pulsing for days, a steady rhythm against her chest that grew stronger each night. Two nights ago, the pulses had turned into throbs, demanding her attention. The research she'd done since receiving the mysterious artifact pointed to one place—the Fae Grove. Aurora quickened her pace, her boots crunching on the gravel path. The trees around her seemed to lean in, their branches skeletal fingers against the dim sky. She'd never been to this part of the park at night. During daylight hours, families picnicked and children played, oblivious to the pocket realm that existed just beyond their perception. The standing stones appeared suddenly at the edge of her vision, ancient oaks carved into monoliths that marked the boundary between worlds. She stepped between them, the air growing still, the city sounds fading into nothingness. "Right then, time to figure out what you want." She whispered to the pendant, its crimson gem glowing faintly against her palm. Inside the grove, wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors, their petals shimmering with an otherworldly light. Normally, the sight would have taken her breath away. Tonight, it made her stomach clench. Something was wrong. The flowers leaned away from her as she passed, their stems bending like frightened animals. The air tasted of ozone and something metallic, like blood on the tongue. Aurora circled the clearing, the pendant growing hotter with each step. The grove looked the same as she remembered from her previous visits, yet different. The stones had new markings, spirals and symbols that glowed with a faint luminescence. She traced one with her finger, the stone cold despite its appearance. A whisper caught her attention—her name, or something like it, carried on the wind that had suddenly picked up. "Hello?" Her voice sounded small in the vastness of the clearing. "Is someone there?" No answer. Just the rustling of leaves that shouldn't be moving in this windless space. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed rapidly now, almost painfully hot against her skin. She unclasped it, holding it away from her body. Its crimson glow illuminated the space around her, casting long, distorted shadows that seemed to move independently of their sources. A figure darted at the edge of her vision. She turned, but saw nothing. Just more flowers, more stones, more shadows that stretched and writhed. "Show yourself." Aurora commanded, her voice steadier than she felt. "I'm not afraid of you." The lie hung in the air between them. Her heart hammered against her ribs, each beat echoing in her ears. A child's laughter—innocent, cruel—rippled through the grove. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. The wildflowers shuddered, their colors deepening to something almost blood-like. Aurora took a step back, her heel hitting one of the standing stones. She turned to face it, but the stone wasn't stone anymore. It had developed a face—eyes that followed her, a mouth that seemed to smile without moving. "You shouldn't have come." The voice came not from the stone but from the air itself, surrounding her, pressing in on all sides. "The pendant was meant to be a warning, not an invitation." "I came for answers." Aurora replied, her voice barely above a whisper. "What is this place? What do you want from me?" The laughter returned, closer now. The ground beneath her feet felt soft, almost spongy. She looked down. The grass was receding, replaced by something dark and liquid that bubbled slowly. The pendant in her hand blazed to life, casting crimson light across the grove. In its illumination, she saw them—figures in the shadows between the trees, tall and thin with too many joints in their limbs. Their eyes reflected the pendant's glow like cats in the darkness. Aurora stumbled backwards, trying to put distance between herself and the figures. The pendant's chain cut into her fingers where she gripped it tight. "Stay back." They didn't listen. They flowed forward, their movements jerky and unnatural. The wildflowers bent away from them, withering where their shadows fell. One of them reached out, its long fingers ending in claws that gleamed like polished bone. Aurora raised the pendant like a shield. The creature flinched back, its face—what she could see of it—contorting in anger or pain. The ground continued to change, the dark liquid spreading, rising. It reached her ankles now, cold and thick. When she tried to pull away, it held her fast. "Let me go." She demanded, struggling against the viscous substance. "I'm not staying here." The figures circled her, their eyes fixed on the pendant. Their whispers filled her mind, a cacophony of voices that spoke words she almost understood—promises, threats, truths that would break her sanity. Aurora closed her eyes, focusing on the pendant's warmth. It was more than an artifact; it was a key, a weapon, a connection to something ancient and powerful. She had to remember that. When she opened her eyes, the liquid had risen to her knees. The figures were closer, their features becoming clearer in the pendant's light—hollow eyes, skin like old parchment, mouths filled with needle-like teeth. The pendant pulsed once, violently, and the figures recoiled as if struck. The liquid around her legs receded slightly, giving her a fraction more mobility. Aurora seized the moment, wrenching one leg free, then the other. She scrambled backwards, putting distance between herself and the creatures. Her back hit a standing stone. She turned, pressing herself against it. The stone was colder than before, almost painfully so. Frost spread from where her hands touched it, crystalline patterns that grew across the surface. The figures hissed, drawing back from the spreading ice. The pendant blazed in her hand, its light pushing back the shadows. The grove seemed to shrink around her, the trees drawing closer, their branches tangling overhead to block out what little light remained from the moon. The whispers grew louder, more insistent. They called her by names she didn't recognize—Laila, Malphora—titles and honors from a time she couldn't remember, a life she hadn't lived. "I'm Aurora." She said, the words feeling foreign on her tongue. "Rory. I'm not who you think I am." The figures tilted their heads, their movements synchronized, unnerving. One of them stepped forward, its clawed hand outstretched. "You are exactly who we think you are." It said, its voice like dry leaves skittering across pavement. "And you've come home at last."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1131
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1131
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"otherworldly"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"pulsed"
count2
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"cacophony"
count1
12
word"crystalline"
count1
13
word"synchronized"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"familiar"
2"warmth"
3"chill"
4"quickened"
5"otherworldly"
6"stomach"
7"traced"
8"whisper"
9"pulsed"
10"echoing"
11"cacophony"
12"crystalline"
13"synchronized"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences87
matches
0"g in anger"
44.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1118
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1036
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London1
Aurora10
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Fae1
Grove1
Laila1
Malphora1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Pendant"
2"Laila"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
56.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like it, carried on the wind that"
1"shadows that seemed to move independently of their sources"
2"mouth that seemed to smile without moving"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.894
wordCount1118
matches
0"not from the stone but from the air itself, surrounding her, pressing in on all sid"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
70.85% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean29.42
std11.71
cv0.398
sampleLengths
053
145
257
336
422
533
628
751
819
914
1015
1141
1225
1315
1420
1527
1640
1734
1822
1930
2047
2124
222
2322
2438
2528
2614
2732
2833
2934
3025
3133
3233
3337
3428
3519
3618
3724
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was receding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences95
ratio0.105
matches
0"The research she'd done since receiving the mysterious artifact pointed to one place—the Fae Grove."
1"A whisper caught her attention—her name, or something like it, carried on the wind that had suddenly picked up."
2"A child's laughter—innocent, cruel—rippled through the grove."
3"It had developed a face—eyes that followed her, a mouth that seemed to smile without moving."
4"In its illumination, she saw them—figures in the shadows between the trees, tall and thin with too many joints in their limbs."
5"The creature flinched back, its face—what she could see of it—contorting in anger or pain."
6"Their whispers filled her mind, a cacophony of voices that spoke words she almost understood—promises, threats, truths that would break her sanity."
7"It was more than an artifact; it was a key, a weapon, a connection to something ancient and powerful."
8"The figures were closer, their features becoming clearer in the pendant's light—hollow eyes, skin like old parchment, mouths filled with needle-like teeth."
9"They called her by names she didn't recognize—Laila, Malphora—titles and honors from a time she couldn't remember, a life she hadn't lived."
98.30% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1049
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.04194470924690181
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.012392755004766444
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean11.77
std5.22
cv0.443
sampleLengths
019
117
217
318
412
515
611
716
811
919
1022
1114
1222
1315
149
156
163
1715
1813
1911
2014
2114
2212
2319
2411
253
262
2713
2812
299
3020
319
325
3311
3410
355
368
3712
387
3910
4010
4113
4211
4316
4423
4511
4612
4710
485
499
43.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3368421052631579
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"Normally, the sight would have"
1"Just the rustling of leaves"
2"Just more flowers, more stones,"
ratio0.035
89.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences86
matches
0"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
1"She'd never been to this"
2"She stepped between them, the"
3"She whispered to the pendant,"
4"She traced one with her"
5"Her voice sounded small in"
6"She unclasped it, holding it"
7"Its crimson glow illuminated the"
8"She turned, but saw nothing."
9"Her heart hammered against her"
10"It seemed to come from"
11"She turned to face it,"
12"It had developed a face—eyes"
13"She looked down."
14"Their eyes reflected the pendant's"
15"They didn't listen."
16"They flowed forward, their movements"
17"It reached her ankles now,"
18"She demanded, struggling against the"
19"Their whispers filled her mind,"
ratio0.326
29.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences86
matches
0"The London night air bit"
1"The moon, a sliver of"
2"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
3"The pendant had been pulsing"
4"The research she'd done since"
5"Aurora quickened her pace, her"
6"The trees around her seemed"
7"She'd never been to this"
8"The standing stones appeared suddenly"
9"She stepped between them, the"
10"She whispered to the pendant,"
11"Tonight, it made her stomach"
12"Something was wrong."
13"The flowers leaned away from"
14"The air tasted of ozone"
15"Aurora circled the clearing, the"
16"The grove looked the same"
17"The stones had new markings,"
18"She traced one with her"
19"A whisper caught her attention—her"
ratio0.86
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The pendant had been pulsing for days, a steady rhythm against her chest that grew stronger each night."
1"During daylight hours, families picnicked and children played, oblivious to the pocket realm that existed just beyond their perception."
2"Its crimson glow illuminated the space around her, casting long, distorted shadows that seemed to move independently of their sources."
3"Their whispers filled her mind, a cacophony of voices that spoke words she almost understood—promises, threats, truths that would break her sanity."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She whispered, its crimson gem glowing faintly against her palm"
1"Aurora commanded, her voice steadier than she felt"
2"Aurora replied, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"She said, the words feeling foreign on her tongue"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She whispered (whisper)"
1"She demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.25
75.0153%