"It had been cold for three days now—ever since she'd found the note tucked into her flat door, a single sheet of paper in handwriting she didn't recognize."
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"Nothing else had been disturbed—nothing taken, nothing moved."
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"The air smelled different here—thicker, heavier, layered with something floral she couldn't name."
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"At the center of the clearing stood a tree—a single ash, massive and ancient, its trunk scarred with symbols she didn't recognize."
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"Not the silence of an empty place—it was too total, too heavy."
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"The floral scent intensified, nearly choking, and then faded into something else—something older, deeper, like the smell of rain on stone that had been dry for centuries."
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"She hadn't noticed them from outside—white flowers that gleamed with a faint luminescence, each one glowing softly like a small held breath."
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"Speaking aloud felt important somehow—a way of claiming space in whatever this was."
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"It came from behind her—a soft sound, barely there, like a footstep in dry grass."
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"Not closer in distance—she hadn't moved, and neither had the tree."
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"The symbols carved into the bark had changed; they hadn't been there before, or she hadn't seen them, but now they wound upward in spiraling patterns that made her eyes ache if she looked too long."
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"They hadn't been in that arrangement before—she had walked between them, she remembered the path clearly, but now they stood at different angles, their positions shifted like the points of a compass spinning slowly out of alignment."
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"They accumulated, forming patterns on the ground, patterns that looked almost like—"
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"She had known that already—had felt it the moment she crossed between the stones, had heard the silence that was too complete to be anything but listening."
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"Not with wind—there was no wind—but with something internal, something that turned the wood like muscle flexing."
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"It pulsed quickly now—three seconds between beats, maybe less—and the warmth had intensified, burning almost."
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"The clearing went silent—not listening silence this time, but waiting silence, the kind that precedes a question about to be answered."
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"The warmth surged, and the breathing paused—interrupted, as if the thing behind her had noticed the change."
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"She thought of Evan—thought of the three years she'd spent with a man who had made her feel small and afraid, thought of the night she'd finally left, sneaking out while he slept with a bag she hadn't fully packed and a phone she'd turned off."
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"But it was different now—not behind her but all around her, shifting position with each exhale."
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"They formed a shape—a woman's shape, tall and slender, made entirely of white flowers."
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"And then the figure moved—not toward her but past her, through her, and Rory felt the brush of something impossible."
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"The flower-figure raised one hand—a gesture made of drifting petals, unstable, constantly falling apart and reforming."
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"And somewhere in the Grove—in the space between, in the ancient roots of the ash tree, in the silence that had learned her name—something that had been waiting finally began to move."
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"The oak stones rose eight feet tall, arranged in a rough circle that caught the moonlight and threw it back in fragments."
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"The floral scent intensified, nearly choking, and then faded into something else—something older, deeper, like the smell of rain on stone that had been dry for …"
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"She hadn't noticed them from outside—white flowers that gleamed with a faint luminescence, each one glowing softly like a small held breath."
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"Not with wind—there was no wind—but with something internal, something that turned the wood like muscle flexing."
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"The clearing went silent—not listening silence this time, but waiting silence, the kind that precedes a question about to be answered."
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"Something that existed in between, that passed through her like light through glass, and when it was done, when the flower-figure had moved past her and taken i…"
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"And somewhere in the Grove—in the space between, in the ancient roots of the ash tree, in the silence that had learned her name—something that had been waiting …"