| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.576 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2110 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2110 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "resolved" | | 10 | "velvet" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 180 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 180 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 194 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2101 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 1847 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.38 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 7 | | Silence | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Aurora | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 68.70% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 123 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite right—too neat, as if it did not belong to a foot but to a memory of a foot" | | 1 | "looked like respect and looked like hunge" | | 2 | "looked like hunger at once" | | 3 | "looked like an indentation" | | 4 | "looked like a mouth beginning to part" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 6 | | per1kWords | 2.856 | | wordCount | 2101 | | matches | | 0 | "not the sharp, honest break of a twig, but something blunt" | | 1 | "no bearing but" | | 2 | "neither cold nor" | | 3 | "Not a silhouette, but a suggestion: a bulge of shadow" | | 4 | "Not in the wind, but like a crowd turning its head" | | 5 | "not quite right—too neat, as if it did not belong to a foot but to a memory of a foot" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 194 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 36.86 | | std | 20.49 | | cv | 0.556 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 87 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 53 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 57 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 83 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 90 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 48 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 63 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 63 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 51 | | 47 | 41 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 49 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 180 | | matches | | 0 | "been painted" | | 1 | "been walked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 307 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 10.31% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 194 | | ratio | 0.046 | | matches | | 0 | "The sound was wrong; not the sharp, honest break of a twig, but something blunt and wet, like a foot finding something it shouldn’t." | | 1 | "Her breath fogged; the night pinched at her lungs though the air tasted neither cold nor warm." | | 2 | "The sound followed, small things at the edge of hearing — a chirp too high for a songbird, a laugh that started as a cough and then tried to arrange itself into syllables." | | 3 | "Its warmth felt closer; the pulse under her skin quickened in answer." | | 4 | "A child's voice—too small, too slick to be a child—said her name." | | 5 | "Across the clearing, a runner—a shaft of moon—answered from behind a tree and then evaporated." | | 6 | "She saw a shoeprint, narrow and ungrooved, the edges not quite right—too neat, as if it did not belong to a foot but to a memory of a foot." | | 7 | "She did not ask for courage; the Grove did not make deals." | | 8 | "\"You should not have come,\" a voice said, close as thumb to ear—her name called and folded into a different sound entirely." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1855 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 60 | | adverbRatio | 0.03234501347708895 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00431266846361186 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 194 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 194 | | mean | 10.83 | | std | 7.85 | | cv | 0.725 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 32 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 38.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.24742268041237114 | | totalSentences | 194 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 82.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "Light bent itself away like" | | 1 | "Then, in a voice that" | | 2 | "Instead the pendant surged like" | | 3 | "Then, as if a door" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 59.51% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "She lowered herself between two" | | 1 | "She felt the silence as" | | 2 | "It pulsed like a heartbeat" | | 3 | "she muttered, thumb finding the" | | 4 | "Her voice looked uncertain on" | | 5 | "She did not expect an" | | 6 | "She expected nothing." | | 7 | "It moved through the oaks" | | 8 | "She followed the warmth, an" | | 9 | "It was a compass that" | | 10 | "she said to the pendant" | | 11 | "Her breath fogged; the night" | | 12 | "She turned but saw nothing." | | 13 | "It had the rhythm of" | | 14 | "She kept her hand open." | | 15 | "She checked her watch once," | | 16 | "She found a stone that" | | 17 | "Her back met moss and" | | 18 | "She hooked the pendant over" | | 19 | "Its warmth felt closer; the" |
| | ratio | 0.401 | |
| 27.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 140 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "She lowered herself between two" | | 1 | "The leaves stopped clattering." | | 2 | "The wildflowers shone like small" | | 3 | "She felt the silence as" | | 4 | "Here, sound hung loose and" | | 5 | "Aurora slipped the pendant from" | | 6 | "The silver chain whispered across" | | 7 | "The gem, a thumb-sized depth" | | 8 | "It pulsed like a heartbeat" | | 9 | "she muttered, thumb finding the" | | 10 | "The standing stones ringed her" | | 11 | "The path that had been" | | 12 | "Moonlight pooled between the roots." | | 13 | "The pendant thudded softer." | | 14 | "A sound cut through the" | | 15 | "The sound was wrong; not" | | 16 | "Her voice looked uncertain on" | | 17 | "She did not expect an" | | 18 | "She expected nothing." | | 19 | "The answer was wind, or" |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 68.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a silhouette, but a suggestion: a bulge of shadow that didn't belong to any of the trunks, a slow curvature, like someone shifting weight from one foot to a…" | | 1 | "The sound followed, small things at the edge of hearing — a chirp too high for a songbird, a laugh that started as a cough and then tried to arrange itself into…" | | 2 | "She heard herself smile at a memory that had teeth." | | 3 | "She saw a shoeprint, narrow and ungrooved, the edges not quite right—too neat, as if it did not belong to a foot but to a memory of a foot." | | 4 | "She could feel the shape as a pressure against the back of her hand, as if someone had rested their palm where her bones were." | | 5 | "Then, as if a door had eased open, something exhaled: the smell of wet stone and the faint, impossible rasp of leather." | | 6 | "The figure paused in its motion, as if the question had weight to it." | | 7 | "She heard the thing at the edge of her hearing breathe and the breath said her name in a language she had not expected to hear and a sound that stole the small,…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 28.79% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "the clearing suggested (suggest)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.424 | | leniency | 0.848 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.242 | |