Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYEFREJRS4K4A1DXSAV4SA

Run Details

Duration:
51.2s
Cost:
$0.031401

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest flickered against the October drizzle as Rory pushed through the heavy oak door. She shook droplets from her jacket and paused, letting her eyes adjust to the familiar amber glow. The bar hummed with its usual Tuesday evening crowd—city workers nursing pints, tourists studying maps over fish and chips, regulars who treated Silas like a confessor. She'd planned to grab her post and head straight upstairs, but something made her glance toward the corner booth near the vintage maps of Eastern Europe. A figure sat hunched over a whisky tumbler, shoulders curved inward like parentheses around some invisible wound. Recognition hit her like cold water. "Evan?" The man looked up, and twenty-five years of careful reconstruction threatened to crumble. Same sharp jawline, same storm-grey eyes that once made her stomach flutter during sixth form chemistry. But where confidence used to radiate from his posture, now something brittle had taken root. His designer shirt hung loose on a frame that had shed more than weight. "Christ. Rory." He half-stood, then seemed to think better of it and sank back down. "What are the bloody odds?" She approached slowly, every instinct screaming at her to retreat. Four years. Four years since she'd fled Cardiff with nothing but a rucksack and Eva's promise of sanctuary in London. "What are you doing here?" "Business meeting. Client bailed last minute." He gestured to the empty seat across from him. "Drink?" The smart move was to excuse herself, claim exhaustion from deliveries, anything. Instead, she found herself sliding into the worn leather booth. Silas caught her eye from behind the bar, raised an eyebrow. She shook her head almost imperceptibly. "Still whisky neat?" Evan asked. "Gin and tonic now." Something flickered across his face—surprise, perhaps disappointment. As if her drink preference was another small betrayal. "Right. Course." He signalled to Silas. "Changed, haven't you? The hair's different. Shorter." She touched her shoulder-length bob self-consciously. "People change." "Do they?" The question hung between them like smoke. Silas appeared with her gin and tonic, movements deliberately slow as he assessed the stranger at her table. His hazel eyes held a question she couldn't answer yet. "Cheers then." Evan raised his glass. The whisky trembled slightly before he steadied it. Rory didn't toast back. Instead, she studied the man who'd once dominated every corner of her world. The expensive watch was still there, still perfectly polished. But his fingernails had been bitten down to the quick, and a thin scar ran along his temple that hadn't been there before. "How's the law practice?" "Busy. Partners now, actually." He straightened slightly, muscle memory of old pride. "Took over dad's clients when he retired. You'd remember the office." She remembered the office. Remembered sitting in those leather chairs while Evan's father outlined her "options" after pressing charges became too complicated. Remembered the weight of unspoken threats wrapped in legal jargon. "Congratulations." "What about you? Still... what was it you were studying? Psychology?" "I work in food service now." The admission should have stung, but it felt clean. Honest in a way that surprised her. "Food service." He repeated it like she'd announced plans to join the circus. "That's not... I mean, you were brilliant. Top of the class in everything." "I like what I do." "Come off it, Rory. You're delivering takeaways? After everything your parents sacrificed for university?" Heat flared in her chest. "You don't know anything about my life now." "Because you vanished. One day you're there, the next your flatmate says you've gone to London. No forwarding address, no explanation." "I explained plenty before I left." His jaw tightened. "Those things you accused me of—" "I didn't accuse you of anything. I told you how I felt." "Felt." He spat the word. "Christ, Rory, feelings aren't facts. I never laid a finger on you." The old familiar knot formed in her throat. He was right, technically. Bruises weren't the only way to break someone. "You didn't have to." Silence stretched between them. Around the bar, conversation continued in comfortable murmurs. Someone laughed at the dartboard. The espresso machine hissed behind the counter. "I've been to therapy," he said quietly. She looked up, startled. "Court-mandated, initially. After... well, there was an incident with someone at work. But I kept going. Two years now." He rotated the glass between his palms. "I know I wasn't... I know I made mistakes. With you. With us." The words she'd once desperately wanted to hear felt hollow now, arriving years too late like a letter to the wrong address. "Good for you." "I think about you sometimes. Wonder what would have happened if I'd been... different. Better." "Evan—" "I loved you, you know. I mean, I thought I did. But I reckon I loved the idea of you more. Smart girlfriend, pretty, from a good family. Perfect accessory for a future barrister." He laughed bitterly. "Bit pathetic, really." She sipped her gin, tasted juniper and the ghost of old pain. "We were young." "I wasn't that young. Just selfish. Mum always said I had to be the cleverest person in any room, even if it meant making everyone else feel stupid." "How is your mum?" "Gone. Last spring. Cancer." "I'm sorry." "Yeah, well. She got to see me make partner before..." He shrugged. "Small mercies, I suppose." The vulnerability in his voice caught her off-guard. This wasn't the Evan who'd once convinced her that her opinions were naive, that her dreams of helping people were childish fantasies. This was someone hollowed out by loss and the slow recognition of his own toxicity. "The therapy help?" "Some days." He met her eyes properly for the first time since she'd sat down. "I'm not asking for forgiveness, Rory. I know I don't deserve it. But I wanted you to know that I understand now. What I did to you. How I made you feel small." She nodded slowly. The acknowledgment felt like setting down a weight she'd carried so long she'd forgotten its heft. "What's London like then?" he asked. "Besides the obvious upgrade in bar quality." Despite everything, she almost smiled. "Different. Anonymous in a good way. I can just... be." "Anyone special?" The question felt reflexive, automatic. She wondered if he even realized he'd asked it. "That's not really your business anymore." "Right. Course not." He drained his whisky. "I should go. Train back to Cardiff won't wait." They sat for another moment in the space between goodbye and actually leaving. The bar continued around them, indifferent to their small reunion and smaller revelations. "For what it's worth," he said, standing, "you look happy. Really happy. Suits you better than that stressed-out uni student I remember." "Take care of yourself, Evan." He nodded, left money on the table for both their drinks, and walked toward the door without looking back. The green neon sign cast him briefly in its glow before the night swallowed him completely. Rory remained in the booth, gin and tonic warming in her hands. Across the bar, Silas polished glasses with methodical precision, giving her space to process. Outside, London continued its relentless pulse—strangers becoming friends, friends becoming strangers, the endless shuffle of lives intersecting and diverging. She touched the small scar on her wrist, that crescent-shaped reminder of childhood fearlessness. Some wounds healed clean. Others left marks worth keeping.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
64.41% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He half-stood then [then]"
1"He straightened slightly [slightly]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
3"He laughed bitterly [bitterly]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.288
leniency0.576
rawRatio0.235
effectiveRatio0.136
59.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1241
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count3
5
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
2"slightly"
3"perfectly"
4"really"
5"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1241
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"sanctuary"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"comfortable"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"methodical"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"stomach"
3"weight"
4"sanctuary"
5"eyebrow"
6"trembled"
7"unspoken"
8"silence"
9"comfortable"
10"perfect"
11"methodical"
12"pulse"
13"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1229
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Outside, London continued its relentless pulse—strangers becoming friends, friends becoming strangers, the endless shuff…"
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount795
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
October1
Rory3
Tuesday1
Silas5
Eastern1
Europe1
Cardiff1
Eva1
London2
Evan4
Heat1
Despite1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
5"Evan"
6"Heat"
places
0"Eastern"
1"Europe"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like setting down a weight she'd c"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1229
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean18.07
std15.04
cv0.832
sampleLengths
064
143
26
31
458
520
630
75
816
939
105
114
1216
1313
148
152
1635
1714
1849
194
2023
2132
221
2311
246
2516
2626
275
2814
2913
3021
316
329
3312
3417
3520
364
3724
387
394
4039
4122
423
4315
441
4540
4615
4728
484
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"been bitten"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
72.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences121
ratio0.025
matches
0"The bar hummed with its usual Tuesday evening crowd—city workers nursing pints, tourists studying maps over fish and chips, regulars who treated Silas like a confessor."
1"Something flickered across his face—surprise, perhaps disappointment."
2"Outside, London continued its relentless pulse—strangers becoming friends, friends becoming strangers, the endless shuffle of lives intersecting and diverging."
91.11% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount805
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same storm-grey eyes"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.0422360248447205
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.02111801242236025
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean10.16
std7.02
cv0.691
sampleLengths
021
117
226
326
417
56
61
713
816
915
1014
1115
125
1310
142
1518
165
1715
181
1912
2010
2111
226
235
244
257
269
276
287
296
302
312
327
3318
3410
356
368
374
3813
399
4023
414
4212
4311
444
4518
4610
471
4811
496
85.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5289256198347108
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners64
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Instead, she found herself sliding"
1"Instead, she studied the man"
ratio0.027
65.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences75
matches
0"She shook droplets from her"
1"She'd planned to grab her"
2"His designer shirt hung loose"
3"He half-stood, then seemed to"
4"She approached slowly, every instinct"
5"He gestured to the empty"
6"She shook her head almost"
7"He signalled to Silas"
8"She touched her shoulder-length bob"
9"His hazel eyes held a"
10"He straightened slightly, muscle memory"
11"She remembered the office."
12"He repeated it like she'd"
13"His jaw tightened."
14"He spat the word"
15"He was right, technically."
16"he said quietly"
17"She looked up, startled."
18"He rotated the glass between"
19"He laughed bitterly"
ratio0.387
53.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences75
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"She shook droplets from her"
2"The bar hummed with its"
3"She'd planned to grab her"
4"A figure sat hunched over"
5"Recognition hit her like cold"
6"The man looked up, and"
7"His designer shirt hung loose"
8"He half-stood, then seemed to"
9"She approached slowly, every instinct"
10"He gestured to the empty"
11"The smart move was to"
12"Silas caught her eye from"
13"She shook her head almost"
14"Something flickered across his face—surprise,"
15"He signalled to Silas"
16"She touched her shoulder-length bob"
17"The question hung between them"
18"Silas appeared with her gin"
19"His hazel eyes held a"
ratio0.813
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"As if her drink preference"
ratio0.013
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The bar hummed with its usual Tuesday evening crowd—city workers nursing pints, tourists studying maps over fish and chips, regulars who treated Silas like a co…"
1"His designer shirt hung loose on a frame that had shed more than weight."
2"This wasn't the Evan who'd once convinced her that her opinions were naive, that her dreams of helping people were childish fantasies."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
82.20% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Evan's father outlined (outline)"
1"He repeated (repeat)"
2"He spat (spit)"
3"He laughed bitterly (laugh)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.271
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.136
87.7573%