Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYDZ8377YD0DR3DKTVHGEB

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30.7s
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Quinn's boots hammered against wet pavement, the sound swallowed by rain that fell in sheets across Soho's labyrinth of side streets. Twenty meters ahead, the suspect's dark jacket disappeared around another corner, weaving through knots of Friday night revelers who scattered with curses as both runner and pursuer barreled past. She'd been tailing the contact for three hours, ever since he'd emerged from The Raven's Nest with something wrapped in brown paper tucked under his arm. The same bar where her partner Morris had tracked a lead before everything went wrong. Before the crime scene photos showed nothing but ash and Morris's service weapon melted into slag. The suspect vaulted over a newspaper stand, landing in a spray of puddle water. Quinn followed, her hand instinctively checking for the weighted grip of her baton. The Metropolitan Police didn't authorize weapons for standard pursuits, but eighteen years on the force had taught her when regulations could take a backseat to survival. They crossed into Camden, the neon bleeding into rain-slicked streets like watercolors. The suspect glanced back once, hood falling away to reveal a pale face marked with something that caught the streetlight wrong—tattoos or scars that seemed to shift in the darkness. Then he dove into an alley between a shuttered kebab shop and a vintage record store with boarded windows. Quinn hit the alley three seconds behind him, her breath coming hard and controlled. Military training from her early twenties still held—the body remembered what the mind wanted to forget. The alley terminated in a brick wall covered in layers of graffiti, new tags bleeding through old ones in archaeological strata of urban art. Empty. She turned in place, scanning high and low. No fire escapes. No doors. Just brick and bins and the drumming rain that had soaked through her jacket to the shoulder holster beneath. "Bollocks." Then she saw it—the bin pulled away from the wall, just enough to reveal a gap in the brickwork. Not natural damage but a deliberate opening, perhaps two feet wide, descending into darkness. The kind of entrance that screamed bad decision to every functioning instinct she possessed. Quinn crouched beside the opening, pulling her torch from her belt. The beam cut through darkness to reveal stairs, old London brick giving way to older stone. Victorian era maybe, or earlier. The city had layers like an onion, each century building atop the last until the ground level bore no resemblance to what lay beneath. She pressed her radio. "Control, this is Quinn. In pursuit of suspect, Camden Market area. Going underground, coordinates..." She rattled off the street names, knowing even as she did that backup wouldn't arrive in time. Friday night had the Met stretched thin across London's entertainment districts, breaking up fights and processing drunks. Static answered, then a bored voice. "Copy that, Quinn. Nearest unit is fifteen minutes out." Fifteen minutes. The suspect would vanish in five. She thought about Morris, about the official report that called it an accident despite the melted gun and the witness statements describing lights that shouldn't exist and sounds that made grown men weep. She thought about the three other cases since then, each connected to that same bar, each closed with explanations that satisfied brass but rang hollow to anyone who looked deeper than the paperwork. The opening waited, patient as a predator's mouth. Quinn descended. The stairs spiraled down through London's fossil record, electric torch beam dancing across surfaces that predated the Tube by centuries. Water seeped through cracks overhead, and the air grew thick with earth and something else—incense maybe, or herbs burning somewhere in the darkness ahead. The stairs terminated in a tunnel that stretched both directions into black. Fresh footprints marked the dust, heading left. Quinn followed, her free hand trailing the wall for balance as the passage narrowed then opened into something impossible. The market spread before her like a fever dream carved from an abandoned station platform. The old Tube tiles remained on the walls, but stalls and tents crowded the space between rusty tracks, lit by lanterns that burned without flame—cold light in colors that hurt to look at directly. The crowd numbered perhaps forty people, moving between vendors with the casual purpose of shoppers anywhere, except these shoppers wore everything from business suits to robes that belonged in museums. A woman in a hijab haggled over bottles filled with liquid that moved independent of the containers. A man in a Chelsea football kit examined what looked like animal skulls arranged on black velvet. Two teenagers passed a cigarette back and forth, smoke coiling into shapes that resembled words in languages Quinn didn't recognize. She'd found it. The underground market that kept appearing in witness statements from the supernatural-adjacent cases, always dismissed as drug-addled fantasy or attention-seeking lies. Quinn stepped onto the platform, and every head turned. The crowd didn't react with fear or flight. They simply noticed her the way one notices a wrong note in familiar music—with interest and faint disappointment. Her plainclothes meant nothing here; she wore authority like cologne, unmistakable and unwelcome. A vendor closest to her—ancient enough that gender became academic, wrapped in layers of wool despite the underground warmth—smiled with too many teeth. "Lost, Detective?" The sound of her title echoed across the market, and conversations died. Even the unnatural lantern light seemed to dim, shadows pressing closer. Quinn's hand moved to her baton, then stopped. Forty witnesses minimum, in an environment she didn't understand, pursuing a suspect she couldn't properly identify for a crime she hadn't technically witnessed. Every tactical assessment screamed retreat, call for backup, establish perimeter. But Morris had retreated. Had followed protocol. And protocol had left nothing but ash and unanswered questions. Her suspect stood three stalls down, watching her with those marked features that seemed to crawl in the strange light. He made no move to run, simply waited to see what she would choose. The vendor's smile widened.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1006
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1006
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"standard"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"predator"
count1
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"dancing"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"standard"
1"scanning"
2"predator"
3"electric"
4"dancing"
5"velvet"
6"familiar"
7"warmth"
8"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences65
matches
0"t with fear"
76.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords994
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount968
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"London"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Friday2
Raven1
Nest1
Morris4
Metropolitan1
Police1
Camden1
London3
Met1
Tube2
Chelsea1
Quinn9
persons
0"Morris"
1"Police"
2"Met"
3"Tube"
4"Chelsea"
5"Quinn"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Camden"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like animal skulls arranged on bla"
1"features that seemed to crawl in the strange light"
99.40% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.006
wordCount994
matches
0"Not natural damage but a deliberate opening, perhaps two feet wide, descending into"
68.63% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"did that backup"
1"surfaces that predated"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean32.06
std22.47
cv0.701
sampleLengths
050
157
253
361
454
51
632
71
847
956
104
1148
1215
138
1466
158
162
1744
1838
1979
2054
2124
229
2339
2423
252
2623
2741
2817
2934
304
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences68
ratio0.118
matches
0"The suspect glanced back once, hood falling away to reveal a pale face marked with something that caught the streetlight wrong—tattoos or scars that seemed to shift in the darkness."
1"Military training from her early twenties still held—the body remembered what the mind wanted to forget."
2"Then she saw it—the bin pulled away from the wall, just enough to reveal a gap in the brickwork."
3"Water seeped through cracks overhead, and the air grew thick with earth and something else—incense maybe, or herbs burning somewhere in the darkness ahead."
4"The old Tube tiles remained on the walls, but stalls and tents crowded the space between rusty tracks, lit by lanterns that burned without flame—cold light in colors that hurt to look at directly."
5"They simply noticed her the way one notices a wrong note in familiar music—with interest and faint disappointment."
6"Her plainclothes meant nothing here; she wore authority like cologne, unmistakable and unwelcome."
7"A vendor closest to her—ancient enough that gender became academic, wrapped in layers of wool despite the underground warmth—smiled with too many teeth."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount980
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"hammered against wet pavement,"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03469387755102041
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007142857142857143
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean14.62
std8.85
cv0.606
sampleLengths
021
129
226
315
416
514
613
726
812
930
1019
1114
1216
1324
141
158
163
172
1819
191
2019
2114
2214
2311
2416
255
2624
274
2831
2917
306
319
322
336
3433
3533
368
372
3820
3924
4012
417
4219
4315
4434
4530
4617
4717
4820
493
71.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.47058823529411764
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences61
matches
0"Then he dove into an"
1"Just brick and bins and"
2"Then she saw it—the bin"
3"Even the unnatural lantern light"
ratio0.066
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences61
matches
0"She'd been tailing the contact"
1"They crossed into Camden, the"
2"She turned in place, scanning"
3"She pressed her radio."
4"She rattled off the street"
5"She thought about Morris, about"
6"She thought about the three"
7"She'd found it."
8"They simply noticed her the"
9"Her plainclothes meant nothing here;"
10"Her suspect stood three stalls"
11"He made no move to"
ratio0.197
74.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences61
matches
0"Quinn's boots hammered against wet"
1"She'd been tailing the contact"
2"The same bar where her"
3"The suspect vaulted over a"
4"Quinn followed, her hand instinctively"
5"The Metropolitan Police didn't authorize"
6"They crossed into Camden, the"
7"The suspect glanced back once,"
8"Quinn hit the alley three"
9"Military training from her early"
10"The alley terminated in a"
11"She turned in place, scanning"
12"The kind of entrance that"
13"Quinn crouched beside the opening,"
14"The beam cut through darkness"
15"Victorian era maybe, or earlier."
16"The city had layers like"
17"She pressed her radio."
18"She rattled off the street"
19"Friday night had the Met"
ratio0.77
81.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Before the crime scene photos"
ratio0.016
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Twenty meters ahead, the suspect's dark jacket disappeared around another corner, weaving through knots of Friday night revelers who scattered with curses as bo…"
1"The suspect glanced back once, hood falling away to reveal a pale face marked with something that caught the streetlight wrong—tattoos or scars that seemed to s…"
2"The kind of entrance that screamed bad decision to every functioning instinct she possessed."
3"She thought about Morris, about the official report that called it an accident despite the melted gun and the witness statements describing lights that shouldn'…"
4"She thought about the three other cases since then, each connected to that same bar, each closed with explanations that satisfied brass but rang hollow to anyon…"
5"The stairs terminated in a tunnel that stretched both directions into black."
6"A woman in a hijab haggled over bottles filled with liquid that moved independent of the containers."
7"The underground market that kept appearing in witness statements from the supernatural-adjacent cases, always dismissed as drug-addled fantasy or attention-seek…"
8"Her suspect stood three stalls down, watching her with those marked features that seemed to crawl in the strange light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.9807%