Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYE3K4GFDH2ZCXVQZRYB7H

Run Details

Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.001965

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The moonlight filtered through skeletal branches, casting long shadows across the Grove's clearing. Aurora pulled her jacket tighter, the silver chain of her Heartstone pendant glinting against her black sweater. She hadn't intended to be here this late. The delivery shift at Golden Empress had run long, and something — a restlessness, a strange pull — had drawn her to Richmond Park after midnight. Her bright blue eyes scanned the ancient oak standing stones marking the Grove's boundary. Silence pressed against her ears. No cricket chirps. No rustling leaves. Just absolute stillness. The wildflowers surrounding her seemed too perfect. Their petals looked painted, frozen in impossible bloom despite the autumn chill. Aurora's fingers traced the small crescent scar on her left wrist — a nervous habit from childhood. Something moved at her peripheral. A flicker. Gone when she turned. Her breath clouded in the air, though the temperature didn't feel that cold. The standing stones cast strange, elongated shadows that didn't quite match the moonlight's angle. Their surfaces looked polished, almost liquid in the dim light. A whisper. Soft. Distant. Aurora froze. The Heartstone against her chest began to pulse. A faint warmth. A warning.
total_cost0.0019648

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount192
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount192
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"scanned"
2"silence"
3"perfect"
4"chill"
5"traced"
6"flicker"
7"whisper"
8"pulse"
9"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences25
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences25
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences25
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords195
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.08% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount195
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Grove2
Heartstone2
Golden1
Empress1
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora3
persons
0"Grove"
1"Empress"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Golden"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.731
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences12
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite match the moonlight's angle"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount195
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs9
mean21.67
std15.46
cv0.713
sampleLengths
030
148
214
336
411
537
64
72
813
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs32
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences25
ratio0.08
matches
0"The delivery shift at Golden Empress had run long, and something — a restlessness, a strange pull — had drawn her to Richmond Park after midnight."
1"Aurora's fingers traced the small crescent scar on her left wrist — a nervous habit from childhood."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount192
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.026041666666666668
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences25
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences25
mean7.8
std6.34
cv0.812
sampleLengths
013
117
28
326
414
55
63
73
83
97
1012
1117
125
132
144
1513
1614
1710
182
191
201
212
228
233
242
78.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.52
totalSentences25
uniqueOpeners13
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences19
matches
0"Just absolute stillness."
ratio0.053
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences19
matches
0"She hadn't intended to be"
1"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
2"Their petals looked painted, frozen"
3"Her breath clouded in the"
4"Their surfaces looked polished, almost"
ratio0.263
91.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount14
totalSentences19
matches
0"The moonlight filtered through skeletal"
1"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter,"
2"She hadn't intended to be"
3"The delivery shift at Golden"
4"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
5"The wildflowers surrounding her seemed"
6"Their petals looked painted, frozen"
7"Aurora's fingers traced the small"
8"Something moved at her peripheral."
9"Her breath clouded in the"
10"The standing stones cast strange,"
11"Their surfaces looked polished, almost"
12"The Heartstone against her chest"
13"A faint warmth."
ratio0.737
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences19
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences9
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The standing stones cast strange, elongated shadows that didn't quite match the moonlight's angle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.2272%