| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 54.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 660 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "completely" | | 4 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 660 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "searing" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "wavering" | | 8 | "pounding" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "oppressive" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "cacophony" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 21 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 653 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "Just get in, get the sample, and get out," | | 1 | "Get it together, Carter." | | 2 | "presence" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 647 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Rory | 2 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to twist and writhe" | | 1 | "thrum that seemed to emanate from the very earth" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 653 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.88% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 13 | | mean | 50.23 | | std | 15.6 | | cv | 0.311 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 1 |
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| 95.09% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 120 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "But then she heard it—a low, guttural hum that wasn’t there before." | | 1 | "Something shifted at the edge of her vision—a flicker of movement too quick to catch." | | 2 | "The torchlight caught on something reflective—eyes?" | | 3 | "Eva had warned her about this—it reacted near Hel portals." | | 4 | "It wasn’t just sound; it was a *presence*, pressing against her from all sides." | | 5 | "Movement caught her eye—shadows shifting in the darkness, coalescing into shapes that defied logic." | | 6 | "A voice—no, voices—seeped into the chaos, layered and discordant." |
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| 89.68% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 654 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.05045871559633028 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.021406727828746176 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 9.46 | | std | 4.5 | | cv | 0.476 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 64.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.42028985507246375 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 52.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 67.62% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been here before, but" | | 1 | "She hesitated at the boundary," | | 2 | "Its faint crimson glow pulsed" | | 3 | "She froze, straining to pinpoint" | | 4 | "It disappeared as quickly as" | | 5 | "she muttered, though the air" | | 6 | "Her torch flickered faintly as" | | 7 | "She spun around, torchlight slicing" | | 8 | "She turned again, slower this" | | 9 | "She exhaled sharply, her breath" | | 10 | "She clutched it instinctively, her" | | 11 | "It wasn’t just sound; it" | | 12 | "She took another step forward," | | 13 | "Her boot sank slightly, and" | | 14 | "She shook it, willing it" | | 15 | "She swung the torch toward" | | 16 | "She spun around, phone light" | | 17 | "She stood in an endless" | | 18 | "She reached for it instinctively," | | 19 | "she demanded, her voice trembling" |
| | ratio | 0.381 | |
| 47.30% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The crunch of gravel under" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The Fae Grove loomed ahead," | | 3 | "She’d been here before, but" | | 4 | "The air felt heavier tonight," | | 5 | "She hesitated at the boundary," | | 6 | "Its faint crimson glow pulsed" | | 7 | "Eva needed it for her" | | 8 | "The first few steps into" | | 9 | "The usual wildflowers bloomed in" | | 10 | "She froze, straining to pinpoint" | | 11 | "It disappeared as quickly as" | | 12 | "she muttered, though the air" | | 13 | "Her torch flickered faintly as" | | 14 | "Something shifted at the edge" | | 15 | "She spun around, torchlight slicing" | | 16 | "A faint rustling sound came" | | 17 | "She turned again, slower this" | | 18 | "The torchlight caught on something" | | 19 | "She exhaled sharply, her breath" |
| | ratio | 0.825 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Her torch flickered faintly as she moved deeper into the clearing, casting long shadows that danced unnervingly across the standing stones." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, though the air was still" | | 1 | "she demanded, her voice trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |